Stormy Waters (OOC, Sign Ups Open)

[Varangar]

Because of his long term dealings with French and German smugglers Mongke Oyugun can speak pretty fluent French and German. Since your character can speak German they would share a common language, thus his declaration of devotion would be perfectly understandable. If heavily accented.

Edit: It's mainly English that gives him a problem. He would tell you "It harsh to ears, and foul in mouth."

[Puerto Tyranus]

Ah, that's good...It would still be kinda awkward though...I mean, a moderately famous smuggler just out and declares allegiance...we could rp it here to pass the time...

[Varangar]

It would most likely be pretty akward for the Europeans who don't understand the mongoloid concept of honor. And it's not like he wanted to stay and die for your character, but in his mind his life was forfet after he was captured and your Charecter prevented his execution. That means he owns his life to her until she A. Releases him from her service, or B saves her life.

It would sound something like "Thank you Captain for realeasing me. I owe you my life and my honor demands that I am sworn to your service until such time you deem the debt repaid, or until I , in turn, save your life"

[Puerto Tyranus]

Well...B will probably be pretty easy to do, unless there are other stipulations to that little thing...

[Varangar]

I was hoping we could find some reason for him to stay past his oath. Like that his former partners had put a kill order on him to prevent him from returning east.

[Puerto Tyranus]

Ohhh....that's nice. That could build up a whole 'nother storyline in which I go help you to reclaim your power and then we become close allies and become an actual sea power and eventually own land and build and empire and rule the world!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sorry about that.

[Varangar]

No no. I like it. You control the west, crush the Spanish into dust. And I control the east, ending centuries of Chinese domination of Mongolia. Together the world is ours. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[Puerto Tyranus]

YES! YEEEEEEES! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
FOR THE RUM!

[Zathganastan]

Character Name: Ottman Zay

Nickname (Optional): Zay the merciless

Age: 32

Gender: male

Appearance: Zay can almost always be seen wearing his favorite light orange bandanna over his shaggy black hair, mostly covered by his brown tricorn hat, further down he wears a black trench coat, over a worn brown vest, a collection of four pistols adorned along his chest, a green sash warped around his waist, with dual french naval cutlasses flanking the side of his warn gray trousers. Fallowed along by a par of cuffed boots. His beard partially trimmed

Position (Captain, quartermaster, etc.): Captain

Personal History: Born in France the child of an ex-slave father and a woman from a wealthy trade family, Ottman often found himself acting upon a life completely of his mothers design. Of one geared towards caring on the family tradition of trade, a tradition that he always found himself lacking in both skill as much as in interests. But none the less continuing on with his mothers plans if only for the reason it allowed him a small window to his real interest, an interest to sail and explore the open seas, if only for a brief instant.

However his life would be forever change upon his 20th birthday when he was scheduled to depart on a ship for the new world to become a trader. For while in route to the Caribbean Zay's ship was to become the victim of a viscous attack by the pirate pirate ship Tempest Eternal , one which saw the looting and murder of many of his fellow passengers until only he was left standing against a wave of pirates whom approached him with blades at the ready. As Zay desperately fought brutally to survive as the brigands set upon him, and although ultimately defeated his bravery and skill was more then enough for the pirates to induct the would be trader into their fold. Something he protested for nearly the next 10 years as he sailed with and gradually built up a bond with his captures, until the point where they considered him a true member of their little family. Even to the point where he was shockingly offered the role of captain upon the old captains death in a raid on a Spanish Panamanian bound treasure galleon.Where he has survived as the respected and feared captain of the Tempest Eternal ever sense.

Personality: Usually a rather stern fellow to outsides but a rather caring and charismatic figure to his men, Zay is type of person to be found out enjoying a drink with his men when possible but harsh and somewhat overbearing when it comes to issuing orders.Also very short tempered at times Zay has been known to threaten execution of friend and foe alike when directly disobeyed.

Weapons: four flintlock pistols, two French naval cutlasses, and on special occasions a musket rifle

Weaknesses (REQUIRED): Rather short tempered, vows to return to any place he'd ever suffered a great loss at for revenge

Ship Details (Captain only): The Tempest Eternal is a dual deck,two masted brig with a crew of 75. Armed with 10, 32 pound carronades, four on the first deck, four on the second deck, and two at fore, along with the 12 pound guns located on the aft. Fallowed by 6 swivel guns also located on fore and aft. While certain area's along the full have been patched with oak to provide extra armor, while at sea she proudly fly's British colors which at a moments notice can be hauled down to be replaced a skull and hour glass jolly roger.

[Neema]

Hey Terri, gods to see you. Is Co-OP open, I'll have an app up soon.

[Varangar]

YES! YEEEEEEES! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
FOR THE RUM!

Here's to our conquest. *holds up mug of rum* May the rum never be gone again.

[Puerto Tyranus]

Here's to our conquest. *holds up mug of rum* May the rum never be gone again.

You speak with much wisdom. *Holds up her own rum* For the rum.

[Puerto Tyranus]

bump for the rum

[Varangar]

So what is my official position on the Sanguineum Aurum ?

[Puerto Tyranus]

So what is my official position on the Sanguineum Aurum ?

Hmmmmm....I'd say an unofficial First Mate, as you have a First Mate's responsibilities, but it is unlikely that the crew would make you captain if I died...

[Varangar]

Cool.

I am excited to set sail.

[Puerto Tyranus]

Yepperz, I'm chomping at the bit as well.

[Miracum-Izmir]

Character Name: Lynix

Nickname (Optional): Burner.

Age: 23.

Gender: Male

Appearance: http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/pirate-a ... 658988.jpg

Position (Captain, quartermaster, etc.): Captain

Personal History: Lynix was born to his pirate father and flordian mum. At the age of 13,while raiding the coast of cuba, The spanish brutally shot down his mum and dad. He quickly jumped and told the pirates to fire at the spanish allitery. With the supeior Cannons of the ship they destroued it. The Sppanish was then destroyed by the cannons.
After that,Lynix lost his eye. He put a patch around it. He then led the ship for 10 years,engaging around the carribien.

Personality: Sometimes friendly to outsiders. He dosen't want to hurt people,he wants to be peaceful to others.

Weapons: 2 pistols,knife and musket.

Weaknesses (REQUIRED): If you really piss him off,he will kill you,even if you out number him. Also will never want to lose and will come back.

Ship Details (Captain only): The Black Mercy is a triple deck, 4 masted battle brig with a crew of 95. Armed with 14 32 pound carronades,with 4 on the first deck, 4 on the second deck, 4 on the third deck and two at fore. There are 4 16 pound guns located at the aft. there are 8 swivel guns located on the fore. Certain areas have been patched up with oak to provide some more armor,while at sea she flys the ottoman flag,when at battle she puts an slightly red tinted picture of the knives crossing over a skull,to warn others to GTFO before they get captured and killed.

[Puerto Tyranus]

If you expand the bio, that would be nice. Other than that, I like it.

[Terripin Array]

If they would like, Puerto and Neema are my Co-Ops. I want Neema because he is an excellent RPer, and he has more experience than me. I also want Puerto for her amazing app. If they accept, then yay. If not, oh well.

[Terripin Array]

Character Name: Lynix

Nickname (Optional): Burner.

Age: 23.

Gender: Male

Appearance: http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/pirate-a ... 658988.jpg

Position (Captain, quartermaster, etc.): Captain

Personal History: Lynix was born to his pirate father and flordian mum. At the age of 13,while raiding the coast of cuba, The spanish brutally shot down his mum and dad. He quickly jumped and told the pirates to fire at the spanish allitery. With the supeior Cannons of the ship they destroued it. The Sppanish was then destroyed by the cannons.
After that,Lynix lost his eye. He put a patch around it. He then led the ship for 10 years,engaging around the carribien.

Personality: Sometimes friendly to outsiders. He dosen't want to hurt people,he wants to be peaceful to others.

Weapons: 2 pistols,knife and musket.

Weaknesses (REQUIRED): If you really piss him off,he will kill you,even if you out number him. Also will never want to lose and will come back.

Ship Details (Captain only): The Black Mercy is a triple deck, 4 masted battle brig with a crew of 95. Armed with 14 32 pound carronades,with 4 on the first deck, 4 on the second deck, 4 on the third deck and two at fore. There are 4 16 pound guns located at the aft. there are 8 swivel guns located on the fore. Certain areas have been patched up with oak to provide some more armor,while at sea she flys the ottoman flag,when at battle she puts an slightly red tinted picture of the knives crossing over a skull,to warn others to GTFO before they get captured and killed.

Not accepted for several reasons. This is only constructive criticism, so don't take it personally.

1) For the love of God, man, learn to use proper grammar! Holy crap! It's a major pet peeve of mine.

2) You need a full name; first and last. Also, expand on the nickname.

3) Expand the personal history.

4) Those weaknesses are complete crap. They almost make your character overpowered, since he supposedly never backs down and always kills his enemies or something.

5) No GTFO. EVER.

Fix those things, and you'll be good.

[Terripin Array]

Character Name: Ottman Zay

Nickname (Optional): Zay the merciless

Age: 32

Gender: male

Appearance: Zay can almost always be seen wearing his favorite light orange bandanna over his shaggy black hair, mostly covered by his brown tricorn hat, further down he wears a black trench coat, over a worn brown vest, a collection of four pistols adorned along his chest, a green sash warped around his waist, with dual french naval cutlasses flanking the side of his warn gray trousers. Fallowed along by a par of cuffed boots. His beard partially trimmed

Position (Captain, quartermaster, etc.): Captain

Personal History: Born in France the child of an ex-slave father and a woman from a wealthy trade family, Ottman often found himself acting upon a life completely of his mothers design. Of one geared towards caring on the family tradition of trade, a tradition that he always found himself lacking in both skill as much as in interests. But none the less continuing on with his mothers plans if only for the reason it allowed him a small window to his real interest, an interest to sail and explore the open seas, if only for a brief instant.

However his life would be forever change upon his 20th birthday when he was scheduled to depart on a ship for the new world to become a trader. For while in route to the Caribbean Zay's ship was to become the victim of a viscous attack by the pirate pirate ship Tempest Eternal , one which saw the looting and murder of many of his fellow passengers until only he was left standing against a wave of pirates whom approached him with blades at the ready. As Zay desperately fought brutally to survive as the brigands set upon him, and although ultimately defeated his bravery and skill was more then enough for the pirates to induct the would be trader into their fold. Something he protested for nearly the next 10 years as he sailed with and gradually built up a bond with his captures, until the point where they considered him a true member of their little family. Even to the point where he was shockingly offered the role of captain upon the old captains death in a raid on a Spanish Panamanian bound treasure galleon.Where he has survived as the respected and feared captain of the Tempest Eternal ever sense.

Personality: Usually a rather stern fellow to outsides but a rather caring and charismatic figure to his men, Zay is type of person to be found out enjoying a drink with his men when possible but harsh and somewhat overbearing when it comes to issuing orders.Also very short tempered at times Zay has been known to threaten execution of friend and foe alike when directly disobeyed.

Weapons: four flintlock pistols, two French naval cutlasses, and on special occasions a musket rifle

Weaknesses (REQUIRED): Rather short tempered, vows to return to any place he'd ever suffered a great loss at for revenge

Ship Details (Captain only): The Tempest Eternal is a dual deck,two masted brig with a crew of 75. Armed with 10, 32 pound carronades, four on the first deck, four on the second deck, and two at fore, along with the 12 pound guns located on the aft. Fallowed by 6 swivel guns also located on fore and aft. While certain area's along the full have been patched with oak to provide extra armor, while at sea she proudly fly's British colors which at a moments notice can be hauled down to be replaced a skull and hour glass jolly roger.

A very good app, my friend. A few minor grammar and spelling mistakes, but otherwise accepted. Well done.

[Terripin Array]

No no. I like it. You control the west, crush the Spanish into dust. And I control the east, ending centuries of Chinese domination of Mongolia. Together the world is ours. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Guys, keep it in the Carribean. No world domination... Yet. Maybe in the sequal, if there is one. Am I clear?

[Puerto Tyranus]

*sigh* Fine...we'll have to conquer them first anyway.

[Terripin Array]

*sigh* Fine...we'll have to conquer them first anyway.

I like the idea, I really do. But for Stormy Waters, keep it in the Carribean. Okay?