The Sorrow of the Dead: Seeking Peace (OOC/Signup)

[Palonitr and Howland]

Yo charmera. You should update the OP

[Charmera]

Yo charmera. You should update the OP

Put the IC on it.
I'l update the character list soon. I'l also post a little later too as I'm kinda busy.

[Palonitr and Howland]

Yo charmera. You should update the OP

Put the IC on it.
I'l update the character list soon. I'l also post a little later too as I'm kinda busy.

Aye thanks

[Charmera]

Name: Zoya Cross
Age at death: 15
Years dead: 20
Appearance :strawberry blond hair , and tall and slim body with blue livly eyes .
Appearance: same strawberry blond hair , just with a hint of blue , too thin body and cold long hands . pale dead eyes .
Spirit Type: yuki oona
Spirit Power: ability to control minds (if in naturally cold places) and show their fears to them apart from control over ice
Personality: was atheletic before death , and loved hiking.not so good at studies.reading novels was her favorite hobby , though she also loved her piano classes. When she was small, she was quite interested in ghost stories , only to know after some years that she would become one!
How you died: "it was cold , too cold , I remembered how painful my frost bitten fingers felt . I remember only one thought in my mind that time - what was my mistake !?."( she had run away from the doctors who wanted to remove her organs for money , her both parents had died and the doctors intention was to purposefully kill her for organs and tell an excuse that she died due to some flu!She decided to run away , but could have lived if she would not have gone into the forest for hide out , during the harsh cold winters of the north . she died due to extreme cold, though her hate for doctors still exists

Uuuhh... Alright...
1. Fix up grammar, spelling and general sentence work to an acceptable degree, I'm not a grammar nazi, but it just makes it much easier for me to read posts and APPs if you follow the basic rules of grammar.
2. The spirit power is not some big power, it's just a small personality based utility power. Your main power will be the power you get from your spirit type.
3. Personality could use some work, as it doesn't really tell me anything about how she is now.
4. Even with how screwed up the hospital was, I doubt all the doctors would want conspire to harvest her organs. Maybe one or two at most.

[Saestea]

Appearance (Spirit form, take on this form when in stress or when bright light shines on them. It should look suitably horrifying.)

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Hey, it's that Assassin Guy from Evil Within. xD

[Islamic Republic e Jariri]

Appearance (Spirit form, take on this form when in stress or when bright light shines on them. It should look suitably horrifying.)

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Hey, it's that Assassin Guy from Evil Within. xD

Ruvik. Or Ruben.... he changed hid name at some point....

Yeah the game was pretty okay... though a bit repetitive over time... and the main character was kind of bland... survival horror still feels better when its indie.

I used it for Tobias spirit form because I wanted an avatar that looked pale and stitched together after being torn apart.

[Syrena]

Uh okay shall I edit and post it again?

[Fesconia]

Uh okay shall I edit and post it again?

Yes I think that's what Charmera said.

[Rygondria]

what type of ghost would a mafiaso who was gunned down be

[Saestea]

A wraith, I guess. *shrugs*

[Rygondria]

Name: Vito Rossi
Age At the death: 26
Years dead: 50
Appearance ( Alive Form): http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_li3a2 ... o1_500.jpg
Appearance ( Spirit form): http://image.shutterstock.com/display_p ... 287510.jpg
Spirit type: Wraith
Spirit power: The ability to use his gun not to kill but to knock people over when fired leaving behind a smell of gun smoke
Personality: Vito is a smug scumbag who has a very short temper. He could care less about the problems of others.
How you died: It was 1964 and Vito just got out of a nightclub and was walking home. He was then stopped outside the hospital. It was a group of his fellow gang members. Instead of greeting then they brought out their guns and gunned down the gangster in front of the hospital. As he laid dying he vowed vengeance the hospital staff ran out to try to save his life but it was to late the bullets had done thier job.

[Joshulia]

And tagging to make either a Spawn or a Scarecrow

[Lunas Legion]

Hmm. Now to come up with a decent idea for a spirit. Are there any untaken types?

[Rygondria]

was i accepted?

[Charmera]

Name: Vito Rossi
Age At the death: 26
Years dead: 50
Appearance ( Alive Form): http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_li3a2 ... o1_500.jpg
Appearance ( Spirit form): http://image.shutterstock.com/display_p ... 287510.jpg
Spirit type: Wraith
Spirit power: The ability to use his gun not to kill but to knock people over when fired leaving behind a smell of gun smoke
Personality: Vito is a smug scumbag who has a very short temper. He could care less about the problems of others.
How you died: It was 1964 and Vito just got out of a nightclub and was walking home. He was then stopped outside the hospital. It was a group of his fellow gang members. Instead of greeting then they brought out their guns and gunned down the gangster in front of the hospital. As he laid dying he vowed vengeance the hospital staff ran out to try to save his life but it was to late the bullets had done thier job.

Eh, I see nothing wrong with this.

[Feichland]

Name: "Major" John Willows
Age at death: 32
Years dead: 148 Years (1866)
Appearance (Alive form)

Appearance

Spirit Type: Wraith
Spirit Power: Able to give living people nightmares/visions of being in an ACW battle
Personality: Usually clam, loyal, obedient, brave, and loves to scare people. He will occasionally go into the hospital parking lot and try to make one of the cars' lights go over him, revealing him and occasionally, killing someone of shock. He knows most of the Veterans around the hospital and acts, more or less, like their commander. He will some times call a drill to take count of any new soldiers from any time period in the hospital.
The reason he still resides in the hospital is that he was "dead" in 1864. He was in a coma, and was shifted to the Room A4. He died in 1866, and he now spends most of his time on his death bed, in Room A4.
How you died: Died from a bullet to the brain at the Battle of Chaffin's Farm

[Charmera]

Name: "Major" John Willows
Age at death: 32
Years dead: 150 Years (1864)
Appearance (Alive form)

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Appearance

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Spirit Type: Wraith
Spirit Power: Able to give living people nightmares/visions of being in an ACW battle
Personality: Usually clam, loyal, obedient, brave, and loves to scare people. He will occasionally go into the hospital parking lot and try to make one of the cars' lights go over him, revealing him and occasionally, killing someone of shock. He knows most of the Veterans around the hospital and acts, more or less, like their commander. He will some times call a drill to take count of any new soldiers from any time period in the hospital.
How you died: Died from a bullet to the brain at the Battle of Chaffin's Farm

Hmmm...
The only question would be, what's his connection to the hospital?

[Feichland]

Name: "Major" John Willows
Age at death: 32
Years dead: 150 Years (1864)
Appearance (Alive form)

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Appearance

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Spirit Type: Wraith
Spirit Power: Able to give living people nightmares/visions of being in an ACW battle
Personality: Usually clam, loyal, obedient, brave, and loves to scare people. He will occasionally go into the hospital parking lot and try to make one of the cars' lights go over him, revealing him and occasionally, killing someone of shock. He knows most of the Veterans around the hospital and acts, more or less, like their commander. He will some times call a drill to take count of any new soldiers from any time period in the hospital.
How you died: Died from a bullet to the brain at the Battle of Chaffin's Farm

Hmmm...
The only question would be, what's his connection to the hospital?

Opps, forgot that. I'll edit it now. Perhaps you could enter in a section in the app of how they are connected to the hospital?

[Charmera]

Hmmm...
The only question would be, what's his connection to the hospital?

Opps, forgot that. I'll edit it now. Perhaps you could enter in a section in the app of how they are connected to the hospital?

Ehhh... I probably should have. Too late now.
Also, your name sounds like Fetch land
Also, Also, I'l post IC very soon. After Lunch.

[Feichland]

Name: "Major" John Willows
Age at death: 32
Years dead: 148 Years (1866)
Appearance (Alive form)

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Appearance

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Spirit Type: Wraith
Spirit Power: Able to give living people nightmares/visions of being in an ACW battle
Personality: Usually clam, loyal, obedient, brave, and loves to scare people. He will occasionally go into the hospital parking lot and try to make one of the cars' lights go over him, revealing him and occasionally, killing someone of shock. He knows most of the Veterans around the hospital and acts, more or less, like their commander. He will some times call a drill to take count of any new soldiers from any time period in the hospital.
The reason he still resides in the hospital is that he was "dead" in 1864. He was in a coma, and was shifted to the Room A4. He died in 1866, and he now spends most of his time on his death bed, in Room A4.
How you died: Died from a bullet to the brain at the Battle of Chaffin's Farm

Edited now, is it good enough?

[Charmera]

Name: "Major" John Willows
Age at death: 32
Years dead: 148 Years (1866)
Appearance (Alive form)

(Image)

Appearance

(Image)

Spirit Type: Wraith
Spirit Power: Able to give living people nightmares/visions of being in an ACW battle
Personality: Usually clam, loyal, obedient, brave, and loves to scare people. He will occasionally go into the hospital parking lot and try to make one of the cars' lights go over him, revealing him and occasionally, killing someone of shock. He knows most of the Veterans around the hospital and acts, more or less, like their commander. He will some times call a drill to take count of any new soldiers from any time period in the hospital.
The reason he still resides in the hospital is that he was "dead" in 1864. He was in a coma, and was shifted to the Room A4. He died in 1866, and he now spends most of his time on his death bed, in Room A4.
How you died: Died from a bullet to the brain at the Battle of Chaffin's Farm

Edited now, is it good enough?

*nods*
Accepted. Good to have a civil war ghost

[Feichland]

Edited now, is it good enough?

*nods*
Accepted. Good to have a civil war ghost

Every cemetery/hospital/random field has to have a Civil War ghost, or else it just doesn't feel right, you know?

[Harbertia]

Well, I have a lot to look over, need to figure out a good post, and away to get my character involved.

[Harbertia]

I must withdraw from this RP,I no longer feel comfortable taking part in it.

[Charmera]

I must withdraw from this RP,I no longer feel comfortable taking part in it.

May I ask why?