Akkaga wrote:CenSoRhed wrote:In the spirit, I agree. I think you might have handled the "execution" differently, like having Karl's relicath's DIVE move finish X off, with the rest of us, grudgingly, deciding to let him live. Maybe putting him in a poke all and letting it drift down to the sea?
Any chance you want to re-write?
Yeah his next punishment maybe, but that should hurt his "pride" and "honor".
My thing is, I hate RetCon. Your remedy happened in the past, not at the point the story had progressed to. For reading, it does't "flow". That's why I hoped you'd edit or rewrite your punishment.



