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Postby Holy Empire of Avalon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:15 am

Bearon wrote:When did he do that? Also where exactly is Dallion located.

He has to go somewhere to train and be deployed, in the process of redoing his bio as I forget to add anything about his actual life as it will be in the story. He has National Guard schedule, training two weeks out of the month, blah blah blah

I will just change it to Fort Knox, Fort Knox is cooler anyway :P
Global War on Crime
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Operation: VENGEFUL SPIRIT
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Order of the Purple Cross
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Al-Khalifiya Campaign
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Arabic Spain Remembrance
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Aravean Liberation
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Magian Defense
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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:16 am

Sounds good but let's not have you know Grey's secret identity. :unsure:
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Postby Joshulia » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:18 am

Bearon wrote:Sounds good but let's not have you know Grey's secret identity. :unsure:

Yeah, if we're abandoning the dad's ransom thing then he wouldn't.
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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:19 am

Alright sounds good. Have you edited?
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Postby Holy Empire of Avalon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:20 am

To clarify before I post this app, the nanobots used in Jamie are able to go off food(calories) or electricity, but obviously she cannot. So on her weakness where it says requires food or food and electricity, it is a statement of that.
Global War on Crime
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Operation: VENGEFUL SPIRIT
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Order of the Purple Cross
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Al-Khalifiya Campaign
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Arabic Spain Remembrance
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Aravean Liberation
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Magian Defense
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Postby Firstaria » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:22 am

I wish to have something to reconnect, I'm far too much off plot at this point.
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Postby Joshulia » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:25 am

Firstaria wrote:I wish to have something to reconnect, I'm far too much off plot at this point.

Hero or villain?

And is there like a main computer in the Guardians hideout or maybe something like a phone a Guardian carries?
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Postby Tomia » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:27 am

He has a main computer ya.

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Postby Omegaopterix » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:28 am

New character soon. Probably a weird one.
"They are everything and nothing, the many-angled ones, unknowable, timeless, eternal. They inhabit the Abyss, the gulf between what's said and what's understood, the place from whence stems all human suffering. Mankind can only trace their jagged silhouette around the shadow they cast across the world, They are famine, conflict, genocide, they are now and forever amen... and they're coming your way."

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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:29 am

Here let me summarize the RP so far.

The Russian Mafia has been causing the city to sink further into mayhem and chaos due to its criminal activities. It has also created a night club.

Scarlett Cross has bought and improved a night club. She is taking jobs from the cult group.

Lance Cross is tracking other vigilantes and the only one that knows is me.

Robert and Issa are some sort of vampire people with Robert being like Wolverine in that he's been in almost every American war. He's now training under Guardian. He was attacked by some cyborg at the school.

The cyborg guy is trying to kill meta humans and hasn't killed anyone yet.

Guardian is gathering a team of meta human vigilantes.

Grey is keeping an eye on Guardians team and other vigilantes and has put probes in all the meta humans and powered creatures he's met. He faced off against an alien and now is being held hostage by Meta.

The alien is trying to conquer the world and will do so by turning the populace against the super powered people.

The cults trying to mind control everybody.

That is all.
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Postby Siliarba » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:34 am

Would it be an issue as if Scarlett's club is suddenly completely rebuilt for the sake of me liking the idea of having a pub as a villain meet up place, a bit like penguin's club I suppose. I don't want to wait IC weeks for it to be built at what would be a normal rate ^^.

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Postby Holy Empire of Avalon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:35 am

Bearon wrote:Here let me summarize the RP so far.

The Russian Mafia has been causing the city to sink further into mayhem and chaos due to its criminal activities. It has also created a night club.

Scarlett Cross has bought and improved a night club. She is taking jobs from the cult group.

Lance Cross is tracking other vigilantes and the only one that knows is me.

Robert and Issa are some sort of vampire people with Robert being like Wolverine in that he's been in almost every American war. He's now training under Guardian. He was attacked by some cyborg at the school.

The cyborg guy is trying to kill meta humans and hasn't killed anyone yet.

Guardian is gathering a team of meta human vigilantes.

Grey is keeping an eye on Guardians team and other vigilantes and has put probes in all the meta humans and powered creatures he's met. He faced off against an alien and now is being held hostage by Meta.

The alien is trying to conquer the world and will do so by turning the populace against the super powered people.

The cults trying to mind control everybody.

That is all.

Nah, he isn't a vampire, just basically was made a butler. I was reacting more than thinking at the time and really messed that up... good news is that it doesn't interfere with the surprise backstory! ^.^
Global War on Crime
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Operation: VENGEFUL SPIRIT
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Order of the Purple Cross
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Al-Khalifiya Campaign
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Arabic Spain Remembrance
______
Aravean Liberation
______
Magian Defense
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Postby Firstaria » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:37 am

Joshulia wrote:
Firstaria wrote:I wish to have something to reconnect, I'm far too much off plot at this point.

Hero or villain?

And is there like a main computer in the Guardians hideout or maybe something like a phone a Guardian carries?


.....that's it, I'm out. If with all I've written and done, with all the effort I tried to put, nobody even knows what role I have (and I have only 1 guy) just because action is at another hemisphere, it's clear that this RP is not for me.

Also, it's way too chaotic. Everyone is doing his shit and nothing seems to be ordinated enough to get a clue on who is who and what is what. I don't think anyone except the OP did something to advance the plot someway by now.
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Postby Joshulia » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:42 am

Firstaria wrote:
Joshulia wrote:Hero or villain?

And is there like a main computer in the Guardians hideout or maybe something like a phone a Guardian carries?


.....that's it, I'm out. If with all I've written and done, with all the effort I tried to put, nobody even knows what role I have (and I have only 1 guy) just because action is at another hemisphere, it's clear that this RP is not for me.

Also, it's way too chaotic. Everyone is doing his shit and nothing seems to be ordinated enough to get a clue on who is who and what is what. I don't think anyone except the OP did something to advance the plot someway by now.

Dude, I'm literally just getting into this too and I haven't reD through the entire thing so how would i know about your character? Just give it a bit longer, we can jump start him into the plot if he just links up with the Guardians or Meta somehow.
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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:46 am

I find this to be really interesting actually and I know who your character is. This whole RP is the plot. It's been moved forward because Grey has found out about the cult group which will connect to everything else and we were about to move in on the Swedish Mafia tonight. It's only been 3 days in the RP man just give it some time.
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Postby Siliarba » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:50 am

Dammit Bearon, why did your guy need to be captured, now Lance won't be stopping guardian and his allies considering if they're out to save someone, he wouldn't get in the way of that so all my plans for a sudden intervention preventing the group to fight crime large scale will have to be postponed XD.
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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:51 am

Muahahahahahahahahahahaha! :twisted:
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Postby Holy Empire of Avalon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:52 am

Hero App:
Alias- Heavy Metal, WarGear, Iron Prime (which of those sounds best/what are ya'lls' suggestions?)
Secret Identity- Jamie Lee Starke
Age- 16
Gender- Female
Appearance(normal)- I will go find one while she is reviewed
Appearance(in costume)- picture shortly :P
Moral code or principles(if any)-
Starting: Is caught between hero and something else
Later On: Realizes this is her call to arms, Jamie will defend anyone in danger and neutralize the threats, she believes peace is that beautiful rainbow in the sky that shines in showers of blood
Abilities- Genius Intelligence, Expert Mechanic Skills, Multiple Degrees in Physics, Machinery, Gunsmithing, and Blacksmithing, and the suits she makes.
Weaknesses(required)- Body requires power whether it be food and electricity or just food. Normal human weaknesses when she is not in her suit. With the suits on after first they will not be normal anti machine weapon resistant (EMP, etc) only her later suits will actually fix that weakness though each one will have weaknesses that I will state under it's picture due to them all being specialized.
Equipment- Her suits
Personality- Sarcastic, Reasonably friendly, Jamie will tell you what she is thinking right to your face.
Motives to become a hero- Built her suits as prototype life support systems for the troops, withdrew them after they were stolen and sold to the enemy. She fights to insure safety for the future. Her original reason for fighting was to get her tech back but after that struggle it has become so much more to her than a game of espionage and destruction
Bio- Jamie is from Albany, New York. Born and raised in the area above the Big Apple, she could never find a piece of technology she did not want to understand, never having many friends she would spend all her time with machines, breaking them down, finding what made them tick. Her father was Richard Starke, head of one of the most supreme technical companies there was, made everything the military needed and happily. There was an accident in the lab one day, Fusion Reactor blew apart with Richard right beside it. The blast caught him but the shrapnel hit Jamie the most. Coming to and bleeding out she initiated a unit she had built for soldiers to heal them from the same injuries, allowing the nanobots into her body she began stabilizing, not healing but not dying at the least. Finding the metal container holding the Prototype Medical System she climbed in and was once more able to move about, rescuing her father they escaped as the research facility collapsed into itself. Her father now resides in a hospital in a coma from the blast leaving her in his living will as head of the company with overview from the board. That was only a few months ago so Jamie is still getting used to being a CEO, at points school work gets away from her, but her friends help out when they can. Only one friend knows her secret and that is Robert, they met by accident chasing the same criminal. A spy whose name neither of them remember, he had taken government secrets pertaining to the Combat Armors Systems.
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Global War on Crime
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Operation: VENGEFUL SPIRIT
|____|
Order of the Purple Cross
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Al-Khalifiya Campaign
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Arabic Spain Remembrance
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Aravean Liberation
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Magian Defense
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Postby Joshulia » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:53 am

Siliarba wrote:Dammit Bearon, why did your guy need to be captured, now Lance won't be stopping guardian and his allies considering if they're out to save someone, he wouldn't get in the way of that so all my plans for a sudden intervention preventing the group to fight crime large scale will have to be postponed XD.

He could always aid Meta aND DAMN IT WATCHER IT WAS GONNA BE ANONYMOUS
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Postby Holy Empire of Avalon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:53 am

Bearon wrote:Muahahahahahahahahahahaha! :twisted:

Oh no! Watcher has turned Evil! Or is trying to act like Darth Vader love ya man XD
Global War on Crime
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Operation: VENGEFUL SPIRIT
|____|
Order of the Purple Cross
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Al-Khalifiya Campaign
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Arabic Spain Remembrance
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Aravean Liberation
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Magian Defense
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Postby Firstaria » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:56 am

It's just that is annoying as hell doing a message, working on it, and then just because I sleep when action happens people have no clue on what I'm doing. Someone even picked my nick without even checking if it was available, that says much on how I'm out the RP....
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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:56 am

If Watcher turned evil... Well let's just say there wouldn't be much left of Dallion after he exploded their brains.
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Postby Bearon » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:57 am

Firstaria wrote:It's just that is annoying as hell doing a message, working on it, and then just because I sleep when action happens people have no clue on what I'm doing. Someone even picked my nick without even checking if it was available, that says much on how I'm out the RP....


Your the Ghost we know who you are. You just need to do something that affects a lot of characters in the RP to get a response.
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Postby Tomia » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:57 am

Firstaria wrote:It's just that is annoying as hell doing a message, working on it, and then just because I sleep when action happens people have no clue on what I'm doing. Someone even picked my nick without even checking if it was available, that says much on how I'm out the RP....

No hard feelings, see you around.

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Postby Siliarba » Wed Jun 18, 2014 9:58 am

Firstaria wrote:It's just that is annoying as hell doing a message, working on it, and then just because I sleep when action happens people have no clue on what I'm doing. Someone even picked my nick without even checking if it was available, that says much on how I'm out the RP....

It's the first days of a new RP, overly hectic before things start to fall in several lines people decided to follow.

And I have that with every RP, most sutff happening when I sleep ^^.

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