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Postby Zeinbrad » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:13 pm

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Zeinbrad wrote:So, this is my draft of the first Grievous post.


"Sir! Engines have been hit!" A officer abroad the Invisible Hand bridge screamed as the ship began to shake from the fire of a Republic Venator.

"Then focus fire on them!" Grievous yelled before coughing. This is getting bothersome He thought as he coughed and wheezed. He looked outside the bridges windows and saw that the battle was not going well,the CIS was not winning, but they had too, this was their only shot at turning the tide of the war back in their favor. Grievous paced around the bridge, before another officer spoke.

"Sir we got two squadrons of Republic bombers coming our way!" He said with a hint of panic.Coward Grievous thought before speaking.

"Send 4th and 5th squadron to intercept them" He ordered. He continued to pace around the bridge, watching a Munificent-class star frigate be ripped to pieces by two Venator's sealing it's fate. Then something interesting came.

"Two Jedi starfighters have been spotted, they are heading for us" A officer reported. Grievous crackled They are launching a rescue attempt, I see. He thought.

"Send 1st and 2nd squadron to intercept." He ordered, secretly wishing the Jedi would land so he could add more lightsabers to his collection.


Looks good. And both Anakin and Obi Wan have appeared in the IC.

Are they in space?
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:16 pm

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Looks good. And both Anakin and Obi Wan have appeared in the IC.

Are they in space?


Aboard the invisible hand. I was going to have them in space first, but Vader posted before me, as I was writing mine and had Anakin essentially start on the Invisible Hand. So, I added to my post of fighting their way on.

Too bad though, wanted a decent starfighter battle for a warm up.
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Postby Zeinbrad » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:17 pm

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Zeinbrad wrote:Are they in space?


Aboard the invisible hand. I was going to have them in space first, but Vader posted before me, as I was writing mine and had Anakin essentially start on the Invisible Hand. So, I added to my post of fighting their way on.

Too bad though, wanted a decent starfighter battle for a warm up.

.......

My post was assuming they were still on their way.
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:21 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Aboard the invisible hand. I was going to have them in space first, but Vader posted before me, as I was writing mine and had Anakin essentially start on the Invisible Hand. So, I added to my post of fighting their way on.

Too bad though, wanted a decent starfighter battle for a warm up.

.......

My post was assuming they were still on their way.


I had to edit mine in response to another post, just edit yours to reflect ours. This happens in RP. Better to not assume anything, as when you released your draft, neither me or Vader had posted.

And they are on the way...to the bridge... :p
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Postby Bearon » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:43 pm

Aren't Obi Wan and Anakin supposed to be flying towards the ship? :blink:
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Postby Zeinbrad » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:48 pm

The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:.......

My post was assuming they were still on their way.


I had to edit mine in response to another post, just edit yours to reflect ours. This happens in RP. Better to not assume anything, as when you released your draft, neither me or Vader had posted.

And they are on the way...to the bridge... :p

Well the welcome wagon is coming. :P

Maybe I should have one of those Anti-Jedi B3 Super Battle Droids.
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Postby Bearon » Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:49 pm

You can weaken them beforehand but your orders from Dooku are still to allow them to come into the room to face the Chancellor.
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Postby The Sith lord vader » Sat Jul 05, 2014 3:02 pm

Oh, I'm sorry. I thought that the opening post insinuated that we were on the ship. Apologies for the inconvenience.
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Postby The Sith lord vader » Sat Jul 05, 2014 3:32 pm

Just talking about earlier subject.

Obi wan was attracted to Siri in the Jedi apprentice series. When she died he really was heartbroken. In fact in the book Wild Space, he confides to bail organa about her.
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Postby New Armarzia » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:02 pm

Being that my character is still a padawan (on the verge of beginning her trials) how should I go about with the master of my jedi? Like who he/she is and etc.
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Postby Sulania » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:12 pm

New Armarzia wrote:Being that my character is still a padawan (on the verge of beginning her trials) how should I go about with the master of my jedi? Like who he/she is and etc.

Can be canon, can be made up. Sira's master was Jocasta Nu, who was the Temple Chief Librarian and is canon. Or you can make one up, I'm assuming.
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Postby New Armarzia » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:17 pm

Sulania wrote:Can be canon, can be made up. Sira's master was Jocasta Nu, who was the Temple Chief Librarian and is canon. Or you can make one up, I'm assuming.


The big thing I was wandering is if it would be best if I made an app for being that chances are I would be the only one controlling this specific master even though my focus will be more on my main two characters or is there another way to approach this third character

Would be really convenient if there was another player character who could play as the master, that would oh so much more fun, though from my last quick look through of the characters it seems there are very few masters :P
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Postby Sulania » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:19 pm

New Armarzia wrote:
Sulania wrote:Can be canon, can be made up. Sira's master was Jocasta Nu, who was the Temple Chief Librarian and is canon. Or you can make one up, I'm assuming.


The big thing I was wandering is if it would be best if I made an app for being that chances are I would be the only one controlling this specific master even though my focus will be more on my main two characters or is there another way to approach this third character

Would be really convenient if there was another player character who could play as the master, that would oh so much more fun, though from my last quick look through of the characters it seems there are very few masters :P

I would love to play your master. Is there any specifics you want for him/her? I can easily create an app for them.
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Postby New Armarzia » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:26 pm

Sulania wrote:I would love to play your master. Is there any specifics you want for him/her? I can easily create an app for them.


That would be awesome. No real specifics in mind, honestly whatever you think is best for the master as to make the pair more natural.

The only things I would say to keep in mind is that the character Serena (the padawan) is fairly timid around those she is not close to and is quite afraid of conflict of any kind, not a phobia fear but more of an anxiety thing. Though when she does act in conflict (whether social or combat) she is fairly rash and stubborn in her actions. She has talents in the force though she is slow to learn.

Also, she has a "droid" that has an odd aura about it that can be sensed by those attuned to the force.
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Postby Sulania » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:49 pm

Is this master good enough for you, New Armarzia?

Name: Brishkah
Personality: Calm and tactful. Always savors a good fight, but does not go looking for them and always tries to avert conflict. While he does hold an apathetic attitude towards the Republic, he still remains loyal to the Jedi Order and their principles. He cares for those close to him, and unlike most Jedi, does not believe that love is something to fear. He often hopes to find a companion for him to cherish, but he puts these thoughts to rest by keeping a strong apathetic appearance.
Race: Trandoshan
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance: Taller than most, and has green scales. He has a scar that runs down he right side of his face near his eye, which hold a yellow tint. Wears simplistic Jedi robes.
Age: 52 years of age
Age Capacity: 468 years of age
Alignment: Jedi, Light side.
Lightsaber Form: Form VI; Niman
Specialized Force Ability: Telepathy
Midiclorian Count: 10,000
Realized Midiclorians: 5,000
Location: Jedi Temple
Class: Guardian
Lightsaber: Blue double-bladed lightsaber, that can separate to form two separate lightsabers.
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Postby New Armarzia » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:55 pm

Sulania wrote:Is this master good enough for you, New Armarzia?

Name: Brishkah
Personality: Calm and tactful. Always savors a good fight, but does not go looking for them and always tries to avert conflict. While he does hold an apathetic attitude towards the Republic, he still remains loyal to the Jedi Order and their principles. He cares for those close to him, and unlike most Jedi, does not believe that love is something to fear. He often hopes to find a companion for him to cherish, but he puts these thoughts to rest by keeping a strong apathetic appearance.
Race: Trandoshan
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance: Taller than most, and has green scales. He has a scar that runs down he right side of his face near his eye, which hold a yellow tint. Wears simplistic Jedi robes.
Age: 52 years of age
Age Capacity: 468 years of age
Alignment: Jedi, Light side.
Lightsaber Form: Form VI; Niman
Specialized Force Ability: Telepathy
Midiclorian Count: 10,000
Realized Midiclorians: 5,000
Location: Jedi Temple
Class: Guardian
Lightsaber: Blue double-bladed lightsaber, that can separate to form two separate lightsabers.


Most definately, that is a very interesting race that I don't think I have ever seen as a Jedi. Looking forward to seeing him in action.
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Postby Sulania » Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:57 pm

New Armarzia wrote:
Sulania wrote:Is this master good enough for you, New Armarzia?

Name: Brishkah
Personality: Calm and tactful. Always savors a good fight, but does not go looking for them and always tries to avert conflict. While he does hold an apathetic attitude towards the Republic, he still remains loyal to the Jedi Order and their principles. He cares for those close to him, and unlike most Jedi, does not believe that love is something to fear. He often hopes to find a companion for him to cherish, but he puts these thoughts to rest by keeping a strong apathetic appearance.
Race: Trandoshan
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance: Taller than most, and has green scales. He has a scar that runs down he right side of his face near his eye, which hold a yellow tint. Wears simplistic Jedi robes.
Age: 52 years of age
Age Capacity: 468 years of age
Alignment: Jedi, Light side.
Lightsaber Form: Form VI; Niman
Specialized Force Ability: Telepathy
Midiclorian Count: 10,000
Realized Midiclorians: 5,000
Location: Jedi Temple
Class: Guardian
Lightsaber: Blue double-bladed lightsaber, that can separate to form two separate lightsabers.


Most definately, that is a very interesting race that I don't think I have ever seen as a Jedi. Looking forward to seeing him in action.

I feel that the telepathy force ability will be an interesting thing to play with. I guess we'll just have to wait for OP's approval.

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Postby New Armarzia » Sun Jul 06, 2014 12:04 am

Sulania wrote:
I feel that the telepathy force ability will be an interesting thing to play with. I guess we'll just have to wait for OP's approval.


That is one (or two) sleek lightsaber(s). And telepathy will be very interesting inn practice, the mind games you will be capable of will be great to see.
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Postby Seno Zhou Varada » Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:28 am

Nice Ahton nice... let's just say if this baby grows to be more powerful then you and learns force lightning... things won't be pretty.
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Postby Mnar Secundus » Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:48 am

Can I join this?
If I can, can my character "exchange" lesser Force skills for greater lightsaber skills, or have no specialized Force ability but be more concentrated on combat? I'd like him to be studying specialized methods like Jar'Kai and/or Tràkata. If that counts as canon.
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Postby Seno Zhou Varada » Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:51 am

Mnar Secundus wrote:Can I join this?
If I can, can my character "exchange" lesser Force skills for greater lightsaber skills, or have no specialized Force ability but be more concentrated on combat? I'd like him to be studying specialized methods like Jar'Kai and/or Tràkata. If that counts as canon.
Thank you in advance for the answers.

It's still open I believe so yes.

You didn't read the beginning page did you. Class Guardian means greater lightsaber skills worse force, Sentinel is no boost no loss, Consular is vice versa Guardian.
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Postby Mnar Secundus » Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:55 am

Seno Zhou Varada wrote:
Mnar Secundus wrote:Can I join this?
If I can, can my character "exchange" lesser Force skills for greater lightsaber skills, or have no specialized Force ability but be more concentrated on combat? I'd like him to be studying specialized methods like Jar'Kai and/or Tràkata. If that counts as canon.
Thank you in advance for the answers.

It's still open I believe so yes.

You didn't read the beginning page did you. Class Guardian means greater lightsaber skills worse force, Sentinel is no boost no loss, Consular is vice versa Guardian.

Yeah, I did read it, but the descriptions of the types of characters (regardless of class) made it look somewhat more absolute. Anyway, thank you then.

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Postby Bearon » Sun Jul 06, 2014 11:06 am

Sulania wrote:
New Armarzia wrote:
Most definately, that is a very interesting race that I don't think I have ever seen as a Jedi. Looking forward to seeing him in action.

I feel that the telepathy force ability will be an interesting thing to play with. I guess we'll just have to wait for OP's approval.

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Postby Bearon » Sun Jul 06, 2014 12:00 pm

I didn't expect my post with the Sandwoman to be that long...
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Postby Seno Zhou Varada » Sun Jul 06, 2014 12:14 pm

Bearon wrote:I didn't expect my post with the Sandwoman to be that long...

So this is how I think so far Cirad's story went

First Ahton's Sith killed my first parents then an elderly couple discovered what happened and decided to take care of me, then after the village slaughter the Sandwoman would.
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