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[Bearon]

I didn't expect my post with the Sandwoman to be that long...

So this is how I think so far Cirad's story went

First Ahton's Sith killed my first parents then an elderly couple discovered what happened and decided to take care of me, then after the village slaughter the Sandwoman would.

That sounds good.

[Seno Zhou Varada]

So this is how I think so far Cirad's story went

First Ahton's Sith killed my first parents then an elderly couple discovered what happened and decided to take care of me, then after the village slaughter the Sandwoman would.

That sounds good.

So me and Ahton are going to finish up that part and I when that's finished I'll stop using Cirad Present and Cirad Past.

[Bearon]

That sounds good.

So me and Ahton are going to finish up that part and I when that's finished I'll stop using Cirad Present and Cirad Past.

Alright though that will make Ahton have to use the past present to explain his actions for the time in between when he killed your parents and now.

[Seno Zhou Varada]

Bearon how am I doing roleplaying a baby? never thought I'd say that in my life.

[Bearon]

Bearon how am I doing roleplaying a baby? never thought I'd say that in my life.

Honest answer or complimentary answer?

[Seno Zhou Varada]

Bearon how am I doing roleplaying a baby? never thought I'd say that in my life.

Honest answer or complimentary answer?

Honest I need to work on my roleplaying.

[Bearon]

Honest answer or complimentary answer?

Honest I need to work on my roleplaying.

You're doing ok. I liked your last post. Don't worry I had the same problem a few months ago before someone taught me the art of Tolkiening. Tolkiening is making something that you could say as "Dooku looked out the viewport at the battle before turning to his master." To what I did in the RP which was Dooku taking in the battle and giving a description that was both flowery and let you know what was happening.

An example for you would be instead of saying "The baby sat in its crib and watched the stranger come in." You would say "The baby sat wrapped in the warmth of the soft blankets made of Bantha fur from the pastures as he looked out into the hallway and watched as a darkened figure approach."

Do you know what I mean?

[Seno Zhou Varada]

Honest I need to work on my roleplaying.

You're doing ok. I liked your last post. Don't worry I had the same problem a few months ago before someone taught me the art of Tolkiening. Tolkiening is making something that you could say as "Dooku looked out the viewport at the battle before turning to his master." To what I did in the RP which was Dooku taking in the battle and giving a description that was both flowery and let you know what was happening.

An example for you would be instead of saying "The baby sat in its crib and watched the stranger come in." You would say "The baby sat wrapped in the warmth of the soft blankets made of Bantha fur from the pastures as he looked out into the hallway and watched as a darkened figure approach."

Do you know what I mean?

Ok I'll try to do this more often but it will take sometime to get into the habit of doing it.

[Bearon]

You're doing ok. I liked your last post. Don't worry I had the same problem a few months ago before someone taught me the art of Tolkiening. Tolkiening is making something that you could say as "Dooku looked out the viewport at the battle before turning to his master." To what I did in the RP which was Dooku taking in the battle and giving a description that was both flowery and let you know what was happening.

An example for you would be instead of saying "The baby sat in its crib and watched the stranger come in." You would say "The baby sat wrapped in the warmth of the soft blankets made of Bantha fur from the pastures as he looked out into the hallway and watched as a darkened figure approach."

Do you know what I mean?

Ok I'll try to do this more often but it will take sometime to get into the habit of doing it.

You don't have to change your RP'ing on my behalf. It was just some good advice I got that I wanted to share.

[Seno Zhou Varada]

Ok I'll try to do this more often but it will take sometime to get into the habit of doing it.

You don't have to change your RP'ing on my behalf. It was just some good advice I got that I wanted to share.

It's not do big of a deal. So pretty much most of the IC posts on here will be at least a bit better thanks to your advice. I'd say at least 1% better.

[Bearon]

You don't have to change your RP'ing on my behalf. It was just some good advice I got that I wanted to share.

It's not do big of a deal. So pretty much most of the IC posts on here will be at least a bit better thanks to your advice. I'd say at least 1% better.

No problem. Does anyone know what's going on with the Obi Wan and Anakin characters?

[Sulania]

I feel that the telepathy force ability will be an interesting thing to play with. I guess we'll just have to wait for OP's approval.

My region just exploded. Could you change age capacity to 300 and age to 50 unless you want me to calculate everything for 52. After that you're good.

Sorry, didn't get on till now.

Updated App:
Name: Brishkah
Personality: Calm and tactful. Always savors a good fight, but does not go looking for them and always tries to avert conflict. While he does hold an apathetic attitude towards the Republic, he still remains loyal to the Jedi Order and their principles. He cares for those close to him, and unlike most Jedi, does not believe that love is something to fear. He often hopes to find a companion for him to cherish, but he puts these thoughts to rest by keeping a strong apathetic appearance.
Race: Trandoshan
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance: Taller than most, and has green scales. He has a scar that runs down he right side of his face near his eye, which hold a yellow tint. Wears simplistic Jedi robes.
Age: 50 years of age
Age Capacity: 300 years of age
Alignment: Jedi, Light side.
Lightsaber Form: Form VI; Niman
Specialized Force Ability: Telepathy
Midiclorian Count: 10,000
Realized Midiclorians: 5,000
Location: Jedi Temple
Class: Guardian
Lightsaber: Blue double-bladed lightsaber, that can separate to form two separate lightsabers.

[Bearon]

My region just exploded. Could you change age capacity to 300 and age to 50 unless you want me to calculate everything for 52. After that you're good.

Sorry, didn't get on till now.

Updated App:
Name: Brishkah
Personality: Calm and tactful. Always savors a good fight, but does not go looking for them and always tries to avert conflict. While he does hold an apathetic attitude towards the Republic, he still remains loyal to the Jedi Order and their principles. He cares for those close to him, and unlike most Jedi, does not believe that love is something to fear. He often hopes to find a companion for him to cherish, but he puts these thoughts to rest by keeping a strong apathetic appearance.
Race: Trandoshan
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance: Taller than most, and has green scales. He has a scar that runs down he right side of his face near his eye, which hold a yellow tint. Wears simplistic Jedi robes.
Age: 50 years of age
Age Capacity: 300 years of age
Alignment: Jedi, Light side.
Lightsaber Form: Form VI; Niman
Specialized Force Ability: Telepathy
Midiclorian Count: 10,000
Realized Midiclorians: 5,000
Location: Jedi Temple
Class: Guardian
Lightsaber: Blue double-bladed lightsaber, that can separate to form two separate lightsabers.

Accepted.

[Bearon]

Starlight I'm going to have my baby stare grumpily at you from his crib as you woke him up from his nap. xD

[The Starlight]

Starlight I'm going to have my baby stare grumpily at you from his crib as you woke him up from his nap. xD

Sure. You underestimate my powers!

[The Starlight]

Any ideas of specialized force powers in the future for me?

[Sulania]

Any ideas of specialized force powers in the future for me?

There are so many. Do you want a power that buffs you or other, like force body or heal. Or something more tactical, like lightning and push. Or maybe something social, like telepathy or persuasion.

[New Armarzia]

Any ideas of specialized force powers in the future for me?

A really fun one I saw was illusions, was thinking of possibly trying that if my padawan ever got the opportunity

[Bearon]

Any ideas of specialized force powers in the future for me?

Force Push.
Force Lightning.
Force Healing.
Telekinesis.
Battle Meditation.
Force Crush.
Force Persuasion.
Telepathy.
Force Illusion.
Mind Tricks.
Force Storm.
Sith Alchemy.
Force Light.
Force Wave.

[Bearon]

Starlight I'm going to have my baby stare grumpily at you from his crib as you woke him up from his nap. xD

Sure. You underestimate my powers!

I'm going to make my specialty Telekinesis so I'll lift your milk bottle off of you since I can technically lift 100 pounds right now.

[Benning]

Any ideas of specialized force powers in the future for me?

Force Push.
Force Lightning.
Force Healing.
Telekinesis.
Battle Meditation.
Force Crush.
Force Persuasion.
Telepathy.
Force Illusion.
Mind Tricks.
Force Storm.
Sith Alchemy.
Force Light.
Force Wave.

You forgot Force Stun, and its line.

[Benning]

Also; Just because I'm a guardian doesn't mean I can't learn Force heal, correct?

[The Starlight]

What's force wave?

[The Starlight]

Sure. You underestimate my powers!

I'm going to make my specialty Telekinesis so I'll lift your milk bottle off of you since I can technically lift 100 pounds right now.

NOO!! My space milk!
You're making little Craig angry.

[The Starlight]

Wait, does that mean I can lift 100 pounds too?