Resurgence (Superhero RP/Closed)

[Galnius]

Hmm.
Well, that was quick.

Electrokinesis AND Umbrakinesis (Shadow manipulation falls under this) together is OP in any form, no matter the weaknesses

Well, Novia didn't seem to think so in his RP.

Electricity and Shadow Manipulation are kinda far apart on the manipulation spectrum aren't they, seeing as light typically counters darkness and the same for the reverse?

EDIT: What Galnius said, picking one might be easier.

Mmm. Maybe he'll have a lesser power instead of that shadow one.
How about Flash Step?

That is much more understandable.

[Caecuser]

Hmm.
Well, that was quick.



Well, Novia didn't seem to think so in his RP.



Mmm. Maybe he'll have a lesser power instead of that shadow one.
How about Flash Step?

That is much more understandable.

Agreed, it even makes sense with Electricity Manipulation.

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Hmm.
Well, that was quick.

Electrokinesis AND Umbrakinesis (Shadow manipulation falls under this) together is OP in any form, no matter the weaknesses

Well, Novia didn't seem to think so in his RP.

Electricity and Shadow Manipulation are kinda far apart on the manipulation spectrum aren't they, seeing as light typically counters darkness and the same for the reverse?

EDIT: What Galnius said, picking one might be easier.

Mmm. Maybe he'll have a lesser power instead of that shadow one.
How about Flash Step?

It isn't overpowered on my RP because there are plenty of ways to counter them. For instance Umbrakinesis wouldn't work on Oleg as a character in his Demon form because he's basically a fireball which gives off light.

[Videssos]

May as well try and use another character, I guess. Since the last one ended at an impasse.

Real Name: Aleksander Dmitrievich Novakovsky
Nickname/Codename/Alias: The Black Reaper
Allegiance: Himself, and an organisation named Inferno.
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph):

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Personality: Unless he is firmly persuaded otherwise, he can give a mule lessons in stubbornness. He tempers his sometimes hot-tempered and acting-without-thinking attitude, with caution when he can. In his younger years, he had a taste for pranks, and often accompanied some more rebellious friends of his to do certain things. He can be quite capable and level-headed when faced with challenges, and is a fast learner. He possess a dark sense of humour. Generally a cold killer, and when that part of him is revealed, he can be surprisingly brutal and efficient in his area of expertise. And at other times, he can be quite charming and polite. On another note; he's naturally somewhat uncomfortable around women. On another note, I decided to throw a bit of a certain character from Naruto's personality, in there. Has a split personality, obviously. You do the math. One of those personalities is cold, sadistic and ruthless, believing only in himself, and that the only way to justify his own existence is by killing others so he doesn't fade away. Another, not quite so much. At times, he can be as manipulative and intelligent as Izaya from Durarara.
Personal History: Born in Novosibirsk, Russia, Aleksander had little inkling of what was to come as he grew up, as a member of a fairly well-to-do family, his father a Lieutenant Colonel in the Russian military, whilst his mother was from a noble family in England. Even at an early age, others recognised that he would be a genius. He was a once-in-a-generation prodigy, and thus, had those who admired him, and those who were jealous of him. Though he did well at school, his childhood was rather complicated, and had elements both good and bad in nature, including some people trying to bully him for his looks, his family's wealth, reputation, and various other reasons. Aleksandr also had some darker elements, many of which are best left unsaid. He joined the Russian armed forces as soon as he could, and found himself qualifying as a member of the Spetsnaz, as one of the younger ones to have joined, though not the youngest. His comrades lauded him as one of the best fighters among them, and he went on missions involving stealth, as he found he has an aptitude for such things, especially at night-time operations, when he took measures to keep his powers well hidden. He's also a crack shot with a gun and skilled at using close-combat weapons and unarmed combat. One mission went not so well, and as things go, it was during that time that the darker personality became fully formed. Said mission had its details put under heavy security, and little more was known other than that things didn't go as planned, and there was lots of bloodshed. It also changed the way Aleksander viewed the world, and how he saw others. (Kinda complicated, and significant, so the details are deliberately vague).

He also excelled at other areas of Spetsnaz training. When Spetsnaz GRU faced a mysterious incident, involving the death of a few members of the organization, in an undercover operation in a European country, at around the time the event happened, Aleksander was found to be at the forefront of the incident. Under suspicion and investigation as he was; he decided that lingering in the force was no longer an agreeable position for him. Soon thereafter, he failed to report back in, officially "MIA", since only the remains of his comrades were found, and not him, and remained on the move for some time, often from one country to another, as a mercenary, hit-man, and general go-to person when certain individuals with money want certain people dead. He managed to rack up quite the reputation in the 'underground'. He continued doing so, until certain individuals belonging to a secretive criminal organisation contacted him, and he ended up in theirs employ for a longer period than most clients he dealt with. He now serves as a person to go to, when the organisation "wants people dealt with", and despite being a little young, displays a bit of a ruthless streak. It also seems he has his own agenda, and plan, however that remains yet to be revealed.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Peak Human Condition, Electricity Manipulation. Flash Step. As for weapons, several Spetsnaz ballistic knives, an FSB "Anti-terror" combat knife, twin-wristblades, RGN hand-grenades, AS Val assault rifle , VSS Vintorez sniper rifle, and OTs-33 Pernach Machine Pistol. Also has a bulletproof black trenchcoat because it's badass, and a wire with a carbiner attached.
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): Electricity can encounter resistant materials, and water tends to make it hard to control and potentially dangerous. Once more, women. A few other things I may think up of.
Any additional information we should know: Dunno.
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Well, I changed Shadow Manipulation to Flash Step.

[Lorant]

Real Name: Ramses Abaza
Nickname/Codename/Alias: Aten
Allegiance: None, as he fights whoever tries to steal the treasures of Egypt.
Gender: M
Age: 200
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph):

Personality: He is cold and distant from those who he does not know very well, but he is very protective of those who are his friends.
Personal History: Ramses was born two-hundred years ago, and lived a fairly normal life. His parents were archeologists, and they taught him all about Egypt's great past. When he grew up, he too became an archeologist, and worked alongside his parents learning about all that could be learned of ancient Egypt.

Ramses and his family had been recruited to help in a large-scale excavation that would uncover an ancient, hidden tomb made of a pure, purple diamond. It was unknown what it was or what they would find on the inside, but they were determined to get through. During the final night of excavation, a group of grave robbers attacked the team, killing everyone, including Ramses' family. He was somehow able to survive, and he took shelter in a hidden cavern in the room.

After they left, he blacked out, and didn't wake up for three days. When he woke up, he was inside the tomb, a large mummy sitting on a throne made of the same purple mineral that the tomb was. It looked at him, staring deep into his soul. Ramses was frightened, until he saw the Egyptian Gods around the throne. They all entered the mummy, and the mummy spoke with all of their voices.

"Who are you, and what do you want." it asked.
"I am Ramses Abaza," Ramses replied, scared, "and I am simply here to learn about our past."

Ramses told it about what had happened just outside, and the Mummy possessed by the Gods sighed, stating that the treasures of Egypt were being stolen at an increasing rate. It said that without protection, Egypt would lose all it held dear. Ramses offered to become the Guardian of the Treasures. When he agreed to do this, the Mummy reached out to him, and told him to take the Aten, wear it with pride, and to protect Egypt's past.

The next thing Ramses knew, he was back in his home.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Mummy Physiology, resistance to snake, spider and scorpion venom. He can extend his 'bandages' similar to the way Mr. Fantastic can extend his... well... everything..
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): Water when in his Mummy Form, anything that can kill a human in his human form. Christian, Muslim, Jewish or Roman magic. Fire magic. The Black Spot, a special ritual that would destroy him. Fish venom (any kind of venomous fish will do). Frog venom.
Any additional information we should know: He often sides with the Paragons, but if the Treasures of Egypt are in danger because of them, he will not hesitate to fight.
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Character Summary (Optional): Basically he's a mummy.

[Videssos]

Also, there's this guy:

Real Name: Suigetsu Asakura
Nickname/Codename/Alias: The Winter Knight
Allegiance: Himself, basically.
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph):

Personality: He is something of a pragmatic person. Extremely intelligent, he can decipher the true natures of people. However, he seldom holds regard for the feelings of others, and ends up hurting some of them due to his nature of being frank and direct, yet at the same time, cautious, wary and generally distrusting of others. He tends to be quite and sometimes unemotional when dealing with other people. Some might even say paranoid. He tends to like thinking things through, being uncomfortable with being forced to act prematurely. He tends to be quiet and sometimes unemotional when dealing with other people, and at other times, rather aggressive and outspoken.

He is rather odd at times. Said oddness is apparent in the variety of different personalities he seems to have. His darker, more animal-like side can be quite predatory in nature, when baser instincts and emotions have more sway over him. Sometimes he can be brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent and possessing of a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he can possess a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him, unless they tie in with things he's come to fear in life. He possesses both a superiority complex and an inferiority complex. He sometimes considers most other people weaker, and beneath him. He treats them as you might expect, yet when he believes others to be stronger- a rare thing indeed, or they have proven themselves to be stronger, Suigetsu obsesses over them, wanting to become as strong as them, yet also seeming fanatical towards them, and perhaps as scared of them. And he can often be a far cry from disdainful, being rather the opposite on other occasions. On the rare occasion, an older self of his can appear, which seems friendly, cheerful, good-natured, and tends to acts very carefree, masking many of his real feelings with a smile. Suigetsu is often emotionally distant, refusing to allow anyone to become too close to him.

He is extremely talented, and uses his skills to good use. He tends to act reserved with his feelings, making him seem like an extremely mysterious person. He tends to stay away from other people. It's clear that numerous factors contributed in that part of his personality, often including his past. On another note, one could, like with most of my characters, consider a weakness of his to be women.
Personal History: Suigetsu born into a fairly rich family, his father from Japan, and his mother from Sweden. One of his ancestors on the Swedish side, happened to be relatively famous fortune teller, among other things. Some branches of his family even has relations to certain well known historical figures in England, Scotland and Ireland, and a few other countries; two notable Swedish ancestors of his being of course, Ulrika Arfviddson, and at another point, Johannes Bureus. A number of his family members are occultists, including his parents and siblings. Much of his family had already had an obsession with mystical, and occult things- also having been initiated into certain forms of paganism, so it was not hard to make the decision for him delve into the things he did. He is surprisingly knowledgeable about a considerable number of things, primarily of occult and historical nature. Though also things as diverse as metal, and anime. Some of the reasons being that he desired more knowledge and power. He is quite knowledgeable in most areas, and his fascination with conflict also lent him a proficiency with some weapons as soon as he as able to delve into that kind of area. Suigetsu has also managed to become adept in certain martial arts due to lessons he took tempered with some experience. He is also fairly good at drawing and playing several instruments, from guitar to drums, keyboard, and accordion among various other things. Suigetsu learnt a considerable deal from some relatives and people he knows, and even studied a little under Thomas Karlsson; the head of the Dragon Rouge (A left hand path and Draconian Tradition Order), who is also known as the lyricist for the Swedish symphonic metal Therion, and the vocalist for symphonic death metal band Shadowseeds, and also met members of Onmyouza, and Yousei Teikoku.

Suigetsu has been through all kinds of little adventures despite his relatively young age, and many of them, strange or less so, are too numerous to list here. Many people saw him differently, and this contributed to his becoming detached from most other people. The deaths of two of his friends also contributed, as well as that of his parents. Despite having a fairly prestigious family, some elements of his childhood weren't so easy, and to put it simply; things were quite complicated. Now, he seems to be doing fairly well in life, and has attained somewhat of a reputation, mainly for his good looks and outwardly charming nature, and plans for certain eventualities regarding his path in life. He regularly listens to bands like Therion, Theatre of Tragedy, Echoes of Eternity, and Turisas, among many others. He is in several organizations such as Dragon Rouge, Ordo Templi Orientis, Illuminates of Thanateros, TOPY , the Temple of Set, and OSOGD. He doesn't consider himself an advanced student, but has studied studied Aikido, Wing Chun, Jujitsu, Kali, Savate, Krav Maga, Tae Kwan Do, Judo, Boxing, and Shaolin Kung Fu, over time, and so he isn't completely helpless when it comes to self defence, though he isn't a master of unarmed combat, either. His older cousin is in the Särskilda Operationsgruppen (Special Operations Task Group, SOG), of the Swedish Armed Forces, and taught him a few things when it came to certain military matters. He made a deal with a powerful being of the Fae Winter Court, the Queen of Winter- also known as the Queen of Air and Darkness, Mab, and he had certain power invested upon him. That of the mantle of Winter Knight, and he knows that soon he shall have to tend to his duties as required when and where by the one whom he serves, and that his deal for power may prove to be more than he bargained for.
He was mainly chosen due to his potential, and the fact that the previous Winter Knight had gotten into trouble for betraying the one he served, the result of which was a fate worse than death. Said goings on naturally making Suigetsu somewhat cautious. He has travelled to various parts of the world, and despite some of the less profitable experiences, he has gathered some knowledge in fighting. He has vaguely hinted at having a hand in a large number of mysterious disappearances and deaths in some parts of Japan, and later on the rest of the world. Likely due to his unusual tendencies.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Winter/Ice Manipulation. Supernatural regeneration/reforming. Supernatural Condition. And weapons, two .45 automags, and a katana, because he's a close combat guy.
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): Extreme Fire/heat-based stuff, obviously. His powers can be negated by use of iron, since that's the main weakness of Fae, who were the source of his power. Supernatural fire, since normal fire can be negated easily by Fae ice, unless it's overwhelmingly intense by comparison. Also, see personality.
Any additional information we should know: Dunno. He's a slightly revamped more Japanese version of the guy that got accepted in CYOS 3.
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[Confederated Southern States]

*Snip*

*Sigh*

You're outta your league. I advise returning once you've learned the ropes.

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Also, there's this guy:

Real Name: Suigetsu Asakura
Nickname/Codename/Alias: The Winter Knight
Allegiance: Himself, basically.
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Appearance (In and out of costume; pictures or paragraph):

(Image)(Image)(Image)(Image)(Image)(Image)

Personality: He is something of a pragmatic person. Extremely intelligent, he can decipher the true natures of people. However, he seldom holds regard for the feelings of others, and ends up hurting some of them due to his nature of being frank and direct, yet at the same time, cautious, wary and generally distrusting of others. He tends to be quite and sometimes unemotional when dealing with other people. Some might even say paranoid. He tends to like thinking things through, being uncomfortable with being forced to act prematurely. He tends to be quiet and sometimes unemotional when dealing with other people, and at other times, rather aggressive and outspoken.

He is rather odd at times. Said oddness is apparent in the variety of different personalities he seems to have. His darker, more animal-like side can be quite predatory in nature, when baser instincts and emotions have more sway over him. Sometimes he can be brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent and possessing of a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he can possess a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him, unless they tie in with things he's come to fear in life. He possesses both a superiority complex and an inferiority complex. He sometimes considers most other people weaker, and beneath him. He treats them as you might expect, yet when he believes others to be stronger- a rare thing indeed, or they have proven themselves to be stronger, Suigetsu obsesses over them, wanting to become as strong as them, yet also seeming fanatical towards them, and perhaps as scared of them. And he can often be a far cry from disdainful, being rather the opposite on other occasions. On the rare occasion, an older self of his can appear, which seems friendly, cheerful, good-natured, and tends to acts very carefree, masking many of his real feelings with a smile. Suigetsu is often emotionally distant, refusing to allow anyone to become too close to him.

He is extremely talented, and uses his skills to good use. He tends to act reserved with his feelings, making him seem like an extremely mysterious person. He tends to stay away from other people. It's clear that numerous factors contributed in that part of his personality, often including his past. On another note, one could, like with most of my characters, consider a weakness of his to be women.
Personal History: Suigetsu born into a fairly rich family, his father from Japan, and his mother from Sweden. One of his ancestors on the Swedish side, happened to be relatively famous fortune teller, among other things. Some branches of his family even has relations to certain well known historical figures in England, Scotland and Ireland, and a few other countries; two notable Swedish ancestors of his being of course, Ulrika Arfviddson, and at another point, Johannes Bureus. A number of his family members are occultists, including his parents and siblings. Much of his family had already had an obsession with mystical, and occult things- also having been initiated into certain forms of paganism, so it was not hard to make the decision for him delve into the things he did. He is surprisingly knowledgeable about a considerable number of things, primarily of occult and historical nature. Though also things as diverse as metal, and anime. Some of the reasons being that he desired more knowledge and power. He is quite knowledgeable in most areas, and his fascination with conflict also lent him a proficiency with some weapons as soon as he as able to delve into that kind of area. Suigetsu has also managed to become adept in certain martial arts due to lessons he took tempered with some experience. He is also fairly good at drawing and playing several instruments, from guitar to drums, keyboard, and accordion among various other things. Suigetsu learnt a considerable deal from some relatives and people he knows, and even studied a little under Thomas Karlsson; the head of the Dragon Rouge (A left hand path and Draconian Tradition Order), who is also known as the lyricist for the Swedish symphonic metal Therion, and the vocalist for symphonic death metal band Shadowseeds, and also met members of Onmyouza, and Yousei Teikoku.

Suigetsu has been through all kinds of little adventures despite his relatively young age, and many of them, strange or less so, are too numerous to list here. Many people saw him differently, and this contributed to his becoming detached from most other people. The deaths of two of his friends also contributed, as well as that of his parents. Despite having a fairly prestigious family, some elements of his childhood weren't so easy, and to put it simply; things were quite complicated. Now, he seems to be doing fairly well in life, and has attained somewhat of a reputation, mainly for his good looks and outwardly charming nature, and plans for certain eventualities regarding his path in life. He regularly listens to bands like Therion, Theatre of Tragedy, Echoes of Eternity, and Turisas, among many others. He is in several organizations such as Dragon Rouge, Ordo Templi Orientis, Illuminates of Thanateros, TOPY , the Temple of Set, and OSOGD. He doesn't consider himself an advanced student, but has studied studied Aikido, Wing Chun, Jujitsu, Kali, Savate, Krav Maga, Tae Kwan Do, Judo, Boxing, and Shaolin Kung Fu, over time, and so he isn't completely helpless when it comes to self defence, though he isn't a master of unarmed combat, either. His older cousin is in the Särskilda Operationsgruppen (Special Operations Task Group, SOG), of the Swedish Armed Forces, and taught him a few things when it came to certain military matters. He made a deal with a powerful being of the Fae Winter Court, the Queen of Winter- also known as the Queen of Air and Darkness, Mab, and he had certain power invested upon him. That of the mantle of Winter Knight, and he knows that soon he shall have to tend to his duties as required when and where by the one whom he serves, and that his deal for power may prove to be more than he bargained for.
He was mainly chosen due to his potential, and the fact that the previous Winter Knight had gotten into trouble for betraying the one he served, the result of which was a fate worse than death. Said goings on naturally making Suigetsu somewhat cautious. He has travelled to various parts of the world, and despite some of the less profitable experiences, he has gathered some knowledge in fighting. He has vaguely hinted at having a hand in a large number of mysterious disappearances and deaths in some parts of Japan, and later on the rest of the world. Likely due to his unusual tendencies.
Powers, Weapons, Ect. (Be reasonable): Winter/Ice Manipulation. Supernatural regeneration/reforming. Supernatural Condition. And weapons, two .45 automags, and a katana, because he's a close combat guy.
Weaknesses (REQUIRED): Extreme Fire/heat-based stuff, obviously. His powers can be negated by use of iron, since that's the main weakness of Fae, who were the source of his power. Supernatural fire, since normal fire can be negated easily by Fae ice, unless it's overwhelmingly intense by comparison. Also, see personality.
Any additional information we should know: Dunno. He's a slightly revamped more Japanese version of the guy that got accepted in CYOS 3.
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Good choice on the Ice Manipulation. It's really versatile

[Videssos]

Good choice on the Ice Manipulation. It's really versatile

Indeed. And he kinda needs that power, with his name 'n all.

[Caecuser]

*Snip*

*Sigh*

You're outta your league. I advise returning once you've learned the ropes.

I didn't take a very close look, but what's wrong with it


Vid, the only problem I have with that last guy is the Healing Factor - really, it seems like one in two or three characters has it.

[Novia Soviet Socialist Republic]

Good choice on the Ice Manipulation. It's really versatile

Indeed. And he kinda needs that power, with his name 'n all.

I used the power on Sylvan Academy. You can accelerate Ice Shards at bullet speed, make armor and swords and all sorts. Useful c:

[Confederated Southern States]

*Sigh*

You're outta your league. I advise returning once you've learned the ropes.

I didn't take a very close look, but what's wrong with it?

Simple; not well written. I reserve the right to reject such apps.

[Caecuser]

I didn't take a very close look, but what's wrong with it?

Simple; not well written. I reserve the right to reject such apps.

Well, of course. I was just curious.

[Videssos]

*Sigh*

You're outta your league. I advise returning once you've learned the ropes.

I didn't take a very close look, but what's wrong with it


Vid, the only problem I have with that last guy is the Healing Factor - really, it seems like one in two or three characters has it.

I think the regeneration thing is mainly ice/water based, since he's probably gonna get hurt at some point or another, and he will probably end up needing it. If he comes across interesting characters in battle, of course.

[Caecuser]

Hey Warp Aslyum, could you edit into your most recent post one of your guys stumbling upon the destroyed van / bloody corpses just right outside of Atlanta?

[Confederated Southern States]

Waiting, Cadia...

[Siliarba]

Yeah Comm Android, my character really is full of himself to the point that he talks about himself in the third person to the point of it becoming obnoxious .

[Warp Asylum]

Hey Warp Aslyum, could you edit into your most recent post one of your guys stumbling upon the destroyed van / bloody corpses just right outside of Atlanta?

Done. Is that good, or should I add more?

[Communist Androids]

Yeah Comm Android, my character really is full of himself to the point that he talks about himself in the third person to the point of it becoming obnoxious .

Yeah, at first I was like "Oh, that's cool."

Now, not so much.

[Siliarba]

Yeah Comm Android, my character really is full of himself to the point that he talks about himself in the third person to the point of it becoming obnoxious .

Yeah, at first I was like "Oh, that's cool."

Now, not so much.

It's also a case where I have never actually done that before, so it's difficult to find the balance between talking about himself in third person and when not. It should improve as time passes and I grow a better feel for it.

[Caecuser]

Hey Warp Aslyum, could you edit into your most recent post one of your guys stumbling upon the destroyed van / bloody corpses just right outside of Atlanta?

Done. Is that good, or should I add more?

That's fine for now - just to give us an excuse to have my character meet yours pretty soon. You can add some more if you want but I'm not fussy.

[Communist Androids]

Yeah, at first I was like "Oh, that's cool."

Now, not so much.

It's also a case where I have never actually done that before, so it's difficult to find the balance between talking about himself in third person and when not. It should improve as time passes and I grow a better feel for it.

Yeah, my main issue is that I just find talking about yourself in the third person irritating. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

[Siliarba]

It's also a case where I have never actually done that before, so it's difficult to find the balance between talking about himself in third person and when not. It should improve as time passes and I grow a better feel for it.

Yeah, my main issue is that I just find talking about yourself in the third person irritating. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

Ye, he is meant to do it because he is full of himself, but I feel like I'm overdoing it a bit now so will probably tone down a bit.

[Communist Androids]

Yeah, my main issue is that I just find talking about yourself in the third person irritating. Otherwise, it's pretty good.

Ye, he is meant to do it because he is full of himself, but I feel like I'm overdoing it a bit now so will probably tone down a bit.

Yay, I won't have to hate him! That's always fun.

[Siliarba]

Ye, he is meant to do it because he is full of himself, but I feel like I'm overdoing it a bit now so will probably tone down a bit.

Yay, I won't have to hate him! That's always fun.