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Olthar
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Postby Olthar » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:04 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
Nightkill the Emperor wrote:I enjoy naming my threads after Linkin Park songs, since I like the band.

But more importantly, because Nat hates them.


Ahh.

Question, should we be tailoring apps to Elfen High's powerscale, or is using them with our own format fine?

I'm sure you can just post your apps as are. I doubt the power grid will actually come into play in this RP. It doesn't even come into play in EH.
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Postby Nationstatelandsville » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:05 pm

Nightkill the Emperor wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:
Ahh.

Question, should we be tailoring apps to Elfen High's powerscale, or is using them with our own format fine?

If you guys did tailor it to our powerscale, I would fall before you in wonder and appreciation.

But your own format is perfectly acceptable.

At one point, when making Aziraphale's app,I simply said "Fuck it" (literally) and used as many damn points as I want.
"Then I was fertilized and grew wise;
From a word to a word I was led to a word,
From a work to a work I was led to a work."
- Odin, Hávamál 138-141, the Poetic Edda, as translated by Dan McCoy.

I enjoy meta-humor and self-deprecation. Annoying, right?

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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:06 pm

Nightkill the Emperor wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:
Ahh.

Question, should we be tailoring apps to Elfen High's powerscale, or is using them with our own format fine?

If you guys did tailor it to our powerscale, I would fall before you in wonder and appreciation.

But your own format is perfectly acceptable.


OK, thanks for the clarification.

Nationstatelandsville wrote:At one point, when making Aziraphale's app,I simply said "Fuck it" (literally) and used as many damn points as I want.


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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:06 pm

Nationstatelandsville wrote:
Nightkill the Emperor wrote:If you guys did tailor it to our powerscale, I would fall before you in wonder and appreciation.

But your own format is perfectly acceptable.

At one point, when making Aziraphale's app,I simply said "Fuck it" (literally) and used as many damn points as I want.

And I didn't really even notice, because you have quite a lot, as well as unofficial co-OP privileges.
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Postby Erucia » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:07 pm

Nightkill the Emperor wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:
Ahh.

Question, should we be tailoring apps to Elfen High's powerscale, or is using them with our own format fine?

If you guys did tailor it to our powerscale, I would fall before you in wonder and appreciation.

But your own format is perfectly acceptable.

...This might be kinda a stupid question, but do we apply the EH app questions to our PL apps (e.g. ratings for the INT, STR, etc.)?
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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:07 pm

Olthar wrote:I'm sure you can just post your apps as are. I doubt the power grid will actually come into play in this RP. It doesn't even come into play in EH.


It doesn't?
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Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:07 pm

Erucia wrote:
Nightkill the Emperor wrote:If you guys did tailor it to our powerscale, I would fall before you in wonder and appreciation.

But your own format is perfectly acceptable.

...This might be kinda a stupid question, but do we apply the EH app questions to our PL apps (e.g. ratings for the INT, STR, etc.)?

Best you can.

You really do not have to do it at all.
Hi! I'm Khan, your local misanthropic Indian.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith.
P2TM RP Discussion Thread
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Tiami is cool.
Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
The balkens wrote:
# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:07 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
Olthar wrote:I'm sure you can just post your apps as are. I doubt the power grid will actually come into play in this RP. It doesn't even come into play in EH.


It doesn't?

It's a rough guideline to limit godmods.
Hi! I'm Khan, your local misanthropic Indian.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith.
P2TM RP Discussion Thread
If you want a good rp, read this shit.
Tiami is cool.
Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
The balkens wrote:
# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Tiltjuice » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:08 pm

Nightkill the Emperor wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:
It doesn't?

It's a rough guideline to limit godmods.


OK, understood.
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Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
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Postby Individuality-ness » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:08 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
Olthar wrote:I'm sure you can just post your apps as are. I doubt the power grid will actually come into play in this RP. It doesn't even come into play in EH.

It doesn't?

It's mostly there to prevent godmod. Most of us just say screw it and just do it in the way we want, so long as it BARELY conforms.
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Postby Nationstatelandsville » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:09 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
Nightkill the Emperor wrote:If you guys did tailor it to our powerscale, I would fall before you in wonder and appreciation.

But your own format is perfectly acceptable.


OK, thanks for the clarification.

Nationstatelandsville wrote:At one point, when making Aziraphale's app,I simply said "Fuck it" (literally) and used as many damn points as I want.


.....

You seem to be under the impression that Khan is a "strong leader", "strong", or "leader".

He mainly just gives toys to do whatever want and smacks us if we squabble. Sometimes.
"Then I was fertilized and grew wise;
From a word to a word I was led to a word,
From a work to a work I was led to a work."
- Odin, Hávamál 138-141, the Poetic Edda, as translated by Dan McCoy.

I enjoy meta-humor and self-deprecation. Annoying, right?

Goodbye.

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Olthar
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Postby Olthar » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:09 pm

Tiltjuice wrote:
Olthar wrote:I'm sure you can just post your apps as are. I doubt the power grid will actually come into play in this RP. It doesn't even come into play in EH.


It doesn't?

Not really, no. It could be replaced by vague adjectives, and it'd be just as accurate. :p
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Postby Nationstatelandsville » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:12 pm

Olthar wrote:
Tiltjuice wrote:
It doesn't?

Not really, no. It could be replaced by vague adjectives, and it'd be just as accurate. :p

We don't actually fight each other nearly enough.

We haven't even had a proper "fight" in a rather long time. I don't mind it, myself.
"Then I was fertilized and grew wise;
From a word to a word I was led to a word,
From a work to a work I was led to a work."
- Odin, Hávamál 138-141, the Poetic Edda, as translated by Dan McCoy.

I enjoy meta-humor and self-deprecation. Annoying, right?

Goodbye.

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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:13 pm

Nationstatelandsville wrote:
Olthar wrote:Not really, no. It could be replaced by vague adjectives, and it'd be just as accurate. :p

We don't actually fight each other nearly enough.

We haven't even had a proper "fight" in a rather long time. I don't mind it, myself.

I still enjoy the powergrid, since it helps me shape a character who is otherwise often a featureless blob.
Hi! I'm Khan, your local misanthropic Indian.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith.
P2TM RP Discussion Thread
If you want a good rp, read this shit.
Tiami is cool.
Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
The balkens wrote:
# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Olthar » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:14 pm

Nightkill the Emperor wrote:
Nationstatelandsville wrote:We don't actually fight each other nearly enough.

We haven't even had a proper "fight" in a rather long time. I don't mind it, myself.

I still enjoy the powergrid, since it helps me shape a character who is otherwise often a featureless blob.

It does make a useful guideline to solidify a character's capabilities.
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The New Velociraptor Empire
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Postby The New Velociraptor Empire » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:17 pm

My Original app is s#!t, so I used my Crucible app and threw in a powergrid to top it off.

The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:NATION: The New Velociraptor Empire

CHARACTER 1: Dr. Neil Von Eldritch
URL TO CHARACTER PICTURE: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-AW9ajrsz-oU/TpC0dJRMJfI/AAAAAAAABSY/c2JZk4AmX2U/s1600/Dinosaur.png
CHARACTER CLASSIFICATION (mortal, god, demon, etc): Mortal Genetically Engineered Dinosaur
CHARACTER POWERS: Heightened senses which is normal for Velociraptors. Is insane, so "unnatural" and "things that shouldn't be" are accepted as normal by him. He has a high tolerance to electric shocks.
CHARACTER FLAWS/WEAKNESSES: Although a genius, he can be rather oblivious of danger. His insanity often leads him to making terrible decisions. He is a terrible marksman and a worse driver.
SPECIAL ABILITIES OR SKILLS: "700 IQ" Intelligence, a working knowledge of all fields of science and engineering, MacGyvering Advanced Technology from Scrap, Skilled at Hand-to-Claw combat, is a highly trained surgeon and medical doctor.

BACKGROUND (we don't need tons of paragraphs): A psychotic supergenius mad scientist velociraptor sent to conquer the planet. It is his job as an Agent of the Empire. Although his plans for a world dominated by raptors was ruined by being arrested by the MIB (and imprisoned on Lunar Maximum Security Prison where he died trying to break out with his girlfriend). His second plan, which he called for backup from himself from alternate universes, was foiled with the power of friendship (and a sneak attack where all his neighbors beat him up and threatened to kill his girlfriend). He currently is raising a family with Gretta (whom he met at a party and is now married to) and hopes his children will take over the world one day if he fails again. He likes to experiment with SCIENCE!!! and makes interesting things for his children. He is friendly and positive (is slightly disturbing to watch him smile) with a rather ambiguous moral compass. He hates magic due to an earlier incident (blinded and having his face smashed in), but mostly because he sees it as the cheat codes of the universe.

NOTES (any things we should know about that aren't covered above): Neil's standard equipment includes a "Vortex Manipulator" (to travel across space time and dimensions), a "Laser-Spanner" (to aid in construction and repair of his devices), and a "Telluric Interchanger" (for disguising himself as human). His weapon of choice is a "Series 5 De-Atomizer" (for disintegrating enemies)
LINK TO POSTS THAT SHOWCASE YOUR CHARACTER IN PL IC (maximum of three links): Neil Gets Blackmailed, Neil Shows Off, Neil Tries to get Rid of a Demon
Intelligence: 9
Strength: 4
Durability: 5
Speed: 5
Fighting Skill: 4
Charisma: 1


CHARACTER 2: Dr. Martin Fortu
URL TO CHARACTER PICTURE: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/086/3/1/human_wheatley_by_kikity1414-d4u6hks.jpg
CHARACTER CLASSIFICATION (mortal, god, demon, etc): Mortal Brain in a Cybernetic Body
CHARACTER POWERS: His limbs can be detached and still function. His head can survive by itself for 24 hours without his body. He can adjust his eyes to see other spectrums of electromagnetic radiation (any type of light). He has implanted devices that keep him from being poisoned, and enables breathing underwater and in oxygenless environments.
CHARACTER FLAWS/WEAKNESSES: Fortu is prone to panic, paranoia, and running. He tends to try to avoid confrontations because he would rather not fight. He is Vulnerable to electric shocks.
SPECIAL ABILITIES OR SKILLS: He can hack electronic systems and databases from nearly any terminal. He also can give any electronic device an artificial intelligence. He has mild surgical skills and knowledge of advanced first aid.

BACKGROUND (we don't need tons of paragraphs): Fortu started off as a clone of Neil's. In his first day of life, he had his head cut off by a neighbor just because he walked by sipping a soda. The next few months were spent hanging from a wall, as just a head until Neil came and got him back. He was given internet access and a life support collar and stuck in Neil's fridge. During that time he learned to hack security systems and secure databases. Eventually, once Neil was taken away to Lunar Max, Fortu had to step up and created his own body that looked human. He became a computer programmer and worked to keep his place in the apartment. Eventually he broke Gretta out and had to keep her comforted as she worked to reanimate Neil. After that He was hired by Monique to do freelance hacking to destroy a rival corporation. Fortu soon panicked and went to talk to a girl he had a crush on (she turned out to be an alien robot that kidnapped him and reduced him to an AI and forced him to work for them). Eventually he was fired from making cyborgs for the Drones (those alien robots) because his were too difficult to control, he was dumped back on Earth. He then designed another humanoid body so he wouldn't have to live out his life as an AI. After that he helped Monique hide while in a time of need and soon fell in love with her. Because of his relationship and choice of a humanoid body he is antagonized by a couple of the other clones of Neil. Later he realized that he was skilled at creating cybernetics and decided to focus on that instead of hacking. Fortu has a more well defined moral compass and is determined to stay on the good side and not succumb to insanity (a common affliction among raptor minds).

NOTES (any things we should know about that aren't covered above): His standard equipment is a "Hi-jacker" that he uses to remotely hack devices within line of sight.
LINK TO POSTS THAT SHOWCASE YOUR CHARACTER IN PL IC (maximum of three links): Fortu Blackmails Neil, Fortu Discusses Fighting Insanity, Fortu Helps a Friend
Intelligence: 5
Strength: 2
Durability: 5
Speed: 2
Fighting Skill: 2
Charisma: 2
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Postby Nationstatelandsville » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:18 pm

Nightkill the Emperor wrote:
Nationstatelandsville wrote:We don't actually fight each other nearly enough.

We haven't even had a proper "fight" in a rather long time. I don't mind it, myself.

I still enjoy the powergrid, since it helps me shape a character who is otherwise often a featureless blob.

I agree - it helped me create Lewis' style of fighting, which I always love writing.
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From a word to a word I was led to a word,
From a work to a work I was led to a work."
- Odin, Hávamál 138-141, the Poetic Edda, as translated by Dan McCoy.

I enjoy meta-humor and self-deprecation. Annoying, right?

Goodbye.

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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:19 pm

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Hi! I'm Khan, your local misanthropic Indian.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith.
P2TM RP Discussion Thread
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Tiami is cool.
Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
The balkens wrote:
# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Torsiedelle » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:19 pm

I hate my curret apps, so I decided to write these. I hope they're good enough, though I'm not expecting to be chosen. Still, it won't hurt to try, eh?

Tora Dimitrov (Full/Real), Torii (As known by everyone else.)

After their parents split, Torii was taken by her father Eastward. In a twist of fate, she was lost, and would spend the majority of her life living with other children as an orphan. War hit her hometown when she was still young, and not even the children were spared the horrors. Many of them, including little Tora, were conscripted by the Provincial military. From then on, Tora would serve as a worker, keeping up the different weapons and machinery around, and sometimes even being expected to fight. She watched a lot of friends die, something that would haunt her forever.

But it wasn't all bad. Later on in her life, she finally met her father again. Despite her only seeing him a few times, she has a strong bond with her father, and loves him more than any other person. She later was able to become a Junior Agent, who can be sent to other places to write and interact with the local populous. It was then that her life turned around. She started to meet new people, make friends, and learn new things about herself. She truly was blessed, she though. However, even in her new life, she is still not safe from the insanity of the city.



Katya Dimitrov IV
Katya was raised by her Mother, a cold, demanding aristocrat of Western Torsiedellie Allegiance. She was expected to be a proper woman, learning how to cook and clean. In her more leisurely activities, she learned how to play the piano and violin, play tennis, sprint, swim, and other sch activities. However, her life wasn't pleasant. Her mother was always breathing down her neck and berating her, setting high expectations, and at some points, even hitting her. She blew this off for a while, and allowed her mother to indoctrinate her, until one day, when her mother crossed the line. She volunteered for the West Torsiedellie Junior Military Program, and became an Agent, like her younger sibling, whom she still had met only once before. She went on to experience many adventures, and lightened up (though still not enough for her sister). Later, thanks to her sibling's meddling, she was assigned to the city of Beilfield, where she would go on to get wrapped up in all sorts of escapades, much to her dismay. Despite her attempts to appear cold, and not get attached to the strange foreigners, Katya found herself surrounded by friends and loves, something which she isn't afraid to admit to enjoying.
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Postby Erucia » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:20 pm

Name: Raymond "Ray" Jansma
Age (Actual): 27
Age (Appears): 27
Race: Human
Powergrid/Powers:
INT: 3
STR: 1
DUR: 2
SPD: 1
FS: 4
Magic Skills: 0

Weaknesses (Optional, but you could get more points if you do this):
-Generally average in physical capabilities, his only redeeming parts being above-average intelligence and reasonable endurance.
-While he has excellent fighting skills, he generally only holds such skill in firearms use. His hand-to-hand skill is generally subpar, and is usually very crude and brutal.
-Lacks all magic abilities.
Personality: Generally serious in everything but dealing with his friends and his boyfriend; tries to act professional.
(Appearance: Imagine this crossed with a bit of this. Coming in at 6'0'' and 176 pounds, Ray is a medium-framed male human. He has Hazel eyes, alongside trimmed black hair. Ray has also gone through a complicated surgical appearance that has changed his appearance to that of a furry. His "fursona" is a grey fox; he is predominantly covered in grey and white fur, with short ears and a tail of approx. 1 1/2 inches in length.)

Ray had always liked the idea of adventure as a child; despite his intelligence, his boyhood persuaded him at the age of 22 to pursue a job within the Wolf City PD. While certainly not pretty, he enjoyed a somewhat glamorous position as a detective within the Northern end of the city. He worked with such legends as Mark Phelps and Jesse Parks, and even enjoyed a small amount of public fame for famously busting a real estate extortion ring. He served a good six years with the department, and loved every minute of it. Well, almost every minute.

In the beginning of his sixth year in the PD, he got reprimanded for inappropriately handling a (rather personal) case involving a (rather asshole-ish) family member, and was strung out on excessive use of force. His position all but gone, he resigned and attempted to begin a private investigation firm, to no success.

However, his investigation talents didn't go unnoticed. Officially recruited by the Strategic Threat Analysis Bureau as a "sleeper agent," Ray was joined into the secretive "Unit 317;" a rumored government agency responsible for everything from extraterrestrial analysis to active engagement of foreign threats on DU soil. Under the supervision of the Minister of Defense, it turned to be a high-tech paramilitary group of 2,000 that handles sensitive situations for numerous sections of the government.

Despite his one-time fame, Ray fit in perfectly. Originally handling minor investigations, he eventually moved up to being an officer within the group after only a year in The Unit. However, recently he's been actually placed on sleeper duty after a request by his superiors. So, after a recent string of very odd events, he's managed to find himself here, at the apartment. He's got a few stories to tell, with the added bonus of telling them like an old, crazy man.
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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:20 pm

The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:My Original app is s#!t, so I used my Crucible app and threw in a powergrid to top it off.

The New Velociraptor Empire wrote:NATION: The New Velociraptor Empire

CHARACTER 1: Dr. Neil Von Eldritch
URL TO CHARACTER PICTURE: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-AW9ajrsz-oU/TpC0dJRMJfI/AAAAAAAABSY/c2JZk4AmX2U/s1600/Dinosaur.png
CHARACTER CLASSIFICATION (mortal, god, demon, etc): Mortal Genetically Engineered Dinosaur
CHARACTER POWERS: Heightened senses which is normal for Velociraptors. Is insane, so "unnatural" and "things that shouldn't be" are accepted as normal by him. He has a high tolerance to electric shocks.
CHARACTER FLAWS/WEAKNESSES: Although a genius, he can be rather oblivious of danger. His insanity often leads him to making terrible decisions. He is a terrible marksman and a worse driver.
SPECIAL ABILITIES OR SKILLS: "700 IQ" Intelligence, a working knowledge of all fields of science and engineering, MacGyvering Advanced Technology from Scrap, Skilled at Hand-to-Claw combat, is a highly trained surgeon and medical doctor.

BACKGROUND (we don't need tons of paragraphs): A psychotic supergenius mad scientist velociraptor sent to conquer the planet. It is his job as an Agent of the Empire. Although his plans for a world dominated by raptors was ruined by being arrested by the MIB (and imprisoned on Lunar Maximum Security Prison where he died trying to break out with his girlfriend). His second plan, which he called for backup from himself from alternate universes, was foiled with the power of friendship (and a sneak attack where all his neighbors beat him up and threatened to kill his girlfriend). He currently is raising a family with Gretta (whom he met at a party and is now married to) and hopes his children will take over the world one day if he fails again. He likes to experiment with SCIENCE!!! and makes interesting things for his children. He is friendly and positive (is slightly disturbing to watch him smile) with a rather ambiguous moral compass. He hates magic due to an earlier incident (blinded and having his face smashed in), but mostly because he sees it as the cheat codes of the universe.

NOTES (any things we should know about that aren't covered above): Neil's standard equipment includes a "Vortex Manipulator" (to travel across space time and dimensions), a "Laser-Spanner" (to aid in construction and repair of his devices), and a "Telluric Interchanger" (for disguising himself as human). His weapon of choice is a "Series 5 De-Atomizer" (for disintegrating enemies)
LINK TO POSTS THAT SHOWCASE YOUR CHARACTER IN PL IC (maximum of three links): Neil Gets Blackmailed, Neil Shows Off, Neil Tries to get Rid of a Demon
Intelligence: 9
Strength: 4
Durability: 5
Speed: 5
Fighting Skill: 4
Charisma: 1


CHARACTER 2: Dr. Martin Fortu
URL TO CHARACTER PICTURE: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/086/3/1/human_wheatley_by_kikity1414-d4u6hks.jpg
CHARACTER CLASSIFICATION (mortal, god, demon, etc): Mortal Brain in a Cybernetic Body
CHARACTER POWERS: His limbs can be detached and still function. His head can survive by itself for 24 hours without his body. He can adjust his eyes to see other spectrums of electromagnetic radiation (any type of light). He has implanted devices that keep him from being poisoned, and enables breathing underwater and in oxygenless environments.
CHARACTER FLAWS/WEAKNESSES: Fortu is prone to panic, paranoia, and running. He tends to try to avoid confrontations because he would rather not fight. He is Vulnerable to electric shocks.
SPECIAL ABILITIES OR SKILLS: He can hack electronic systems and databases from nearly any terminal. He also can give any electronic device an artificial intelligence. He has mild surgical skills and knowledge of advanced first aid.

BACKGROUND (we don't need tons of paragraphs): Fortu started off as a clone of Neil's. In his first day of life, he had his head cut off by a neighbor just because he walked by sipping a soda. The next few months were spent hanging from a wall, as just a head until Neil came and got him back. He was given internet access and a life support collar and stuck in Neil's fridge. During that time he learned to hack security systems and secure databases. Eventually, once Neil was taken away to Lunar Max, Fortu had to step up and created his own body that looked human. He became a computer programmer and worked to keep his place in the apartment. Eventually he broke Gretta out and had to keep her comforted as she worked to reanimate Neil. After that He was hired by Monique to do freelance hacking to destroy a rival corporation. Fortu soon panicked and went to talk to a girl he had a crush on (she turned out to be an alien robot that kidnapped him and reduced him to an AI and forced him to work for them). Eventually he was fired from making cyborgs for the Drones (those alien robots) because his were too difficult to control, he was dumped back on Earth. He then designed another humanoid body so he wouldn't have to live out his life as an AI. After that he helped Monique hide while in a time of need and soon fell in love with her. Because of his relationship and choice of a humanoid body he is antagonized by a couple of the other clones of Neil. Later he realized that he was skilled at creating cybernetics and decided to focus on that instead of hacking. Fortu has a more well defined moral compass and is determined to stay on the good side and not succumb to insanity (a common affliction among raptor minds).

NOTES (any things we should know about that aren't covered above): His standard equipment is a "Hi-jacker" that he uses to remotely hack devices within line of sight.
LINK TO POSTS THAT SHOWCASE YOUR CHARACTER IN PL IC (maximum of three links): Fortu Blackmails Neil, Fortu Discusses Fighting Insanity, Fortu Helps a Friend
Intelligence: 5
Strength: 2
Durability: 5
Speed: 2
Fighting Skill: 2
Charisma: 2

These guys.

I like these guys.
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Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
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# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Nude East Ireland » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:20 pm

I'll just watch this and probably mock everyone.

For those of you PL people, know that it's nothing personal.
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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:21 pm

Torsiedelle wrote:I hate my curret apps, so I decided to write these. I hope they're good enough, though I'm not expecting to be chosen. Still, it won't hurt to try, eh?

Tora Dimitrov (Full/Real), Torii (As known by everyone else.)

After their parents split, Torii was taken by her father Eastward. In a twist of fate, she was lost, and would spend the majority of her life living with other children as an orphan. War hit her hometown when she was still young, and not even the children were spared the horrors. Many of them, including little Tora, were conscripted by the Provincial military. From then on, Tora would serve as a worker, keeping up the different weapons and machinery around, and sometimes even being expected to fight. She watched a lot of friends die, something that would haunt her forever.

But it wasn't all bad. Later on in her life, she finally met her father again. Despite her only seeing him a few times, she has a strong bond with her father, and loves him more than any other person. She later was able to become a Junior Agent, who can be sent to other places to write and interact with the local populous. It was then that her life turned around. She started to meet new people, make friends, and learn new things about herself. She truly was blessed, she though. However, even in her new life, she is still not safe from the insanity of the city.



Katya Dimitrov IV
Katya was raised by her Mother, a cold, demanding aristocrat of Western Torsiedellie Allegiance. She was expected to be a proper woman, learning how to cook and clean. In her more leisurely activities, she learned how to play the piano and violin, play tennis, sprint, swim, and other sch activities. However, her life wasn't pleasant. Her mother was always breathing down her neck and berating her, setting high expectations, and at some points, even hitting her. She blew this off for a while, and allowed her mother to indoctrinate her, until one day, when her mother crossed the line. She volunteered for the West Torsiedellie Junior Military Program, and became an Agent, like her younger sibling, whom she still had met only once before. She went on to experience many adventures, and lightened up (though still not enough for her sister). Later, thanks to her sibling's meddling, she was assigned to the city of Beilfield, where she would go on to get wrapped up in all sorts of escapades, much to her dismay. Despite her attempts to appear cold, and not get attached to the strange foreigners, Katya found herself surrounded by friends and loves, something which she isn't afraid to admit to enjoying.

Can you make actual formatted apps like the other PLers, please?
Hi! I'm Khan, your local misanthropic Indian.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith.
P2TM RP Discussion Thread
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Tiami is cool.
Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
The balkens wrote:
# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Nightkill the Emperor » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:22 pm

Erucia wrote:Name: Raymond "Ray" Jansma
Age (Actual): 27
Age (Appears): 27
Race: Human
Powergrid/Powers:
INT: 3
STR: 1
DUR: 2
SPD: 1
FS: 4
Magic Skills: 0

Weaknesses (Optional, but you could get more points if you do this):
-Generally average in physical capabilities, his only redeeming parts being above-average intelligence and reasonable endurance.
-While he has excellent fighting skills, he generally only holds such skill in firearms use. His hand-to-hand skill is generally subpar, and is usually very crude and brutal.
-Lacks all magic abilities.
Personality: Generally serious in everything but dealing with his friends and his boyfriend; tries to act professional.
(Appearance: Imagine this crossed with a bit of this. Coming in at 6'0'' and 176 pounds, Ray is a medium-framed male human. He has Hazel eyes, alongside trimmed black hair. Ray has also gone through a complicated surgical appearance that has changed his appearance to that of a furry. His "fursona" is a grey fox; he is predominantly covered in grey and white fur, with short ears and a tail of approx. 1 1/2 inches in length.)

Ray had always liked the idea of adventure as a child; despite his intelligence, his boyhood persuaded him at the age of 22 to pursue a job within the Wolf City PD. While certainly not pretty, he enjoyed a somewhat glamorous position as a detective within the Northern end of the city. He worked with such legends as Mark Phelps and Jesse Parks, and even enjoyed a small amount of public fame for famously busting a real estate extortion ring. He served a good six years with the department, and loved every minute of it. Well, almost every minute.

In the beginning of his sixth year in the PD, he got reprimanded for inappropriately handling a (rather personal) case involving a (rather asshole-ish) family member, and was strung out on excessive use of force. His position all but gone, he resigned and attempted to begin a private investigation firm, to no success.

However, his investigation talents didn't go unnoticed. Officially recruited by the Strategic Threat Analysis Bureau as a "sleeper agent," Ray was joined into the secretive "Unit 317;" a rumored government agency responsible for everything from extraterrestrial analysis to active engagement of foreign threats on DU soil. Under the supervision of the Minister of Defense, it turned to be a high-tech paramilitary group of 2,000 that handles sensitive situations for numerous sections of the government.

Despite his one-time fame, Ray fit in perfectly. Originally handling minor investigations, he eventually moved up to being an officer within the group after only a year in The Unit. However, recently he's been actually placed on sleeper duty after a request by his superiors. So, after a recent string of very odd events, he's managed to find himself here, at the apartment. He's got a few stories to tell, with the added bonus of telling them like an old, crazy man.

Seems good.
Hi! I'm Khan, your local misanthropic Indian.
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith.
P2TM RP Discussion Thread
If you want a good rp, read this shit.
Tiami is cool.
Nat: Night's always in some bizarre state somewhere between "intoxicated enough to kill a hair metal lead singer" and "annoying Mormon missionary sober".

Swith: It's because you're so awesome. God himself refreshes the screen before he types just to see if Nightkill has written anything while he was off somewhere else.

Monfrox wrote:
The balkens wrote:
# went there....

It's Nightkill. He's been there so long he rents out rooms to other people at a flat rate, but demands cash up front.

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Postby Erucia » Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:23 pm

Nude East Ireland wrote:I'll just watch this and probably mock everyone.

For those of you PL people, know that it's nothing personal.

...You know, your flag corresponds with that. I do imagine I'm going to be insulted brutally by Doctor House.
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I wear teal, blue pink & red for Swith.

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