Age of Glory, 1504 Alternate History RP, OOC/Signups

[Nuverikstan]

It wasn't a battle maybe 30 men were attacking me. So the rest doesn't matter.

It actually does. Even more, because by having less soldiers involved, the battle takes more of a combat scene so now you would have to describe more things

Ok I will change it. I am busy and wanted to post a battle within the page before it was the second year.

[Cin Neogh]

I would say no. How many Irish? What kind of soldiers? How many archers, mounts?
What were the conditions of the battle - rain/fog/night?
What kind of soldiers do you have? How many mounts do you have?
How did you go about securing a supply route back to Dublin, and have you left any troops behind to defend the supply line?
Why only 23 soldiers dead?

If you are going to conquer land put much more thought and detail into it.

It wasn't a battle maybe 30 men were attacking me. So the rest doesn't matter.

You didn't state that so how were we to know? And it still does matter, whatever about waltzing around your castle and writing letters and issuing decrees, military movements in particular battles must be done in extreme detail.

[The Grand Republic of Hannover]

It actually does. Even more, because by having less soldiers involved, the battle takes more of a combat scene so now you would have to describe more things

Ok I will change it. I am busy and wanted to post a battle within the page before it was the second year.

Just edit it. You don't have to delete your post
What we really want is too add more juice to the posts, so that this RP doesn't look superficial

[The Ik Ka Ek Akai]

If the full population of varied rebels is too large, I'll lower it like last time. On consideration, it most likely is too large.

Accepted!

I thank you with best wishes of a greater Hellenic Greece.

[Nuverikstan]

Ok I will change it. I am busy and wanted to post a battle within the page before it was the second year.

Just edit it. You don't have to delete your post
What we really want is too add more juice to the posts, so that this RP doesn't look superficial

Does it look better? I could not do like the other guy you showed me, I am not that good. You need skill to do that.

[Alouite]

Just edit it. You don't have to delete your post
What we really want is too add more juice to the posts, so that this RP doesn't look superficial

Does it look better? I could not do like the other guy you showed me, I am not that good. You need skill to do that.

Yes! Just make every post similar to that, with the exception of shorter ones being one paragraph, but keep it up, im liking it!

[Tribea]

@UKRAINE, THIS IS THE RIA, FREEZ!
YOU CANT DO THAT! UNREALISTIC, GREECE IS BEING PLAYED, AND NOT ENOUGH DESCRIPTION!

[Nuverikstan]

Does it look better? I could not do like the other guy you showed me, I am not that good. You need skill to do that.

Yes! Just make every post similar to that, with the exception of shorter ones being one paragraph, but keep it up, im liking it!

Thanks! I do good RPs once in a blue moon. Just kidding but I could do some like that if I put a lot of effort into it.

[Alouite]

Yes! Just make every post similar to that, with the exception of shorter ones being one paragraph, but keep it up, im liking it!

Thanks! I do good RPs once in a blue moon. Just kidding but I could do some like that if I put a lot of effort into it.

In my experience, with practice, I improve.

[Nuverikstan]

Thanks! I do good RPs once in a blue moon. Just kidding but I could do some like that if I put a lot of effort into it.

In my experience, with practice, I improve.

Also how big is Munster's force once I get to Athlone? And what is their Capital? I assume Athlone is but I don't know.

[The Grand Republic of Hannover]

Thanks! I do good RPs once in a blue moon. Just kidding but I could do some like that if I put a lot of effort into it.

In my experience, with practice, I improve.

Yea, me too. My first posts would take me like hours to write, because the ones I always get it require you to write long posts, so since I was a beginner I always had a difficult time RPing

[The Ik Ka Ek Akai]

Is my post good for a starter?

[The Ik Ka Ek Akai]

@UKRAINE, THIS IS THE RIA, FREEZ!
YOU CANT DO THAT! UNREALISTIC, GREECE IS BEING PLAYED, AND NOT ENOUGH DESCRIPTION!

By "being played", do you mean me?

[Nuverikstan]

OH MY GOSH! IT IS THE SECOND YEAR! I see we need a year of three pages.

[The Ik Ka Ek Akai]

Happy New Year!

[Ukraine Republic]

The Battle for Larisa

İsmet İnönü would be leading a group of 1,000 Ottoman Janissaries with his comrade Fevzi Çakmak by his side. They would know they would most likely fail do to their low ammo count but would continue onward's. "Sir this is suicide!" One of the Janissaries would yell at İsmet İnönü but İsmet İnönü would reply, "It is for the Great ottoman empire we shall fight with glory, if we fall Allah shall take us." They would all be hyped as they would realize Allah is on their side. They would continue onward's toward's Larisa. They would come upon a small encampment of Thieve's known to steal Black Gunpowder from trade ship's. The Ottoman troop's would unload 30 Round's of Black gunpowder at the thieve's. This allowing them to get more ammo for their conquest. They would continue onward toward's almost certain Death.

Larisa,

İsmet İnönü would walk the troop's into the town, seeing no rebel's they would be sort of glad. "Coward's" One of the Janissaries would say. İsmet İnönü would look at the Man, "You were Afraid of this so who is the coward?" some of the Janissaries would laugh and look at him. He'd stand straight up and look at İsmet İnönü "It's them we're fighting not me". İsmet İnönü would realize it is to quiet. Rebel's begin to pop up near the group 100 in front of the group would charge. The Men firing at them with intense reaction. With the first wave of bullet's 75 of the Rebel's fall to the ground. The Janissaries would pull out their sword's to fight the rebel's.

[Ukraine Republic]

Is that a fine post? If so i'll put it on the IC

[Alouite]

Is that a fine post? If so i'll put it on the IC

Sure.
@ The Byzantine Guy, yes, you Opening post is good.

[Nuverikstan]

Is that a fine post? If so i'll put it on the IC

Sure.
@ The Byzantine Guy, yes, you Opening post is good.

Alouite, are we gonna make a year 2 pages or three? People have talks between people that takes up half a page which makes it look likes a whole 3 months past. Or are we gonna make a thread for IC people to talk to other IC people.

[Tribea]

Good night, dont finish the year!

[Ukraine Republic]

Night Guy's.

[Nuverikstan]

Night Ukraine. I am still up tho.

[Nuverikstan]

Why does everyone wanna halt my advance? Also I didn't think about invading you but I might now. Just kidding but I don't know what I will do now.

[The Ik Ka Ek Akai]

I think Ukraine made a gross miscalculation attacking 300 armed mercs with 17 of their soldiers.

[Ukraine Republic]

That's usually what a diplomatic ship has. 20 people. So we did the same. Want to go 300 merc's? Oh yeah we got over 30 ship's in these water's. Your fucked.