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by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 10:59 pm

by Rynagria » Thu Dec 26, 2013 10:59 pm
Rednael wrote:
Umm......... Harb, she isn't necessarily afraid of water, it's just that.............. Do you know who Cole is from the inFamous video game? I was talking something like that.... As for her level of manipulation of electricity, she is about half way there......

by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:01 pm
Rednael wrote:
Umm......... Harb, she isn't necessarily afraid of water, it's just that.............. Do you know who Cole is from the inFamous video game? I was talking something like that.... As for her level of manipulation of electricity, she is about half way there......

by Harbertia » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:07 pm

Rynagria wrote:Rednael wrote:Umm......... Harb, she isn't necessarily afraid of water, it's just that.............. Do you know who Cole is from the inFamous video game? I was talking something like that.... As for her level of manipulation of electricity, she is about half way there......
Speak of th devil
Oh... Hi Red,
Rednael wrote:I'm also going to change the page a little bit okay?
*inhale* I, I really, 

by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:13 pm
Harbertia wrote:Rynagria wrote:Improved?
I've been rather out of it for a while, which is why the Gamma World thread has been stagnant till today. I have an odd memory cycle, something happens, after three days I forget about it, and two days after that I remember it, sometimes it's weeks before I remember something. Other times I get facts confused trying to place together a memory, for example, I originally intended for Myra to be a 12th Grader, but I realized that it'd be a shame to grow attached to her, and not use her during next year, thus I made her an 11th grader so she could attend another year of KGARynagria wrote:Speak of th devilOh... Hi Red,
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I don't know of Cole at all, and, I, I really did like the Hydrophobia concept. It gave her a lot of character, sort of like Rika having no left leg I thought it was of a benefit to her uniqueness. If she wasn't Hydrophobic, why did you list it as a drawback? I really was looking for the social delima's such drawback would bring. I mean, it makes sense, she pretty much becomes only a mute if submerged, and that could be reason enough for her to fear. Her sister is so great, yet she is unable to sing, all she has is her powers, at least, that's what I saw in her. Some one who thought like that about themselves.Rednael wrote:I'm also going to change the page a little bit okay?
Alright*inhale* I, I really,
I don't- I feel I should appologize for all this, I really do.
Another weakness he holds involve being submerged into a large body of water. Falling into the middle of the ocean will result in Cole instantly dying, electrocuting himself enough to effectively kill him. When submerged into a waistline-deep body of water, Cole is continuously electrocuted, and will last for as long as he stays there. But, Cole can to withstand small amounts of water, as he is seen able to drink some beverages Zeke has prepared. Cole is also able to stand in a small puddle of water, although this causes the puddle to produce a static field, electrocuting anyone other than Cole that stands in it. This is the limit of his ability to interact with water, and it is stated that he must sponge bathe.

by Harbertia » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:16 pm
Rednael wrote:Harbertia wrote:
I've been rather out of it for a while, which is why the Gamma World thread has been stagnant till today. I have an odd memory cycle, something happens, after three days I forget about it, and two days after that I remember it, sometimes it's weeks before I remember something. Other times I get facts confused trying to place together a memory, for example, I originally intended for Myra to be a 12th Grader, but I realized that it'd be a shame to grow attached to her, and not use her during next year, thus I made her an 11th grader so she could attend another year of KGAOh... Hi Red,
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I don't know of Cole at all, and, I, I really did like the Hydrophobia concept. It gave her a lot of character, sort of like Rika having no left leg I thought it was of a benefit to her uniqueness. If she wasn't Hydrophobic, why did you list it as a drawback? I really was looking for the social delima's such drawback would bring. I mean, it makes sense, she pretty much becomes only a mute if submerged, and that could be reason enough for her to fear. Her sister is so great, yet she is unable to sing, all she has is her powers, at least, that's what I saw in her. Some one who thought like that about themselves.
Alright*inhale* I, I really,
I don't- I feel I should appologize for all this, I really do.
No need to apologize. But this what I wanted her powers at the full potential to be like Cole's, and here's a quote from the page regarding the water thing.Another weakness he holds involve being submerged into a large body of water. Falling into the middle of the ocean will result in Cole instantly dying, electrocuting himself enough to effectively kill him. When submerged into a waistline-deep body of water, Cole is continuously electrocuted, and will last for as long as he stays there. But, Cole can to withstand small amounts of water, as he is seen able to drink some beverages Zeke has prepared. Cole is also able to stand in a small puddle of water, although this causes the puddle to produce a static field, electrocuting anyone other than Cole that stands in it. This is the limit of his ability to interact with water, and it is stated that he must sponge bathe.
only nullify her powers.
by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:19 pm

by Harbertia » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:25 pm
Rednael wrote:
I probably should have said that better shouldn't I? But yes, enough water will kill her if she makes contact with it. The fear is produced because she doesn't want to be electrocuted by her own powers. So did you read the wiki page of Cole McGrath?
Rednael wrote:Character name: Rena Kitsuagan
Age: 17 years old
Gender: Female
Appearance:(Image)
Grade: 11th Grade
Years in Academy: 1st Year
Country from: United American Republic
Class: Transfer Student, so pick for me.
Personality: Compared to Neasa's aggressive nature in terms of interacting with people, Rena is quiet by a significant margin. but it's not because she has nothing to say. Rather, Rena is vocally mute, unable to talk. Instead, she communicates by writing on a piece of paper or by using sign language. If she could talk, she would tell the person listening all of the feelings she felt. Overall, she is gentle and caring, but wants to speak out loud.
Powers:
-Electricity Manipulation
-Electricity Attacks
-Electroperception
Drawbacks: Rena is afraid of water, because if she touches enough, her powers will be nullified for a certain amount of time. Her powers can't affect anything that is made of rubber or silicate, also anything that can ground electricity. Rena can absorb a lot of electricity into her body, but after a certain point, she will lose consciousness.
Bio: Born in 2010, Rena never knew about her sister, having been take away by the Order 4 years before her birth. She grew life thinking she was an only child, no signs left of her older sister, even after their parents died in 2017. Her parents were killed by the Order in attempt to kill all the parents of the Sanctioned, trying to make sure that in one way or another, should they lose to the rebellion, The Order would be the ones who took them in. Fortunately, Rena survived by being sent away to a field trip that day in her school, which is where she would discover her powers. She continued to live an oblivious life towards her sister until in 2026, she heard the last name announced in an idol show. Curious of about the last name, she researched about her until she found out that both of them had the same parents, which lead to her confronting Neasa. After that, both of them sympathized with each other and began to live with each other. Until Neasa decided she needed to continue to school.
RP Sample:
I was looking around for what Neasa could look like during the set time period if this RP and this is what I came up with.(Image)

by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:32 pm
Harbertia wrote:Rednael wrote:I probably should have said that better shouldn't I? But yes, enough water will kill her if she makes contact with it. The fear is produced because she doesn't want to be electrocuted by her own powers. So did you read the wiki page of Cole McGrath?
No, no, *exhale* i did check Renas, I never thought anyone at the academy would have that level of control, at least she's mute, and, you just don't see a lot of disabled supers. Since Rika got leg use, I've been looking for someone like Rena, ....
Truely though I went off your app, I really did, and am glade to have serviced you with greater characterization. At least, I would be if I where not down.Rednael wrote:Character name: Rena Kitsuagan
Age: 17 years old
Gender: Female
Appearance:(Image)
Grade: 11th Grade
Years in Academy: 1st Year
Country from: United American Republic
Class: Transfer Student, so pick for me.
Personality: Compared to Neasa's aggressive nature in terms of interacting with people, Rena is quiet by a significant margin. but it's not because she has nothing to say. Rather, Rena is vocally mute, unable to talk. Instead, she communicates by writing on a piece of paper or by using sign language. If she could talk, she would tell the person listening all of the feelings she felt. Overall, she is gentle and caring, but wants to speak out loud.
Powers:
-Electricity Manipulation
-Electricity Attacks
-Electroperception
Drawbacks: Rena is afraid of water, because if she touches enough, her powers will be nullified for a certain amount of time. Her powers can't affect anything that is made of rubber or silicate, also anything that can ground electricity. Rena can absorb a lot of electricity into her body, but after a certain point, she will lose consciousness.
Bio: Born in 2010, Rena never knew about her sister, having been take away by the Order 4 years before her birth. She grew life thinking she was an only child, no signs left of her older sister, even after their parents died in 2017. Her parents were killed by the Order in attempt to kill all the parents of the Sanctioned, trying to make sure that in one way or another, should they lose to the rebellion, The Order would be the ones who took them in. Fortunately, Rena survived by being sent away to a field trip that day in her school, which is where she would discover her powers. She continued to live an oblivious life towards her sister until in 2026, she heard the last name announced in an idol show. Curious of about the last name, she researched about her until she found out that both of them had the same parents, which lead to her confronting Neasa. After that, both of them sympathized with each other and began to live with each other. Until Neasa decided she needed to continue to school.
RP Sample:
I was looking around for what Neasa could look like during the set time period if this RP and this is what I came up with.(Image)Harbertia wrote:
Her condition is pretty cool
And I think this is the third, Rose has a borther who is attending.
I really am sorry.

by Harbertia » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:38 pm
Rednael wrote:Harbertia wrote:
No, no, *exhale* i did check Renas, I never thought anyone at the academy would have that level of control, at least she's mute, and, you just don't see a lot of disabled supers. Since Rika got leg use, I've been looking for someone like Rena, ....
Truely though I went off your app, I really did, and am glade to have serviced you with greater characterization. At least, I would be if I where not down.
I really am sorry.
What about the kids in 2-A? I thought they almost had their powers mostly in control and are ready to graduate soon? Also, it's okay Harb, no need to apologize. It's my mistake for not being anymore specific, which lead you to build a perception of the character in a different way than I personally did. I was going for not the best at attacking, but not the best at defending herself, but nevertheless, still headstrong.

by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:43 pm
Harbertia wrote:Rednael wrote:What about the kids in 2-A? I thought they almost had their powers mostly in control and are ready to graduate soon? Also, it's okay Harb, no need to apologize. It's my mistake for not being anymore specific, which lead you to build a perception of the character in a different way than I personally did. I was going for not the best at attacking, but not the best at defending herself, but nevertheless, still headstrong.
Alright, *inhale*, I shuld appologize if I made you sad in anyway.
The kids in 2-A are near to Graduating, and have mastered their power though years of training at the Academy. They are the star students. Rena, this is Rena's first year.

by Harbertia » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:53 pm
Rednael wrote:Harbertia wrote:
Alright, *inhale*, I shuld appologize if I made you sad in anyway.
The kids in 2-A are near to Graduating, and have mastered their power though years of training at the Academy. They are the star students. Rena, this is Rena's first year.
Don't worry Harb, you didn't make me sad, angry, frustrated, or disappointed, so there's no need for apologizing. Also, Rena didn't exactly discover her powers a couple months back, but when she was 5 years old. Neasa sent her there, because she hasn't mastered her powers after living with it for 12 years.

by Rednael » Thu Dec 26, 2013 11:56 pm
Harbertia wrote:Rednael wrote:Don't worry Harb, you didn't make me sad, angry, frustrated, or disappointed, so there's no need for apologizing. Also, Rena didn't exactly discover her powers a couple months back, but when she was 5 years old. Neasa sent her there, because she hasn't mastered her powers after living with it for 12 years.
nods
Are you sure you, ehm.... as stated, I feel at a lose, and it's wrong of me to even try to get you to change your character, pointless of me to even ask if you are sure she, eh. I need to stop I just really need to stop. As stated, I was too excited, got carried away, and now suffer at my own hands. As you said, I had a different perception, and I gave it life, and as seen I get attached to characters I make, and made the mistake of attaching to a personal image I gave life. Rena was not my character, I should have let you make the page, but knew not how long you would be gone, and convinced my self that I could better RP Rena, and thus service you, If I had a page for reference. Though you are not disappointed in me, it is I who am disappointed in my self.

by Harbertia » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:04 am
Rednael wrote:Harbertia wrote:
nods
Are you sure you, ehm.... as stated, I feel at a lose, and it's wrong of me to even try to get you to change your character, pointless of me to even ask if you are sure she, eh. I need to stop I just really need to stop. As stated, I was too excited, got carried away, and now suffer at my own hands. As you said, I had a different perception, and I gave it life, and as seen I get attached to characters I make, and made the mistake of attaching to a personal image I gave life. Rena was not my character, I should have let you make the page, but knew not how long you would be gone, and convinced my self that I could better RP Rena, and thus service you, If I had a page for reference. Though you are not disappointed in me, it is I who am disappointed in my self.
Don't beat yourself over it Harb, best just to forget and move on, no need to think about it any further than it is.


by Rednael » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:11 am
Harbertia wrote:Rednael wrote:Don't beat yourself over it Harb, best just to forget and move on, no need to think about it any further than it is.
I suppose, but my imagination is so bold that I visualized the situations, including Myra trying to help her get over her fear the way she was told one gets over fear of entering the sea, by pushing Rena into a pool. Myra doesn't understand sign language, and Rena of course is panicky but Myra has supernatural strength. Rena panics, chokes, gags, and eventually gets out of the water only for others to point and laugh at her. Myra feels guilty, but is unable to regain Rena's full trust. Rose ends up being the one who helps Rena with the embarrassment caused by Myra's actions.
I should let it go now.?

by Harbertia » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:15 am
Rednael wrote:Harbertia wrote:
I suppose, but my imagination is so bold that I visualized the situations, including Myra trying to help her get over her fear the way she was told one gets over fear of entering the sea, by pushing Rena into a pool. Myra doesn't understand sign language, and Rena of course is panicky but Myra has supernatural strength. Rena panics, chokes, gags, and eventually gets out of the water only for others to point and laugh at her. Myra feels guilty, but is unable to regain Rena's full trust. Rose ends up being the one who helps Rena with the embarrassment caused by Myra's actions.
I should let it go now.(Image)?
If she gets near the pool, bolts of electricity would fly out of her and into the water, which should act as a warning or to cause the person to stop.
I know that now, but then it was different, the water only nullified her powers. As stated, I got carried away in the excitement. I was speaking of one of the situations I had put Rena through in my mind, I was that much of a fan.
by Rednael » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:17 am
Harbertia wrote:Rednael wrote:If she gets near the pool, bolts of electricity would fly out of her and into the water, which should act as a warning or to cause the person to stop.
I know that now, but then it was different, the water only nullified her powers. As stated, I got carried away in the excitement.

by Harbertia » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:21 am

by Rednael » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:24 am

by Harbertia » Fri Dec 27, 2013 12:25 am
Rednael wrote:Harbertia wrote:nods
Ryn said we could post as teachers, but he also said he'd be posting for Ms. Perrine. I thought I'd pass on the update.
Well, it's pretty late here and I have plenty to do later today, so I better get sleep. Have a good night Harb, I'll talk to you somewhere in the near future.
by Personal Freedom » Fri Dec 27, 2013 9:20 am

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by Rednael » Fri Dec 27, 2013 5:20 pm
Harbertia wrote:Death by pool party, death by bath, death by flood, death by fire hydrogen, death by sinking ship (along with those in water near her), death by swerlie (along with swerlier).
Rynagria wrote:I can kind of see what I want the ending to be for Kyoto.......... With songs from MGSPW playing in the background..... Here's how they sound.
Beginning to End of Fight
With this as background for a certain scene
What do you think........ Or are you curious what I want the ending to be?
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