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by Novia Soviet Socialist Republic » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:22 pm

by Neema » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:24 pm

by Confederated Southern States » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:26 pm

by Communist Androids » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:30 pm
Confederated Southern States wrote:Gal, expand Jamaal's app. Too short, unexplained, and needs another non-magical weakness. There is no magic here, no wizards and no gods.

by Galnius » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:35 pm
Communist Androids wrote:Galnius wrote:Mostly.
You're talking about Jamaal, yes? Because I don't think Jamaal was accepted. Mainly because 1.He isn't on the main list and 2.This:Confederated Southern States wrote:Gal, expand Jamaal's app. Too short, unexplained, and needs another non-magical weakness. There is no magic here, no wizards and no gods.

by Galnius » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:37 pm
Galnius wrote:Galnius wrote:Name: Jamaal Terent
Alias: Begeerte
Side: Good
Age: 17
Personality: Confused, reluctant hero, mute, likes to jump in head on
Powers: GIVEN BY A GOLDEN BRACELET....UNREMOVABLE
Super Strength
Flight
Bullet proof
Healing(when not in battle, and slow)
Bio: Jamaal is a normal high school school kid in Atlanta at the beginning. He is a sophomore, failed once, and is slacking heavily. He really wants to be known for something. He comes from a poor, Cajun family but he speaks mostly English. The bracelet however is much more interesting. It is an ancient artifact, some historians say from a different humanoid species, enthralled with desire. Many believe it to be cursed, others possessed, still more alien, and a small few believe it is the ultimate weapon. This bracelet has taken many forms over the millennium. It was a crown, an amulet, and a pendant as well. One person in the past who wore it was King Tut. He wanted to be remembered more than most Egyptian pharaohs. So, the bracelet granted his wish, ending his life early. We all know of the story when his tomb was found. Joan of Arc was also rumored to wear it. She wanted to be a great warrior. She was killed as a witch. Now, it doesn't always kill you. It will just turn your wish around and screw you over. This is why the bracelet will not let anyone find out Jamaal's identity. It pretty much will appear when finished with its previous wearer. It is usually random, and you CAN deny it. More IC.
Drawbacks(need them):
Short range
No form of communication save mental pictures
Literally cannot tell who he is
Bracelet will cover it's tracks, his identity is 100% unknown
Weak against light energy
Weak against undead/revived (if Grave was here say)
Weak against electricity
Appearance: WIP
Other: no
RP example (if you are new...say so, I am judge free)ewroilnkegyjmjn,mjhyu
I know it's a different app, but it may work for now hopefully

by Neema » Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:51 pm

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by Galnius » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:12 pm
Neema wrote:Could you please post Galnius?

by Neema » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:19 pm

by Terripin Array » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:24 pm

by Galnius » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:29 pm
I have two small problems with this. One, there seems to be a lot of semi-immortals and it is starting to get bland. The other, wanting to kill all rich men would make him a villain, just saying.Terripin Array wrote:Real Name: Thomas Orion
Nickname/Codename/Alias: Orion
Allegiance: Paragon
Gender: Male
Age: 182
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph): Orion has shoulder-length, salt-and-pepper hair that's usually pulled back in a low ponytail. He wears a black trench over a pair of faded blue jeans and a white t-shirt, along with cowboy boots and a black cowboy with the right side of the bill pinned to the crown and a feather in the band. Orion has pale green eyes and a trimmed mustache and goatee.
Personality: He is a country boy at heart. He has a deep respect for women that sometimes gets in the way of his goal of ridding Atlanta of corruption permenantly.
Personal History: Thomas Orion was born in New Orleans in 1841, the son of a wealthy plantationer who abused and negelcted his slaves. Orion, absoluting hating his father, started helping a local abolitionist smuggle slaves into the north when he was only thriteen. He continued doing this until the Civil War broke out in 1861, seven years later, where he joined the Union army to fight the Confederacy. At the Battle of Honey Springs in Oklahoma, Orion was mortally wounded by a shot to the chest. Only minutes later, his pulse stopped. Hours later, when a powerful storm passed through, a figure in a long black trench coat took his corpse away. A month later, Orion was seen in New Orleans walking the streets, his once tan skin a deathly pale and his once deep blue eyes an eerily pale green. Then, after every battle in the Civil War, Thomas Orion and the figure in black could be spotted, taking away select bodies; then a week later, those same men who were thought dead would be seen walking the streets of their hometowns, their skin pale and their eyes eery green. Thomas Orion was never seen again.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Powers -- Regenreation; Control of Lightning and Fire; Weapons -- dual .44 Magnums; hand-and-a-half sword;
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): He can only regenerate his health at night; His hate for his father has evolved into a hate for all rich men, whom he is now on a campaign to kill;
Any additional information we should know: Orion is immortal, meaning he will not die of old age. He can still die, but it has to be of artificial means; gunshot
wounds, stab wounds, etc.
RP sample (If this is your first, let us know): Relinquish
Did you thoroughly read the original post?: I did.
Character Summary (Optional):

by Neema » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:31 pm
Galnius wrote:I have two small problems with this. One, there seems to be a lot of semi-immortals and it is starting to get bland. The other, wanting to kill all rich men would make him a villain, just saying.Terripin Array wrote:Real Name: Thomas Orion
Nickname/Codename/Alias: Orion
Allegiance: Paragon
Gender: Male
Age: 182
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph): Orion has shoulder-length, salt-and-pepper hair that's usually pulled back in a low ponytail. He wears a black trench over a pair of faded blue jeans and a white t-shirt, along with cowboy boots and a black cowboy with the right side of the bill pinned to the crown and a feather in the band. Orion has pale green eyes and a trimmed mustache and goatee.
Personality: He is a country boy at heart. He has a deep respect for women that sometimes gets in the way of his goal of ridding Atlanta of corruption permenantly.
Personal History: Thomas Orion was born in New Orleans in 1841, the son of a wealthy plantationer who abused and negelcted his slaves. Orion, absoluting hating his father, started helping a local abolitionist smuggle slaves into the north when he was only thriteen. He continued doing this until the Civil War broke out in 1861, seven years later, where he joined the Union army to fight the Confederacy. At the Battle of Honey Springs in Oklahoma, Orion was mortally wounded by a shot to the chest. Only minutes later, his pulse stopped. Hours later, when a powerful storm passed through, a figure in a long black trench coat took his corpse away. A month later, Orion was seen in New Orleans walking the streets, his once tan skin a deathly pale and his once deep blue eyes an eerily pale green. Then, after every battle in the Civil War, Thomas Orion and the figure in black could be spotted, taking away select bodies; then a week later, those same men who were thought dead would be seen walking the streets of their hometowns, their skin pale and their eyes eery green. Thomas Orion was never seen again.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Powers -- Regenreation; Control of Lightning and Fire; Weapons -- dual .44 Magnums; hand-and-a-half sword;
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): He can only regenerate his health at night; His hate for his father has evolved into a hate for all rich men, whom he is now on a campaign to kill;
Any additional information we should know: Orion is immortal, meaning he will not die of old age. He can still die, but it has to be of artificial means; gunshot
wounds, stab wounds, etc.
RP sample (If this is your first, let us know): Relinquish
Did you thoroughly read the original post?: I did.
Character Summary (Optional):

by Terripin Array » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:47 pm

by Cadia » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:49 pm
Terripin Array wrote:Orion's technically dead. The 'figure in black' was supposed to be the Grimm Reaper, in case you didn't catch on. But, if you insist, I will edit the app.

by Terripin Array » Sun Sep 22, 2013 7:51 pm
Terripin Array wrote:Real Name: Thomas Orion
Nickname/Codename/Alias: Orion
Allegiance: Renegade
Gender: Male
Age: 182
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph): Orion has shoulder-length, salt-and-pepper hair that's usually pulled back in a low ponytail. He wears a black trench over a pair of faded blue jeans and a white t-shirt, along with cowboy boots and a black cowboy with the right side of the bill pinned to the crown and a feather in the band. Orion has pale green eyes and a trimmed mustache and goatee.
Personality: He is a country boy at heart. He has a deep respect for women that sometimes gets in the way of his goal of ridding Atlanta of corruption permenantly.
Personal History: Thomas Orion was born in New Orleans in 1841, the son of a wealthy plantationer who abused and negelcted his slaves. Orion, absoluting hating his father, started helping a local abolitionist smuggle slaves into the north when he was only thriteen. He continued doing this until the Civil War broke out in 1861, seven years later, where he joined the Union army to fight the Confederacy. At the Battle of Honey Springs in Oklahoma, Orion was mortally wounded by a shot to the chest. Only minutes later, his pulse stopped. Hours later, when a powerful storm passed through, a figure in a long black trench coat took his corpse away. A month later, Orion was seen in New Orleans walking the streets, his once tan skin a deathly pale and his once deep blue eyes an eerily pale green. Then, after every battle in the Civil War, Thomas Orion and the figure in black could be spotted, taking away select bodies; then a week later, those same men who were thought dead would be seen walking the streets of their hometowns, their skin pale and their eyes eery green. Thomas Orion was never seen again.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Powers -- Regenreation; Control of Lightning and Fire; Weapons -- dual .44 Magnums; hand-and-a-half sword;
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): He can only regenerate his health at night; His hate for his father has evolved into a hate for all rich men, whom he is now on a campaign to kill; he cannot feel pain, so he over-exerts himself to the point of 'mortal injury'
Any additional information we should know: Orion is dead by default, meaning he has no pulse or heartbeat.
RP sample (If this is your first, let us know): Relinquish
Did you thoroughly read the original post?: I did.
Character Summary (Optional):

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