Nature-Spirits wrote:The Republic of Atria wrote:
I wrote a similar story for a creeative writing class when we just had to write a story of our own choosing but it had to have a moral.
Basically there's a guy who is living in some oppressed country. He has a wife and basically their lives are miserable. One day he finally just straight up tries to kill himself but is stopped by someone. Angel or demon, who offers him some piece of jewelry that he says will grant him extraordinary power, but it will cost him something in return later. He agrees, and takes the whatchamacallit. Goes on a rampage decimating basically everything in his path,, friend and foe alike, and eventually overthrows the government that was oppressing them. His wife tells him that she's leaving him because he killed dozens of innocent people and he kills her. Then he kills himself when he realized what he did.
Love it. Just my favourite flavour of disturbing.
Oh, but this:
Lavan Tiri wrote:Nature-Spirits wrote:^This.
A mild example: Once in Creative Writing last year I wrote an erotica about the soul of man in Hell being tortured by demons, then stumbling across a demonic brothel and falling in love with an incubus whom he knew in life as a human. Guess what happened next.
Unfortunately I had to write it in two parts because the upper limit per submission was 2 pages or so, and I never got the chance to hand in the second (e.g. explicit) part because the school year was ending and the teacher didn't want to take in any more submissions.
I actually wrote a lot of slightly disturbing stuff in that course. Graphic torture scenes (though I toned them down a bit for the teacher's sake), tales of death (GRA actually came out of one of those), erotica, etc. Luckily the teacher didn't seem to mind much.
I've done worse, but not weirder. I once vividly described how the Rider On The Pale Horse, Judas Iscariot, tortured a 14-year old Nephillim……… because of a bet with The Rider On The Red Horse, Adolf Hitler.
Isn't up to scratch?
