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Kalbana
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Postby Kalbana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:28 pm

North Arkana wrote:Name: Maya de Mazelle
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance:
Bio: Maya was born to a poor family from a rural region, but her parents were killed when it was ravaged by the Grimm when she was 12. Maya probably would have died had it not been for a Huntress who saved her life. However, things did not occur as they did in storybooks. The Huntress was not the kind idolized by the masses, or the kind read about in stories, rather, she saw Maya as a burden she didn't have the time or energy to deal with. Maya was pointed in the direction of the next closest village, and left to fend for herself.
It took almost a year to make her way to Vale. During the journey, she had scraped by from the kindness of strangers, and no small amount of taking advantage of that kindness. Maya lied, cheated, and stole to support herself, hoping to reach Vale alive and still in one piece. In a strange twist of fate, it was the White Fang who provided her a way of reaching Vale. Perhaps it was only natural an outcast with a strong distrust for human nature would fall in with such a group, even if she wasn't the most welcomed individual. She took part in some protests, and occasionally even assisted in the more dangerous side of things, but her loyalties were always and only to herself. While not committed in the least bit, it was still considered significant that a human was supportive of the White Fang and was taking part in their activities, however as usual, Maya was just using them to achieve a goal of her own, to reach Vale and find some way to train to become a Huntress.
After abandoning the White Fang when she reached Vale, Maya stowed away to reach Signal, where she was able to enroll (though she refuses to say how). She crafted her weapons with practicality in mind. Easy to carry, easy to conceal, few shifting parts for changing form, and light-weight. She excelled in the physical aspects of the curriculum, but was abysmal academically. Maya was also generally hated by her classmates due to her manipulative, selfish personality, near complete lack of "loyalty" or "honor", and general bad attitude. There's little hope that her personality has approved with her transfer to Beacon.
To sum it up, Maya is a jaded, cynical, manipulative, selfish b****, with a tramautic childhood, questionable associates from her past, and a sharp tongue, who will use others to achieve her goals before tossing them aside like trash. She can also be cruel, vindictive, and arbitrary, and is far from the ideal Huntress. The only real positive to her that most people see is that she's a skilled fighter who will do anything to achieve her goals.

Weapon: Tick & Tock Twin Tonfas that convert to Uzi-like SMGs
Appearance: Tonfa Uzis
Now imagine a combo of the two, pretty easy to pull off as an IRL weapon, right?
Capabilities: The tonfas are used at closed range for blunt forcd attacks, and are useful for blocking as well, as they protect the forearm. The short end which protrudes forward of the hand is tipped with a pointed metal cap, not sharp, but enough to inflict severe injury in a punching-like attack. This short end is also where the barrel of the SMG is located, while the long end folds to form a stock for more accurate shooting (not that she really uses them like that). Magazines are loaded into the hand grips, Uzi-style.
Other: SMGs have massive RoF (1200 rds/min per gun) and horrible accuracy, especially considering Maya dual-wields them and does NOT use the folding stock part of the weapon to assist in accurate fire, but with that many shots in the air, it's virtually impossible to miss.

Semblance: Illusions. While not as spectacular or destructive as some abilities, it seems to fit Maya's manipulative and self-interested personality. She can make false images which allow her to escape or strike from an unexpected angle. These images have no physical form and are just created by bending light. As a result, she can reduce her visibility,not enough to be invisible, but enough to make spotting her tricky, especially at long distances,



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RP Example: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... &hilit=ANO as Kat, the psycho :D (Gakusen is a puppet of mine)

#This is an app (Keep this so I can find apps easily!)

One major problem with this app. The White Fang are genocidal towards humans. In the show, even though they are working with a human, it is a very fragile alliance brought out of a mutual need to survive. They wouldn't just help a regular human. Sure, you can be supportive of the White Fang, but it doesn't change their opinion of you.
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North Arkana
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Postby North Arkana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:31 pm

Kalbana wrote:This is a great app, you're accepted!

Hehe... i took the long bio thing to heart :P
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Postby Icrum » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:33 pm

So what are the first initials currently?
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Main wrote:A petition to redesign the flag incites violent riots that eventually destroy the entire nation.

-Ebola- wrote:I don't want to kill you all. I want primates, humans included, to stay around so my descendants will have the same variety of hosts to choose from as I do.

Washington Resistance Army wrote:Not being able to buy an AR most certainly is a travesty.

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Postby Kalbana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:33 pm

North Arkana wrote:
Kalbana wrote:This is a great app, you're accepted!

Hehe... i took the long bio thing to heart :P

Looking over your bio again, there was one major problem with it that you need to address that I somehow didn't see the first time

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Postby Ulvenes » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:34 pm

Kalbana wrote:
Ulvenes wrote:
You can't steal that, that's my identity. Just ask Temp.
If it's the last name I'd be a lot happier.

@Kalbana, I just watched the episode where the girls got the
dog in the mail

Could I have a Mofuji by any chance..?

Sure. Fluffy cat-ball-things for all!


Mofuji is a fluffy ball of wolf..
I cannot watch youtube, so please stop giving me links there.
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Postby Bearon » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:44 pm

Kalbana wrote:Bearon, limit the teleportation semblance

Anything else?


With the teleportation I'm on it.

Before I can finish the bio could I get a brief summary of what this world is like?
Nothing to see here. Move along.

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Postby Kalbana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 1:44 pm

Kalbana wrote:
Bearon wrote:Before I can finish the bio could I get a brief summary of what this world is like?

Read the intro post... It not only has a summary but also a link to the wiki

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Postby North Arkana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:01 pm

Kalbana wrote:
North Arkana wrote:Hehe... i took the long bio thing to heart :P

Looking over your bio again, there was one major problem with it that you need to address that I somehow didn't see the first time

And that is?
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Postby Joshulia » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:12 pm

Sithian Korriban wrote:
Ulvenes wrote:Any room for another wolfkin..?

hehe jacked your idea :)

Oh and from what I can tell it is first and last names that can be used so we have D, R, S, F, C, A, O, A, A, V and probably a few that I missed

V, A, R, O could be Vermillion (A because reasons) and F, A, C, S could be Facinorous
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Postby Kalbana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:13 pm

North Arkana wrote:
Kalbana wrote:Looking over your bio again, there was one major problem with it that you need to address that I somehow didn't see the first time

And that is?


The White Fang are genocidal towards humans. In the show, even though they are working with a human, it is a very fragile alliance brought out of a mutual need to survive. They wouldn't just help a regular human. Sure, you can be supportive of the White Fang, but it doesn't change their opinion of you.

A way to fix your app REALLY easily would to just change your race to Faunus

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Postby The Templar High Council » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:24 pm

Alright. This needs to be regulated to a number of characters divisible by 4. We have 10 chars now. So either 12 or 16, probably 16 to be safe. 1 spot for Kal, 1 for Ulv, and 1 for Wolfy, that leaves 3 more character slots.

All character names are in my 1st post (the 2nd post in the thread). Links to each character, work out teammates outside the thread if possible. Please also inform me of any name changes, so I can correct them.
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Postby North Arkana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:33 pm

Kalbana wrote:
North Arkana wrote:And that is?


The White Fang are genocidal towards humans. In the show, even though they are working with a human, it is a very fragile alliance brought out of a mutual need to survive. They wouldn't just help a regular human. Sure, you can be supportive of the White Fang, but it doesn't change their opinion of you.

A way to fix your app REALLY easily would to just change your race to Faunus

Roger that, taking route of least resistance.
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Postby Ulvenes » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:34 pm

I'll make an app in ... 4 hours.
I cannot watch youtube, so please stop giving me links there.
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Postby Ulvenes » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:41 pm

Watched Blake's trailer, I used a mask like her mentor/friend in multiple RP's as it turns out..
I cannot watch youtube, so please stop giving me links there.
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Postby Icrum » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:42 pm

Joshulia wrote:
Sithian Korriban wrote:hehe jacked your idea :)

Oh and from what I can tell it is first and last names that can be used so we have D, R, S, F, C, A, O, A, A, V and probably a few that I missed

V, A, R, O could be Vermillion (A because reasons) and F, A, C, S could be Facinorous

Or SAVR for savior. (Not the Cristian Jesus)
Some kind of dessert involving ice cream, hard liquor, and a blow torch
Main wrote:A petition to redesign the flag incites violent riots that eventually destroy the entire nation.

-Ebola- wrote:I don't want to kill you all. I want primates, humans included, to stay around so my descendants will have the same variety of hosts to choose from as I do.

Washington Resistance Army wrote:Not being able to buy an AR most certainly is a travesty.

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Postby North Arkana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:44 pm

App has been changed, Maya de Mazelle is now a fox-type Faunus so as to better fit with the part of the bio dealing with the White Fang.
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Postby Ulvenes » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:46 pm

Icrum wrote:
Joshulia wrote:V, A, R, O could be Vermillion (A because reasons) and F, A, C, S could be Facinorous

Or SAVR for savior. (Not the Cristian Jesus)


Is there an M availabe? I'd be happy with an M..
I cannot watch youtube, so please stop giving me links there.
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Postby North Arkana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:48 pm

Ulvenes wrote:
Icrum wrote:Or SAVR for savior. (Not the Cristian Jesus)


Is there an M availabe? I'd be happy with an M..

An "M" name for you, or someone with an "M" name?
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Postby Ulvenes » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:49 pm

A name with the first letter M.
I cannot watch youtube, so please stop giving me links there.
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Postby Kalbana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:51 pm

The Templar High Council wrote:Alright. This needs to be regulated to a number of characters divisible by 4. We have 10 chars now. So either 12 or 16, probably 16 to be safe. 1 spot for Kal, 1 for Ulv, and 1 for Wolfy, that leaves 3 more character slots.

All character names are in my 1st post (the 2nd post in the thread). Links to each character, work out teammates outside the thread if possible. Please also inform me of any name changes, so I can correct them.

Lets do 16 unless we don't get anyone else, which we will then just change to 12. I am working out the final kinks of my app, but am witholding posting it so I can edit it according to whatever niche hasn't been filled. I have the basic outline and bio done, along with the weapon. The semblance I am going to choose based on whatever potential asset the group currently doesn't have.

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Postby Kalbana » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:52 pm

North Arkana wrote:Name: Maya de Mazelle
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Faunus (fox ears and tail)
Appearance:
Bio: Maya was born to a poor family from a rural region, but her parents were killed when it was ravaged by the Grimm when she was 12. Maya probably would have died had it not been for a Huntress who saved her life. However, things did not occur as they did in storybooks. The Huntress was not the kind idolized by the masses, or the kind read about in stories, rather, she saw Maya as a burden she didn't have the time or energy to deal with. Maya was pointed in the direction of the next closest village, and left to fend for herself. Maya also has a suspicion the Huntress was prejudiced against Faunus.
It took almost a year to make her way to Vale. During the journey, she had scraped by from the kindness of strangers, and no small amount of taking advantage of that kindness. Maya lied, cheated, and stole to support herself, hoping to reach Vale alive and still in one piece. In a twist of fate, it was the White Fang who provided her a way of reaching Vale. Perhaps it was only natural an outcast with a strong distrust for humans would fall in with such a group, even if she wasn't the most welcomed individual. She took part in some protests, and occasionally even assisted in the more dangerous side of things, but her loyalties were always and only to herself, her only goal was becoming a Huntress, everything she did was solely to help her acheive her goals.
After abandoning the White Fang when she reached Vale, Maya stowed away to reach Signal, where she was able to enroll (though she refuses to say how). She crafted her weapons with practicality in mind. Easy to carry, easy to conceal, few shifting parts for changing form, and light-weight. She excelled in the physical aspects of the curriculum, but was abysmal academically. Maya was also generally hated by her classmates due to her manipulative, selfish personality, near complete lack of "loyalty" or "honor", and general bad attitude. The discrimination against Faunus did not help either. There's little hope that her personality has approved with her transfer to Beacon.
To sum it up, Maya is a jaded, cynical, manipulative, selfish b****, with a tramautic childhood, questionable associates from her past, and a sharp tongue, who will use others to achieve her goals before tossing them aside like trash. She can also be cruel, vindictive, and arbitrary, and is far from the ideal Huntress. The only real positive to her that most people see is that she's a skilled fighter who will do anything to achieve her goals.

Weapon: Tick & Tock Twin Tonfas that convert to Uzi-like SMGs
Appearance: Tonfa Uzis
Now imagine a combo of the two, pretty easy to pull off as an IRL weapon, right?
Capabilities: The tonfas are used at closed range for blunt forcd attacks, and are useful for blocking as well, as they protect the forearm. The short end which protrudes forward of the hand is tipped with a pointed metal cap, not sharp, but enough to inflict severe injury in a punching-like attack. This short end is also where the barrel of the SMG is located, while the long end folds to form a stock for more accurate shooting (not that she really uses them like that). Magazines are loaded into the hand grips, Uzi-style.
Other: SMGs have massive RoF (1200 rds/min per gun) and horrible accuracy, especially considering Maya dual-wields them and does NOT use the folding stock part of the weapon to assist in accurate fire, but with that many shots in the air, it's virtually impossible to miss.

Semblance: Illusions. While not as spectacular or destructive as some abilities, it seems to fit Maya's manipulative and self-interested personality. She can make false images which allow her to escape or strike from an unexpected angle. These images have no physical form and are just created by bending light. As a result, she can reduce her visibility,not enough to be invisible, but enough to make spotting her tricky, especially at long distances,



Did you read the rules?: Yesh

RP Example: http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic ... &hilit=ANO as Kat, the psycho :D (Gakusen is a puppet of mine)

#This is an app (Keep this so I can find apps easily!)

Accepted!

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Postby Icrum » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:55 pm

Kalbana wrote:
The Templar High Council wrote:Alright. This needs to be regulated to a number of characters divisible by 4. We have 10 chars now. So either 12 or 16, probably 16 to be safe. 1 spot for Kal, 1 for Ulv, and 1 for Wolfy, that leaves 3 more character slots.

All character names are in my 1st post (the 2nd post in the thread). Links to each character, work out teammates outside the thread if possible. Please also inform me of any name changes, so I can correct them.

Lets do 16 unless we don't get anyone else, which we will then just change to 12. I am working out the final kinks of my app, but am witholding posting it so I can edit it according to whatever niche hasn't been filled. I have the basic outline and bio done, along with the weapon. The semblance I am going to choose based on whatever potential asset the group currently doesn't have.

I don't have a group yet, team SOFA was disbanded.
Last edited by Icrum on Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Some kind of dessert involving ice cream, hard liquor, and a blow torch
Main wrote:A petition to redesign the flag incites violent riots that eventually destroy the entire nation.

-Ebola- wrote:I don't want to kill you all. I want primates, humans included, to stay around so my descendants will have the same variety of hosts to choose from as I do.

Washington Resistance Army wrote:Not being able to buy an AR most certainly is a travesty.

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Postby The Templar High Council » Thu Oct 30, 2014 2:57 pm

North Arkana wrote:App has been changed, Maya de Mazelle is now a fox-type Faunus so as to better fit with the part of the bio dealing with the White Fang.

Alright. you and Cat can't be on the same team.

Why? Because they have the same weapon and same faunus animal traits. It'd be too weird.
They call me Temp. If I take too long to respond, just TG me. Or TG me whenever, I'm online 90% of the time.
Anime God of P2TM, Last of Lithianity, Bro to All, & P2TM's Villain in Glasses. Kacheen!
2014 P2TM Lifetime Achievement Award Winner. During my first year on NS. Go figure.
And 2015 Most Involved in P2TM? On a roll now!
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Postby The Templar High Council » Thu Oct 30, 2014 3:00 pm

Icrum wrote:
Joshulia wrote:V, A, R, O could be Vermillion (A because reasons) and F, A, C, S could be Facinorous

Or SAVR for savior. (Not the Cristian Jesus)

I like this. Who would be the R?
Soren
Aaron/Alex
Victoria
______
They call me Temp. If I take too long to respond, just TG me. Or TG me whenever, I'm online 90% of the time.
Anime God of P2TM, Last of Lithianity, Bro to All, & P2TM's Villain in Glasses. Kacheen!
2014 P2TM Lifetime Achievement Award Winner. During my first year on NS. Go figure.
And 2015 Most Involved in P2TM? On a roll now!
----->Founder of The Council of the Multiverse community.<-----

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Postby Icrum » Thu Oct 30, 2014 3:08 pm

The Templar High Council wrote:
Icrum wrote:Or SAVR for savior. (Not the Cristian Jesus)

I like this. Who would be the R?
Soren
Aaron/Alex
Victoria
______

We need someone with an 'R' name.....
Some kind of dessert involving ice cream, hard liquor, and a blow torch
Main wrote:A petition to redesign the flag incites violent riots that eventually destroy the entire nation.

-Ebola- wrote:I don't want to kill you all. I want primates, humans included, to stay around so my descendants will have the same variety of hosts to choose from as I do.

Washington Resistance Army wrote:Not being able to buy an AR most certainly is a travesty.

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