Carnage Yearns Our Scars: Infest (Finished)

[Personal Freedom]

I'm thinking of making a communist superhero/antihero/antivillain.

[Cadia]

His characteristics are chiseled in stone.

Cyphers the kinda guy I would high-five, but not buy a beer. Do you get what I'm saying?

Nope, I assume it's because he's kind of awesome, but not one you want to be friends with?

Kinda. He's a cool character and all, but he's characteristically two-dimensional.

Get paid to shoot stuff. Buy booze, pay off lackeys. Repeat.

Not very articulate. Saviour, on the other hand, is character you can build up. Emotionally, Mentally, Physically, you name it. Playing her as a "Mary Sue" doesn't allow for those plot advancements.

The job of the writer is to create characters that'll give you emotional reactions to. You'll hate em', You'll laugh with em', You'll sympathize, identify, and obsess these characters till' they become what the writer intended: real reactions.

(Sorry, my mind just wandered there. I hope you get what I'm saying.)

[Galnius]

I am stuck. How can I do with Nero and what can my other three do?

[Galnius]

Nope, I assume it's because he's kind of awesome, but not one you want to be friends with?

Kinda. He's a cool character and all, but he's characteristically two-dimensional.

Get paid to shoot stuff. Buy booze, pay off lackeys. Repeat.

Not very articulate. Saviour, on the other hand, is character you can build up. Emotionally, Mentally, Physically, you name it. Playing her as a "Mary Sue" doesn't allow for those plot advancements.

The job of the writer is to create characters that'll give you emotional reactions to. You'll hate em', You'll laugh with em', You'll sympathize, identify, and obsess these characters till' they become what the writer intended: real reactions.

(Sorry, my mind just wandered there. I hope you get what I'm saying.)

I like you Cad

[Confederated Southern States]

What'd I miss y'all?

[Personal Freedom]

I am stuck. How can I do with Nero and what can my other three do?

Hmm... Respond to one of the random crimes in town.

[Cadia]

Kinda. He's a cool character and all, but he's characteristically two-dimensional.

Get paid to shoot stuff. Buy booze, pay off lackeys. Repeat.

Not very articulate. Saviour, on the other hand, is character you can build up. Emotionally, Mentally, Physically, you name it. Playing her as a "Mary Sue" doesn't allow for those plot advancements.

The job of the writer is to create characters that'll give you emotional reactions to. You'll hate em', You'll laugh with em', You'll sympathize, identify, and obsess these characters till' they become what the writer intended: real reactions.

(Sorry, my mind just wandered there. I hope you get what I'm saying.)

I like you Cad

I like you to, Gal.

[Zeinbrad]

Nope, I assume it's because he's kind of awesome, but not one you want to be friends with?

Kinda. He's a cool character and all, but he's characteristically two-dimensional.

Get paid to shoot stuff. Buy booze, pay off lackeys. Repeat.

Not very articulate. Saviour, on the other hand, is character you can build up. Emotionally, Mentally, Physically, you name it. Playing her as a "Mary Sue" doesn't allow for those plot advancements.

The job of the writer is to create characters that'll give you emotional reactions to. You'll hate em', You'll laugh with em', You'll sympathize, identify, and obsess these characters till' they become what the writer intended: real reactions.

(Sorry, my mind just wandered there. I hope you get what I'm saying.)

The thing I accidentally made Savior a Mary Sue, I don't know how long she has been one, but I didn't mean it.

[Communist Androids]

What'd I miss y'all?

Nothing much, unless I'm mistaken.

[Personal Freedom]

Kinda. He's a cool character and all, but he's characteristically two-dimensional.

Get paid to shoot stuff. Buy booze, pay off lackeys. Repeat.

Not very articulate. Saviour, on the other hand, is character you can build up. Emotionally, Mentally, Physically, you name it. Playing her as a "Mary Sue" doesn't allow for those plot advancements.

The job of the writer is to create characters that'll give you emotional reactions to. You'll hate em', You'll laugh with em', You'll sympathize, identify, and obsess these characters till' they become what the writer intended: real reactions.

(Sorry, my mind just wandered there. I hope you get what I'm saying.)

The thing I accidentally made Savior a Mary Sue, I don't know how long she has been one, but I didn't mean it.

Will we just need to fix her up a bit.

[Personal Freedom]

THERE ARE TWO KNIGHTS!

And this

[Zeinbrad]

The thing I accidentally made Savior a Mary Sue, I don't know how long she has been one, but I didn't mean it.

Will we just need to fix her up a bit.

And beside mentally breaking her, I need some other flaws.

[Wabacha]

The thing I accidentally made Savior a Mary Sue, I don't know how long she has been one, but I didn't mean it.

Will we just need to fix her up a bit.

Her mind being broken will help get her on that road.

[Confederated Southern States]

So, all Society members, TG for your instructions.

DECAY'S COMING TO TOWN, BITCHES!!!

[Wabacha]

So, all Society members, TG for your instructions.

DECAY'S COMING TO TOWN, BITCHES!!!

Mr. Sk: WOO YEAH! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!
Ink: *Musing voice* Maybe if I beat Decay to a pulp I'll get a discount at IHOP... *The twin inkblots on his mask form dollar signs*

[Cadia]

Kinda. He's a cool character and all, but he's characteristically two-dimensional.

Get paid to shoot stuff. Buy booze, pay off lackeys. Repeat.

Not very articulate. Saviour, on the other hand, is character you can build up. Emotionally, Mentally, Physically, you name it. Playing her as a "Mary Sue" doesn't allow for those plot advancements.

The job of the writer is to create characters that'll give you emotional reactions to. You'll hate em', You'll laugh with em', You'll sympathize, identify, and obsess these characters till' they become what the writer intended: real reactions.

(Sorry, my mind just wandered there. I hope you get what I'm saying.)

The thing I accidentally made Savior a Mary Sue, I don't know how long she has been one, but I didn't mean it.

Saviour has a certain Naivete about her, enhance that. The world is full of Unicorns, Gum drops, and rainbows and she needs to know that. Also, she has no wants. Wants promote greed and jealousy, but is very human at the same time. Finally, give her a brick wall, something to climb over (metaphorically). Barricades to certain desires are constant, and therefore need to be climbed. But remember not to overdo them, because then you get some really surreal kinda situations. Just a couple of suggestions. Remember, the Mary Sue formula can be broken.

[Personal Freedom]

So, all Society members, TG for your instructions.

DECAY'S COMING TO TOWN, BITCHES!!!

I feel like if we ever have another day in this RP to crash I'll have freakish nightmares about the plague. I would have a vision of it but visions aren't on my drawback list for a reason. I don't have them unless forced or I'm relaxed.

[Confederated Southern States]

So, all Society members, TG for your instructions.

DECAY'S COMING TO TOWN, BITCHES!!!

Mr. Sk: WOO YEAH! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!
Ink: *Musing voice* Maybe if I beat Decay to a pulp I'll get a discount at IHOP... *The twin inkblots on his mask form dollar signs*

XD

[Cadia]

So, all Society members, TG for your instructions.

DECAY'S COMING TO TOWN, BITCHES!!!

I feel like if we ever have another day in this RP to crash I'll have freakish nightmares about the plague. I would have a vision of it but visions aren't on my drawback list for a reason. I don't have them unless forced or I'm relaxed.

Follow the Bob Marley method of calmness.

[Wabacha]

Mr. Sk: WOO YEAH! FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!
Ink: *Musing voice* Maybe if I beat Decay to a pulp I'll get a discount at IHOP... *The twin inkblots on his mask form dollar signs*

XD

Ink's rather cheap isn't he?

[Confederated Southern States]

Ugh, my dad is forcing me off for like an hour and a half -__-

Back then...

[Zeinbrad]

The thing I accidentally made Savior a Mary Sue, I don't know how long she has been one, but I didn't mean it.

Saviour has a certain Naivete about her, enhance that. The world is full of Unicorns, Gum drops, and rainbows and she needs to know that. Also, she has no wants. Wants promote greed and jealousy, but is very human at the same time. Finally, give her a brick wall, something to climb over (metaphorically). Barricades to certain desires are constant, and therefore need to be climbed. But remember not to overdo them, because then you get some really surreal kinda situations. Just a couple of suggestions. Remember, the Mary Sue formula can be broken.

Well she is used to getting everything she wants from her parent's (Zeus and Doris) and when she can't summon things, she will quite...whats the word for it?

[Cadia]

XD

Ink's rather cheap isn't he?

You don't know how fast Gravedigger would appear if Ink got a discount at IHOP.

"My Pancake and cheap wallet senses are tingling!"

[Wabacha]

Saviour has a certain Naivete about her, enhance that. The world is full of Unicorns, Gum drops, and rainbows and she needs to know that. Also, she has no wants. Wants promote greed and jealousy, but is very human at the same time. Finally, give her a brick wall, something to climb over (metaphorically). Barricades to certain desires are constant, and therefore need to be climbed. But remember not to overdo them, because then you get some really surreal kinda situations. Just a couple of suggestions. Remember, the Mary Sue formula can be broken.

Well she is used to getting everything she wants from her parent's (Zeus and Doris) and when she can't summon things, she will quite...whats the word for it?

Tantrumy?

Ink's rather cheap isn't he?

You don't know how fast Gravedigger would appear if Ink got a discount at IHOP.

"My Pancake and cheap wallet senses are tingling!"

Ink: MY discount! Hisssss...

[Personal Freedom]

I want to expand my characters personality so he is less like anyone else. I've tried making him bore easily, more aggressive, and more hyper/lets do something now/I think your hot. Now what?