NationStates

Swith Witherward wrote:

Tiltjuice wrote:Are mine OK?

The paragraphs are fine. I was hoping people could do apps so we could keep track of all this stuff.

Bran, your stuff is updated.

OK. It doesn't bother me as much to have mine cut down basically to character names, since I host a lot of the descriptions on the OSF anyway.

Personally, I like the idea of keeping the character descriptions listed on the front page small and simple while providing links to the fleshed-out apps.

Tiltjuice wrote:

Swith Witherward wrote:The paragraphs are fine. I was hoping people could do apps so we could keep track of all this stuff.

Bran, your stuff is updated.

OK. It doesn't bother me as much to have mine cut down basically to character names, since I host a lot of the descriptions on the OSF anyway.

What I'm also trying to do is cut down on the amount of editing I have to do. This way, players can make changes in their apps while the thread is still live. As long as they edit their post, I won't have to change the link in their tab. I'll only have to change it if the thread locks and they need to post on the new OOC thread in order to update.

Swith Witherward wrote:

Tiltjuice wrote:
OK. It doesn't bother me as much to have mine cut down basically to character names, since I host a lot of the descriptions on the OSF anyway.

What I'm also trying to do is cut down on the amount of editing I have to do. This way, players can make changes in their apps while the thread is still live. As long as they edit their post, I won't have to change the link in their tab. I'll only have to change it if the thread locks and they need to post on the new OOC thread in order to update.

I don't know that very many of us refer back to each others' apps for details. Wouldn't it be better just for us all to write up char bios, slap them on the OSF and have that linked, like so?

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[url=someLink]AETEN[/url]
[url=someLink]Bran[/url]
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That way, we could avoid having things be lost when the threads are locked.

Tiltjuice wrote:

Swith Witherward wrote:What I'm also trying to do is cut down on the amount of editing I have to do. This way, players can make changes in their apps while the thread is still live. As long as they edit their post, I won't have to change the link in their tab. I'll only have to change it if the thread locks and they need to post on the new OOC thread in order to update.

I don't know that very many of us refer back to each others' apps for details. Wouldn't it be better just for us all to write up char bios, slap them on the OSF and have that linked, like so?

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[url=someLink]AETEN[/url]
[url=someLink]Bran[/url]
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That way, we could avoid having things be lost when the threads are locked.

We could, but then new members couldn't have bios unless they were in our region.

Swith Witherward wrote:We could, but then new members couldn't have bios unless they were in our region.

For those who couldn't, at least it would cut down on the character count in the posts here.

Tiltjuice wrote:

Swith Witherward wrote:We could, but then new members couldn't have bios unless they were in our region.

For those who couldn't, at least it would cut down on the character count in the posts here.

I have a small thread I opened specifically for bios applications (no other data) but that's going to be just a parking space in case NS doesn't allow us to be archived.

Urran wrote:

Nation Nickname: Urran
Character Name (can be different than nation name): Tieria Erde
URL to Character Picture or a few sentences about what they look like: http://www.cosplayisland.co.uk/files/co ... a_Erde.png
Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Innovater
Character Powers/Special Abilities (if any): Technopath, can control electronics in any form whether is be computers, robots, phones, or automatic doors. Capable of transferring his consciousness to any of these objects.
Character Weaknesses/Flaws: Tieria is a bit judgmental, cold and unfeeling. He is not exactly the friendliest guy and this can lead to him butting heads with others. He may be able to control certain types of technology, but only electronics. His body can be killed and his consciousness transfers into a piece of electronic equipment until he is placed back into a biological terminal or container.
Character Background: Tieria Erde is the twelfth and last in the line of Innovaters, a species created my an armed organization to lead humanity to a new future where the Innovaters rule over twelve territories of the earth. He used to see humans as inferior until his disconection from the supercomputer Veda, the mainframe used by the Organization to control the Innovaters. However, he has had a sense had a change of heart and has even gone so far as to call himself human. But, this has not changed his cold, stoic personality.
Additional Notes:
URL to Apartment Picture: http://i1226.photobucket.com/albums/ee4 ... /veda1.jpg
Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP itself.)

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: Tieria Erde is a technopath created by a private organization as a toll for world domination. He is a cold stoic, do not expect to see him smiling very often.

Nation Nickname: Urran
Character Name (can be different than nation name): Yoshi
URL to Character Picture or a few sentences about what they look like: http://images.wikia.com/gundam/images/3 ... h_2302.jpg
Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Urranese (Homo Urus)
Character Powers/Special Abilities (if any): Cat like reflexes, night vision, speed, flexibility.
Character Weaknesses/Flaws: Can't injest alcohol or red meat. Yoshi isn't very strong and is of a meek temperament, he won't stand up for himself.
Character Background: Yoshi was born in The Armed Republic of Urran. At the age of 10 he was orphaned in an airstrike in The Third Elemental War, he was never adopted. The boy is extremely shy due to post traumatic stress and the fact that, even before the event, he was a shy, kind person. Yoshi is very giving, believing that there is always someone worse off than you. He doesn't stand up for himself because he thinks himself worthless, but he will fight tooth and nail to protect what he loves. He came to the apartment to write about the people inside the building.
Additional Notes:
URL to Apartment Picture: http://furniturezz.com/wp-content/uploa ... sign-3.jpg
Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP itself.)

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: Yoshi is the buildings resident writer. He's an orphan that suffers somewhat from post traumatic stress. He is kind, loving, and compassionate.

Nation Nickname: Urran
Character Name (can be different than nation name): Yuri
URL to Character Picture or a few sentences about what they look like: http://fotos0.mundofotos.net/2007/13_07 ... kimono.jpg
Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Personification.
Character Powers/Special Abilities (if any): Yuri has the strength of 15 men, night vision, superior speed, superior reflexes, flexibility, her hair and eye color change daily.
Character Weaknesses/Flaws: Cannot ingest alcohol or red meat, hot headed.
Character Background: Yuri is the embodiment of Urran. As a result of her status, anything that happens in her nation affects her. She suffers frequent chest pains because of the wars her country has fought quite frequently. However, she embodies not only the fighting spirit, but also compassion of her people.
Additional Notes:
URL to Apartment Picture: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-80OUQ6NHzUg/T ... erior1.jpg
Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP itself.)

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: Yuri is the personification of Urran. She is hot headed, but compassionate. She has the fighting spirit of a samurai and it's hard to knock her down for long.

Nation Nickname: Urran
Character Name (can be different than nation name): Moon Blossom
URL to Character Picture or a few sentences about what they look like: http://api.ning.com/files/M1OyuyQ1sIQpD ... height=392
Character Species (nation personification, human, alien, etc): Vampire
Character Powers/Special Abilities (if any): Can transform into a black cat, bat, wolf of any species, flight in normal and bat form, spits venom and burns and can blind a victim, superior speed and reflexes, night vision, heat sensing capabilities.
Character Weaknesses/Flaws: Can be killed by driving a wooden steak into her heart or exposure to direct sunlight.
Character Background: Moon Blossom, or Blossom for short, is a vampire from Urran. She was born a normal Urranese girl but, after being bitten by a bat, she turned into a bloodsucking creature of the night. She has sense wondered the globe, sucking the life out of livestock along the way. She is the chupacabre. She came to live in the building quite by accident, being discovered on the door step by Jacob. She now resides in his apartment and became his maid of sorts. Despite her vampire status, she is quite gentle and caring, she refuses to suck blood from sentient creatures.
Additional Notes:
URL to Apartment Picture: http://elitecouturedesigns.files.wordpr ... thic-1.jpg
Link to RP examples: (this MUST be a DIRECT LINK to your IC post in an RP, NOT a link to the RP itself.)

IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details: Blossom is the buildings vampire and Jacob's maid. Despite what she is, she is actually quite friendly and gentle, if a little dark.

I'll update a bit later on.

Cer, could you possibly make that post any more closed? Also, Thriller moved downstairs with Naomi.

Swith Witherward wrote:I'll update a bit later on.

Cer, could you possibly make that post any more closed? Also, Thriller moved downstairs with Naomi.

That was a pretty shitty post. I'll rephrase it. REDACT>>>>

Nation Nickname: Aeten
Character Name: Volturius
URL to Character Picture or a few sentences about what they look like: Volt's armor. The only differences is the lack of lightning claws and clawed boot. His mutations include massive bat-like wings colored a vibrant red and large black-scaled tridactyl feet similar to that of a bird of prey or dinosaur. His face looks like this, add red eyes with a slight glow. Should also be noted that areas where he'd normally have hair (tops of arms, legs), he has blue proto-feathers.
Character Species: Chaos Mutated Astartes
Age: 627 years, technical.
Character Powers/Special Abilities (if any): He's an astartes. He may not be a psyker, but his augmentations are numerous and too many to list. It essentially comes down to super-strength, super-durability, minimal increased healing abilities, super-vision, immunity to poisons, flight (mutation), extremely increased speed cap, insane reaction times, and of course, extreme experience in combat.
Character Weaknesses/Flaws: Due to being a Chaos Astartes, a Night Lord, and spending centuries in combat, Volturius' morals have been twisted into a ghastly form beyond the recognition of most people, and completely desensitized to nearly everything. Thus, he's horribly skilled for this modern time, especially at negotiations. He views most mortal humans to be beneath his feet, used to either butchering them for laughs, using them as fodder in combat, or in the case of Slaanesh exercises, 'experimenting' with them. Currently he therefore relies mostly on intimidation when cutting deals with the local populace. He also has a weakness in Tipper, with her being a gigantic weakspot that he'll bend over backwards to protect.
Character Background: Volturius is a bred Chaos Raptor- his father was a Slaanesh-warped Chaos Space Marine and allowed him to actually father a son with one of his personal slaves, creating Volturius. Due to being the son of an astartes and thus having some natural increased abilities, Volturius was quickly chosen as a candidate for becoming a Neophyte and added to a pool of children awaiting
Additional Notes:
URL to Apartment Picture:


IMPORTANT:
One paragraph that sums up your character. This paragraph is what we'll use on your player tab on the first page of the thread. This MUST be brief. Your tab will contain a link to your application so people will have full details:


I'll finish this up later and put up extended apps for my other chars.

Swith.

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=249863&p=15416289&hilit=Tipper#p15416289

Levi is going to explain the facts of life to the twins?

Swith Witherward wrote::rofl: Levi is going to explain the facts of life to the twins?

Anything can happen in the Apartment. You could get a safety lesson from Neil, Ray could tell you about abstinence, and Levi could explain the facts of life.

Erucia wrote:

Swith Witherward wrote::rofl: Levi is going to explain the facts of life to the twins?

Anything can happen in the Apartment. You could get a safety lesson from Neil, Ray could tell you about abstinence, and Levi could explain the facts of life.

Quite true.

Nobody freak over Cer's next post. Well, freak if you want to. Muahahaha.

Swith Witherward wrote::rofl: Levi is going to explain the facts of life to the twins?

It's better than Tieria, he'd scare them half to death

Swith Witherward wrote:

Erucia wrote:Anything can happen in the Apartment. You could get a safety lesson from Neil, Ray could tell you about abstinence, and Levi could explain the facts of life.

Quite true.

Nobody freak over Cer's next post. Well, freak if you want to. Muahahaha.

What?! Now I'm scared!!

Bran, GT viewtopic.php?p=15424329#p15424329

Erucia wrote:

Swith Witherward wrote::rofl: Levi is going to explain the facts of life to the twins?

Anything can happen in the Apartment. You could get a safety lesson from Neil, Ray could tell you about abstinence, and Levi could explain the facts of life.

The three of them and either Chrys or Dora would screw a kid up something awful.

Cer... don't get my character pregnant.

Swith Witherward wrote:Cer... don't get my character pregnant.

Swith Witherward wrote:Cer... don't get my character pregnant.

Swith Witherward wrote:Cer... don't get my character pregnant.

...Well...

That's not a problem that Ray and Albert have.

GT's offline so if we all post like mad, he might not see "Swith's" offer.

Swith Witherward wrote:GT's offline so if we all post like mad, he might not see "Swith's" offer.

I didn't see it til after I posted..... Should I REDACT or....

Swith Witherward wrote:GT's offline so if we all post like mad, he might not see "Swith's" offer.

So does that mean Ray has to leave the apartment and stop being in a drunken depression?