NATION

PASSWORD

Personification Life OOC IX [CLOSED]

For all of your non-NationStates related roleplaying needs!

Advertisement

Remove ads

User avatar
The BranRiech
Post Czar
 
Posts: 31391
Founded: Mar 24, 2011
Ex-Nation

Postby The BranRiech » Tue Feb 17, 2015 10:48 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:TY GT.

It's mostly just getting into a rhythm. I honestly am rusty. I bowed out of RPing last year (obviously, going by my posts here) and I'm going through all my old writing notes to up my game.

I think Swith needs a montage of getting back into RP. :p

User avatar
Swith Witherward
Post Czar
 
Posts: 30350
Founded: Feb 11, 2012
Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:00 pm

The BranRiech wrote:
Swith Witherward wrote:TY GT.

It's mostly just getting into a rhythm. I honestly am rusty. I bowed out of RPing last year (obviously, going by my posts here) and I'm going through all my old writing notes to up my game.

I think Swith needs a montage of getting back into RP. :p

*laughs*
★ Senior P2TM RP Mentor ★
How may I help you today?
TG Swith Witherward
Why is everyone a social justice warrior?
Why didn't any of you choose a different class,
like social justice mage or social justice thief?
P2TM Mentor & Personal Bio: Gentlemen, Behold!
Raider Account Bio: The Eternal Bugblatter Fennec of Traal!
Madhouse
Role Play
& Writers Group
Anti-intellectual elitism: the dismissal of science, the arts,
and humanities and their replacement by entertainment,
self-righteousness, ignorance, and deliberate gullibility. - sauce

User avatar
The New Velociraptor Empire
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 13245
Founded: Dec 18, 2011
Ex-Nation

Postby The New Velociraptor Empire » Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:21 pm

I wondered what I was doing wrong with dialogue, turns out it was everything. I suspected so.
Last edited by The New Velociraptor Empire on Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.

User avatar
Tiltjuice
Post Czar
 
Posts: 33978
Founded: Jan 20, 2012
Ex-Nation

Postby Tiltjuice » Tue Feb 17, 2015 11:35 pm

The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:I wondered what I was doing wrong with dialogue, turns out it was everything. I suspected so.


Dialogue's a difficult thing to pull off. I struggle with it.
Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
mumblemumblemumble

User avatar
Monfrox
Post Czar
 
Posts: 33812
Founded: Mar 25, 2011
Father Knows Best State

Postby Monfrox » Wed Feb 18, 2015 12:23 am

God damn, Fvaar. This beast of a riddle is really bogging my mind down like hell's high water. I may need to take a day to think this over.
Gama Best Horror/Thriller RP 2015 Sequel
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.

The Grey Wolf wrote:Froxy knows how to use a whip, I speak from experience.

Winner of the P2TM 2013 Best Fight Scene in a Single Post and Most Original Character, and 2015 Best Horror/Thriller Role-player awards.
Achievement

User avatar
Fvaarniimar
Minister
 
Posts: 3130
Founded: Nov 20, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Fvaarniimar » Wed Feb 18, 2015 6:08 am

Monfrox wrote:God damn, Fvaar. This beast of a riddle is really bogging my mind down like hell's high water. I may need to take a day to think this over.

Er. Sorry...
Come to the light side.  We have teamwork, waffles, popcorn, grape juice, and way too much ramen.

Unless one is a genealogist, therapist, geneticist, or FBI agent - who is acting within the scope of their job - to claim that anyone is wrong about their own identity is not merely absurd but also extremely rude.

User avatar
Monfrox
Post Czar
 
Posts: 33812
Founded: Mar 25, 2011
Father Knows Best State

Postby Monfrox » Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:47 am

Fvaarniimar wrote:
Monfrox wrote:God damn, Fvaar. This beast of a riddle is really bogging my mind down like hell's high water. I may need to take a day to think this over.

Er. Sorry...

I appreciate the enthusiasm but holy shit. I'm still not sure if I even understand it all yet.
Gama Best Horror/Thriller RP 2015 Sequel
Xing wrote:Yeah but you also are the best at roleplay. (yay Space Core references) I'm pretty sure a four man tank crew is no problem for someone that had 27 different RP characters going at one time.

The Grey Wolf wrote:Froxy knows how to use a whip, I speak from experience.

Winner of the P2TM 2013 Best Fight Scene in a Single Post and Most Original Character, and 2015 Best Horror/Thriller Role-player awards.
Achievement

User avatar
Fvaarniimar
Minister
 
Posts: 3130
Founded: Nov 20, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Fvaarniimar » Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:49 am

Monfrox wrote:
Fvaarniimar wrote:Er. Sorry...

I appreciate the enthusiasm but holy shit. I'm still not sure if I even understand it all yet.

Hopefully the stuff I had Kwa'a mention helps somewhat.
Come to the light side.  We have teamwork, waffles, popcorn, grape juice, and way too much ramen.

Unless one is a genealogist, therapist, geneticist, or FBI agent - who is acting within the scope of their job - to claim that anyone is wrong about their own identity is not merely absurd but also extremely rude.

User avatar
The New Velociraptor Empire
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 13245
Founded: Dec 18, 2011
Ex-Nation

Postby The New Velociraptor Empire » Wed Feb 18, 2015 12:19 pm

:clap: You deserve the praise for that Fvaar.
Last edited by The New Velociraptor Empire on Wed Feb 18, 2015 12:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.

User avatar
Fvaarniimar
Minister
 
Posts: 3130
Founded: Nov 20, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Fvaarniimar » Wed Feb 18, 2015 12:37 pm

:) Thank you so much, NVE!
Come to the light side.  We have teamwork, waffles, popcorn, grape juice, and way too much ramen.

Unless one is a genealogist, therapist, geneticist, or FBI agent - who is acting within the scope of their job - to claim that anyone is wrong about their own identity is not merely absurd but also extremely rude.

User avatar
Torsiedelle
Post Marshal
 
Posts: 18305
Founded: Dec 03, 2010
Ex-Nation

Postby Torsiedelle » Wed Feb 18, 2015 1:18 pm

Me and bran probably have some of the longest-running Mundane characters in the apartment, don't we?

It's cool how a normal human character is still special in PL.
Rostavykhan is my Second Nation.
⋘EXCELSIOR⋙
To Cool For School

User avatar
The BranRiech
Post Czar
 
Posts: 31391
Founded: Mar 24, 2011
Ex-Nation

Postby The BranRiech » Wed Feb 18, 2015 2:46 pm

Will post after work, sorry, Swith and Torsie!

User avatar
Swith Witherward
Post Czar
 
Posts: 30350
Founded: Feb 11, 2012
Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Wed Feb 18, 2015 2:58 pm

The BranRiech wrote:Will post after work, sorry, Swith and Torsie!

No rush. It's a lazy night for me.
★ Senior P2TM RP Mentor ★
How may I help you today?
TG Swith Witherward
Why is everyone a social justice warrior?
Why didn't any of you choose a different class,
like social justice mage or social justice thief?
P2TM Mentor & Personal Bio: Gentlemen, Behold!
Raider Account Bio: The Eternal Bugblatter Fennec of Traal!
Madhouse
Role Play
& Writers Group
Anti-intellectual elitism: the dismissal of science, the arts,
and humanities and their replacement by entertainment,
self-righteousness, ignorance, and deliberate gullibility. - sauce

User avatar
Torsiedelle
Post Marshal
 
Posts: 18305
Founded: Dec 03, 2010
Ex-Nation

Postby Torsiedelle » Wed Feb 18, 2015 2:58 pm

It's all good, bruh.

I got my sweet tea. It's a good day.
Rostavykhan is my Second Nation.
⋘EXCELSIOR⋙
To Cool For School

User avatar
Swith Witherward
Post Czar
 
Posts: 30350
Founded: Feb 11, 2012
Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Wed Feb 18, 2015 3:03 pm

Torsiedelle wrote:It's all good, bruh.

I got my sweet tea. It's a good day.

Indeed!
★ Senior P2TM RP Mentor ★
How may I help you today?
TG Swith Witherward
Why is everyone a social justice warrior?
Why didn't any of you choose a different class,
like social justice mage or social justice thief?
P2TM Mentor & Personal Bio: Gentlemen, Behold!
Raider Account Bio: The Eternal Bugblatter Fennec of Traal!
Madhouse
Role Play
& Writers Group
Anti-intellectual elitism: the dismissal of science, the arts,
and humanities and their replacement by entertainment,
self-righteousness, ignorance, and deliberate gullibility. - sauce

User avatar
Tsuyoi Tekikoku
Post Marshal
 
Posts: 17417
Founded: Jul 31, 2012
Ex-Nation

Postby Tsuyoi Tekikoku » Wed Feb 18, 2015 3:09 pm

:D Got a post up like i promised!
Predictably unpredictable and fabulous at the same time!
XA-1MVGLHS
Queen Oberon, our red devil! Click the URL to learn about our Leader!
Edelweiss and Reina, the two previous ones are still alive. None of Tsuyoi Tekikoku's leaders are killed in their duels of succession.


I don't use NS stats.

I'd prefer the pronouns she/her,if your referring to me

User avatar
Northwest Slobovia
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 12548
Founded: Sep 16, 2006
Anarchy

Postby Northwest Slobovia » Wed Feb 18, 2015 4:42 pm

In preparation for a post, I'm trying to figure out who's in the group Gio and Sandy are going to meet. Marcus, Torii, Katya, Drova, and Yuna, yes? Anybody else?

Edit: fixed typos. Stupid keyboard I'm not used to.
Last edited by Northwest Slobovia on Wed Feb 18, 2015 4:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Gollum died for your sins.
Power is an equal-opportunity corrupter.

User avatar
Swith Witherward
Post Czar
 
Posts: 30350
Founded: Feb 11, 2012
Democratic Socialists

Postby Swith Witherward » Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:18 pm

Northwest Slobovia wrote:In preparation for a post, I'm trying to figure out who's in the group Gio and Sandy are going to meet. Marcus, Torii, Katya, Drova, and Yuna, yes? Anybody else?

Edit: fixed typos. Stupid keyboard I'm not used to.

Yep. Is it only Sandy standing with Giovenith?
★ Senior P2TM RP Mentor ★
How may I help you today?
TG Swith Witherward
Why is everyone a social justice warrior?
Why didn't any of you choose a different class,
like social justice mage or social justice thief?
P2TM Mentor & Personal Bio: Gentlemen, Behold!
Raider Account Bio: The Eternal Bugblatter Fennec of Traal!
Madhouse
Role Play
& Writers Group
Anti-intellectual elitism: the dismissal of science, the arts,
and humanities and their replacement by entertainment,
self-righteousness, ignorance, and deliberate gullibility. - sauce

User avatar
Fvaarniimar
Minister
 
Posts: 3130
Founded: Nov 20, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Fvaarniimar » Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:26 pm

Fvaarniimar wrote:
Monfrox wrote:I appreciate the enthusiasm but holy shit. I'm still not sure if I even understand it all yet.

Hopefully the stuff I had Kwa'a mention helps somewhat.

Note: She did request definitions of some terms...in at least one case, providing those might be wise... ;)
Last edited by Fvaarniimar on Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Come to the light side.  We have teamwork, waffles, popcorn, grape juice, and way too much ramen.

Unless one is a genealogist, therapist, geneticist, or FBI agent - who is acting within the scope of their job - to claim that anyone is wrong about their own identity is not merely absurd but also extremely rude.

User avatar
Northwest Slobovia
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 12548
Founded: Sep 16, 2006
Anarchy

Postby Northwest Slobovia » Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:40 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
Northwest Slobovia wrote:In preparation for a post, I'm trying to figure out who's in the group Gio and Sandy are going to meet. Marcus, Torii, Katya, Drova, and Yuna, yes? Anybody else?

Edit: fixed typos. Stupid keyboard I'm not used to.

Yep. Is it only Sandy standing with Giovenith?

'far as I know. :) Er, technically, we're walking...
Last edited by Northwest Slobovia on Wed Feb 18, 2015 5:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Gollum died for your sins.
Power is an equal-opportunity corrupter.

User avatar
Crumb-Cashew
Chargé d'Affaires
 
Posts: 406
Founded: Jan 13, 2015
Ex-Nation

Postby Crumb-Cashew » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:03 pm

Application fixed! With that, I'd like to apply 3 more characters.

Do not remove this search tag: #PLAPP
Your NS Nation's Nickname: Crumb

Character Name: Cottura Fetta Salto (goes by Cottura)

Character Gender: Female

Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Crumb. The Crumb species is similar to a human, although it has a specific appearance (hence all Crumbs look very similar) and completely lacks red blood cells. Other than that, it is basically a nation personification only.

Character Physical Description (height, weight, apparent age, actual age):
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 90 lbs.
Apparent age: 30
Actual age: 25

Cottura Salto has the olive skin, large, black eyes, and curved nose of an average Crumb. Her hair is black-as-the-night naturally, although even at 25 it sports some gray streaks here and there from hard work. Cottura's hair is often pulled straight up in a dignified bun, although her eyes add seductive youth to her formal appearance. Although extremely slender, her limbs are slightly muscular, and she often dresses in well-worn attire in neutral colors such as brown and gray.

URL to Character Picture, if any: None (see description)

Primary Skill or Power: Scissor-like hands, able to slice through most materials

Power Weaknesses/Flaws: As this power is only reliant on her hands, any damage to these body parts will delete the power until remedied.

Secondary Skill or Power: Excellent cook (skill only)

Power Weaknesses/Flaws: She may become busy in the kitchen.

Character Background/Biography: Cottura Salto was, unlike her companion Oila, born to an extremely poor family in Salto who sold her to the wheat fields as a laborer at age 3. Cottura had to endure long hours of endless wheat-picking, and although the bosses were generous enough, the pay was very low, and the work was much too strenuous for a little girl. When discovering that her hands could easily chop through wheat, saving hours of work, Cottura had grown to be almost 15 and had used her salary to provide herself with a tiny house in the very same wheat field. The experience left a heavy mark on Cottura, who started the "Wheat Picker's Union" at age 17, encouraging the corporations of Crumb-Cashew to provide better care for wheat pickers, and to exclude children from their strenuous ways. The charity had succeeded, providing Cottura with a regulator's status and the money needed to travel to Bielefeld for a much-needed vacation.

Why the character is in Bielefeld/Occupation: Cottura is in Bielefeld for a vacation, plain and simple; as well as an enlightening cultural tour. She is travelling with her companions Oila Crumb and Cecil Cannellini, who recently met out of the blue when planning this travel.

URL to Apartment Picture: Apartment

Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP thread itself. If you don't have examples, make your biography good.) None (we must start somewhere, after all)

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: After a poverty-loaded childhood full of unnecessary labor, Cottura Salto is now the successful founder of the Crumb-Cashew charity "Wheat Picker's Union". A strong woman of 25, Cottura enjoys eating bread, politics and activism, and is a rather good cook with a beautiful appearance. She also has a recently-discovered scientific malfunction, or 'power', allowing her to cut through objects with her bare hands- an unusual attribute that would have saved her much trouble during her unfortunate past.

Do not remove this search tag: #PLAPP
Your NS Nation's Nickname: Crumb

Character Name: Cecil Cannellini

Character Gender: Male

Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Crumb. The Crumb species is similar to a human, although it has a specific appearance (hence all Crumbs look very similar) and completely lacks red blood cells. Other than that, it is basically a nation personification only.

Character Physical Description (height, weight, apparent age, actual age):
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 130 lbs.
Apparent age: 40
Actual age: 30

Cecil Cannellini looks very similar to Oila Crumb- with traits that enable them to pass for siblings. He is bald, in fact, from recent 'suspected cancer' treatment (in fact, he was not affected by the so-called 'cancer' one bit), instead of the Crumb baldness trend. Cecil sports a very large, curved nose, olive skin, and the big, black eyes seen on almost every citizen of his country. Although slim, he is fairly muscular, though not an exercise fanatic. Cecil has a very dignified appearance, resembling that of a stereotypical, handsome Italian waiter.

URL to Character Picture, if any: None (description provided)

Primary Skill or Power: Although mostly an average Joe (or Grano in the Crumb language), Cecil has a persuasive ability and marketing skills, which help him in the retail field.

Power Weaknesses/Flaws: Might recommend his own products to others consistently.

Secondary Skill or Power: None

Power Weaknesses/Flaws: N/A

Character Background/Biography: Cecil Cannellini is your average Crumb citizen- and has always been that way. Even his appearance is average in cultural standards, with the olive skin, large black eyes, and curved nose of a Crumb. Born to the middle class, Cecil was a studious student in school, which enabled him to receive a degree in Marketing at Sulphur University. There, he met Oila Crumb, although the two barely know each other. Renowned for his salesman's ability, Cecil works at the industrial superpower Cannellini Cars, in Crumb-Cashew. Cecil is also a follower of the Cipolle subdivision Sulpalcci, a pagan religion.

Why the character is in Bielefeld/Occupation: Cecil is in Bielefeld for a pure vacation, and for a taste of new culture. He currently works at Cannellini Cars as a salesman and is quite successful.

URL to Apartment Picture: Apartment

Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP thread itself. If you don't have examples, make your biography good.) None

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: Character Background/Biography:[/b] Cecil Cannellini is your average Crumb citizen- and has always been that way. Even his appearance is average in cultural standards, with the olive skin, large black eyes, and curved nose of a Crumb. Born to the middle class, Cecil was a studious student in school, which enabled him to receive a degree in Marketing at Sulphur University. There, he met Oila Crumb, although the two barely know each other. Renowned for his salesman's ability, Cecil works at the industrial superpower Cannellini Cars, in Crumb-Cashew. Cecil is also a follower of the Cipolle subdivision Sulpalcci, a pagan religion.
Last edited by Crumb-Cashew on Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Are You a Crumb-Cashew Citizen?
Proud member of the International Exchange Student Program!
Vervillia wrote:We teach our children to visit Crumb-Cashew if they like cashew nuts, but not to visit if you like Political Freedoms, and relaxed eating laws.

The Semi-Corporate Oligarchy of Crumb-Cashew: An Iron Fist Consumerist State
- Capital City: Crumb
- National Animal: Onion Beetle
- Currency: Cottura
- Conservative, Authoritarian, Pro-Corporate
- Denomym: Crumb

Pro: Onions, Conservatism, Culture, Authoritarianism, Philosophy, Capitalism, International isolationism, Insects, Neutral colors, Oligarchies, Cashews, The color khaki
Anti: Libertarianism, Communism, Socialism, Pop Culture, Healthcare, Atheism, Peanuts, The color pink

User avatar
The New Velociraptor Empire
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 13245
Founded: Dec 18, 2011
Ex-Nation

Postby The New Velociraptor Empire » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:21 pm

Nice to meat you Crumb, now I am hungrier than normal.

User avatar
Tiltjuice
Post Czar
 
Posts: 33978
Founded: Jan 20, 2012
Ex-Nation

Postby Tiltjuice » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:28 pm

The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:Nice to meat you Crumb, now I am hungrier than normal.


I am not food >.>
Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart. -Khalil Gibran
Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
mumblemumblemumble

User avatar
Fvaarniimar
Minister
 
Posts: 3130
Founded: Nov 20, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Fvaarniimar » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:29 pm

Crumb-Cashew wrote:Application fixed! With that, I'd like to apply 3 more characters.

Are you sure that introducing so many characters so quickly is a good idea? I'm worried that you could end up pretty confused, or possibly overwhelmed if RL gets involved. It might be better to run one character for awhile, then introduce the others... But of course that is merely my opinion, and if your characters are just taking a short vacation as you've kinda implied then you should be fine. I think.

@NVE: Try a nice yellow fruit. ;)
@Tilt: No, you are a beverage.
Come to the light side.  We have teamwork, waffles, popcorn, grape juice, and way too much ramen.

Unless one is a genealogist, therapist, geneticist, or FBI agent - who is acting within the scope of their job - to claim that anyone is wrong about their own identity is not merely absurd but also extremely rude.

User avatar
Northwest Slobovia
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 12548
Founded: Sep 16, 2006
Anarchy

Postby Northwest Slobovia » Wed Feb 18, 2015 7:31 pm

Gio, the italicized bit in my last post is a thought; maybe I need a clearer notation for that... No harm, though.
Gollum died for your sins.
Power is an equal-opportunity corrupter.

PreviousNext

Advertisement

Remove ads

Return to Portal to the Multiverse

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

Advertisement

Remove ads