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by Alleniana » Tue Oct 28, 2014 10:51 pm

by Masimino » Tue Oct 28, 2014 10:54 pm
Alleniana wrote:The app is meant to prove that effort and thought were put into it by the applier, and that the applier has the appropriate knowledge and creativity to RP the state, in addition to providing information for realistic interaction and RPing. Copy-and-paste is not preferable, and depending on how Lowlands looks at it, possibly to be denied. Please do rewrite it in your own words.

by Alleniana » Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:02 pm
Masimino wrote:Alleniana wrote:The app is meant to prove that effort and thought were put into it by the applier, and that the applier has the appropriate knowledge and creativity to RP the state, in addition to providing information for realistic interaction and RPing. Copy-and-paste is not preferable, and depending on how Lowlands looks at it, possibly to be denied. Please do rewrite it in your own words.
Alright, I'll start to edit it

by Masimino » Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:06 pm

Coat of Arms
by Alleniana » Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:07 pm
Masimino wrote:How do i delete the old one? it doesn't have the delete option in it.
by Arumdaum » Wed Oct 29, 2014 12:08 am
Masimino wrote:How do i delete the old one? it doesn't have the delete option in it.

by Liecthenbourg » Wed Oct 29, 2014 2:13 am


by Liecthenbourg » Wed Oct 29, 2014 2:22 am
Arumdaum wrote:Liecthenbourg wrote:[box]Generic Info
Nation Name: The Achaemenid Dynasty, sometimes referred to as "The Kingdom of the Sacred Fires"
Achaemenid can't even be used as a dynasty name. It's not a single syllable, it can't be pronounced, and China wouldn't just steal the Latinized name of a Hellenized form of an Iranian king's name.Capital City: Nanking.
do you just enjoy using old-timey names and spellingsIdeology: Liberalism,
wait whatPan-Asianism,
Pan-Asianism isn't a concept that should even exist here, considering that the European concepts of Europe and Asia (which is basically just all of the continent that isn't Europe) weren't introduced yet.
An Asian identity was created only through a common struggle against the advances of European imperialism.
Asians are too different from one another to indigenously form a common Asian identity.Imperialism
does this even count as an ideologyLeader/s: Emperor Ushtavaity XXIV.
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Why does the Emperor have a Parsi name no one in China could pronounce? Why has China copied European customs of the rulers all having the same name?The people, from common farmer to Head of State, despise slavery in all its forms
Slavery was never really prevalent in China. During the Han dynasty, slaves comprised less than a percent of the population.and will generally have a fish and rice heavy diet - meat generally being avoided unless in times of crisis or special occasions.
Pork is big in China. Even Buddhism didn't stop China from avoiding meat.These individuals are not as well equipped as their European Counterparts, but they make up for that fact with sheer numbers
Oh my god, you're just delving into stereotypes with the sheer numbers one.Common weaponry includes bows, crossbows, halberds and such.
Wow, I'm surprised that this country even lasted this long, despite it being more militarily backward than the Song dynasty.Another unique aspect of the Chinese military, is their devastating weapon that spews forth fire; the Pen Huo Qi. This devasting device is generally attached to armies and forces as well as being located upon ships and walls to deter any attacker.
THAT WAS USED ALMOST A THOUSAND YEARS BEFORE THIS RP HOW DID THIS COUNTRY JUST NOT DIE OFF COMPLETELY
CHINA IRL MADE SO MANY MORE ADVANCED WEAPONS IN THE 900 YEARS BETWEEN THE INVENTION OF THIS WEAPON AND THE CURRENT DATE
DID YOU KNOW CHINA INVENTED MUSKETS, LAND MINES, AND CANNONS?
[spoiler]
Modernisation is a thought being discussed, but no plans have truly taken hold.
but progress is being made with purchases and remaking of ships in the European fashion.
dozen unique ships which follow the Korean Turtle boat idea. Hulls of plated metal, but their firepower comes from several cannon and Pen Huo Qi upon their decks and within the ship itself. The ships are stationed throughout the major ports of the Empire, Nanking, Shanghai, etc.
become a power.
a famed land of endless sands
These men, Zoroastrian Missionaries, impressed the Qin Emperor, Qin Er Shi, and he allowed them to spread their faith throughout his lands.
By this time, many of the civilians of "China"
During the Mongol invasions, the Tang Dynasty
managed to successfully repel the invasion forces of the Mongols at the battle of Nanking, where Pen Huo Qis were used from atop walls and battlements to rain fire down upon the Mongols as they attempted to take the city via force. This impressive feat was then met by the complete and total removal of the Mongols from the area now encompassed by the Kingdom of the Sacred Fire. After this event the Tang Dynasty renamed themselves to the Achaemenids, in honour of the Zoroastrian Faith.
In the 1700s, the Kingdom of the Sacred Fire came into contact with the Europeans, mainly the British,
(Though they did possess an insane numerical advantage)
and began a programme where the British received a privileged trade agreement with the Dynasty, in exchange for modern firearms and artillery - alongside with officers to instruct.

by Caltarania » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:27 am

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by The New Lowlands » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:34 am

by Caltarania » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:40 am

by Arumdaum » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:43 am

by The New Lowlands » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:44 am

by Caltarania » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:47 am

by Liecthenbourg » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:48 am

by The New Lowlands » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:54 am

by Liecthenbourg » Wed Oct 29, 2014 3:56 am

by The New Lowlands » Wed Oct 29, 2014 4:05 am
Arumdaum wrote:DID YOU KNOW CHINA HAD ADVANCED CANNON WEAPONRY THAT REGULARLY DEFEATED EUROPEANS IN BATTLE AS LATE AS THE 1600S?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Tunmen
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sino%E2%80 ... _conflicts
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sino-Russi ... _conflicts
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Liaoluo_Bay
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Siege_of_Fort_Zeelandia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Xicaowan
by Arumdaum » Wed Oct 29, 2014 4:11 am
The New Lowlands wrote:Arumdaum wrote:DID YOU KNOW CHINA HAD ADVANCED CANNON WEAPONRY THAT REGULARLY DEFEATED EUROPEANS IN BATTLE AS LATE AS THE 1600S?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Tunmen
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sino%E2%80 ... _conflicts
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sino-Russi ... _conflicts
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Liaoluo_Bay
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Siege_of_Fort_Zeelandia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_Xicaowan
lol too bad these are all 100+ years prior to the current situation in a different strategic situation and that almost all of these examples actually do feature the use of numerical superiority

by The New Lowlands » Wed Oct 29, 2014 4:15 am
Arumdaum wrote:The New Lowlands wrote:lol too bad these are all 100+ years prior to the current situation in a different strategic situation and that almost all of these examples actually do feature the use of numerical superiority
except, you know, that isn't the point, or the part i'm responding to

by Alleniana » Wed Oct 29, 2014 4:43 am
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