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The Blazing Aura
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Libertarian Police State

Postby The Blazing Aura » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:52 pm

Confederated Southern States wrote:
Miracum-Izmir wrote:Real Name: Sakura Ito
Alias: Firki
Side: Might join good side...
Gender: Angel girl
Age: Time Immemorial
Appearance (Suited and Unsuited):

Personality: Saracastic,Hyper.
History: Told in RP
Powers (Be reasonable): Fire (duh) Inmortal (by ageing) andSuper nova
Drawbacks (You MUST have some): using super nova weakens her to nearly the point of a human.
Can your character be killed: yes but only after super nova is the character weak enough to get killed
Any additional information: no
RP sample (If this is your first, say so): Comin soonn!


Rejected, not good enough.


The Guardians are accepted: DON'T ABUSE HAVING 4. The last guy with a team did and got banhammered.


dw I won't. If other people want to join the Guardians they're more than welcome to (However no Mary Sues or Marty Stu's are allowed)
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The Blazing Aura wrote:aah f***

Nice 3000'th post.

that just makes it better.

Keep it alive!

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Cadia
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Postby Cadia » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:53 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
Personal Freedom wrote:Yeah, about that...

Huh? CSS said Savior was balanced.


On paper she's balanced, but OP IC (cuz' of the way you play. Just change it a bit and you'll be fine.)

Kingdom: Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Primates
Family: Hominidae
Tribe: Musicianicus
Genus: Cadius
Species: C. Rockfanicus

Political Test: -9.88, -8.87
For: Communism, Socialism, Equality, Education, Multiculturalism, LGBT Rights, Environmentalism, and B-Movies.
Anti: Jingoism, Overt Patriotism, Nationalism, Fascism, Fundamentalists, Unrestrained Capitalism, Censorship, Racism, and consumerism.
Meh (tolerate): Capitalism, Israel-Palestine conflict (no clue on what's going on there), and Randists (gotta get your humor from somewhere.)

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Zeinbrad
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Postby Zeinbrad » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:54 pm

Cadia wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:Huh? CSS said Savior was balanced.


On paper she's balanced, but OP IC (cuz' of the way you play. Just change it a bit and you'll be fine.)

What should I change?
“There are three ways to ultimate success:
The first way is to be kind.
The second way is to be kind.
The third way is to be kind.”
― Fred Rogers
Currently looking for an artist for a Star Wars fan comic I want to make.

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Confederated Southern States
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Postby Confederated Southern States » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:54 pm

The Blazing Aura wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:
Rejected, not good enough.


The Guardians are accepted: DON'T ABUSE HAVING 4. The last guy with a team did and got banhammered.


dw I won't. If other people want to join the Guardians they're more than welcome to (However no Mary Sues or Marty Stu's are allowed)


Right. Just follow the plot, sooner or later I will have Decay make his grand entrance.
Leftish-Libertarianish something.
Pro: Gun rights, gay rights, Atheism, moderate positions, Pittsburgh Steelers, hard rock/metal.
Anti: Homophobia/racism, intrusive gun control, most radical positions, extreme capitalism/communism/anything, Baltimore Ravens.
I have an RP set 30 years after the Destroy ending. viewtopic.php?f=31&t=260750
http://godisimaginary.com/
http://www.assaultweapon.info/
The Serbian Empire wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:NSG is slowly becoming /b/

It's /b/ with a monocle trying hard to look like a million dollar trooper.

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Cadia
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Postby Cadia » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:56 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
Cadia wrote:
On paper she's balanced, but OP IC (cuz' of the way you play. Just change it a bit and you'll be fine.)

What should I change?


Not much, I suppose.

Different melee skills trump others: Brute force beats defensive, Defensive beats finesse, finesse beats brute force. Try to incorporate some of triangle into Saviours fighting style.

I can't really think of much right now, maybe the others will think something up.

Kingdom: Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Primates
Family: Hominidae
Tribe: Musicianicus
Genus: Cadius
Species: C. Rockfanicus

Political Test: -9.88, -8.87
For: Communism, Socialism, Equality, Education, Multiculturalism, LGBT Rights, Environmentalism, and B-Movies.
Anti: Jingoism, Overt Patriotism, Nationalism, Fascism, Fundamentalists, Unrestrained Capitalism, Censorship, Racism, and consumerism.
Meh (tolerate): Capitalism, Israel-Palestine conflict (no clue on what's going on there), and Randists (gotta get your humor from somewhere.)

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The Blazing Aura
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Libertarian Police State

Postby The Blazing Aura » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:57 pm

Confederated Southern States wrote:
The Blazing Aura wrote:
dw I won't. If other people want to join the Guardians they're more than welcome to (However no Mary Sues or Marty Stu's are allowed)


Right. Just follow the plot, sooner or later I will have Decay make his grand entrance.


I'll get round to it once I've read the IC. And once I'm out of tvTropes
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The Blazing Aura wrote:aah f***

Nice 3000'th post.

that just makes it better.

Keep it alive!

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Personal Freedom
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Personal Freedom » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:57 pm

The Blazing Aura wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:
Rejected, not good enough.


The Guardians are accepted: DON'T ABUSE HAVING 4. The last guy with a team did and got banhammered.


dw I won't. If other people want to join the Guardians they're more than welcome to (However no Mary Sues or Marty Stu's are allowed)

My character is a meakling. Meek and weakling.
Economic Left/Right: -10.0 (previously -6.45)
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -7.18 (previously -4.72 )
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves;
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

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Miracum-Izmir
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Postby Miracum-Izmir » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:58 pm

Okay i'll take out Super nova. is that okay?



Was Ottozum, add 786 posts. These eyes see captalism clearly.
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Confederated Southern States
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Postby Confederated Southern States » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:58 pm

So, are the Society members ready for orders from Decay?
Leftish-Libertarianish something.
Pro: Gun rights, gay rights, Atheism, moderate positions, Pittsburgh Steelers, hard rock/metal.
Anti: Homophobia/racism, intrusive gun control, most radical positions, extreme capitalism/communism/anything, Baltimore Ravens.
I have an RP set 30 years after the Destroy ending. viewtopic.php?f=31&t=260750
http://godisimaginary.com/
http://www.assaultweapon.info/
The Serbian Empire wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:NSG is slowly becoming /b/

It's /b/ with a monocle trying hard to look like a million dollar trooper.

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Confederated Southern States
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Postby Confederated Southern States » Fri Jul 12, 2013 3:59 pm

Miracum-Izmir wrote:Okay i'll take out Super nova. is that okay?


No, the whole thing is messed up. You're not accepted, go get some practice in other RPs first.

That is all.
Leftish-Libertarianish something.
Pro: Gun rights, gay rights, Atheism, moderate positions, Pittsburgh Steelers, hard rock/metal.
Anti: Homophobia/racism, intrusive gun control, most radical positions, extreme capitalism/communism/anything, Baltimore Ravens.
I have an RP set 30 years after the Destroy ending. viewtopic.php?f=31&t=260750
http://godisimaginary.com/
http://www.assaultweapon.info/
The Serbian Empire wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:NSG is slowly becoming /b/

It's /b/ with a monocle trying hard to look like a million dollar trooper.

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Cadia
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Postby Cadia » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:01 pm

The Blazing Aura wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:
Rejected, not good enough.


The Guardians are accepted: DON'T ABUSE HAVING 4. The last guy with a team did and got banhammered.


dw I won't. If other people want to join the Guardians they're more than welcome to (However no Mary Sues or Marty Stu's are allowed)


Image

Kingdom: Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Primates
Family: Hominidae
Tribe: Musicianicus
Genus: Cadius
Species: C. Rockfanicus

Political Test: -9.88, -8.87
For: Communism, Socialism, Equality, Education, Multiculturalism, LGBT Rights, Environmentalism, and B-Movies.
Anti: Jingoism, Overt Patriotism, Nationalism, Fascism, Fundamentalists, Unrestrained Capitalism, Censorship, Racism, and consumerism.
Meh (tolerate): Capitalism, Israel-Palestine conflict (no clue on what's going on there), and Randists (gotta get your humor from somewhere.)

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Zeinbrad
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Postby Zeinbrad » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:01 pm

Cadia wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:What should I change?


Not much, I suppose.

Different melee skills trump others: Brute force beats defensive, Defensive beats finesse, finesse beats brute force. Try to incorporate some of the triangle into saviors fighting style.

I can't really think of much right now, maybe the others will think something up.

I imagined Savior to be a jack-of-all trades. She's a fine swordsman due to her years of training. Is that what's OP?
“There are three ways to ultimate success:
The first way is to be kind.
The second way is to be kind.
The third way is to be kind.”
― Fred Rogers
Currently looking for an artist for a Star Wars fan comic I want to make.

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Personal Freedom
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Postby Personal Freedom » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:03 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
Cadia wrote:
Not much, I suppose.

Different melee skills trump others: Brute force beats defensive, Defensive beats finesse, finesse beats brute force. Try to incorporate some of the triangle into saviors fighting style.

I can't really think of much right now, maybe the others will think something up.

I imagined Savior to be a jack-of-all trades. She's a fine swordsman due to her years of training. Is that what's OP?

Don't change that!
Economic Left/Right: -10.0 (previously -6.45)
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -7.18 (previously -4.72 )
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves;
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

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Confederated Southern States
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Postby Confederated Southern States » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:04 pm

Confederated Southern States wrote:So, are the Society members ready for orders from Decay?


Remember this.

Gotta go to dinner.
Leftish-Libertarianish something.
Pro: Gun rights, gay rights, Atheism, moderate positions, Pittsburgh Steelers, hard rock/metal.
Anti: Homophobia/racism, intrusive gun control, most radical positions, extreme capitalism/communism/anything, Baltimore Ravens.
I have an RP set 30 years after the Destroy ending. viewtopic.php?f=31&t=260750
http://godisimaginary.com/
http://www.assaultweapon.info/
The Serbian Empire wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:NSG is slowly becoming /b/

It's /b/ with a monocle trying hard to look like a million dollar trooper.

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The Blazing Aura
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Libertarian Police State

Postby The Blazing Aura » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:04 pm

Cadia wrote:
The Blazing Aura wrote:
dw I won't. If other people want to join the Guardians they're more than welcome to (However no Mary Sues or Marty Stu's are allowed)


Image


Wrong Marty
Jormengand wrote:
The Blazing Aura wrote:aah f***

Nice 3000'th post.

that just makes it better.

Keep it alive!

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Miracum-Izmir
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Postby Miracum-Izmir » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:05 pm

I have loads of experience . What do you mean,and i will improve it.



Was Ottozum, add 786 posts. These eyes see captalism clearly.
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Cadia
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Postby Cadia » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:07 pm

Zeinbrad wrote:
Cadia wrote:
Not much, I suppose.

Different melee skills trump others: Brute force beats defensive, Defensive beats finesse, finesse beats brute force. Try to incorporate some of the triangle into saviors fighting style.

I can't really think of much right now, maybe the others will think something up.

I imagined Savior to be a jack-of-all trades. She's a fine swordsman due to her years of training. Is that what's OP?


Jack-of-all Trades =/= Master-of-all.

I mean, it's a good attribute. But being too OP with it makes you pretty much invulnerable (like slicing bullets).

My characters pretty much a Jack-of-all trades with blades, but he's pretty much beat by anyone with expertise in a certain style (in which case he brute forces it).

Again, that's all that I can think about right now. I think other people can think of examples.

Kingdom: Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Primates
Family: Hominidae
Tribe: Musicianicus
Genus: Cadius
Species: C. Rockfanicus

Political Test: -9.88, -8.87
For: Communism, Socialism, Equality, Education, Multiculturalism, LGBT Rights, Environmentalism, and B-Movies.
Anti: Jingoism, Overt Patriotism, Nationalism, Fascism, Fundamentalists, Unrestrained Capitalism, Censorship, Racism, and consumerism.
Meh (tolerate): Capitalism, Israel-Palestine conflict (no clue on what's going on there), and Randists (gotta get your humor from somewhere.)

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Postby SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:07 pm

Damn Cadia, I was just gonna post something too...
I am a proud lurker and puppet master
You can call me Loli, Smiley, or SHSW, or anything else, really
We Are Surrealist Tech, but are willing to accommodate to an RP's needs
LoL Island may be dead... But The Gospel of LoL shall live on
Behold the proud theme of our people!

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Zeinbrad
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Postby Zeinbrad » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:09 pm

Cadia wrote:
Zeinbrad wrote:I imagined Savior to be a jack-of-all trades. She's a fine swordsman due to her years of training. Is that what's OP?


Jack-of-all Trades =/= Master-of-all.

I mean, it's a good attribute. But being too OP with it makes you pretty much invulnerable (like slicing bullets).

My characters pretty much a Jack-of-all trades with blades, but he's pretty much beat by anyone with expertise in a certain style (in which case he brute forces it).

Again, that's all that I can think about right now. I think other people can think of examples.

Oh, Savior can't slice bullets, or anything too crazy, she's just a Jack-of-all-trades. She can be out fought. She just won't go down.
“There are three ways to ultimate success:
The first way is to be kind.
The second way is to be kind.
The third way is to be kind.”
― Fred Rogers
Currently looking for an artist for a Star Wars fan comic I want to make.

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Personal Freedom
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Postby Personal Freedom » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:11 pm

Miracum-Izmir wrote:I have loads of experience . What do you mean,and i will improve it.

You have 57 posts and didn't read the OP or use the point buy system or use decent grammar in the app.
Economic Left/Right: -10.0 (previously -6.45)
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -7.18 (previously -4.72 )
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves;
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

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Postby Confederated Southern States » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:11 pm

Miracum-Izmir wrote:I have loads of experience . What do you mean,and i will improve it.


Lol!

Your grammar is atrocious, and your post count is like 56.
Leftish-Libertarianish something.
Pro: Gun rights, gay rights, Atheism, moderate positions, Pittsburgh Steelers, hard rock/metal.
Anti: Homophobia/racism, intrusive gun control, most radical positions, extreme capitalism/communism/anything, Baltimore Ravens.
I have an RP set 30 years after the Destroy ending. viewtopic.php?f=31&t=260750
http://godisimaginary.com/
http://www.assaultweapon.info/
The Serbian Empire wrote:
Confederated Southern States wrote:NSG is slowly becoming /b/

It's /b/ with a monocle trying hard to look like a million dollar trooper.

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Personal Freedom
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Postby Personal Freedom » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:19 pm

If Knight doesn't lose focus I will use my mental communication to troll him.
Economic Left/Right: -10.0 (previously -6.45)
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -7.18 (previously -4.72 )
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves;
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

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Postby SuperHappySmileyWorld » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:44 pm

Welp everyone, I've got to jet, I need to go be a Taxi Service and catch the late showing of Pacific Rim!
I am a proud lurker and puppet master
You can call me Loli, Smiley, or SHSW, or anything else, really
We Are Surrealist Tech, but are willing to accommodate to an RP's needs
LoL Island may be dead... But The Gospel of LoL shall live on
Behold the proud theme of our people!

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Cadia
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Postby Cadia » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:48 pm

SuperHappySmileyWorld wrote:Welp everyone, I've got to jet, I need to go be a Taxi Service and catch the late showing of Pacific Rim!


Tell me what you think!

Kingdom: Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Primates
Family: Hominidae
Tribe: Musicianicus
Genus: Cadius
Species: C. Rockfanicus

Political Test: -9.88, -8.87
For: Communism, Socialism, Equality, Education, Multiculturalism, LGBT Rights, Environmentalism, and B-Movies.
Anti: Jingoism, Overt Patriotism, Nationalism, Fascism, Fundamentalists, Unrestrained Capitalism, Censorship, Racism, and consumerism.
Meh (tolerate): Capitalism, Israel-Palestine conflict (no clue on what's going on there), and Randists (gotta get your humor from somewhere.)

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Zeinbrad
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Postby Zeinbrad » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:55 pm

Now, should I introduce Savior being kicked out of heaven for knowing the truth this arc or next arc?
“There are three ways to ultimate success:
The first way is to be kind.
The second way is to be kind.
The third way is to be kind.”
― Fred Rogers
Currently looking for an artist for a Star Wars fan comic I want to make.

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