Imagicraft: Deliver Us From Evil (OOC/Sign-Ups)

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Fuck sakes I hate dealing with bios.

[Bearon]

Fuck sakes I hate dealing with bios.

Bios are incredibly easy for me. Want some help?

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Fuck sakes I hate dealing with bios.

Bios are incredibly easy for me. Want some help?

It's not that they aren't easy I just don't like doing them.

[Bearon]

Bios are incredibly easy for me. Want some help?

It's not that they aren't easy I just don't like doing them.

Oh come on. They give your character way more stuff to go off of.

[The BranRiech]

I hate writing apps, not good at it at all.

[Bearon]

I hate writing apps, not good at it at all.

Want some help.

[Nature-Spirits]

But here's a question...........do some of you guys here have some sort of hidden wish to be a girrrl or some hermaphrodite???.. ...I've got like two characters here alrdy who are both female and male or can be both...or is it 3 now?

Well I consider myself to be somewhat genderfluid....

I beg to differ it is not like he immune to any of troubles havoc and insanity cause. If one of his inventions explodes because a mortal tampers with it. He not going to be protected form the blast because he created it. Or if Raxis decided to go paint himself red with the blood of the innocent who better than his creator. Jose sure hell won't be pleased having is life threatened and his wonders ( which he has a strong emotional attachment to) be destroyed because someone had to look with their hands. Causing choas and destruction is a weakness if you don't want to cause it and when your just as likely if not more to suffer from it effects.



It doesn't contradict it just a way of trading weakness one weakness for another.
Sure its possible to build a laser gun in mintues instead of hours but it will fall apart after the first shot.
Sure its possible build that beam sword that does have that weird weakness to banana peels ,but it so difficult to maintain you can't have that robot and sensor array you wanted.

Sorry but I still want a second opinion on your app from those who have had more experience in other RPs. If they agree and tell me that your app is fine then I'll accept it. I'm sorry but you'll have to be a bit patient for awhile

I have to agree with GG. As she said, causing chaos and destruction could also function as an advantage to the character if they decided they wanted to do so. Further, when an app asks for weaknesses, usually something more concrete is wanted; that is to say, (for example) instead of "he's an asshole," you should put something like "physically weak": something that cannot function as an advantage to the character ever (except maybe in some very contrived circumstances, but we won't get into those since by definition they pretty much never occur).

Additionally, I found the app to have many grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand at points. I'm not trying to be rude Gomthia, but if you know that you have difficulty with spelling and grammar, there are many online tools you can use to correct what you write, and it only takes a couple of extra minutes. Generally, on P2TM we expect English of at least decent quality (i.e. very few to no mistakes in spelling and grammar) (though it depends on the RP and who else is in it, as there are of course different levels of RPing ability), as it contributes to the overall quality of the RP. Again, I mean no offence and I'm not trying to scare you off; I'm simply being honest and trying to inform you of the situation (and I know the situation quite well, as I have been RPing on this forum for about 3.5 years now) so that you may improve.

Just my two cents. If anyone else disagrees with me, please say so.

[Bearon]

But here's a question...........do some of you guys here have some sort of hidden wish to be a girrrl or some hermaphrodite???.. ...I've got like two characters here alrdy who are both female and male or can be both...or is it 3 now?

Well I consider myself to be somewhat genderfluid....

Sorry but I still want a second opinion on your app from those who have had more experience in other RPs. If they agree and tell me that your app is fine then I'll accept it. I'm sorry but you'll have to be a bit patient for awhile

I have to agree with GG. As she said, causing chaos and destruction could also function as an advantage to the character if they decided they wanted to do so. Further, when an app asks for weaknesses, usually something more concrete is wanted; that is to say, (for example) instead of "he's an asshole," you should put something like "physically weak": something that cannot function as an advantage to the character ever (except maybe in some very contrived circumstances, but we won't get into those since by definition they pretty much never occur).

Additionally, I found the app to have many grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand at points. I'm not trying to be rude Gomthia, but if you know that you have difficulty with spelling and grammar, there are many online tools you can use to correct what you write, and it only takes a couple of extra minutes. Generally, on P2TM we expect English of at least decent quality (i.e. very few to no mistakes in spelling and grammar) (though it depends on the RP and who else is in it, as there are of course different levels of RPing ability), as it contributes to the overall quality of the RP. Again, I mean no offence and I'm not trying to scare you off; I'm simply being honest and trying to inform you of the situation (and I know the situation quite well, as I have been RPing on this forum for about 3.5 years now) so that you may improve.

Just my two cents. If anyone else disagrees with me, please say so.

Not disagreeing just wanted to point out weaknesses are subjective to the situation.

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

It's not that they aren't easy I just don't like doing them.

Oh come on. They give your character way more stuff to go off of.

I know it's necessary but I still don't like writing them. Dunno why.

[Bearon]

Oh come on. They give your character way more stuff to go off of.

I know it's necessary but I still don't like writing them. Dunno why.

Who is your character?

[The BranRiech]

I hate writing apps, not good at it at all.

Want some help.

Already have my accepted app, no thanks!



And to GG's question on Gender. Personally? I've wanted to be a girl somewhat, but I like playing characters who've switched genders at some point, more interesting situations arise.

[Gamer Girl]

SCrew it.......

I can't sleep. Guess I'll review a few more apps before getting my Zzzz. There is something nagging me in my head about this RP. I think I'm missing something(s).....

[Gamer Girl]

App one:

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Real Name Rahk

Species: Troll

Age: 37 (Stopped aging at 25 due to extreme regeneration)

Gender: Male

Appearance: 9.3 feet large hunched, 11.68 feet if he doesn't stand hunched. Brown, earthy skin with dark moss green patches. He actually has some fungus and moss growing on his left shoulder going down his back partially. Upward tusks.

(Image)

Course Designation: (1 or 2) 2 (His low level of intelligence caused heavy confusion for him during the tests).

Character Alignment: He's a good guy, troll, that having been said he does enjoy a fight and if feel threatened his first reaction is to smash whatever's threatening him. I guess that makes him Chaotic Good? Not sure.

House Designation: Excalibur, same as above he doesn't want to hurt people but feels threatened easily and he doesn't ever hold back which can make him dangerous like a docile animal will strike if it feels cornered.

Favorite Subjects + Extra Subject:

- He takes extra classes of English because he has extreme difficulty speaking "normally" his sentences are broken his verbs are often not conjugated he doesn't understand big words, ...
- Potion Making (which he calls Juju-class)
- The Art of Athena (the one class he somehow actually shines in, he's a genius in strategy somehow)
- Weapon Studies (his usage of weapons in the past has been nothing more than: pick up something heavy and you SMASH)

Special Abilities:

Powerful regeneration, small wounds heal very fast to near instantly, severed limbs grow back in several days to weeks (days for finger sized parts weeks+ for complete limbs).
Extreme physical strength and endurance (not sure just how strong would be fitting with this RP)
Sharp eyes, extremely good nose, powerful hearing, animalistic tracking skills (in essence enhanced senses)

Weaknesses: His intelligence is just high enough not to be considered an animal, he isn't stupid, it's just the limits of his brain. Fire, he has a primal fear of fire that can make him go rampant and fire does hurt him worse than other things would.

Personality In general gentle unless threatened or confused, at that point he smashes whatever threatens him or confuses him if he can or isn't stopped before hand.
He is a creature that could be placed between animals and humans on the evolution scales. He's an animalistic creature but not an animal if that makes sense.

Short Bio: Due to his sub-par intellect he doesn't remember to many years back, it might also be that the wiping of his memories from the starless night might have messed up things more for him because of his already sub-par intellect, his first memories he has are from several years before he met Ithica, it was mainly a lot of ridicule for his looks and low intellect and him in general allowing it because those who did the ridiculing weren't a threat to him.
After years of wandering he met a Faery called Ithica, for some reason this Faery lacked the ability to fly and had trouble surviving in the world on her own without the use of magic and the constant use of magic she was using just to live was exhausting her. As this Faery was weak in everything Rahk was strong and was strong in everything Rahk was weak they formed a partnership of convenience and eventually became great and inseparable friends. For those seeing the 2 it might look as if the Faery was controlling Rahk because she did most of the talking and explaining, but as far as they were concerned they are equals.

Being of sub-par intellect Rahk really struggled with the entry exam at least on the intellectual part, but his immense physical strength got him through by sheer power alone even if only in the second category.

Anything else?:Rahk spends a lot of his free time in The Meadow of Ryu taking care of the animals, he feels a connection to them and animals don't judge. He does any chore needed there and is usually put for the duties you really need some good muscle to do. He once wrestled a dragon to the ground that wouldn't sit still for the treatment of a wound it had.

H.O.T (Don't edit this out. Keep it in your app format. It makes it easier for me to find your applications)

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App two:

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Real Name Ithica

Species: Faery (born one)

Age: 23

Gender: Female

Appearance: She is roughly 1 feet tall at her smallest and 5.3 feet at her largest and looks a bit like this:

(Image)

Course Designation: 1

Character Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

House Designation: She was appointed to Tritan but because Rahk was appointed to Excalibur she had a tantrum about wanting to go to Excalibur instead of Tritan, partially because she is the only one that can keep Rahk calm even when he feels threatened or confused, but mainly because she wanted to stay with Rahk. And being a bit of a trickster who likes to mess with people a bit, she vowed she'd play tricks on everyone until she would be deemed to belong in Excalibur if they didn't allow her to go there from the beginning.

Special Abilities:
Weather Manipulation through magic (basically Storms abilities from X-men)
Size manipulation, can shrink or grow to anywhere in between 1 feet to 5.3 feet.
Nature Speak (she can talk to plants and animals only limited by how much plants and animals can say if they could talk)

Weaknesses: Very weak physically, a single physical hit could be enough for her to lose a fight. Wile she is very smart she has a short attention span.

Personality Ithica is usually a very happy person with a sunny disposition. She is however also someone who just likes to have fun which have made her a bit of a trickster who likes to mess around with people (without harming them off course, or at least not a lot).

Short Bio: Ithica has always struggled a lot in her life because of her frail body, sure her magic powers were incredible but she couldn't take much physically. Eve a gust of wind could knock her off her feet, for this reason she constantly used her magic to keep herself safe in ways of wind barriers or growing small enough to hide from something or big enough to intimidate something, and so forth. This left her tired to exhausted though a lot of the time and left little opportunity for doing what she wanted, which was mainly be a little trickster.
After years of wandering she met a Troll called Rahk, Being a Troll alone in the world and a gentle one for that this guy had seen much ridicule from the world and was obviously lost with no purpose in life. As Ithica was weak in everything Rahk was strong and Ithica was strong in everything Rahk was weak they formed a partnership of convenience and eventually became great and inseparable friends. For those seeing the 2 it might look as if the Faery was controlling Rahk because she did most of the talking and explaining, but as far as they were concerned they are equals.

Anything else?: When she's with Rahk she usually helps him out with whatever he wants to do even if it's assisting him in conversations he is trying to have. Wile Rahk usually lets insults and ridicules ignored Ithica stands up for him. When not with Rahk she's either studying or pulling pranks on people.

H.O.T (Don't edit this out. Keep it in your app format. It makes it easier for me to find your applications)

Add in the "Extracurricular Club" section and choose which club u wanna enroll in (Exorcist Training! ). After that you're accepted!

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

You don't want Exorcist training.

You want Demonic Martial Arts!

[Gamer Girl]

You don't want Exorcist training.

You want Demonic Martial Arts!

Here....have a knucklesandwich *punches Dutch in the face*

Don't u guys want to learn latin proverbs from the incarnation of Deadpool?! I know I wanna

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

You don't want Exorcist training.

You want Demonic Martial Arts!

Here....have a knucklesandwich *punches Dutch in the face*

Don't u guys want to learn latin proverbs from the incarnation of Deadpool?! I know I wanna

I'd rather learn how to kill from a pretty swell guy who secretly likes kittens.

[Terintania]

Did you get someone to play the doctor? If I have to teach the time travel class, I don't think I can do it.

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

Did you get someone to play the doctor? If I have to teach the time travel class, I don't think I can do it.

Nobody yet.

[Gamer Girl]

Did you get someone to play the doctor? If I have to teach the time travel class, I don't think I can do it.

No I haven't but its fine. I'm trying to practice the virtue of patience at the moment....*gives Dutch another knucklesandwich*.....yup. Don't worry. I'm sure some RPer will turn up and volunteer

[Terintania]

Did you get someone to play the doctor? If I have to teach the time travel class, I don't think I can do it.

No I haven't but its fine. I'm trying to practice the virtue of patience at the moment....*gives Dutch another knucklesandwich*.....yup. Don't worry. I'm sure some RPer will turn up and volunteer

Hopefully

[The Armed Republic of Dutch Coolness]

Knuckle-sandwiches are tasty. *Nom*

[Nature-Spirits]

I almost want to play as Crowley from Supernatural.... But I also want to play as an anime character.... Dilemmas, dilemmas.....

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Real Name Seth Jones

Character Impersonation: N/a

Novel/Comic/Manga of Origin: Original

Species: Meta Human

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance:

This minus all the cuts and blood.

Course Designation: 1

Character Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

House Designation: Tritan

Mystical Martial Arts Enlisted:
-Advanced Mechanics
-Weapon Studies
-The Rumination of Mythology (For scientific purposes)
-The Art of Athena
-Mysticism/Defence Against the Dark Arts (Also for scientific purposes)

Special Abilities:
-Super Intelligence: Kind of speaks for it's self. Superhuman grade intellectual level. He is able to instantly learn and remember all new information and has an amazing memory in that he can remember tiny details from a long time ago and has a very large memory.
-Technokinesis: An ability that allows him to manipulate resources and combine them to create technology. He can take pieces of technology apart, hack into electronics, manipulate technology and even make machines work all with the power of his mind.

Weaknesses:
-Technokinesis: Only has a range of about 30 feet and whilst hacking into computer systems, brain is vulnerable to computer viruses which can have all manner of bizarre mental effects on him. This power is also limited by the resources he has around him to use.
-General Weaknesses: As he has a human body, he can easily be killed by anything any other human can. I won't list them there are that many.
-Power armor weaknesses: Whilst the electronics in the power armor have EMP shielding, a powerful EMP will render the suit useless temporarily until the suits IRS kicks in to reactivate the suit. The Hell's Janitor Power Armor is also a big and bulky target and slow for a vehicle it's size making it easy to hit.

Personality A person who never takes any situation seriously. He's proud and sometimes fanatical about his work but he is also polite and well spoken thanks to his family upbringing as an adopted son to the Duke of York.

Short Bio: Seth was handed straight to an orphanage upon his birth after his parents found out he was a meta human. He was later adopted by the Duke of York who was looking for a son after he discovered his wife was sterile. That's where he found 3 year old Seth, playing in the corner with a fully functioning exo skeleton he made out of plastic and scrap electronics. The duke asked to see the child and immediately, they bonded. He adopted Seth within a week and was provided all the things he required for further education.

Eventually ending up within the foundation, he was supported by his mother and father both financially and emotionally constantly as their only son.

Anything else?: Nope

H.O.T

[Bearon]

So are Ender and Jane open OP?

[Nature-Spirits]

I've got it! I will be Ms. Frizzle! (Unless I get a better idea sometime today...)