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Yes. Thanks. May I treat you to a romantic dinner?
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No. I don't want to improve my gaming experience and thus I'm selecting this option because you've pretty much boxed me in to it. I know I don't actually have to select anything anyway but I'm compelled to cast a vote. I know I can go to viewtopic.php?f=31&t=268404 if I really wanted to voice my opinion.
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Postby Urran » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:10 pm

The BranRiech wrote:Who's talking about what-it-y-what?

Back from school.


Should Jacob help Dora or Yoshi?
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Postby The BranRiech » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:15 pm

Urran wrote:
The BranRiech wrote:Who's talking about what-it-y-what?

Back from school.


Should Jacob help Dora or Yoshi?

Hmm, who's injured more?

Isn't Katya already assisting Yoshi?

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Postby Urran » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:16 pm

Dora's injured but doesn't care and yes, Katya is with her lover.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:26 pm

OK, let's see here. Looking at all the factors...

Dora
-Physical injuries.
-Doesn't need Jacob's help, but that doesn't mean she wouldn't enjoy his company while she's in clinic.

Yoshi
-PTSD
-May or may not need Jacob's help, as Katya is there. Does Yoshi consider Katya's presence enough? Will he think Jacob is intruding? (Probably not, but still.) Will he open up more about his actual death scene while Katya and possibly Jacob are there?

Jacob
-Is he more of a traditionalist/romantic? Ladies first, etc.? Or does he go for friends first, everyone else second?

Misc Game Details (Mechanics, Other Chars)
-Clinic. Scene shouldn't extend too far, per Swith's request. This is also why I haven't had Dora reply to Rylli. Furthermore there's potential interaction and opportunity for developing Dora/Jacob/Ogoti, when Ceril gets online.
-Wherever Yoshi and Katya are. It'd give NA, Cliff, and Torsi something to do right now, since they're all online and the scene isn't frozen. It could throw off Yoshi and Katya developing as a couple, but it could also give opportunity for character development among Yoshi, Katya, and Jacob, as detailed above.


It's not much, but that's the first few things I think of, off the top of my head. Or even, the scene could be run as Jacob wondering about what to do, Dora saying she wouldn't mind if he left, and then him going to Yoshi and Katya, if that's all right with everybody. Anything goes.

Urran wrote:Dora's injured but doesn't care and yes, Katya is with her lover.


Which one? :p
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Postby The BranRiech » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:29 pm

So if Dora, Jacob, and Ogoti are going to interact, where do I fit into that? I won't get abandoned, right?

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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:32 pm

Merp.
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Postby Urran » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:33 pm

The BranRiech wrote:So if Dora, Jacob, and Ogoti are going to interact, where do I fit into that? I won't get abandoned, right?


we'll ditch you on a dark road in the middle of a badger infested wood.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:35 pm

Urran wrote:
The BranRiech wrote:So if Dora, Jacob, and Ogoti are going to interact, where do I fit into that? I won't get abandoned, right?


we'll ditch you on a dark road in the middle of a badger infested wood.


No one likes it when I'm serious. Cliff doesn't like it when I'm being funny, either.

I feel so underappreciated. :rofl:
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Postby The BranRiech » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:36 pm

It's alright!

I feel the need to be worried about that, sorry.

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Postby Urran » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:36 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
No one likes it when I'm serious. Cliff doesn't like it when I'm being funny, either.

I feel so underappreciated. :rofl:



I just don't like you in general :p
jk jk

her favorite lover :p
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I <3 James May

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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:42 pm

Hrm...

Well, it depends where Yoshi and Katya are. If Jacob sees that Katya's doing fine comforting Yoshi, he'd stay with Dora. I actually think if he stayed would be more interesting, since he has interacted with Dora nad Ogoti, but not really both together.....*shrugs*

He's very loyal to his friends, and... well, he would want to help Yoshi since his friend's been through a lot.

meh.... Well, I think I would prefer if he stayed with Dora, but his personality would make him very conflicted on who to help out first....


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Postby Urran » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:44 pm

New Aksarben wrote:Hrm...

Well, it depends where Yoshi and Katya are. If Jacob sees that Katya's doing fine comforting Yoshi, he'd stay with Dora. I actually think if he stayed would be more interesting, since he has interacted with Dora nad Ogoti, but not really both together.....*shrugs*

He's very loyal to his friends, and... well, he would want to help Yoshi since his friend's been through a lot.

meh.... Well, I think I would prefer if he stayed with Dora, but his personality would make him very conflicted on who to help out first....


@Urran: Which is her favorite? She's never said!


She's said it at least twice that she loves him the most....Torsie has anyway
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:45 pm

Urran wrote:I just don't like you in general :p
jk jk

her favorite lover :p


I got durian for you! >.>

:p

New Aksarben wrote:Hrm...

Well, it depends where Yoshi and Katya are. If Jacob sees that Katya's doing fine comforting Yoshi, he'd stay with Dora. I actually think if he stayed would be more interesting, since he has interacted with Dora nad Ogoti, but not really both together.....*shrugs*

He's very loyal to his friends, and... well, he would want to help Yoshi since his friend's been through a lot.

meh.... Well, I think I would prefer if he stayed with Dora, but his personality would make him very conflicted on who to help out first....


@Urran: Which is her favorite? She's never said!


Alrighty. No problem, then. I'll roll with either; if Jacob goes to Dora, I'll throw in a reply to Rylli.
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Postby The BranRiech » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:45 pm

Whatever works.

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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:48 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
Urran wrote:I just don't like you in general :p
jk jk

her favorite lover :p


I got durian for you! >.>

:p

New Aksarben wrote:Hrm...

Well, it depends where Yoshi and Katya are. If Jacob sees that Katya's doing fine comforting Yoshi, he'd stay with Dora. I actually think if he stayed would be more interesting, since he has interacted with Dora nad Ogoti, but not really both together.....*shrugs*

He's very loyal to his friends, and... well, he would want to help Yoshi since his friend's been through a lot.

meh.... Well, I think I would prefer if he stayed with Dora, but his personality would make him very conflicted on who to help out first....


@Urran: Which is her favorite? She's never said!


Alrighty. No problem, then. I'll roll with either; if Jacob goes to Dora, I'll throw in a reply to Rylli.

awesome. Gonna eat some pudding and watch some Youtube first! I skipped lunch again today, so I'm pretty hungry.....

Also, I think Bran would be interested in this!
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Postby Giovenith » Thu Sep 12, 2013 2:49 pm

'Eylloo! Sorry I have hectic internet. Will reply soon.

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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Sep 12, 2013 3:11 pm

Giovenith wrote:'Eylloo! Sorry I have hectic internet. Will reply soon.

Also, Naomi and Tipper meeting... CUTNESS OVERLOADING!!


Hi Gio. *offers penguin*

Back later.
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Postby Chibi Vampires » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:08 pm

hello.

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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:09 pm

Dragonic Outland wrote:Your Nation's Nickname: Dragonic Outland

Character Name (can be different than nation name): Virgo

URL to Character Picture or a few sentences about what they look like: Virgo

Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Human

Character Powers/Special Abilities (if any): Virgo is able to absorb luck from others and yet, able to bestow others luck. Technically being both a luck theft and a living luck charm may sound ironic, but that is what Virgo is. The most common effect shown is to either cause a person to lose a considerable sum of money in a gambling facility or evading the falling bird poop from above.

Character Weaknesses/Flaws: Virgo often keeps her dissatisfaction of others to herself, often appearing as a forgiving young lady. However, her displeasure of others will slowly build up. When her tolerance level had reached the limit, any further provocation will cause she to explode, leading to a "sudden" outburst of anger.

Character Background: Born into a wealthy family, Virgo has always lived a pampered life. As expected since there is no such thing as a free lunch in this world, her parents always had high expectations of her. She had to undergo massive tuitions to increase her knowledge and understanding in academic subjects. After years of hardwork and some luck splashed here and there, she graduated from a reputable university at the young age of 16. Now, Virgo decided that she should a break from all the stress she had accumulated throughout her education journey and travelled to Bielefield where she had rented a comfortable apartment in The Building situated in 42nd Subabsurdus Street, Bielefeld.

Additional Notes: Not Applicable

URL to Apartment Picture: Apartment

Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP itself. If you don't have examples, make your biography good.) Will provide more if required

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: Virgo is a wealthy young lady who had an extensive education journey. She mostly keeps her feelings to herself and would rarely express her personal opinions on any particular thing. Also, Lady Luck is smiling upon her.

Approved. I'll add it the tabs. The best way to enter the story at this point is to have a cab take her to the building, lobby. It would have taken a long highway and then gone through some residential streets because the main street (Market Street) just experienced a bomb. Nearly everyone is standing in the lobby. The rest of the area is pitch dark and without power. The building, however... is alive and provides it's own power.

The outside of the building and the lobby are whatever your character envisions as being "the perfect place". There are fixtures which are always present: a bench, an old-fashioned (1940's era) phone booth, a reception desk, a slot on the wall for rent payments, comfortable chairs, and a flight of stairs that leads up to the main floor (1st floor) where the communal kitchen, dining room and rec room are. The lobby contains several doors other than the main entrance. One is market Bomb Shelter (leads down to a private apartment), one is marked Chaos Quarters (leads down to private quarters), one is an access door for the maintenance areas, and one is marked Clinic.

There still should be characters in the lobby who can get a lease application for your character and give her a key to her apartment. The key is what transforms the character's apartment into whatever she most desires.
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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:16 pm

Giovenith wrote:'Eylloo! Sorry I have hectic internet. Will reply soon.

Also, Naomi and Tipper meeting... CUTNESS OVERLOADING!!

It had to be done. The planets were in alignment, and Mars was eclipsing Jupiter! Impossible? Miracle!



NA... for Jacob? Don't let infatuation get the better of your characters. We're chin thick in relationships right now, and relationship drama is pulling characters out of circulation.

As a player, this is what I suggest: let Jacob develop. He can't go the way of Albert. Unless he's just looking to get laid that night, or if you're having the indecision be because of jealousy. That's advice for the character.

Dora appears fine except for some glass. Rylli looks miserable and is in pain. Jacob could comfort Rylli or he could go to his friend who is emotionally crumbling.

Cer asked Gio to comfort Yoshi. His character saw where Gio was having a weak moment, and he's trying to get her to refocus. Yoshi had called out to her before when he died. It makes sense. Urran and Torsi, please don't write Gio out of that scene for sake of drama. This is a character development moment for all three (Yoshi has a chance to overcome, Gio has a chance to expand her experiences in dealing with hardship and grief, and Katya has a chance to not only interact with Gio and Jacob, but also because she was strong in the bar (crying privately) and can be a solid source of strength to both characters.) Jacob, too, can contribute to the strength. He's friendly with both Gio and Yoshi so his added comfort would take half the burden from Katya.
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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:29 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
Giovenith wrote:'Eylloo! Sorry I have hectic internet. Will reply soon.

Also, Naomi and Tipper meeting... CUTNESS OVERLOADING!!

It had to be done. The planets were in alignment, and Mars was eclipsing Jupiter! Impossible? Miracle!



NA... for Jacob? Don't let infatuation get the better of your characters. We're chin thick in relationships right now, and relationship drama is pulling characters out of circulation.

As a player, this is what I suggest: let Jacob develop. He can't go the way of Albert. Unless he's just looking to get laid that night, or if you're having the indecision be because of jealousy. That's advice for the character.

Dora appears fine except for some glass. Rylli looks miserable and is in pain. Jacob could comfort Rylli or he could go to his friend who is emotionally crumbling.

Cer asked Gio to comfort Yoshi. His character saw where Gio was having a weak moment, and he's trying to get her to refocus. Yoshi had called out to her before when he died. It makes sense. Urran and Torsi, please don't write Gio out of that scene for sake of drama. This is a character development moment for all three (Yoshi has a chance to overcome, Gio has a chance to expand her experiences in dealing with hardship and grief, and Katya has a chance to not only interact with Gio and Jacob, but also because she was strong in the bar (crying privately) and can be a solid source of strength to both characters.) Jacob, too, can contribute to the strength. He's friendly with both Gio and Yoshi so his added comfort would take half the burden from Katya.

Well, yeah. I won't let him get as absorbed as Albert has, but yeah. He'll talk with Rylli and Dora while they wait for someone to help with them, because when I've been hurt it really helps to be distracted with conversation to get my mind off of it.. I'm assuming the same sort of thing should work for them....

The indecision is partially because he wants to help Yoshi, but he doesn't want to get between him and Katya, honestly, or be rude by interrupting. So he'll talk with Rylli and Dora to help them instead.... plus, if Gio, JAcob and Katya help Yoshi, it might overwhelm Urran. I don't want that to happen cause he's still learning to rp

I have trouble developing Jacob because his interests are things that generally have him secluded, like reading and learning about things. He's interested in Dora(as a secondary reason) because she's from ancient Greece, so she can tell him about it possibly. Much of the history from that far back was lost in his universe, and he's always been very curious what the world was like in his universe before Rome dominated it.

Albert's different because many of his interests involve violence and fighting, and there's not many opportunities for him to do that separately from Ray..... I might have him decide to accept the city's offer to help, but I'm still wondering if its technically getting help from a foreign government seeing as he's a personification. but if that's not an issue, I'd like him to be able to help out in the city, because then he could get out more.... and I just remembered that island thing for characters that have violent tendency or interests but I can't really remember many other details besides that.
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Postby Swith Witherward » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:44 pm

New Aksarben wrote:
Swith Witherward wrote:It had to be done. The planets were in alignment, and Mars was eclipsing Jupiter! Impossible? Miracle!



NA... for Jacob? Don't let infatuation get the better of your characters. We're chin thick in relationships right now, and relationship drama is pulling characters out of circulation.

As a player, this is what I suggest: let Jacob develop. He can't go the way of Albert. Unless he's just looking to get laid that night, or if you're having the indecision be because of jealousy. That's advice for the character.

Dora appears fine except for some glass. Rylli looks miserable and is in pain. Jacob could comfort Rylli or he could go to his friend who is emotionally crumbling.

Cer asked Gio to comfort Yoshi. His character saw where Gio was having a weak moment, and he's trying to get her to refocus. Yoshi had called out to her before when he died. It makes sense. Urran and Torsi, please don't write Gio out of that scene for sake of drama. This is a character development moment for all three (Yoshi has a chance to overcome, Gio has a chance to expand her experiences in dealing with hardship and grief, and Katya has a chance to not only interact with Gio and Jacob, but also because she was strong in the bar (crying privately) and can be a solid source of strength to both characters.) Jacob, too, can contribute to the strength. He's friendly with both Gio and Yoshi so his added comfort would take half the burden from Katya.

Well, yeah. I won't let him get as absorbed as Albert has, but yeah. He'll talk with Rylli and Dora while they wait for someone to help with them, because when I've been hurt it really helps to be distracted with conversation to get my mind off of it.. I'm assuming the same sort of thing should work for them....

The indecision is partially because he wants to help Yoshi, but he doesn't want to get between him and Katya, honestly, or be rude by interrupting. So he'll talk with Rylli and Dora to help them instead.... plus, if Gio, JAcob and Katya help Yoshi, it might overwhelm Urran. I don't want that to happen cause he's still learning to rp

I have trouble developing Jacob because his interests are things that generally have him secluded, like reading and learning about things. He's interested in Dora(as a secondary reason) because she's from ancient Greece, so she can tell him about it possibly. Much of the history from that far back was lost in his universe, and he's always been very curious what the world was like in his universe before Rome dominated it.

Albert's different because many of his interests involve violence and fighting, and there's not many opportunities for him to do that separately from Ray..... I might have him decide to accept the city's offer to help, but I'm still wondering if its technically getting help from a foreign government seeing as he's a personification. but if that's not an issue, I'd like him to be able to help out in the city, because then he could get out more.... and I just remembered that island thing for characters that have violent tendency or interests but I can't really remember many other details besides that.

That makes sense. I'll be back in about an hour. Morgan just got home, and I've made dinner tonight, so we're going to shovel food in our faces.
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New Aksarben
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Postby New Aksarben » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:48 pm

Swith Witherward wrote:
New Aksarben wrote:Well, yeah. I won't let him get as absorbed as Albert has, but yeah. He'll talk with Rylli and Dora while they wait for someone to help with them, because when I've been hurt it really helps to be distracted with conversation to get my mind off of it.. I'm assuming the same sort of thing should work for them....

The indecision is partially because he wants to help Yoshi, but he doesn't want to get between him and Katya, honestly, or be rude by interrupting. So he'll talk with Rylli and Dora to help them instead.... plus, if Gio, JAcob and Katya help Yoshi, it might overwhelm Urran. I don't want that to happen cause he's still learning to rp

I have trouble developing Jacob because his interests are things that generally have him secluded, like reading and learning about things. He's interested in Dora(as a secondary reason) because she's from ancient Greece, so she can tell him about it possibly. Much of the history from that far back was lost in his universe, and he's always been very curious what the world was like in his universe before Rome dominated it.

Albert's different because many of his interests involve violence and fighting, and there's not many opportunities for him to do that separately from Ray..... I might have him decide to accept the city's offer to help, but I'm still wondering if its technically getting help from a foreign government seeing as he's a personification. but if that's not an issue, I'd like him to be able to help out in the city, because then he could get out more.... and I just remembered that island thing for characters that have violent tendency or interests but I can't really remember many other details besides that.

That makes sense. I'll be back in about an hour. Morgan just got home, and I've made dinner tonight, so we're going to shovel food in our faces.

Hopefully its good food.

So Albert can help the city? Then my idea of him punching a giant monster in the face just because he wanted to could still happen? :p
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Postby Tsuyoi Tekikoku » Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:50 pm

hi everyone
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