Eordae World Builder (OOC/Sign Ups)

[Bering]

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Franciscan Republic
Capital:David City
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims:The land mass SW of the northwest part of 3
Major Cultures:Cardnalism, Yawism
RL Equivalent Cultures:Catholicism Orthodoxy* mix(*Women allowed to be priests, priests allowed to be married), Old/Modernwish Hebrew mix
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan, Galric
RL Equivalent Languages:English, Latin, Hebrew
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?: Already there
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Based on the Gregorian calendar. Some use the Jewish calendar.
Three Major ImportsEconomically independent
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Bibles, Torahs
Currency:Shekel
Brief History:The Socialist Republic of Evin long controlled what is now The Franciscan Republic. They crucified Cardnals and Yawists in the streets for their religions. Evin tortured their men, raped and killed their women and children. The Socialists were only in gov't. None existed outside of it. Deriving from the Holy Books and the story of David and the Goliath, the Yawists and Cardnals realized that had to fight.

The rebels adhered to moral standards while they pushed the mysterious leaders out. Afterwards, they formed a Democratic Republic.

Still denied.
1. No Christianity or Judaism period. The closest analogue to Christianity that we have is Donerism. If you want to make those analogues then you have to explain where they came from and how they became popular there.
2. The area you want is in Jayanesia which is basically Southern Asia so the only way that you could be there is if you were a colony of someone (judging by the app, I assume that would be Arcas which doesn't have any monotheistic religions.)
3. Hebrew culture doesn't exist in Eordae
4. Expand on the history a lot

[Galactic Americans]

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Franciscan Republic
Capital:David City
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims:The land mass SW of the northwest part of 3
Major Cultures:Cardnalism, Yawism
RL Equivalent Cultures:Catholicism Orthodoxy* mix(*Women allowed to be priests, priests allowed to be married), Old/Modernwish Hebrew mix
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan, Galric
RL Equivalent Languages:English, Latin, Hebrew
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?: Already there
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Based on the Gregorian calendar. Some use the Jewish calendar.
Three Major ImportsEconomically independent
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Bibles, Torahs
Currency:Shekel
Brief History:The Socialist Republic of Evin long controlled what is now The Franciscan Republic. They crucified Cardnals and Yawists in the streets for their religions. Evin tortured their men, raped and killed their women and children. The Socialists were only in gov't. None existed outside of it. Deriving from the Holy Books and the story of David and the Goliath, the Yawists and Cardnals realized that had to fight.

The rebels adhered to moral standards while they pushed the mysterious leaders out. Afterwards, they formed a Democratic Republic.

Still denied.
1. No Christianity or Judaism period. The closest analogue to Christianity that we have is Donerism. If you want to make those analogues then you have to explain where they came from and how they became popular there.
2. The area you want is in Jayanesia which is basically Southern Asia so the only way that you could be there is if you were a colony of someone (judging by the app, I assume that would be Arcas which doesn't have any monotheistic religions.)
3. Hebrew culture doesn't exist in Eordae
4. Expand on the history a lot

Could i make a religion based on the Catholic faith?

[Bering]

Still denied.
1. No Christianity or Judaism period. The closest analogue to Christianity that we have is Donerism. If you want to make those analogues then you have to explain where they came from and how they became popular there.
2. The area you want is in Jayanesia which is basically Southern Asia so the only way that you could be there is if you were a colony of someone (judging by the app, I assume that would be Arcas which doesn't have any monotheistic religions.)
3. Hebrew culture doesn't exist in Eordae
4. Expand on the history a lot

Could i make a religion based on the Catholic faith?

Sure, but you'd have to explain it

[Galactic Americans]

Could i make a religion based on the Catholic faith?

Sure, but you'd have to explain it

It's all there

[Bering]

Sure, but you'd have to explain it

It's all there

Rejected. Too similar to RL Christianity, and explain how this religion came about in rabidly anti-monotheism Arcasan culture.

[Kassaran]

This is Eordae, get rid of everything you know in terms of Earth culture and knowledge and make something completely off the walls bonkers like I did with the Alysian Isles which pulls inspiration from being some sort of Italian-Moorish geographic analogue in a series of islands equivalent in size to Indonesia meant to take up a pseudo-Roman class system with a rigid population control methodology (since dropped through the years thanks to oh so many much-needed reformations that have produced the widespread maltheistic beliefs held by most Alysian's in the 1600AE era) taken from a highly warped version of Japanese Bushido.

Tie in aforementioned Japanese cultural history of violent and bloody civil wars among feuding corporate houses for centuries until contact with potentially hostile mainlanders forced them to band together into a mostly united confederacy of corporate businesses and followed up by an incredibly free and open market system which promotes much trade to go through said Isles and you have my nation. See? Not one bit of it would make sense here on Earth, but in Eordae, circumstances and my imagination coupled with a willingness to abandon all reason based on things we know on Earth, have allowed the Alysian Isles to exist.

Tl;Dr, Eordae is NOT Earth, something I really pushed hard when this project started out (as most of us whom have been here from the start may very well remember). It was only when it became common enough to speak about Eordae as a fully separate entity where the analogues made were just faint guidelines which would eventually get covered up with our own original content that I finally let people go with relating back to Earth. You have displayed a distinct lack of understanding as to this matter and likewise unless you really think about what you have written down and have a means to fluidly integrate it into the already very lore-rich universe we have created, I as a founder of this universe feel you wouldn't really fit in here.

[Bezombia]

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Franciscan Republic
Capital:David City
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims: A large circle in Central Nephinia that touches the Western coast of the continent.
Major Cultures:Cardinalism, Yawism
RL Equivalent Cultures:Catholicism Orthodoxy* mix(*Women allowed to be priests, priests allowed to be married), Old/Modern Hebrew mix
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan, Galric,
RL Equivalent Languages:English, Latin
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?:Yes, Cardinalism and Yawism, both native to the Republic.
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Based on the Gregorian calendar. Some use the Jewish calendar.
Three Major ImportsEconomically independent
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Bibles, Torahs
Currency:Shekel
Brief History:In the first days of Eordae, the Lord created the land, people, animals, and Eordae itself. There were many events that shook the world. One nearly destroyed it. A book was written about the events, called the Torah. Those who believed in it are called Yawists.

Eventually, man had grown evil and powerful. God sent down his son, Jesus Christ, into Bethlehem(inside Franciscan Rep.), through virgin Mary. He visited the temples at Jerusalem(now David City) whenever he could.He was sacrificed for man's sin at the hands of the Empire for opposing the mighty Caesar. Then, heaven was opened to those who repented for their sins on Earth, and lived a good, moral life. Some touched people in religious ways so much that they were called Saints, who interceded between Man and God.

This chapter of religious history is called the New Testament of the Bible, the Old Testament being the Torah. Those who believed in this
are called Cardinals.

The Socialist Republic of Evin long controlled what is now The Franciscan Republic after the collapse of the Empire. They crucified Cardinals and Yawists in the streets for their religions. Evin tortured their men, raped and killed their women and children. The Socialists were only in gov't. None existed outside of it. Deriving from the Holy Book and the story of David and the Goliath, the Cardinals realized that they had to fight.
The rebels adhered to moral standards while they pushed the mysterious leaders out. Afterwards, they formed a Democratic Republic.

Extra: No political parties. Strong military that represents the people. Loving, caring populous. Term limits: for President and Head of State-1 6 year term...for Senate- 3 2 year terms... for House of Reps.- 2 3 year terms.

hell no

[Kassaran]

hell no

Thank you. He pretty much copy-pasta'ed a stereotypical Mary-Sue Earth nation founded on Christianity into his application. I can appreciate having a strong desire to perhaps have analogues to the Christian Faith, but we've already got those, and this is based in an entirely fictional university where the God and Yaweh you know and obviously love don't exist. At least, not in the form you know them as if they even exist at all...

[Yathien]

hell no

Thank you. He pretty much copy-pasta'ed a stereotypical Mary-Sue Earth nation founded on Christianity into his application. I can appreciate having a strong desire to perhaps have analogues to the Christian Faith, but we've already got those, and this is based in an entirely fictional university where the God and Yaweh you know and obviously love don't exist. At least, not in the form you know them as if they even exist at all...

[Galactic Americans]

:clap:

Thank you. He pretty much copy-pasta'ed a stereotypical Mary-Sue Earth nation founded on Christianity into his application. I can appreciate having a strong desire to perhaps have analogues to the Christian Faith, but we've already got those, and this is based in an entirely fictional university where the God and Yaweh you know and obviously love don't exist. At least, not in the form you know them as if they even exist at all...

What analogues and what similarities, I'm moving away from that concept.

[Arkolon]

Hey, I'm on holidays and this RP looks sick. I have loads of free time, and I'd love to get started with what you guys are doing here. Any suggestions aside from the application? Are you guys even open at the moment?

[Galactic Americans]

Hey, I'm on holidays and this RP looks sick. I have loads of free time, and I'd love to get started with what you guys are doing here. Any suggestions aside from the application? Are you guys even open at the moment?

Err... no relationships with Earth religion. That killed my first app. Hope they accept my new one.

[Mesrane]

Hey, I'm on holidays and this RP looks sick. I have loads of free time, and I'd love to get started with what you guys are doing here. Any suggestions aside from the application? Are you guys even open at the moment?

We are, we are indeed. We'd be very glad to have you aboard.

While you are welcome to create your own religion, keep in mind you can also adopt a current one (just ask around) and that we already have what is more or less an international calender (see brainstorm thread).

[Galactic Americans]

Hey, I'm on holidays and this RP looks sick. I have loads of free time, and I'd love to get started with what you guys are doing here. Any suggestions aside from the application? Are you guys even open at the moment?

We are, we are indeed. We'd be very glad to have you aboard.

While you are welcome to create your own religion, keep in mind you can also adopt a current one (just ask around) and that we already have what is more or less an international calender (see brainstorm thread).

Alright. Is my new app accepted? I changed A Lot.

[Mesrane]

We are, we are indeed. We'd be very glad to have you aboard.

While you are welcome to create your own religion, keep in mind you can also adopt a current one (just ask around) and that we already have what is more or less an international calender (see brainstorm thread).

Alright. Is my new app accepted? I changed A Lot.

Seeing Bez's reply, I'm guessing no, it wasn't. Probably because you aren't specific on your claims, and you're not explaining the major cultures much, what they are, and how they became dominant in the country. Your history doesn't cover that. And you're still bringing up things like Judaism, the Jewish calender, Gregorian calender, bibles, etc. etc. None of which exist in Eordae.

[Galactic Americans]

Alright. Is my new app accepted? I changed A Lot.

Seeing Bez's reply, I'm guessing no, it wasn't. Probably because you aren't specific on your claims, and you're not explaining the major cultures much, what they are, and how they became dominant in the country. Your history doesn't cover that. And you're still bringing up things like Judaism, the Jewish calender, Gregorian calender, bibles, etc. etc. None of which exist in Eordae.

I... don't mention Judaism or Christianity. The first Arcasan Empire........ I believe I removed the Calendar stuff.

[Mesrane]

Seeing Bez's reply, I'm guessing no, it wasn't. Probably because you aren't specific on your claims, and you're not explaining the major cultures much, what they are, and how they became dominant in the country. Your history doesn't cover that. And you're still bringing up things like Judaism, the Jewish calender, Gregorian calender, bibles, etc. etc. None of which exist in Eordae.

I... don't mention Judaism or Christianity. The first Arcasan Empire........ I believe I removed the Calendar stuff.

I'm looking at the app to which Bez replies "Hell no."

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Franciscan Republic
Capital:David City
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims: A large circle in Central Nephinia that touches the Western coast of the continent.
Major Cultures:Cardinalism, Yawism
RL Equivalent Cultures:Catholicism Orthodoxy* mix(*Women allowed to be priests, priests allowed to be married), Old/Modern Hebrew mix
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan, Galric,
RL Equivalent Languages:English, Latin
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?:Yes, Cardinalism and Yawism, both native to the Republic.
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Based on the Gregorian calendar. Some use the Jewish calendar.
Three Major ImportsEconomically independent
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Bibles, Torahs
Currency:Shekel
Brief History:In the first days of Eordae, the Lord created the land, people, animals, and Eordae itself. There were many events that shook the world. One nearly destroyed it. A book was written about the events, called the Torah. Those who believed in it are called Yawists.

Eventually, man had grown evil and powerful. God sent down his son, Jesus Christ, into Bethlehem(inside Franciscan Rep.), through virgin Mary. He visited the temples at Jerusalem(now David City) whenever he could.He was sacrificed for man's sin at the hands of the Empire for opposing the mighty Caesar. Then, heaven was opened to those who repented for their sins on Earth, and lived a good, moral life. Some touched people in religious ways so much that they were called Saints, who interceded between Man and God.

This chapter of religious history is called the New Testament of the Bible, the Old Testament being the Torah. Those who believed in this
are called Cardinals.

The Socialist Republic of Evin long controlled what is now The Franciscan Republic after the collapse of the Empire. They crucified Cardinals and Yawists in the streets for their religions. Evin tortured their men, raped and killed their women and children. The Socialists were only in gov't. None existed outside of it. Deriving from the Holy Book and the story of David and the Goliath, the Cardinals realized that they had to fight.
The rebels adhered to moral standards while they pushed the mysterious leaders out. Afterwards, they formed a Democratic Republic.

Extra: No political parties. Strong military that represents the people. Loving, caring populous. Term limits: for President and Head of State-1 6 year term...for Senate- 3 2 year terms... for House of Reps.- 2 3 year terms.

hell no

[Galactic Americans]

I... don't mention Judaism or Christianity. The first Arcasan Empire........ I believe I removed the Calendar stuff.

I'm looking at the app to which Bez replies "Hell no."

hell no

Not my current app.

[Mesrane]

I'm looking at the app to which Bez replies "Hell no."

Not my current app.

I don't believe you've posted an app that thus far hasn't been reviewed.

[Galactic Americans]

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Atlas Republic
Capital:New Arcas
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims: The unclaimed islands off the West coast of Nephina
Major Cultures:Free Arcasan
RL Equivalent Cultures:A Freedom Loving, Cautious People based off of the Arcasan system.
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan
RL Equivalent Languages:English
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?:Possibly
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Too much work.
Three Major ImportsSteel, Titanium, Petrol
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Weaponry, Vehicles
Currency:Credit
Brief History:Long before Eordae was considered anything intelligible, the ancient Atlians suffered much. They went from one dictator to another as the rest of the planet grew and became powerful. Eventually, they were content since the whole world was under the Empire. There was a chip on their shoulder, an angry burning desire for revenge, that exploded when the Arcasan Empire collapsed. For long, anarchy was the rule of the law. Eventually, two young men emerged in late 1680 AE. They were intelligent and strong, good with weapons and technology. They followed through the culturally similar unclaimed islands off of Nephina, and fought bravely to save their nation from the nasty anarchists, who needed a bath anyways.
When the people were free from anarchy in early 1682, they elected a Democratic Republic system to prevent anarchy. The 2 men elected as leaders, were the uniters. The people ended up doing well in Virtual Tech, Weaponry, and Vehicles, and mass produced these. They took in raw minerals until they could open their mines. Their morals were shaped after not letting anarchy or dictatorship rule.
Extra: No political parties. Strong military that represents the people. Loving, caring populous. Term limits: for President and Head of State-1 6 year term...for Senate- 3 2 year terms... for House of Reps.- 2 3 year terms.

This one

[Arkolon]

NS Nation Name: Arkolon

Nation Name: Koriandra Federalis Respulikana

Capital: Apex Cove

Population: 37,482,288

Map Claims: Will handle. Somewhere under Durera.

Major Cultures: Help me out here. Aside from "Koriandra" or "Koriandrish", what do I put?

RL Equivalent Cultures: Clash between English, French, and German: conservative, traditionalist German-speaking cultured republicans.

Major Languages (of the nation): Upper Koriandra, Vulgar Koriandra

RL Equivalent Languages: Phonetic German nouns, phonetic French adjectives and verbs, and the rest is phonetic English. Example: "I am
going to drive my car" -> "Ai veh ruuleh mi Outo", or "Tonight we will eat red fruit" -> "Ce swa uue manjeron ruuj vruuit". Hope this looks foreign
enough.

Government (short description): Pentacameral Federated Constitutional Triarchy. The country is divided into four houses, four chambers,
and one court: the houses of Commons, Palatines, Commerce, and Exterior; the chambers of Commons, Palatines, Commerce, and Exterior; and
the Court of Justice. Each house elects their own Speaker, and each chamber elects their own Chairman (with the exception of the Palatines).
These Speakers and Chairmen make up the Assembly of Authorities. A separate executive level is elected at separate intervals to the legislative
morass I just described: the Chancellor, who embodies the head of the government. The Chancellor appoints his own Home Officer, Commerce
Officer, and Foreign Officers in the three different Offices of the government. Additionally, there is also a noble level layered above all of this:
the Triarchs of Koriandra. Each hold a ceremonial role, and cost a lot of money to the government every year in their lavish palaces, and each
have different pieces of paper to sign-- the Palatine of the Palatines signs papers regarding the Palatines of Koriandra; the Hand of the People
signs papers regarding the Commoners and peoples of Koriandra; and the Justicier ceremonially oversees the Court of Justice. These make up
the head of state of Koriandra.

Head of State: Three Triarchs of Koriandra: Karluso IV, Palatine of the Palatines; Ulyza I, Hand of the People; Eama I, Justicier.

Head of Government: Hanos Ronos, Chancellor of the Houses, Courts, Chambers, and Offices of Koriandra

Will you make a religion?: No, my people will succumb to one.

Will you make your own calendar?: No, my people will succumb to one.

Three Major Imports: Metals, Energy, Textiles

Three Major Exports: Machinery, Auto Parts, Food Products

Currency: Koriandra Coinmaster's Gift (abbr. KCG), shortened to "Coinmaster" or "Coin".

Brief History: Koriandra used to be a large collection of thousands of city-states with smallish populations, unable to fend for themselves. After centuries of alliances, strengthened by economic cooperation, city-states began merging themselves together, forming larger duchies, kingdoms, and, later, small empires. In XXXX, the nine remaining kingdoms of the area, all intertwined with alliances and economic interests, signed and ratified the Order of Coast Grove West, in which the nine kingdoms became three Kingdoms of Kingdoms (Dry Kuunigryj ov Kuunigryj). In a later attempt to unify all three Kingdoms of Kingdoms into a single nation with a single head of state, in the XXXX Order of Near Forest Bridge, the single nation was left in turmoil after internal strife, civil war, and five consecutive assassinations of five consecutive Emperors of Koriandra. In a final XXXX Order of the Fruitful Future, the positions in government, including all three branches, were delegated to the furthest possible extent to meet the requests of every single delegation from around the Empire. There was now no longer a single head of state, but three Triarchs, who were also heads of governments. After long periods of gluttony, greed, and being out of touch with the people they governed, the Triarchs decided to delegate their positions as heads of governments to the people, who held a referendum on how to carve up the legislative branch of government. After seventeen long years, and three new treaties, the current system of the Koriandra Federalis Respublika was put in place.

Anything to add?: Nope!

[Mesrane]

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Atlas Republic
Capital:New Arcas
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims: The unclaimed islands off the West coast of Nephina
Major Cultures:Free Arcasan
RL Equivalent Cultures:A Freedom Loving, Cautious People based off of the Arcasan system.
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan
RL Equivalent Languages:English
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?:Possibly
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Too much work.
Three Major ImportsSteel, Titanium, Petrol
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Weaponry, Vehicles
Currency:Credit
Brief History:Long before Eordae was considered anything intelligible, the ancient Atlians suffered much. They went from one dictator to another as the rest of the planet grew and became powerful. Eventually, they were content since the whole world was under the Empire. There was a chip on their shoulder, an angry burning desire for revenge, that exploded when the Arcasan Empire collapsed. For long, anarchy was the rule of the law. Eventually, two young men emerged in late 1680 AE. They were intelligent and strong, good with weapons and technology. They followed through the culturally similar unclaimed islands off of Nephina, and fought bravely to save their nation from the nasty anarchists, who needed a bath anyways.
When the people were free from anarchy in early 1682, they elected a Democratic Republic system to prevent anarchy. The 2 men elected as leaders, were the uniters. The people ended up doing well in Virtual Tech, Weaponry, and Vehicles, and mass produced these. They took in raw minerals until they could open their mines. Their morals were shaped after not letting anarchy or dictatorship rule.
Extra: No political parties. Strong military that represents the people. Loving, caring populous. Term limits: for President and Head of State-1 6 year term...for Senate- 3 2 year terms... for House of Reps.- 2 3 year terms.

This one

Go back to page 146. It was denied.

[Galactic Americans]

This one

Go back to page 146. It was denied.

That was my old one, not this one. 146 denies my old app

[Mesrane]

NS Nation Name:Galactic Americans
Nation Name:The Atlas Republic
Capital:New Arcas
Population:950,000 people scattered in small, urban/natural mingled communities
Map Claims: The unclaimed islands off the West coast of Nephina
Major Cultures:Free Arcasan
RL Equivalent Cultures:A Freedom Loving, Cautious People based off of the Arcasan system.
Major Languages (of the nation):Arcasan
RL Equivalent Languages:English
Government (short description):Moralistic Democratic Republic
Head of State:President Francis Goldberg
Head of Government:Chancellor David Kolping
Will you make a religion?:Possibly
Will you make your own calendar?:No. Too much work.
Three Major ImportsSteel, Titanium, Petrol
Three Major ExportsVirtual Technology, Weaponry, Vehicles
Currency:Credit
Brief History:Long before Eordae was considered anything intelligible, the ancient Atlians suffered much. They went from one dictator to another as the rest of the planet grew and became powerful. Eventually, they were content since the whole world was under the Empire. There was a chip on their shoulder, an angry burning desire for revenge, that exploded when the Arcasan Empire collapsed. For long, anarchy was the rule of the law. Eventually, two young men emerged in late 1680 AE. They were intelligent and strong, good with weapons and technology. They followed through the culturally similar unclaimed islands off of Nephina, and fought bravely to save their nation from the nasty anarchists, who needed a bath anyways.
When the people were free from anarchy in early 1682, they elected a Democratic Republic system to prevent anarchy. The 2 men elected as leaders, were the uniters. The people ended up doing well in Virtual Tech, Weaponry, and Vehicles, and mass produced these. They took in raw minerals until they could open their mines. Their morals were shaped after not letting anarchy or dictatorship rule.
Extra: No political parties. Strong military that represents the people. Loving, caring populous. Term limits: for President and Head of State-1 6 year term...for Senate- 3 2 year terms... for House of Reps.- 2 3 year terms.

This one

I'm still not getting the history.

Browse over the wiki for a time, especially Arcas's page:

http://eorda.wikia.com/wiki/Eorda_Wiki

[Mesrane]

NS Nation Name: Arkolon

Nation Name: Koriandra Federalis Respulikana

Capital: Apex Cove

Population: 37,482,288

Map Claims: Will handle. Somewhere under Durera.

Major Cultures: Help me out here. Aside from "Koriandra" or "Koriandrish", what do I put?

RL Equivalent Cultures: Clash between English, French, and German: conservative, traditionalist German-speaking cultured republicans.

Major Languages (of the nation): Upper Koriandra, Vulgar Koriandra

RL Equivalent Languages: Phonetic German nouns, phonetic French adjectives and verbs, and the rest is phonetic English. Example: "I am
going to drive my car" -> "Ai veh ruuleh mi Outo", or "Tonight we will eat red fruit" -> "Ce swa uue manjeron ruuj vruuit". Hope this looks foreign
enough.

Government (short description): Pentacameral Federated Constitutional Triarchy. The country is divided into four houses, four chambers,
and one court: the houses of Commons, Palatines, Commerce, and Exterior; the chambers of Commons, Palatines, Commerce, and Exterior; and
the Court of Justice. Each house elects their own Speaker, and each chamber elects their own Chairman (with the exception of the Palatines).
These Speakers and Chairmen make up the Assembly of Authorities. A separate executive level is elected at separate intervals to the legislative
morass I just described: the Chancellor, who embodies the head of the government. The Chancellor appoints his own Home Officer, Commerce
Officer, and Foreign Officers in the three different Offices of the government. Additionally, there is also a noble level layered above all of this:
the Triarchs of Koriandra. Each hold a ceremonial role, and cost a lot of money to the government every year in their lavish palaces, and each
have different pieces of paper to sign-- the Palatine of the Palatines signs papers regarding the Palatines of Koriandra; the Hand of the People
signs papers regarding the Commoners and peoples of Koriandra; and the Justicier ceremonially oversees the Court of Justice. These make up
the head of state of Koriandra.

Head of State: Three Triarchs of Koriandra: Karluso IV, Palatine of the Palatines; Ulyza I, Hand of the People; Eama I, Justicier.

Head of Government: Hanos Ronos, Chancellor of the Houses, Courts, Chambers, and Offices of Koriandra

Will you make a religion?: No, my people will succumb to one.

Will you make your own calendar?: No, my people will succumb to one.

Three Major Imports: Metals, Energy, Textiles

Three Major Exports: Machinery, Auto Parts, Food Products

Currency: Koriandra Coinmaster's Gift (abbr. KCG), shortened to "Coinmaster" or "Coin".

Brief History: Koriandra used to be a large collection of thousands of city-states with smallish populations, unable to fend for themselves. After centuries of alliances, strengthened by economic cooperation, city-states began merging themselves together, forming larger duchies, kingdoms, and, later, small empires. In XXXX, the nine remaining kingdoms of the area, all intertwined with alliances and economic interests, signed and ratified the Order of Coast Grove West, in which the nine kingdoms became three Kingdoms of Kingdoms (Dry Kuunigryj ov Kuunigryj). In a later attempt to unify all three Kingdoms of Kingdoms into a single nation with a single head of state, in the XXXX Order of Near Forest Bridge, the single nation was left in turmoil after internal strife, civil war, and five consecutive assassinations of five consecutive Emperors of Koriandra. In a final XXXX Order of the Fruitful Future, the positions in government, including all three branches, were delegated to the furthest possible extent to meet the requests of every single delegation from around the Empire. There was now no longer a single head of state, but three Triarchs, who were also heads of governments. After long periods of gluttony, greed, and being out of touch with the people they governed, the Triarchs decided to delegate their positions as heads of governments to the people, who held a referendum on how to carve up the legislative branch of government. After seventeen long years, and three new treaties, the current system of the Koriandra Federalis Respublika was put in place.

Anything to add?: Nope!

Looks pretty good thus far. We can add dates to your history later with the help of the wiki, so that's not too big a problem. Could I trouble you to make it perhaps slightly more French than it is German? I understand it's a heavy mix but Eordae is so over-Germanized it's getting a little spooky.