Personification Life OOC IX [CLOSED]

[Cerillium]

I'm back from work.

I decided, during the long hours of a dead Monday night at a pizza place, that I'm not going to go on a break from PL, though I did feel better knowing that I'm winding down which characters I'm going to use, which I feel, gives me clear goals on what to do for each character. So I'm going to only be playing 4 characters, but only ever two at a time.

Bran
Calle
Toscha
Drova/Yuna (I count them as one, because I'll either be using one at a time, or both at the same time which is easy for me to do)



Any questions?

Bran and Yuna are somewhat fleshed out, but the others are still 2D. They could use TLC. What makes them tick, what do they dread? Craft a few posts that read like oneshots, if it helps, to ground them. It doesn't have to be a book. A paragraph will do. You can look at the IC's last few pages to get a feel for it. (I posted one for FUBAR to establish his sentiments, reveal a bit about his basic properties, and to establish that he's a prime target for being tricked utilitzed by my other character for an upcoming story.

You're a clever writer Bran. If it helps, block something out in first person like Tilt suggested long ago. You did a remarkable post back then. Read through it, doctor it back to third person, and mission accomplished.

[Cerillium]

Ironically, Ceril has already snapped. Swith read through the googidoc and expressed horror. "NS is PG13, for fuck's sake!" A vanilla collab resulted.

[Highfort]

Ironically, Ceril has already snapped. Swith read through the googidoc and expressed horror. "NS is PG13, for fuck's sake!" A vanilla collab resulted.

The collab that you posted was quite something, though I wish I could've seen it in its original form. PG-13 is great and all but there's nothing quite like having all the freedom.

[Tiltjuice]

Ironically, Ceril has already snapped. Swith read through the googidoc and expressed horror. "NS is PG13, for fuck's sake!" A vanilla collab resulted.

Wot?

[Monfrox]

Ironically, Ceril has already snapped. Swith read through the googidoc and expressed horror. "NS is PG13, for fuck's sake!" A vanilla collab resulted.

I want answers.

[Tsuyoi Tekikoku]

Ironically, Ceril has already snapped. Swith read through the googidoc and expressed horror. "NS is PG13, for fuck's sake!" A vanilla collab resulted.

I want to see.

[Tiltjuice]

Torii is Tsu's liver.

inb4 Charumati eats Torii.

[The BranRiech]

Bran and Yuna are somewhat fleshed out, but the others are still 2D. They could use TLC. What makes them tick, what do they dread? Craft a few posts that read like oneshots, if it helps, to ground them. It doesn't have to be a book. A paragraph will do. You can look at the IC's last few pages to get a feel for it. (I posted one for FUBAR to establish his sentiments, reveal a bit about his basic properties, and to establish that he's a prime target for being tricked utilitzed by my other character for an upcoming story.

You're a clever writer Bran. If it helps, block something out in first person like Tilt suggested long ago. You did a remarkable post back then. Read through it, doctor it back to third person, and mission accomplished.

Well I figured I'd keep Bran because I might end up running his story soon with the few people who want to go along with, and then Yuna because it's fun for me to run her alongside Drova, and it wouldn't much make sense to keep one of them inactive when they're siblings.

And yeah, I feel quite strong with writing in 1st person as well, so I might give that a try.

*Nods*

Also, collab that had to be nerfed?

[Tsuyoi Tekikoku]

Torii is Tsu's liver.

inb4 Charumati eats Torii.

Wut

[Tiltjuice]

Torii is Tsu's liver.

inb4 Charumati eats Torii.

Wut

Avoiding autocorrect: the difference between gilding and gelding.

[Torsiedelle]

Torii is Tsu's liver.

inb4 Charumati eats Torii.

Wut

Check yo grammar.

Ironically, Ceril has already snapped. Swith read through the googidoc and expressed horror. "NS is PG13, for fuck's sake!" A vanilla collab resulted.

I want to see.

I'm curious.

[Tsuyoi Tekikoku]

Wut

Check yo grammar.

I want to see.

I'm curious.

*Shoots self*

[Cerillium]

The original paragraphs had Ceril destroying parts of the lab. It wasn't too bad until he got to his corpse collection. Their dead eyes mocked him. He can't die (thanks to Charumati's enchantment) hence his quest to kill his humanity by becoming a machine. He took their eyes out of spite.

[Highfort]

:lol2:

The original paragraphs had Ceril destroying parts of the lab. It wasn't too bad until he got to his corpse collection. Their dead eyes mocked him. He can't die (thanks to Charumati's enchantment) hence his quest to kill his humanity by becoming a machine. He took their eyes out of spite.

Damn, now I really want to read it. I scream for eye scream.

[Germanic Templars]

:lol2:

The original paragraphs had Ceril destroying parts of the lab. It wasn't too bad until he got to his corpse collection. Their dead eyes mocked him. He can't die (thanks to Charumati's enchantment) hence his quest to kill his humanity by becoming a machine. He took their eyes out of spite.

Oh don't let Levi find out about that, he might make him an offer how to.

EDIT: I has no idea where anyone is.

[Torsiedelle]

:lol2:

The original paragraphs had Ceril destroying parts of the lab. It wasn't too bad until he got to his corpse collection. Their dead eyes mocked him. He can't die (thanks to Charumati's enchantment) hence his quest to kill his humanity by becoming a machine. He took their eyes out of spite.

That's pretty metal.

[Cerillium]

Damn, now I really want to read it. I scream for eye scream.

It was deleted during the course of editing. I regret not saving a copy, but it isn't as if I can't write it again down the line.

This is why our old group did much of their RPing on an OSF.

[Northwest Slobovia]

I lost track of time, so no posts from me tonight. Hopefully tomorrow.

[Tiltjuice]

Am I needed?

[Tsuyoi Tekikoku]

Damn, now I really want to read it. I scream for eye scream.

It was deleted during the course of editing. I regret not saving a copy, but it isn't as if I can't write it again down the line.

This is why our old group did much of their RPing on an OSF.

Yeah,that adult only zone .

I can take guesses on what goes on in it from what you just posted and what I do in private with others.

[Highfort]

Damn, now I really want to read it. I scream for eye scream.

It was deleted during the course of editing. I regret not saving a copy, but it isn't as if I can't write it again down the line.

This is why our old group did much of their RPing on an OSF.

OSF?

[Giovenith]

Damn thee PG-13 rating! Thou art both shackles and shield!

I once read that the Marquis de Sade, the guy "sadism" is named after, was thrown into prison by Napoleon after he read some of his books because they were just that vile and shocking. Ever since then, I've wanted to know what Napoleon would do if he had access to the internet and all it's... ahem... glory.

[Cerillium]

Am I needed?

Always. We have a penguin hoard to maintain.

Hoard. Hoarder? Horder? Why is English so damn confusing?

OSF = Off Site Forum. TAB has one though its seldom used. http://w11.zetaboards.com/The_Apartment_Block/login/

[Tsuyoi Tekikoku]

Damn thee PG-13 rating! Thou art both shackles and shield!

I once read that the Marquis de Sade, the guy "sadism" is named after, was thrown into prison by Napoleon after he read some of his books because they were just that vile and shocking. Ever since then, I've wanted to know what Napoleon would do if he had access to the internet and all it's... ahem... glory.

Be dead from a heart attack. I've seen some pretty messed up things..and maybe write them..

[Germanic Templars]

Well since I can't get a question answered, I guess I am logging off for now. Ciao.

You have my attention.