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Corvus Metallum
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Postby Corvus Metallum » Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:30 pm

Videssos wrote:
Corvus Metallum wrote:Lol :p

For some reason, I want to make Jay shoot random people with a Paintball gun. I don't think school officials or the police would like that very much though :roll:


Sounds fun.

Also, at some point, there needs to be a scene like this.
:lol:

:rofl: :rofl:

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Postby Red Croatia » Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:31 pm

Dragonic Outland wrote:Hello
So ... No class already?

The classes lasted for 2 days..

And no more classes for today. :P
"..My Innocence is wearing thin, but my heart is growing strong.. So call me, call me.. Miss.. Movin' On.."
"..You don't have to be afraid to put your dreams in action..
You're never gonna fade you'll be the main attraction.."

I'm the kind of person that you don't want to get mad.

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Postby Galnius » Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:49 pm

Videssos wrote:
Corvus Metallum wrote:Part of the reason I made a blind character was so that I couldn't just make him "fall in love" with a cute girl in this RP. You actually have to talk to him and be mature about it, not just "ooh, I have feelings now" :p


Yeah.
Pity Galnius is taking that approach.
:(

It has happened to me RL a good amount of times ;) One started stalking me actually :shock:
I've read your Sig! I've read your soul

Before you complain, remember, Kangaroos can't hop backwards. Really makes your problems seem small don't it.

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Postby Red Croatia » Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:57 pm

Afk for some time. Galnius feel free to RP my character's movement. :P
"..My Innocence is wearing thin, but my heart is growing strong.. So call me, call me.. Miss.. Movin' On.."
"..You don't have to be afraid to put your dreams in action..
You're never gonna fade you'll be the main attraction.."

I'm the kind of person that you don't want to get mad.

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Postby Galnius » Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:58 pm

Red Croatia wrote:Afk for some time. Galnius feel free to RP my character's movement. :P

What is Afk?
I've read your Sig! I've read your soul

Before you complain, remember, Kangaroos can't hop backwards. Really makes your problems seem small don't it.

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Postby Videssos » Sat Jul 06, 2013 5:59 pm

Galnius wrote:
Videssos wrote:
Yeah.
Pity Galnius is taking that approach.
:(

It has happened to me RL a good amount of times ;) One started stalking me actually :shock:


I think you should type that a lil' bigger. There's still a few envious people that haven't seen your post.
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Rynagria » Sat Jul 06, 2013 6:01 pm

Galnius wrote:
Red Croatia wrote:Afk for some time. Galnius feel free to RP my character's movement. :P

What is Afk?

Away from keyboard.
Call me Ryn or Ryna.

Proud Member of the Titans RP group.

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Postby Videssos » Sat Jul 06, 2013 6:04 pm

2 AM, me need sleep...
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Galnius » Sat Jul 06, 2013 6:06 pm

Videssos wrote:
Galnius wrote:It has happened to me RL a good amount of times ;) One started stalking me actually :shock:


I think you should type that a lil' bigger. There's still a few envious people that haven't seen your post.

I am not trying to make people jealous. I am simply trying to state that it is a real life occurence. I am sure othes have had it too. They just do not last long. It is what is known as a teenage relationship. Some though, they last quite a bit. I was not one of the lucky ones.

Thank you Ryn.
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Before you complain, remember, Kangaroos can't hop backwards. Really makes your problems seem small don't it.

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Postby Soldati Senza Confini » Sat Jul 06, 2013 9:24 pm

I am making my second character :p

It will be modeled after another Marvel Superhero (man I love Marvel Heroes) or perhaps a Capcom Character.
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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:23 am

Hmm.
I think I said I'd do a second character. Here it is:

Name: Kalen Daindred
House: Magna
Gender: Male
Age): 17
Appearance:
ImageImageImageImageImageImage

Years in the Academy: 1
Ability: Demonic Physiology, Darkness Manipulation, Lightning manipulation. Demonic Force Manipulation.
Eye Powers Manipulation. (Best I could do for Sharingan style. Of course, it also has a power-other than the copying and special vision/perception, a power that generally doesn't work if one keeps one's gaze averted. And the Mangekyo Sharingan can only be used briefly, as well as also having the danger of causing damage to the user's eyes.)

Hopefully that isn't too much, but then again, I have a habit of making it look that way. :(
Personality: His personality is rather odd, and can change from one thing to another. Brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he possesses a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him. He isn't always too bad, though.
Backstory: Kalen was born into the old and very respected Daindred Family, a an esteemed noble family of prominent magic practitioners, the largest branch of which currently resides in England, though one with a quite unusual genetic "curse", if you will. While the Daindreds are often incredibly skilled magic users, they are almost always second place in comparison to the most powerful sorcerer of the time period. They also have an unusual genetic trait in their eyes. Thus, there is a heavy pressure put on Kalen, virtually from the day he could walk, as he was the second born son. There are some rumors that the family might be running into problems in terms of getting worthy heirs, which presents even more pressure on Kalen and his brother. He was taught magic and swordplay early, relentlessly and some might say abusively, and learnt many styles of fighting with various weapons accumulated within the family for centuries, including some techniques from as far afield as Japan. Kalen became quite a child prodigy, but became worried that he was still not good enough, and sought to surpass his brother. He also delved into the darker areas of magic, and once encountered Orochimaru, who gifted him with a curse mark, and taught him how to access the second stage of that power, whilst also learning how to manipulate dark energy.

As well as these things, he also studied a number of martial arts, becoming adept at them, perhaps around the level of a master in some. At age 14, he sought out a powerful [insert something else here] simply to kill it for the sake of killing it, mirroring Gabren. He barely succeeded, a fact that still frustrates him, like his brother. Though unlike his brother, Kalen holds more hate and contempt for [insert somethin else here], than fear. At one point, a time in which few details can be discerned, both his parents and many family members were slaughtered by an unknown individual, or group of individuals. Naturally, Kalen vowed to avenge them. After he became eighteen, he travelled far and wide, with some of the more interesting artefacts of supernatural significance he came upon, kept among his possessions. The voice inside Kalen urged him to travel far, and to kill. He became as skilled an assassin as he was a warrior and a dark-magic user. Sometimes, Kalen killed targets of note simply because he could, and other times because he would get rewards for such things, on contracts. He terrorised cities, towns and various places in different parts of the world, becoming known in the underground supernatural community, as the fabled "Black Demon". All along the way, he continued to search for the cause of what had happened with most of his family. All this, happened, despite of his youth.

His influential noble connections also gave him a fair amount of political power, and many of his family's traditional rivals grew fearful and shied away from them. He also on occasion goes by various other aliases, and such as Lord Emil Von Stroube, and it it doubtful if his birth name is known for certain. It is also believed that he has his own shadowy organisation somewhere, though that is so shrouded in rumours that even half-truths are hard to find. When he was younger, Kalen often joined numerous occult organisations, from the Golden Dawn and Illuminates of Thanateros to Fraternas Saturni, and TOPY. Due to his odd personality, it is generally near impossible to ascertain what his true goals are. However, whatever they are, it's doubtless that they are ambitious. During recent times, he's ended up at this academy, perhaps in search of yet more help.
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|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Novia Soviet Socialist Republic » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:24 am

Videssos wrote:Hmm.
I think I said I'd do a second character. Here it is:

Name: Kalen Daindred
House: Magna
Gender: Male
Age): 17
Appearance:
Years in the Academy: 1
Ability: Demonic Physiology, Darkness Manipulation, Lightning manipulation. Demonic Force Manipulation.
Eye Powers Manipulation. (Best I could do for Sharingan style. Of course, it also has a power-other than the copying and special vision/perception, a power that generally doesn't work if one keeps one's gaze averted. And the Mangekyo Sharingan can only be used briefly, as well as also having the danger of causing damage to the user's eyes.)

Hopefully that isn't too much, but then again, I have a habit of making it look that way. :(
Personality: His personality is rather odd, and can change from one thing to another. Brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he possesses a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him.
Backstory: Kalen was born into the old and very respected Daindred Family, a an esteemed noble family of prominent magic practitioners, the largest branch of which currently resides in England, though one with a quite unusual genetic "curse", if you will. While the Daindreds are often incredibly skilled magic users, they are almost always second place in comparison to the most powerful sorcerer of the time period. They also have an unusual genetic trait in their eyes. Thus, there is a heavy pressure put on Kalen, virtually from the day he could walk, as he was the second born son. There are some rumors that the family might be running into problems in terms of getting worthy heirs, which presents even more pressure on Kalen and his brother. He was taught magic and swordplay early, relentlessly and some might say abusively, and learnt many styles of fighting with various weapons accumulated within the family for centuries, including some techniques from as far afield as Japan. Kalen became quite a child prodigy, but became worried that he was still not good enough, and sought to surpass his brother. He also delved into the darker areas of magic, bonding his soul with a powerful demonic entity, and learning how to manipulate dark energy.

As well as these things, he also studied a number of martial arts, becoming adept at them, perhaps around the level of a master in some. At age 14, he sought out a powerful Vampire noble simply to kill it for the sake of killing it, mirroring Gabren. He barely succeeded, a fact that still frustrates him, like his brother. Though unlike his brother, Kalen holds more hate and contempt for vampires, than fear. At one point, a time in which few details can be discerned, both his parents and many family members were slaughtered by an unknown individual, or group of individuals. Naturally, Kalen vowed to avenge them. After he became eighteen, he travelled far and wide, with some of the more interesting artefacts of supernatural significance he came upon, kept among his possessions. The demon inside Kalen urged him to travel far, and to kill. He became as skilled an assassin as he was a warrior and a dark-magic user. Sometimes, Kalen killed targets of note simply because he could, and other times because he would get rewards for such things, on contracts. He terrorised cities, towns and various places in different parts of the world, becoming known in the underground supernatural community, as the fabled "Black Demon". All along the way, he continued to search for the cause of what had happened with most of his family. All this, happened, despite of his youth.

His influential noble connections also gave him a fair amount of political power, and many of his family's traditional rivals grew fearful and shied away from them. He also on occasion goes by various other aliases, and such as Lord Emil Von Stroube, and it it doubtful if his birth name is known for certain. It is also believed that he has his own shadowy organisation somewhere, though that is so shrouded in rumours that even half-truths are hard to find. When he was younger, Kalen often joined numerous occult organisations, from the Golden Dawn and Illuminates of Thanateros to Fraternas Saturni, and TOPY. Due to his odd personality, it is generally near impossible to ascertain what his true goals are. However, whatever they are, it's doubtless that they are ambitious. During recent times, he's ended up at this academy, perhaps in search of yet more help.


Why do you make em so long!? >:(

Alright gimme a few minutes I'll read through :P
u wot m8

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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:27 am

Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:
Videssos wrote:Hmm.
I think I said I'd do a second character. Here it is:

Name: Kalen Daindred
House: Magna
Gender: Male
Age): 17
Appearance:
Years in the Academy: 1
Ability: Demonic Physiology, Darkness Manipulation, Lightning manipulation. Demonic Force Manipulation.
Eye Powers Manipulation. (Best I could do for Sharingan style. Of course, it also has a power-other than the copying and special vision/perception, a power that generally doesn't work if one keeps one's gaze averted. And the Mangekyo Sharingan can only be used briefly, as well as also having the danger of causing damage to the user's eyes.)

Hopefully that isn't too much, but then again, I have a habit of making it look that way. :(
Personality: His personality is rather odd, and can change from one thing to another. Brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he possesses a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him.
Backstory: Kalen was born into the old and very respected Daindred Family, a an esteemed noble family of prominent magic practitioners, the largest branch of which currently resides in England, though one with a quite unusual genetic "curse", if you will. While the Daindreds are often incredibly skilled magic users, they are almost always second place in comparison to the most powerful sorcerer of the time period. They also have an unusual genetic trait in their eyes. Thus, there is a heavy pressure put on Kalen, virtually from the day he could walk, as he was the second born son. There are some rumors that the family might be running into problems in terms of getting worthy heirs, which presents even more pressure on Kalen and his brother. He was taught magic and swordplay early, relentlessly and some might say abusively, and learnt many styles of fighting with various weapons accumulated within the family for centuries, including some techniques from as far afield as Japan. Kalen became quite a child prodigy, but became worried that he was still not good enough, and sought to surpass his brother. He also delved into the darker areas of magic, bonding his soul with a powerful demonic entity, and learning how to manipulate dark energy.

As well as these things, he also studied a number of martial arts, becoming adept at them, perhaps around the level of a master in some. At age 14, he sought out a powerful Vampire noble simply to kill it for the sake of killing it, mirroring Gabren. He barely succeeded, a fact that still frustrates him, like his brother. Though unlike his brother, Kalen holds more hate and contempt for vampires, than fear. At one point, a time in which few details can be discerned, both his parents and many family members were slaughtered by an unknown individual, or group of individuals. Naturally, Kalen vowed to avenge them. After he became eighteen, he travelled far and wide, with some of the more interesting artefacts of supernatural significance he came upon, kept among his possessions. The demon inside Kalen urged him to travel far, and to kill. He became as skilled an assassin as he was a warrior and a dark-magic user. Sometimes, Kalen killed targets of note simply because he could, and other times because he would get rewards for such things, on contracts. He terrorised cities, towns and various places in different parts of the world, becoming known in the underground supernatural community, as the fabled "Black Demon". All along the way, he continued to search for the cause of what had happened with most of his family. All this, happened, despite of his youth.

His influential noble connections also gave him a fair amount of political power, and many of his family's traditional rivals grew fearful and shied away from them. He also on occasion goes by various other aliases, and such as Lord Emil Von Stroube, and it it doubtful if his birth name is known for certain. It is also believed that he has his own shadowy organisation somewhere, though that is so shrouded in rumours that even half-truths are hard to find. When he was younger, Kalen often joined numerous occult organisations, from the Golden Dawn and Illuminates of Thanateros to Fraternas Saturni, and TOPY. Due to his odd personality, it is generally near impossible to ascertain what his true goals are. However, whatever they are, it's doubtless that they are ambitious. During recent times, he's ended up at this academy, perhaps in search of yet more help.


Why do you make em so long!? >:(

Alright gimme a few minutes I'll read through :P


Lol, I just realised that even though I'd hardly changed the bio much for this character, it had already mirrored the story of Sasuke Uchiha to some degree.
Anyway, he can be a cool guy.
Accepting is generally the best of decisions in circumstances like these, y'know. :p
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Novia Soviet Socialist Republic » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:31 am

Videssos wrote:Hmm.
I think I said I'd do a second character. Here it is:

Name: Kalen Daindred
House: Magna
Gender: Male
Age): 17
Appearance:
Years in the Academy: 1
Ability: Demonic Physiology, Darkness Manipulation, Lightning manipulation. Demonic Force Manipulation.
Eye Powers Manipulation. (Best I could do for Sharingan style. Of course, it also has a power-other than the copying and special vision/perception, a power that generally doesn't work if one keeps one's gaze averted. And the Mangekyo Sharingan can only be used briefly, as well as also having the danger of causing damage to the user's eyes.)

Hopefully that isn't too much, but then again, I have a habit of making it look that way. :(
Personality: His personality is rather odd, and can change from one thing to another. Brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he possesses a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him. He isn't always too bad, though.
Backstory: Kalen was born into the old and very respected Daindred Family, a an esteemed noble family of prominent magic practitioners, the largest branch of which currently resides in England, though one with a quite unusual genetic "curse", if you will. While the Daindreds are often incredibly skilled magic users, they are almost always second place in comparison to the most powerful sorcerer of the time period. They also have an unusual genetic trait in their eyes. Thus, there is a heavy pressure put on Kalen, virtually from the day he could walk, as he was the second born son. There are some rumors that the family might be running into problems in terms of getting worthy heirs, which presents even more pressure on Kalen and his brother. He was taught magic and swordplay early, relentlessly and some might say abusively, and learnt many styles of fighting with various weapons accumulated within the family for centuries, including some techniques from as far afield as Japan. Kalen became quite a child prodigy, but became worried that he was still not good enough, and sought to surpass his brother. He also delved into the darker areas of magic, bonding his soul with a powerful demonic entity, and learning how to manipulate dark energy.

As well as these things, he also studied a number of martial arts, becoming adept at them, perhaps around the level of a master in some. At age 14, he sought out a powerful Vampire noble simply to kill it for the sake of killing it, mirroring Gabren. He barely succeeded, a fact that still frustrates him, like his brother. Though unlike his brother, Kalen holds more hate and contempt for vampires, than fear. At one point, a time in which few details can be discerned, both his parents and many family members were slaughtered by an unknown individual, or group of individuals. Naturally, Kalen vowed to avenge them. After he became eighteen, he travelled far and wide, with some of the more interesting artefacts of supernatural significance he came upon, kept among his possessions. The demon inside Kalen urged him to travel far, and to kill. He became as skilled an assassin as he was a warrior and a dark-magic user. Sometimes, Kalen killed targets of note simply because he could, and other times because he would get rewards for such things, on contracts. He terrorised cities, towns and various places in different parts of the world, becoming known in the underground supernatural community, as the fabled "Black Demon". All along the way, he continued to search for the cause of what had happened with most of his family. All this, happened, despite of his youth.

His influential noble connections also gave him a fair amount of political power, and many of his family's traditional rivals grew fearful and shied away from them. He also on occasion goes by various other aliases, and such as Lord Emil Von Stroube, and it it doubtful if his birth name is known for certain. It is also believed that he has his own shadowy organisation somewhere, though that is so shrouded in rumours that even half-truths are hard to find. When he was younger, Kalen often joined numerous occult organisations, from the Golden Dawn and Illuminates of Thanateros to Fraternas Saturni, and TOPY. Due to his odd personality, it is generally near impossible to ascertain what his true goals are. However, whatever they are, it's doubtless that they are ambitious. During recent times, he's ended up at this academy, perhaps in search of yet more help.


Okay so the problems with this app are as follows:

-Demonic powers are against the rules so the Demonic Physiology and Demonic Force Manipulation have to go.
-There aren't any vampires in the this RP.
u wot m8

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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:37 am

Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:
Videssos wrote:Hmm.
I think I said I'd do a second character. Here it is:

Name: Kalen Daindred
House: Magna
Gender: Male
Age): 17
Appearance:
Years in the Academy: 1
Ability: Demonic Physiology, Darkness Manipulation, Lightning manipulation. Demonic Force Manipulation.
Eye Powers Manipulation. (Best I could do for Sharingan style. Of course, it also has a power-other than the copying and special vision/perception, a power that generally doesn't work if one keeps one's gaze averted. And the Mangekyo Sharingan can only be used briefly, as well as also having the danger of causing damage to the user's eyes.)

Hopefully that isn't too much, but then again, I have a habit of making it look that way. :(
Personality: His personality is rather odd, and can change from one thing to another. Brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he possesses a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him. He isn't always too bad, though.
Backstory: Kalen was born into the old and very respected Daindred Family, a an esteemed noble family of prominent magic practitioners, the largest branch of which currently resides in England, though one with a quite unusual genetic "curse", if you will. While the Daindreds are often incredibly skilled magic users, they are almost always second place in comparison to the most powerful sorcerer of the time period. They also have an unusual genetic trait in their eyes. Thus, there is a heavy pressure put on Kalen, virtually from the day he could walk, as he was the second born son. There are some rumors that the family might be running into problems in terms of getting worthy heirs, which presents even more pressure on Kalen and his brother. He was taught magic and swordplay early, relentlessly and some might say abusively, and learnt many styles of fighting with various weapons accumulated within the family for centuries, including some techniques from as far afield as Japan. Kalen became quite a child prodigy, but became worried that he was still not good enough, and sought to surpass his brother. He also delved into the darker areas of magic, and once encountered Orochimaru, who gifted him with a curse mark, and taught him how to access the second stage of that power, whilst also learning how to manipulate dark energy.

As well as these things, he also studied a number of martial arts, becoming adept at them, perhaps around the level of a master in some. At age 14, he sought out a powerful [insert something else here] simply to kill it for the sake of killing it, mirroring Gabren. He barely succeeded, a fact that still frustrates him, like his brother. Though unlike his brother, Kalen holds more hate and contempt for [insert somethin else here, than fear. At one point, a time in which few details can be discerned, both his parents and many family members were slaughtered by an unknown individual, or group of individuals. Naturally, Kalen vowed to avenge them. After he became eighteen, he travelled far and wide, with some of the more interesting artefacts of supernatural significance he came upon, kept among his possessions. The voice inside Kalen urged him to travel far, and to kill. He became as skilled an assassin as he was a warrior and a dark-magic user. Sometimes, Kalen killed targets of note simply because he could, and other times because he would get rewards for such things, on contracts. He terrorised cities, towns and various places in different parts of the world, becoming known in the underground supernatural community, as the fabled "Black Demon". All along the way, he continued to search for the cause of what had happened with most of his family. All this, happened, despite of his youth.

His influential noble connections also gave him a fair amount of political power, and many of his family's traditional rivals grew fearful and shied away from them. He also on occasion goes by various other aliases, and such as Lord Emil Von Stroube, and it it doubtful if his birth name is known for certain. It is also believed that he has his own shadowy organisation somewhere, though that is so shrouded in rumours that even half-truths are hard to find. When he was younger, Kalen often joined numerous occult organisations, from the Golden Dawn and Illuminates of Thanateros to Fraternas Saturni, and TOPY. Due to his odd personality, it is generally near impossible to ascertain what his true goals are. However, whatever they are, it's doubtless that they are ambitious. During recent times, he's ended up at this academy, perhaps in search of yet more help.


Okay so the problems with this app are as follows:

-Demonic powers are against the rules so the Demonic Physiology and Demonic Force Manipulation have to go.
-There aren't any vampires in the this RP.


Demonic powers aren't actually against the rules.
I guess I should just change the demon reference, into something slightly different. I was gonna give him a connection to Orochimaru anyway, so I'll just say those powers came from a curse mark seal thingy from Orochimaru.
I'll just keep those things as they are listed in the superpowers wiki, so I'm not changing their names.



Name: Kalen Daindred
House: Magna
Gender: Male
Age): 17
Appearance:
Years in the Academy: 1
Ability: Demonic Physiology, Darkness Manipulation, Lightning manipulation. Demonic Force Manipulation.
Eye Powers Manipulation. (Best I could do for Sharingan style. Of course, it also has a power-other than the copying and special vision/perception, a power that generally doesn't work if one keeps one's gaze averted. And the Mangekyo Sharingan can only be used briefly, as well as also having the danger of causing damage to the user's eyes.)

Hopefully that isn't too much, but then again, I have a habit of making it look that way. :(
Personality: His personality is rather odd, and can change from one thing to another. Brutal, impulsive, excessively-violent personality and a lethally-short temper. However, despite his aggression and obvious blood lust in battle, he possesses a feral cunning and has a knack for quickly exploiting any opening his opponent reveals. In addition, he can be blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic, revealing a psychotic grin or laughing maniacally whenever he becomes excited sometimes, or eerily silent, cold and disdainful at other times. He is also very rude and quite disrespectful at times, and mockingly polite, cunning and manipulative at others. He's often serious, yet at the same time disdainful of others, often laughing when opponents claim that they can defeat him. He isn't always too bad, though.
Backstory: Kalen was born into the old and very respected Daindred Family, a an esteemed noble family of prominent magic practitioners, the largest branch of which currently resides in England, though one with a quite unusual genetic "curse", if you will. While the Daindreds are often incredibly skilled magic users, they are almost always second place in comparison to the most powerful sorcerer of the time period. They also have an unusual genetic trait in their eyes. Thus, there is a heavy pressure put on Kalen, virtually from the day he could walk, as he was the second born son. There are some rumors that the family might be running into problems in terms of getting worthy heirs, which presents even more pressure on Kalen and his brother. He was taught magic and swordplay early, relentlessly and some might say abusively, and learnt many styles of fighting with various weapons accumulated within the family for centuries, including some techniques from as far afield as Japan. Kalen became quite a child prodigy, but became worried that he was still not good enough, and sought to surpass his brother. He also delved into the darker areas of magic, and once encountered Orochimaru, who gifted him with a curse mark, and taught him how to access the second stage of that power, whilst also learning how to manipulate dark energy.

As well as these things, he also studied a number of martial arts, becoming adept at them, perhaps around the level of a master in some. At age 14, he sought out a powerful [insert something else here] simply to kill it for the sake of killing it, mirroring Gabren. He barely succeeded, a fact that still frustrates him, like his brother. Though unlike his brother, Kalen holds more hate and contempt for [insert somethin else here], than fear. At one point, a time in which few details can be discerned, both his parents and many family members were slaughtered by an unknown individual, or group of individuals. Naturally, Kalen vowed to avenge them. After he became eighteen, he travelled far and wide, with some of the more interesting artefacts of supernatural significance he came upon, kept among his possessions. The voice inside Kalen urged him to travel far, and to kill. He became as skilled an assassin as he was a warrior and a dark-magic user. Sometimes, Kalen killed targets of note simply because he could, and other times because he would get rewards for such things, on contracts. He terrorised cities, towns and various places in different parts of the world, becoming known in the underground supernatural community, as the fabled "Black Demon". All along the way, he continued to search for the cause of what had happened with most of his family. All this, happened, despite of his youth.

His influential noble connections also gave him a fair amount of political power, and many of his family's traditional rivals grew fearful and shied away from them. He also on occasion goes by various other aliases, and such as Lord Emil Von Stroube, and it it doubtful if his birth name is known for certain. It is also believed that he has his own shadowy organisation somewhere, though that is so shrouded in rumours that even half-truths are hard to find. When he was younger, Kalen often joined numerous occult organisations, from the Golden Dawn and Illuminates of Thanateros to Fraternas Saturni, and TOPY. Due to his odd personality, it is generally near impossible to ascertain what his true goals are. However, whatever they are, it's doubtless that they are ambitious. During recent times, he's ended up at this academy, perhaps in search of yet more help.
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|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
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Postby Dragonic Outland » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:41 am

Videssos wrote:Demonic powers aren't actually against the rules.
I guess I should just change the demon reference, into something slightly different. I was gonna give him a connection to Orochimaru anyway, so I'll just say those powers came from a curse mark seal thingy from Orochimaru.

Isn't having demonic powers similar to being a Satanic being? Look below.
Red Croatia wrote:- No Mythological Characters and Characters that mimic them using their ability
- No Divine/Satanic beings, this is not a church


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Postby Novia Soviet Socialist Republic » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:42 am

Rules

- No one-liners. At least put SOME effort into it
- No weapons unless they somehow relate to the IC
- Arguing is encouraged if caused by a sporting manner and doesn't resolve around insults
- All PC's are on a equal level when it comes to combating
- Don't use images that are too large in the IC unless you wish to spoiler them
- Don't have descriptive sex. Nobody wants to know how hard you stuck up your ***** down someones *****.
- If you're gonna say something in a different language, make sure to translate it to us
- No Godmodding
- No Mythological Characters and Characters that mimic them using their ability
- No Divine/Satanic beings, this is not a church
- No Royalty


Think you will find that demons are against the rules. He has a demon in him thus there is a demonic being.

It's against the rules. Sorry I can't accept it.
u wot m8

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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:43 am

Dragonic Outland wrote:
Videssos wrote:Demonic powers aren't actually against the rules.
I guess I should just change the demon reference, into something slightly different. I was gonna give him a connection to Orochimaru anyway, so I'll just say those powers came from a curse mark seal thingy from Orochimaru.

Isn't having demonic powers similar to being a Satanic being? Look below.
Red Croatia wrote:- No Mythological Characters and Characters that mimic them using their ability
- No Divine/Satanic beings, this is not a church


Um, no.
It's not Christian.
Nor is it belonging to Judaism or Islam.
Therefore, it's not Satanic.
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:44 am

Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:Rules

- No one-liners. At least put SOME effort into it
- No weapons unless they somehow relate to the IC
- Arguing is encouraged if caused by a sporting manner and doesn't resolve around insults
- All PC's are on a equal level when it comes to combating
- Don't use images that are too large in the IC unless you wish to spoiler them
- Don't have descriptive sex. Nobody wants to know how hard you stuck up your ***** down someones *****.
- If you're gonna say something in a different language, make sure to translate it to us
- No Godmodding
- No Mythological Characters and Characters that mimic them using their ability
- No Divine/Satanic beings, this is not a church
- No Royalty

Think you will find that demons are against the rules. He has a demon in him thus there is a demonic being.

It's against the rules. Sorry I can't accept it.




As I've said, I've changed the freaking app.
Look again.
I said I changed it to recieving said abilities/powers that could be percieved as "demonic," via a curse mark/seal from Orochimaru.
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|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Novia Soviet Socialist Republic » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:45 am

Videssos wrote:
Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:Rules

- No one-liners. At least put SOME effort into it
- No weapons unless they somehow relate to the IC
- Arguing is encouraged if caused by a sporting manner and doesn't resolve around insults
- All PC's are on a equal level when it comes to combating
- Don't use images that are too large in the IC unless you wish to spoiler them
- Don't have descriptive sex. Nobody wants to know how hard you stuck up your ***** down someones *****.
- If you're gonna say something in a different language, make sure to translate it to us
- No Godmodding
- No Mythological Characters and Characters that mimic them using their ability
- No Divine/Satanic beings, this is not a church
- No Royalty

Think you will find that demons are against the rules. He has a demon in him thus there is a demonic being.

It's against the rules. Sorry I can't accept it.




As I've said, I've changed the freaking app.
Look again.
I said I changed it to recieving said abilities/powers that could be percieved as "demonic," via a curse mark/seal from Orochimaru.


Hmm...Alright. But it's demon like powers no actual demon involved.

So I will accept this alright?
u wot m8

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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:46 am

Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:
Videssos wrote:


As I've said, I've changed the freaking app.
Look again.
I said I changed it to recieving said abilities/powers that could be percieved as "demonic," via a curse mark/seal from Orochimaru.


Hmm...Alright. But it's demon like powers no actual demon involved.

So I will accept this alright?


Yep.
Go ahead.
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Novia Soviet Socialist Republic » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:48 am

Videssos wrote:
Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:
Hmm...Alright. But it's demon like powers no actual demon involved.

So I will accept this alright?


Yep.
Go ahead.

Its' accepted then. Go ahead and post with him.
u wot m8

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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 3:53 am

Novia Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:
Videssos wrote:
Yep.
Go ahead.

Its' accepted then. Go ahead and post with him.


Good.
I will, once I figure out a good time and place in the IC for him to turn up.
Likewise, with Orochimaru, though it won't be an intro style post for him.

Also, just so people know, here's what he looks like in the two stages/levels of that curse mark's activation:
Image

ImageImage
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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Postby Siliarba » Sun Jul 07, 2013 4:32 am

Just try to avoid acting to overpowered, as with orochimaru a teacher froze everyone in animated suspension and knocked them out the class, a teacher who is most likely more powerfull than everyone in the class and you acted like it was nothing. Everyones at the same level so nobody shouldve been immune to that aspecially seeing an OP wrote it seeing NPC's can godmode if it's the op's desire.
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Postby Videssos » Sun Jul 07, 2013 4:35 am

Siliarba wrote:Just try to avoid acting to overpowered, as with orochimaru a teacher froze everyone in animated suspension and knocked them out the class, a teacher who is most likely more powerfull than everyone in the class and you acted like it was nothing. Everyones at the same level so nobody shouldve been immune to that aspecially seeing an OP wrote it seeing NPC's can godmode if it's the op's desire.


I wasn't the only one who did that.
Half the other people, too.

Also, I've been noticing in Naruto, it's always pretty funny when Naruto and Hinata encounter each other.
And Naruto almost always ends up saying something that could be misconstrued as a romantic gesture, whilst acting oblivious.
|Now a member of Mirakai's harem|
A little bird told me, "Go, Go! Socialise! Talk to those fine people! And then, KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM! Plunge your knife into their throats when they ain't lookin', and then burn 'em to the ground!"
Well that's silly, isn't it?
"Winter is coming" - Stark motto.
Syrio Forel- "What do we say to the god of death?"
Arya Stark- "Not today"
Syrio Forel- "All men are made of water, do you know this? If you pierce them, the water leaks out and they die."
My Underworld RP ----> Here <~~~ My RP



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