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Postby Finland SSR » Mon Sep 29, 2014 11:22 am

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Of The Rnclave wrote:Character App: Of The Rnclave
Name: Bardock
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Faction: Saiyan Kingdom
Starting Planet: Planet Vegeta
Appearance:

(Image)

Maximum Destructive Capacity: (with ki) Planet
Equipment: Scouter
Other Powers: (Outside of ki. This does not include racials) Seeing the future
Backstory: Bardock is a low-class Saiyan mercenary who leads a small platoon comprised of four other Saiyan soldiers in Bardock - The Father of Goku: Tora, Fasha, Borgos, and Shugesh. His mate Gine was also part of Bardock's team at one point. Together, the team makes a living by traveling to various planets where they decimate the defenses of these civilizations and prepare them for Frieza's planetary market. Bardock was famous for his bravery even among the Saiyans;he is mentioned by Paragus in the movie Dragon Ball Z: Broly - The Legendary Super Saiyan when he recognizes Goku as Bardock's son, and it can be thought that Paragus was Bardock's superior according to the Supplemental Daizenshuu.After being saved on the battlefield by him several times, Gine developed some feelings for Bardock.Due to her gentle nature, Gine was not cut out for fighting and retired. Her gentle nature has also changed Bardock's behavior, as Saiyans usually do not demonstrate care for their children but Bardock does. Bardock and Gine already had two sons by the time of the destruction of Planet Vegeta. In an interview, Akira Toriyama says that Bardock himself might have had siblings, but perhaps even Bardock himself does not really know and, at any rate, he probably has no interest in it either.
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Have you read The Code of Conduct?: Yup
Do you agree to abide to the Code of Conduct?: Yup Yup

Is Bardock even planet level? I don't think so.
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Postby Of The Rnclave » Mon Sep 29, 2014 11:23 am

Finland SSR wrote:[background=][/background]
Of The Rnclave wrote:Character App: Of The Rnclave
Name: Bardock
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Faction: Saiyan Kingdom
Starting Planet: Planet Vegeta
Appearance:

(Image)

Maximum Destructive Capacity: (with ki) Planet
Equipment: Scouter
Other Powers: (Outside of ki. This does not include racials) Seeing the future
Backstory: Bardock is a low-class Saiyan mercenary who leads a small platoon comprised of four other Saiyan soldiers in Bardock - The Father of Goku: Tora, Fasha, Borgos, and Shugesh. His mate Gine was also part of Bardock's team at one point. Together, the team makes a living by traveling to various planets where they decimate the defenses of these civilizations and prepare them for Frieza's planetary market. Bardock was famous for his bravery even among the Saiyans;he is mentioned by Paragus in the movie Dragon Ball Z: Broly - The Legendary Super Saiyan when he recognizes Goku as Bardock's son, and it can be thought that Paragus was Bardock's superior according to the Supplemental Daizenshuu.After being saved on the battlefield by him several times, Gine developed some feelings for Bardock.Due to her gentle nature, Gine was not cut out for fighting and retired. Her gentle nature has also changed Bardock's behavior, as Saiyans usually do not demonstrate care for their children but Bardock does. Bardock and Gine already had two sons by the time of the destruction of Planet Vegeta. In an interview, Akira Toriyama says that Bardock himself might have had siblings, but perhaps even Bardock himself does not really know and, at any rate, he probably has no interest in it either.
RP Sample: I've already posted an app

Have you read The Code of Conduct?: Yup
Do you agree to abide to the Code of Conduct?: Yup Yup

Is Bardock even planet level? I don't think so.



His power level is 10,000, he should be
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Postby Alouite » Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:58 pm

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Name: Prince Vegeta
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Faction: Saiyan Kingdom
Starting Planet: Vegeta
Appearance: Image
Maximum Destructive Capacity: Planets
Equipment: Combat Gear, Scouter,
Other Powers: Good Hand to Hand Combat, Being a professional badass.
Backstory: Vegeta was born to King Vegeta as the heir to the throne, as a child he was sent to planets to exterminate the locals allowing the planet to be sold. He was on a mission during the rebellion for Frieza, but when he and his team learned that King Vegeta was leading a rebellion with Bradock, they soon joined him. Vegeta then served as a Warrior in the Saiyan Army, continuing similar to previous set of operations, some planets being annexed and others sold to the rich. In this time Vegeta has seen several life threatening battles that have only made him a more formidable warrior. Because of this, he has set himself on a mission to attain super Saiyan powers and began intense training including sprinting across his home planet, one million push ups, five million sit ups, one million pull ups and swimming across the oceans of his home planet along with practicing battle with strong warriors captured by the Saiyan Army. Though he does not know it he has the potential to become a Super Saiyan four and is on the cusp of reaching basic Super Saiyan power. Though initially threatened, his aging father has accepted his son's possibility of succeeding him in power and title.
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Have you read The Code of Conduct?: Of Course.
Do you agree to abide to the Code of Conduct?: Well I can't be Goku's brother's long lost room mate's cousin twice removed, damn it... But I can be Vegeta!
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Postby Neros » Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:02 pm

Yiss, bring the Saiyans!

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Postby Finland SSR » Tue Sep 30, 2014 10:34 pm

Alouite wrote:Character App:
Name: Prince Vegeta
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Faction: Saiyan Kingdom
Starting Planet: Vegeta
Appearance: (Image)
Maximum Destructive Capacity: Planets
Equipment: Combat Gear, Scouter,
Other Powers: Good Hand to Hand Combat, Being a professional badass.
Backstory: Vegeta was born to King Vegeta as the heir to the throne, as a child he was sent to planets to exterminate the locals allowing the planet to be sold. He was on a mission during the rebellion for Frieza, but when he and his team learned that King Vegeta was leading a rebellion with Bradock, they soon joined him. Vegeta then served as a Warrior in the Saiyan Army, continuing similar to previous set of operations, some planets being annexed and others sold to the rich. In this time Vegeta has seen several life threatening battles that have only made him a more formidable warrior. Because of this, he has set himself on a mission to attain super Saiyan powers and began intense training including sprinting across his home planet, one million push ups, five million sit ups, one million pull ups and swimming across the oceans of his home planet along with practicing battle with strong warriors captured by the Saiyan Army. Though he does not know it he has the potential to become a Super Saiyan four and is on the cusp of reaching basic Super Saiyan power. Though initially threatened, his aging father has accepted his son's possibility of succeeding him in power and title.
RP Sample:

Have you read The Code of Conduct?: Of Course.
Do you agree to abide to the Code of Conduct?: Well I can't be Goku's brother's long lost room mate's cousin twice removed, damn it... But I can be Vegeta!

Accepted...
But was Vegeta 24 at that time? This is the beginning of Dragon Ball. He shouldn't even be an adult.
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Postby Alouite » Wed Oct 01, 2014 3:35 am

Finland SSR wrote:
Alouite wrote:Character App:
Name: Prince Vegeta
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Saiyan
Faction: Saiyan Kingdom
Starting Planet: Vegeta
Appearance: (Image)
Maximum Destructive Capacity: Planets
Equipment: Combat Gear, Scouter,
Other Powers: Good Hand to Hand Combat, Being a professional badass.
Backstory: Vegeta was born to King Vegeta as the heir to the throne, as a child he was sent to planets to exterminate the locals allowing the planet to be sold. He was on a mission during the rebellion for Frieza, but when he and his team learned that King Vegeta was leading a rebellion with Bradock, they soon joined him. Vegeta then served as a Warrior in the Saiyan Army, continuing similar to previous set of operations, some planets being annexed and others sold to the rich. In this time Vegeta has seen several life threatening battles that have only made him a more formidable warrior. Because of this, he has set himself on a mission to attain super Saiyan powers and began intense training including sprinting across his home planet, one million push ups, five million sit ups, one million pull ups and swimming across the oceans of his home planet along with practicing battle with strong warriors captured by the Saiyan Army. Though he does not know it he has the potential to become a Super Saiyan four and is on the cusp of reaching basic Super Saiyan power. Though initially threatened, his aging father has accepted his son's possibility of succeeding him in power and title.
RP Sample:

Have you read The Code of Conduct?: Of Course.
Do you agree to abide to the Code of Conduct?: Well I can't be Goku's brother's long lost room mate's cousin twice removed, damn it... But I can be Vegeta!

Accepted...
But was Vegeta 24 at that time? This is the beginning of Dragon Ball. He shouldn't even be an adult.

Oh, I'll do a double check. Then I can edit.
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Postby Turmenista » Wed Oct 01, 2014 4:16 am

Hmm. Tagged, Finland.

Might be a rogue from frieza's race.

Or, might be a fighter from a custom race of Anthropomorphics..

Yes, I'm slowly being turned into a furry. T.T
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Postby Finland SSR » Wed Oct 01, 2014 5:24 am

Turmenista wrote:Hmm. Tagged, Finland.

Might be a rogue from frieza's race.

Or, might be a fighter from a custom race of Anthropomorphics..

Yes, I'm slowly being turned into a furry. T.T

Resist the Furry side, Turm! :P
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Postby Turmenista » Wed Oct 01, 2014 1:43 pm

I gave up, Finland. The fur got to me. Now after I make my apps I have to wash my brain and eyes out with soap and water to unofficially cleanse myself from my act.
Tried to make appearance as Badass as possible.

Name: Vulpans
Planet of Origin: [formerly] Flora, [currently] Coral

Appearance:

Racials: Connection to plant life: Vulpans have a natural ability to connect to all forms of plant life around them. This can be used for healing, gaining power, sensing power, and other techniques. This also allows them to Slowly gain energy from the sun, but this happens gradually over time.
Adaptability: Vulpans are also known for their ability to adapt to changing conditions very quickly. Due to previously having to flee from their previous planet, Flora, after the crisis of an impending collision of a star, they adapted to being able to breathe in space. The Vulpan's intelligence allowed themsleves to build ships from the wreckage and set sail to a new planet to call home: Coral. Coral is mostly Water, so, many have adapted quickly to swim underwater for long periods of time and resist the pressure at low depths. They also recover from blows quite quickly.
Tail Power: Vulpans, in one point in their life, can grow another tail. Like saiyans, tails are not just for aesthetic reasons. They can increase the Owner's power level by how many they have. A vulpan with two tails is much more powerful than one with just a single tail. It is possible for them to manually grow a third tail, through meditation and exercise, though this has yet to be actually seen.

Transformations: The Ascended form [pic in appearance], in which their ears become more pointed, their fur gets a more multi-colored appearance and tint, their eyes now have two colors, and the amount of tails they currently have doubles. If one has a single tail, they get two. If one has two tails, they get four. If they somehow have three, they get six, so on. During this transformation, the ability to grow tails is fully unlocked, and they can push their limits to get up to nine tails, reaching their full power. Though, doing this takes a lot of energy and practice.

Brief History: Do not be fooled by the Vulpan's aggressive appearances. They are actually very peaceful and friendly. Their history is not the case. They had to leave their planet Flora after the impending doom of a star about to hit at any moment. Adapting to the vacuum of space and building their own ships, they found a new world to call home, naming it Coral. During their new age on coral, Vulpan warriors trained with the art of swordplay, mastering their ki, and advancing in technology. A brief but violent civil war left Coral scarred, but over time they rebuilt. Vulpan warriors volunteered to travel the galaxy in search of other life and as peacekeepers, to bring peace to the Galaxy and spread the word of their goals.
1337 - Don't delete this. It's so I can find apps easier.
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Postby Neros » Wed Oct 01, 2014 7:38 pm

We must wait on the Super Saiyans to defeat these new Furry Overlords.

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Postby Turmenista » Wed Oct 01, 2014 8:22 pm

Run.

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Postby Finland SSR » Wed Oct 01, 2014 9:14 pm

Turmenista wrote:I gave up, Finland. The fur got to me. Now after I make my apps I have to wash my brain and eyes out with soap and water to unofficially cleanse myself from my act.
Tried to make appearance as Badass as possible.

Name: Vulpans
Planet of Origin: [formerly] Flora, [currently] Coral

Appearance:

Racials: Connection to plant life: Vulpans have a natural ability to connect to all forms of plant life around them. This can be used for healing, gaining power, sensing power, and other techniques. This also allows them to Slowly gain energy from the sun, but this happens gradually over time.
Adaptability: Vulpans are also known for their ability to adapt to changing conditions very quickly. Due to previously having to flee from their previous planet, Flora, after the crisis of an impending collision of a star, they adapted to being able to breathe in space. The Vulpan's intelligence allowed themsleves to build ships from the wreckage and set sail to a new planet to call home: Coral. Coral is mostly Water, so, many have adapted quickly to swim underwater for long periods of time and resist the pressure at low depths. They also recover from blows quite quickly.
Tail Power: Vulpans, in one point in their life, can grow another tail. Like saiyans, tails are not just for aesthetic reasons. They can increase the Owner's power level by how many they have. A vulpan with two tails is much more powerful than one with just a single tail. It is possible for them to manually grow a third tail, through meditation and exercise, though this has yet to be actually seen.

Transformations: The Ascended form [pic in appearance], in which their ears become more pointed, their fur gets a more multi-colored appearance and tint, their eyes now have two colors, and the amount of tails they currently have doubles. If one has a single tail, they get two. If one has two tails, they get four. If they somehow have three, they get six, so on. During this transformation, the ability to grow tails is fully unlocked, and they can push their limits to get up to nine tails, reaching their full power. Though, doing this takes a lot of energy and practice.

Brief History: Do not be fooled by the Vulpan's aggressive appearances. They are actually very peaceful and friendly. Their history is not the case. They had to leave their planet Flora after the impending doom of a star about to hit at any moment. Adapting to the vacuum of space and building their own ships, they found a new world to call home, naming it Coral. During their new age on coral, Vulpan warriors trained with the art of swordplay, mastering their ki, and advancing in technology. A brief but violent civil war left Coral scarred, but over time they rebuilt. Vulpan warriors volunteered to travel the galaxy in search of other life and as peacekeepers, to bring peace to the Galaxy and spread the word of their goals.
1337 - Don't delete this. It's so I can find apps easier.

*sigh*
Accepted.

Better get Ulvenes on the phone.
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Postby Turmenista » Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:12 am

Now it is my time to scrub my brain out.

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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:53 am

Turmenista wrote:Now it is my time to scrub my brain out.

The deadliest sins can never be forgiven.
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Postby Neros » Thu Oct 02, 2014 5:05 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Turmenista wrote:Now it is my time to scrub my brain out.

The deadliest sins can never be forgiven.

The heretic lives, nay, he breathes!

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Postby Finland SSR » Sat Oct 04, 2014 10:39 am

IC coming tomorrow.
I was busy today. It was by birthday.
Now I am 20.
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Postby Slenderman The CreepyPasta King » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:08 am

umm, what are racials? Oh and happy B-Day!!
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Postby Finland SSR » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:10 am

Slenderman The CreepyPasta King wrote:umm, what are racials?

Special bonuses for certain races.
Read the Races section and each one's bonuses to understand it better.
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Postby Slenderman The CreepyPasta King » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:18 am

Race App:
Name: Akeelonches
Planet of Origin: (The planet that your race originates from) The Akeelonch System, there's a planet for each type of Akeelnoch.
Appearance: (pic please)https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/--5Tt2eS4eQg/VDA2f10rkjI/AAAAAAAAADQ/5mAXrdf1dqI/w426-h239/akeelonch.png i am bad at drawing on the computer
Racials: (3 at max. Don't get overboard with these.) Depending on the Akeelonch's element, the akeelonch gets power from how much of their element is in the planet they're on, example, a water akeelonch on planet Namek would be very powerful.

They heal fast.

Live for eons at a time.

Transformations: (Only one possible. And not everyone can reach it, remember?) Akeelonch V2 (the whole akeelonch body goes silver and the eyes turn red, pretty much a form to take less damage)
Brief History: The akeelonches travel around the multiverse, only helping races when they cant deal with problems on their own, Every time an akeelonch is born a star comes into existence and every time an akeelonch dies, a star dies.
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Postby Finland SSR » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:22 am

Slenderman The CreepyPasta King wrote:Race App:
Name: Akeelonches
Planet of Origin: (The planet that your race originates from) The Akeelonch System, there's a planet for each type of akeelnoch.
Appearance: (pic please)[]https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/--5Tt2eS4eQg/VDA2f10rkjI/AAAAAAAAADQ/5mAXrdf1dqI/w426-h239/akeelonch.png[/url] i am bad at drawing on the computer
Racials: (3 at max. Don't get overboard with these.) Depending on the akeelonch's element, the akeelonch gets power from how much of their element is in the planet they're on, example, a water akeelonch on planet namek would be very powerful. They heal fast. Live for eons at a time
Transformations: (Only one possible. And not everyone can reach it, remember?) Akeelonch V2
Brief History: The akeelonches travel around the multiverse, only helping races when they cant deal with problems on their own, Everytime an akeelonch is born a star comes into existance and everytime an akeelonch dies, a star dies.
1337 - Don't delete this. It's so I can find apps easier.

Separate the individual racials. Look at the Races for example.
Fix the links.
More info on the transformation.
More descriptions.
Fix your god damned grammar.
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Postby Slenderman The CreepyPasta King » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:28 am

Finland SSR wrote:
Slenderman The CreepyPasta King wrote:Race App:
Name: Akeelonches
Planet of Origin: (The planet that your race originates from) The Akeelonch System, there's a planet for each type of Akeelnoch.
Appearance: (pic please)https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/--5Tt2eS4eQg/VDA2f10rkjI/AAAAAAAAADQ/5mAXrdf1dqI/w426-h239/akeelonch.png i am bad at drawing on the computer
Racials: (3 at max. Don't get overboard with these.) Depending on the Akeelonch's element, the akeelonch gets power from how much of their element is in the planet they're on, example, a water akeelonch on planet Namek would be very powerful.

They heal fast.

Live for eons at a time.

Transformations: (Only one possible. And not everyone can reach it, remember?) Akeelonch V2 (the whole akeelonch body goes silver and the eyes turn red, pretty much a form to take less damage)
Brief History: The akeelonches travel around the multiverse, only helping races when they cant deal with problems on their own, Every time an akeelonch is born a star comes into existence and every time an akeelonch dies, a star dies.
1337 - Don't delete this. It's so I can find apps easier.

Separate the individual racials. Look at the Races for example.
Fix the links.
More info on the transformation.
More descriptions.
Fix your god damned grammar.



that good?
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Postby Finland SSR » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:31 am

Slenderman The CreepyPasta King wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:Separate the individual racials. Look at the Races for example.
Fix the links.
More info on the transformation.
More descriptions.
Fix your god damned grammar.



that good?

*sigh*
Accepted.
But change the original as well.
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Postby Slenderman The CreepyPasta King » Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:33 am

Finland SSR wrote:
Slenderman The CreepyPasta King wrote:

that good?

*sigh*
Accepted.
But change the original as well.


meaning what exactly?

NVM
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Postby Neros » Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:19 pm

Yay! IC!

20?! You need to do cooler stuff now, like wait a whole year to drink legally if you're in the US.

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Postby Slenderman The CreepyPasta King » Sat Oct 04, 2014 5:21 pm

Neros wrote:Yay! IC!

20?! You need to do cooler stuff now, like wait a whole year to drink legally if you're in the US.


or go to any other country and drink, lol
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