The Rise of the Black Sun [OOC]

[Zatak]

No.

Just... no.

^This.

Holy FUCK.
There's bad, and then there's really bad; and then, way in the back of the room, eating chalk and paste, is this.
I just- ugh. Mason? Really? Just to make it REALLY EXTRA OBVIOUS that your only experience with this sort of thing is Call of Duty. Great. And Artyom, oh, okay. Conglaturation, you am to played METRO 2033 for best good time. Look. Mason isn't a Russian last name. There is a key on your keyboard that says [Shift]; try holding it down when you type the first letter of certain words. And please, please, please, don't use that horrid picture.

erflergehrehg

Calm down OK deep breaths

[Neo Arcad]

^This.

Holy FUCK.
There's bad, and then there's really bad; and then, way in the back of the room, eating chalk and paste, is this.
I just- ugh. Mason? Really? Just to make it REALLY EXTRA OBVIOUS that your only experience with this sort of thing is Call of Duty. Great. And Artyom, oh, okay. Conglaturation, you am to played METRO 2033 for best good time. Look. Mason isn't a Russian last name. There is a key on your keyboard that says [Shift]; try holding it down when you type the first letter of certain words. And please, please, please, don't use that horrid picture.

erflergehrehg

Calm down OK deep breaths

That rant is actually for you too.
But like I said, as long as you're willing to let us teach you how to dougie RP...

[Zatak]

Calm down OK deep breaths

That rant is actually for you too.
But like I said, as long as you're willing to let us teach you how to dougie RP...

Funny thing about me I don't put effort into apps ask a lot of people.

[Neo Arcad]

That rant is actually for you too.
But like I said, as long as you're willing to let us teach you how to dougie RP...

Funny thing about me I don't put effort into apps ask a lot of people.

You clearly don't put any effort into commas, seeing as I don't think you've actually typed one... well, ever.

Your post is horrendous, beyond improvement. Try reading some other players' posts, then compare them to yours, and see what you've done wrong. (Hint: it's everything.)

[Rupudska]

That rant is actually for you too.
But like I said, as long as you're willing to let us teach you how to dougie RP...

Funny thing about me I don't put effort into apps ask a lot of people.

That is an extremely n00bish thing to do.

Unless you do it for bios.

[Transnapastain]

That rant is actually for you too.
But like I said, as long as you're willing to let us teach you how to dougie RP...

Funny thing about me I don't put effort into apps ask a lot of people.

and you say this as if its a good thing, something to be proud of.

[Zatak]

Funny thing about me I don't put effort into apps ask a lot of people.

and you say this as if its a good thing, something to be proud of.

It does not mean anything really just a little fact about me

[Neo Arcad]

and you say this as if its a good thing, something to be proud of.

It does not mean anything really just a little fact about me

COMMAS AND PERIODS. BEGIN USING THEM. IF YOU PLEASE.

[Seljuq Kyiv]

This RP needs RP examples.

[Hathradic States]

This RP needs RP examples.

I agree, I'll add it to the app. (does not apply retroactively)

[Hathradic States]

All current applicants have been accepted.

[Scolopendra]

There's bad, and then there's really bad; and then, way in the back of the room, eating chalk and paste, is this.

*** Warned for flamebaiting. ***

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Funny thing about me I don't put effort into apps ask a lot of people.

You clearly don't put any effort into commas, seeing as I don't think you've actually typed one... well, ever.

Your post is horrendous, beyond improvement. Try reading some other players' posts, then compare them to yours, and see what you've done wrong. (Hint: it's everything.)

It does not mean anything really just a little fact about me

COMMAS AND PERIODS. BEGIN USING THEM. IF YOU PLEASE.

General advice: relax.

[Rupudska]

Why are there so many mods on this thread.

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Why are there so many mods on this thread.

Because reasons.

[Seljuq Kyiv]

Suggesting theme song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKdN5aSC4HE

[Corvus Metallum]

Hmm.... This has piqued my interest, expect an app some time today

[Neo Arcad]

There's bad, and then there's really bad; and then, way in the back of the room, eating chalk and paste, is this.

*** Warned for flamebaiting. ***

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You clearly don't put any effort into commas, seeing as I don't think you've actually typed one... well, ever.

Your post is horrendous, beyond improvement. Try reading some other players' posts, then compare them to yours, and see what you've done wrong. (Hint: it's everything.)

COMMAS AND PERIODS. BEGIN USING THEM. IF YOU PLEASE.

General advice: relax.

I insulted his app. Not him. Attacking the post, not the player. There wasn't anything there to incite flaming, either, so flamebaiting isn't the right charge anyway.

[Esternial]

*** Warned for flamebaiting. ***

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General advice: relax.

I insulted his app. Not him. Attacking the post, not the player. There wasn't anything there to incite flaming, either, so flamebaiting isn't the right charge anyway.

If you want an appeal, you'll have to do it in Moderation.

[Neo Arcad]

I insulted his app. Not him. Attacking the post, not the player. There wasn't anything there to incite flaming, either, so flamebaiting isn't the right charge anyway.

If you want an appeal, you'll have to do it in Moderation.

There's no point. The appeals process is nonfunctional, you know that as well as I do. When was the last time any person got their warning or ban repealed? That's right, just about never. In fact, in my experience, appealing things tends to get you a worse sentence, because the mods like to discourage appeals. I'm not going to waste my keystrokes on that kind of shit, it'd be like talking to a brick wall.

[Hafflegar]

Is this still open? I wanna throw and app in in you'll let me

[Neo Arcad]

Is this still open? I wanna throw and app in in you'll let me

What is that second sentence even supposed to be?
EDIT: Oh, ok- "I wanna throw an app in if you'll let me." I guess you're using a phone, eh?

[Hafflegar]

Whoops, not really. Just super excited about a Zombie rp. Didn't even catch my mistake there... I promise I usually spell and grammar good

[Pratse]

Whoops, not really. Just super excited about a Zombie rp. Didn't even catch my mistake there... I promise I usually spell and grammar good

[Hathradic States]

Whoops, not really. Just super excited about a Zombie rp. Didn't even catch my mistake there... I promise I usually spell and grammar good

Give an RP example when you make the app.

Also, I'm going to wait for the others to respond before the zedheads get there.

[Hafflegar]

Nation: Hafflegar

Name: Darren Patterson

Age: 26

Country: United States of America

Sex: Male

Branch of Military Service: U.S. Navy Seals

Specialty: Close Quarters Combat (CQB), demolitions, and stealth insertion

Weapon of Choice: M4A1 sopmod with a mounted ACOG and suppressor, a mounted PEQ-15 infrared high frequency laser sight, and extended 40 round magazine. Colt 1911 model .45 caliber semi-auto pistol extended 12 round clips with mounted flashlight and a combat knife

Rp Example: Somewhere over Afghanistan, two years before Zombie breakout: Darren sat with the twelve other brothers of his squad in the back of the C-130 aircraft as they flew toward their destination, prepping for a HALO drop. Prepping meant that most of them were sleeping as they didn't know when they were going to get any more for the next few days. It was a standard snatch and grab/kill everyone else whose not the target mission somewhere in the Kandahar mountain range. As they flew toward their target the U.S. Army Rangers were making a push up the mountain to distract enemy taliban forces while SEAL team 4 dropped in and bagged the Ace of Spades, a man by the name of Kahleed Al-Jihabbi, A know terrorist and bomb maker. Grunting and shifting his weight as his friend Don started drooling onto his body armor (as he was being used as a pillow for the last thirty or so minutes) he woke him up with a snort, "Da fuck man? I was sleeping" he mumbled sleepily as Darren gave him a push. "You fuckin' drooled on me, dick... Again. You're disgusting you know that?" Darren said as he reached into his pocket and produced a pack of smokes. Don eyeballed him before saying, "You know chief doesn't like that shit man, 'specially on a plane." Darren glanced over to their insensate squad leader and said, "He's asleep and besides, I want at least one fuckin' smoke before we jump" With that he lit up and took a long drag. No sooner had he exhaled the red light came on as well as the buzzer to signal the jump. Muttering something along the lines of "Fuckin' figures", Darren took another quick pull and snuffed it out on his boot as he stood up, the other men getting ready as well. Checking to make sure his M4 was strapped tightly to his chest and his colt 1911 .45 ACP was secure, he pulled his respirator over his head and settled his goggles in place. H.A.L.O. jumps were made from a high altitude where the atmosphere was almost too thin to breathe, requiring oxygen masks and regulators to be worn during the jump. Everyone was set and ready within moments of the green light and the buzzer sounded as the door slowly opened, the sound of rushing wind drowning out all other noise as chief signaled the all-ready sign and the squad reciprocated. When that was done, Chief turned and lept out silently into the night, followed by 12 other men, Darren included.

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