Total War: Victoria [OOC/CLOSED]

[Len Hyet]

Yeah, so I'm thinking I'm going to raise the numbers of soldiers I have

[Len Hyet]

NATION APP
Nation name: Len Hyet
Starting leader: Queen Isabella II
Capitol: Gibraltar
Staring major cities: Extremadura, Castilla la Mancha
Government: Constitutional Monarchy
State Religion: Islam
Starting region: Spain (Provinces of Andalucia, Extremadura, and Castilla la Mancha if I'm only allowed three. If more, all of Spain!)
Economy: 8
Main resources: Coal, lignite, iron ore, copper, lead, zinc, uranium, tungsten, mercury, pyrites, magnesite, fluorspar, gypsum, sepiolite, kaolin, potash, hydropower, arable land.

History: The Empire of Len Hyet as we know it today was founded out of the ashes of the territories of seventeen vying warlords, all of whom were brought to heel by the Iron fist of the First Emperor of Len Hyet, Ricardo Martinez. We lack many accurate historical sources from the time, but according to popular legend Richard was the son of one of the most vaunted warriors of the least powerful Warlords. Least powerful is perhaps, a misnomer, for the seventeen factions were all almost equally matched. Richard's father taught him tactics and warfare, and at age sixteen, as was traditional, Ricardo began service to the Warlord. Almost immediately Ricardo was thrown into combat, and he relished it. His prowess, and legends thereof, grew to tremendous proportions. It was said he could slice a man in half with a single swing of his Claymore, and that he stood eight feet tall. From what we have gathered, he was actually far closer to five foot ten inches. Tall for the time, but by no means a giant of a man.
When Ricardo was eighteen he challenged the Warlord for the right to rule. After a bloody battle, which myth depicts as taking three days and three nights, Ricardo slew the Warlord and took his place. One historical source contradicts this popular myth, stating that the Warlord had actually grown fat and complacent, and died within minutes of the beginning of Single Combat.

After Ricardo took over the seat of Rule, he began to forge his Empire by conquest. One by one he conquered the sixteen other warlords, only banding together when there were but three rivals left. Richard dispatched them with almost contemptuous ease, and so set about founding an Empire which would last beyond his own death. The very first thing he did was to establish his lineage, taking a wife who later bore him five sons and six daughters. From there he set about solidifying his rule and establishing the Empire. The conquered Warlords became Lords in truth, with titles lands and responsibilities to the people. He instigated trade with the main continent of Europe, and set about building a massive fleet, with which he began wars of conquest which according to accurate historical sources, lasted far beyond his death.

For the next hundred years the wars of conquest waged, ceasing only with the first Empress of Len Hyet's ascension to the throne. Her father, Ricardo the IV, died prematurely, and had no sons. Thus, Helena the First was the only possible choice to take the throne. She ended the wars and brought about the First Golden Age of Len Hyet. The Empire flourished. Trade began anew with all the surrounding nations. Ships flying the flag of the Empire sailed all the seven seas, and docked at ports so far away as to bring home the most exotic of items. The First Golden Age lasted for fifty years, and through the reign of Helena the First, Helena the Second, and ended abruptly during the rule of Julio the Second. Wars began again, and it was during this time that Len Hyet established it's majority of overseas colonies.

The wars ended, but for the next three hundred and twelve years, through a long list of Emperor's and Empresses, never again did Len Hyet achieve such political and economical dominance and prosperity. Then, Emperor Ferdinand the Sixth ascended to the throne. Through his revolutionary policies and the signing of the Cartam Legis, a document which affirmed the rights of the Common man, established a Parliament, and severely curtailed the power of the throne, Len Hyet once again became a dominant force and entered it's Second Golden Age. This age lasted two hundred and six years officially, through the reign of Wesley the Seventh and his son Juan the Fifth, into the reign of Emperor Julio the Tenth, an event which from then on cursed the name Julio. A tyrant, he reigned terribly and attempted to repeal Cartam Legis, only stopped by a coalition of the Lords, who replaced Julio with his sister, Isabella. She became Empress Isabella the First, and ruled well, to this day.
RP Examples:

CITY APP
Name: Gibraltar
Location: Gibraltar
Population: 4
Reserves: 3
Infrastructure: 1-10. 4

CITY APP
Name: Extremadura
Location: Extremadura
Population: 4
Reserves: 3
Infrastructure: 1-10. 4

CITY APP
Name: Castilla la Mancha
Location: Castilla la Mancha
Population: 4
Reserves: 3
Infrastructure: 1-10. 4

UNIT APP
Name: Iberian Infantry
Unit type: Line Infantry
Unit weapon: Musket
Sophistication: 2
Build time: 2
Number in unit: 500 men/500 Guns
Attack: 6
Ranged attack: 6
Reload: 3
Defense: 4
Range: 6
Morale: 4
Special powers: Can fix Bayonets and charge.

UNIT APP
Name: Iberian Caballería
Unit type: Cavalry
Unit weapon: Cavalry Gun/Saber
Sophistication: 3
Build time: 2
Number in unit: 250 Men/250 Horses
Ranged attack: 6
Reload: 4
Defense: 3
Range: 6
Morale: 6
Special powers: Can fire from afar or charge and deal massive damage at close range with Sabers.

UNIT APP
Name: Lanza Infantería
Unit type: Line Infantry
Unit weapon: Spear
Sophistication: 2
Build time: 1
Number in unit: 500 Men/500 Spears
Attack: 4 (7 vs. Cavalry)
Ranged attack: 0
Reload: 0
Defense: 6
Range: 0
Morale: 4
Special powers: Can form Phalanx

UNIT APP
Name: Arma Larga
Unit type: Artillery
Unit weapon: Rifled Canon
Sophistication: 4
Build time: 3
Number in unit: 100 men/33 Guns
Attack: 3
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 2
Defense: 3
Range: 7
Morale: 4
Special powers: Grape Shot

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name: La Vela Negra
Sophistication: 1-10. 4
Build time: 4
Weapons: 16 Medium Canon
Crew: 100
Ranged attack: 6
Reload: 5
Range:6
Boarding:6
Armor: 3
Special powers and traits: Black Sails allow it to sail undetected at night.

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name: Caballito de Mar
Sophistication: 1-10. 3
Build time: 2
Weapons: 8 Light Canon
Crew: 45
Ranged attack: 4
Reload: 7
Range: 5
Boarding: 4
Armor: 3
Special powers and traits: Can take twice as many Units as a standard ship

GENERAL APP
Name: Aitor Garcia
Traits: Religious Zealot [Raises Dread and Honor equally], Went to the University [Bonus to Tactical Maneuvers]
Charisma: 1-10. 7
Honor: 1-10. 7.
Dread: 1-10.8
Bodyguard type: Cavalry
Weapon(s): Spears
Number in unit: 100 men/100 Horses
Speed:1-5. 7
Attack: 7
Ranged attack: 0
Defense: 3
Range: 0
Morale: 7
Special powers: Can form Wedge

So hah

[Zutendaal]

NATION APP
Nation name:Confederate states of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 100.000
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:10.

UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:CSA M1857 Napoleon Artillery Piece
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 50 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 10
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Train fortress (google "tren blindado" for pictures)
Unit type: Railway vehicle
Unit weapon:2 armored gatling gun turrets for 6 carrages, 1 40-pounder cannon for 6 other carrages.
Sophistication: 10
Build time:6
Number in unit:Crew:50 Transport: 300 men
Attack: 9
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 10.
Defense: 9.
Range: 9
Morale: 9
Special powers:It can only move on a railroad

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Peloton
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Springfield Model 1861
Sophistication: 5
Build time:1
Number in unit: 150 men, 1 officer on horse with revolver
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 6.
Reload: 5.
Defense: 2.
Range: 6
Morale: 5
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Cavalry troop
Unit type: cavalry
Unit weapon:Marlin Model 1894 repeater and saber
Sophistication: 6
Build time:2
Number in unit: 50 horsemen
Attack: 6
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 8 A big gun would be 1, while a machine gun would be 10
Defense: 4 where armor and close combat meet.
Range: 6
Morale: 6
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:steam frigate
Sophistication: 5
Build time:3
Weapons: One gun deck with 30 16-pounder cannons
Crew:100 men
Ranged attack: 8
Reload: 6
Range:10
Boarding: 6
Armor: 5
Special powers and traits: ironclad, explosive shells,

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 1-10. The general's speech-giving skill. Improves starting morale in battle. Makes agents and units purchased in his territory cheaper.
Honor: 1-10. The general's trustworthiness. Slows drop of morale in combat. Increases a territory's civil order.
Dread: 1-10. The general's cruelty on the battlefield. Damages the enemy fighting spirit. Rebellions in the territory are smaller.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type: infantry or cavalry
Weapon(s):
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:8. Cavalry have 1-10
Attack: 9
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 7
Range: 8
Morale: 10
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing squad to make them fight again.

I CAME! I hope i get accepted a little faster now

[Landenburg]

NATION APP
Nation name:Confederate states of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 100.000
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:10.

UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:CSA M1857 Napoleon Artillery Piece
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 50 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 10
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Train fortress (google "tren blindado" for pictures)
Unit type: Railway vehicle
Unit weapon:2 armored gatling gun turrets for 6 carrages, 1 40-pounder cannon for 6 other carrages.
Sophistication: 10
Build time:6
Number in unit:Crew:50 Transport: 300 men
Attack: 9
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 10.
Defense: 9.
Range: 9
Morale: 9
Special powers:It can only move on a railroad

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Peloton
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Springfield Model 1861
Sophistication: 5
Build time:1
Number in unit: 150 men, 1 officer on horse with revolver
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 6.
Reload: 5.
Defense: 2.
Range: 6
Morale: 5
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Cavalry troop
Unit type: cavalry
Unit weapon:Marlin Model 1894 repeater and saber
Sophistication: 6
Build time:2
Number in unit: 50 horsemen
Attack: 6
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 8 A big gun would be 1, while a machine gun would be 10
Defense: 4 where armor and close combat meet.
Range: 6
Morale: 6
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:steam frigate
Sophistication: 5
Build time:3
Weapons: One gun deck with 30 16-pounder cannons
Crew:100 men
Ranged attack: 8
Reload: 6
Range:10
Boarding: 6
Armor: 5
Special powers and traits: ironclad, explosive shells,

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 1-10. The general's speech-giving skill. Improves starting morale in battle. Makes agents and units purchased in his territory cheaper.
Honor: 1-10. The general's trustworthiness. Slows drop of morale in combat. Increases a territory's civil order.
Dread: 1-10. The general's cruelty on the battlefield. Damages the enemy fighting spirit. Rebellions in the territory are smaller.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type: infantry or cavalry
Weapon(s):
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:8. Cavalry have 1-10
Attack: 9
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 7
Range: 8
Morale: 10
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing squad to make them fight again.

I CAME! I hope i get accepted a little faster now

Everything in that is amazingly overpowered and some of your weapons have not been invented yet.

[The Empire of Pretantia]

NATION APP
Nation name:Confederate states of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 100.000
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:10.

UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:CSA M1857 Napoleon Artillery Piece
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 50 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 10
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Train fortress (google "tren blindado" for pictures)
Unit type: Railway vehicle
Unit weapon:2 armored gatling gun turrets for 6 carrages, 1 40-pounder cannon for 6 other carrages.
Sophistication: 10
Build time:6
Number in unit:Crew:50 Transport: 300 men
Attack: 9
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 10.
Defense: 9.
Range: 9
Morale: 9
Special powers:It can only move on a railroad

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Peloton
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Springfield Model 1861
Sophistication: 5
Build time:1
Number in unit: 150 men, 1 officer on horse with revolver
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 6.
Reload: 5.
Defense: 2.
Range: 6
Morale: 5
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Cavalry troop
Unit type: cavalry
Unit weapon:Marlin Model 1894 repeater and saber
Sophistication: 6
Build time:2
Number in unit: 50 horsemen
Attack: 6
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 8 A big gun would be 1, while a machine gun would be 10
Defense: 4 where armor and close combat meet.
Range: 6
Morale: 6
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:steam frigate
Sophistication: 5
Build time:3
Weapons: One gun deck with 30 16-pounder cannons
Crew:100 men
Ranged attack: 8
Reload: 6
Range:10
Boarding: 6
Armor: 5
Special powers and traits: ironclad, explosive shells,

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 1-10. The general's speech-giving skill. Improves starting morale in battle. Makes agents and units purchased in his territory cheaper.
Honor: 1-10. The general's trustworthiness. Slows drop of morale in combat. Increases a territory's civil order.
Dread: 1-10. The general's cruelty on the battlefield. Damages the enemy fighting spirit. Rebellions in the territory are smaller.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type: infantry or cavalry
Weapon(s):
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:8. Cavalry have 1-10
Attack: 9
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 7
Range: 8
Morale: 10
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing squad to make them fight again.

I CAME! I hope i get accepted a little faster now

T_T NO.

[Zutendaal]

Okay. Is it the train?, cause i can delete that one

[The Empire of Pretantia]

Okay. Is it the train?, cause i can delete that one

That's one, but it's also the fact that you clearly did not read the rules, which told you to read the accepted list, which means you didn't know how to write the app, which is catastrophic.

[Zutendaal]

I DID read it. I will delete the train, but overall the rest has more construction time so why are they overpowered. Can't you edit the stuff to be right?

And what is not invented yet? I'm curious to hear your opinion on that

On the train: What about i make it cost 15 turns to build

[The Empire of Pretantia]

I DID read it. I will delete the train, but overall the rest has more construction time so why are they overpowered. Can't you edit the stuff to be right?

And what is not invented yet? I'm curious to hear your opinion on that

On the train: What about i make it cost 15 turns to build

We will start in 1837 with muskets, cannons, wooden ships, and iron men. Everything else will have to wait.

[Arcerion]

We have enough! IC is demanded!

I just really wanna post..

[Zutendaal]

OOOh , I thought we could use any tech from between those ages . I'll make a new app

[Arcerion]

Here is another question. Will there be a running date counter/timeline for important events?

[The Empire of Pretantia]

Here is another question. Will there be a running date counter/timeline for important events?

Yes. We will do half a year to a page. Sound good?

[Arcerion]

NATION APP
Nation name:Confederate states of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 100.000
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:10.

UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:CSA M1857 Napoleon Artillery Piece
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 50 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 10
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Train fortress (google "tren blindado" for pictures)
Unit type: Railway vehicle
Unit weapon:2 armored gatling gun turrets for 6 carrages, 1 40-pounder cannon for 6 other carrages.
Sophistication: 10
Build time:6
Number in unit:Crew:50 Transport: 300 men
Attack: 9
Ranged attack: 10.
Reload: 10.
Defense: 9.
Range: 9
Morale: 9
Special powers:It can only move on a railroad

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Peloton
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Springfield Model 1861
Sophistication: 5
Build time:1
Number in unit: 150 men, 1 officer on horse with revolver
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 6.
Reload: 5.
Defense: 2.
Range: 6
Morale: 5
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Cavalry troop
Unit type: cavalry
Unit weapon:Marlin Model 1894 repeater and saber
Sophistication: 6
Build time:2
Number in unit: 50 horsemen
Attack: 6
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 8 A big gun would be 1, while a machine gun would be 10
Defense: 4 where armor and close combat meet.
Range: 6
Morale: 6
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:steam frigate
Sophistication: 5
Build time:3
Weapons: One gun deck with 30 16-pounder cannons
Crew:100 men
Ranged attack: 8
Reload: 6
Range:10
Boarding: 6
Armor: 5
Special powers and traits: ironclad, explosive shells,

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 1-10. The general's speech-giving skill. Improves starting morale in battle. Makes agents and units purchased in his territory cheaper.
Honor: 1-10. The general's trustworthiness. Slows drop of morale in combat. Increases a territory's civil order.
Dread: 1-10. The general's cruelty on the battlefield. Damages the enemy fighting spirit. Rebellions in the territory are smaller.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type: infantry or cavalry
Weapon(s):
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:8. Cavalry have 1-10
Attack: 9
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 7
Range: 8
Morale: 10
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing squad to make them fight again.

I CAME! I hope i get accepted a little faster now

Holy hell. You didn't even list cotton as one of your resources. RESEARCH MAN

[Zutendaal]

Can I make the american civil war occure 2 decades earlier? Otherwise I have to make a whole new app

[Arcerion]

Here is another question. Will there be a running date counter/timeline for important events?

Yes. We will do half a year to a page. Sound good?

Very. Will mean the only IC posts will have to be long and address all issues on the table.

We still following the format of battles being decided in another thread quickly?

[Landenburg]

Can I make the american civil war occure 2 decades earlier? Otherwise I have to make a whole new app

You don't even have to have a civil war.

[Arcerion]

Can I make the american civil war occure 2 decades earlier? Otherwise I have to make a whole new app

[The Empire of Pretantia]

Can I make the american civil war occure 2 decades earlier? Otherwise I have to make a whole new app

This isn't RL althis.

[Zutendaal]

okay!


EDIT:done. Feel free to edit it ands tell me what you changed.

NATION APP

Nation name:Confederate States of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber,cotton
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 4
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:9


Name:Tallahasee,
Location:Florida
Population: 3
Reserves: 7
Infrastructure:8

Name:Shreveport
Location:louisiana
Population: 2
Reserves: 5
Infrastructure:6




UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:16 pounder cannons
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 48 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 7.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 9
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Platoon
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Flintlock rifles
Sophistication: 5
Build time:2
Number in unit: 200 men, 1 officer on horse with flintlock pistol and saber
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 5
Reload: 4
Defense: 2.
Range: 4
Morale: 4
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Confederate rangers
Unit type: Assault infantry
Unit weapon:Dragon flintlock blunderbuses and sabers
Sophistication: 5
Build time:2
Number in unit: 150 men
Attack: 5
Ranged attack: 5
Reload: 3
Defense: 4
Range: 2
Morale: 5
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:frigate
Sophistication: 3
Build time:3
Weapons: 2 gun decks with 30 16-pounder cannons each
Crew:160 men
Ranged attack: 6
Reload: 2
Range:8
Boarding: 5
Armor: 2
Special powers and traits:

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 4.
Honor: 2.
Dread: 6.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type:cavalry
Weapon(s): flintlock pistols and sabers
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:7
Attack: 6
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 6
Range: 6
Morale: 8
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing unit to make them fight again.

[Arcerion]

okay!


EDIT:done. Feel free to edit it ands tell me what you changed.

NATION APP

Nation name:Confederate states of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 100.000
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:9


Name:Tallahasee,
Location:Florida
Population: 80.000
Reserves: 7
Infrastructure:8

Name:Shreveport
Location:louisiana
Population: 50.000
Reserves: 5
Infrastructure:6




UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:16 pounder cannons
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 48 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 7.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 9
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Peloton
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Flintlock rifles
Sophistication: 5
Build time:2
Number in unit: 200 men, 1 officer on horse with flintlock pistol and saber
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 5.
Reload: 5.
Defense: 2.
Range: 5
Morale: 5
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Confederate rangers
Unit type: Assault infantry
Unit weapon:Dragon flintlock blunderbuses and sabers
Sophistication: 5
Build time:2
Number in unit: 150 men
Attack: 5
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 3
Defense: 4
Range: 2
Morale: 6
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:frigate
Sophistication: 3
Build time:3
Weapons: 2 gun decks with 30 16-pounder cannons each
Crew:160 men
Ranged attack: 8
Reload: 2
Range:10
Boarding: 6
Armor: 2
Special powers and traits:

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 4.
Honor: 2.
Dread: 6.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type:cavalry
Weapon(s): flintlock pistols and sabers
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:8.
Attack: 9
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 7
Range: 8
Morale: 8
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing unit to make them fight again.

Issues I see:

Your population is supposed to be a number. Figure 1 for every 100,000 in that city. My biggest city is about a 4.

Capitalize States. C'mon.

Still don't have cotton as a resource.

I assume Dragon flintlock is Dragoon Flintlock.

What is a Peloton? Did you mean platoon?

Overall, I just think it needs polishing, seems like you didn't check it for spelling or against other apps.

Also, your infrastructure levels are ridiculously high. 1 low, 10 high. I think London is a 6, so use that as a reference.

Also, 48 men for 16 cannons? Figure a crew of 6 for each of them, add 2 extra for support personnel at least.

[The Empire of Pretantia]

okay!


EDIT:done. Feel free to edit it ands tell me what you changed.

NATION APP

Nation name:Confederate states of America
Starting leader:Jefferson Davis
Capitol: Austin
Staring major cities: you may have two, besides the capitol
Government: Confederal Republic
State Religion:Christian
Starting region: Texas,Louisiana,South carolina,Florida, alabama, Mississippi, Georgia,Virginia ,Arkansas, Tennesee, North Carolina, New Mexico
Economy:8
Main resources:coal, copper, lead, gold, iron, silver, timber
History:The confederate states of america wheren't willing to drop slave labour so they ripped of from the Union and became a separate nation.
RP Examples:http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=225980

CITY APP
Name:Austin
Location:Texas
Population: 100.000
Reserves: 8.
Infrastructure:9


Name:Tallahasee,
Location:Florida
Population: 80.000
Reserves: 7
Infrastructure:8

Name:Shreveport
Location:louisiana
Population: 50.000
Reserves: 5
Infrastructure:6




UNIT APP
Name: Artillery Battery
Unit type: artillery
Unit weapon:16 pounder cannons
Sophistication: 7.
Build time:3
Number in unit: 48 men with equipment( 16 Cannons)
Attack: 1
Ranged attack: 7.
Reload: 1.
Defense: 1.
Range: 9
Morale: 5

UNIT APP
Name: Militia Peloton
Unit type: Line infantry
Unit weapon:Flintlock rifles
Sophistication: 5
Build time:2
Number in unit: 200 men, 1 officer on horse with flintlock pistol and saber
Attack: 4
Ranged attack: 5.
Reload: 5.
Defense: 2.
Range: 5
Morale: 5
Special powers: Place Bayonets (+2 to defense,-2 on reload)

UNIT APP
Name: Confederate rangers
Unit type: Assault infantry
Unit weapon:Dragon flintlock blunderbuses and sabers
Sophistication: 5
Build time:2
Number in unit: 150 men
Attack: 5
Ranged attack: 7
Reload: 3
Defense: 4
Range: 2
Morale: 6
Special powers:

NAVAL VESSEL APP
Name:frigate
Sophistication: 3
Build time:3
Weapons: 2 gun decks with 30 16-pounder cannons each
Crew:160 men
Ranged attack: 8
Reload: 2
Range:10
Boarding: 6
Armor: 2
Special powers and traits:

GENERAL APP
Name: General Robert E. lee
Traits:Mercyless, Throws anything into battle, even his own life
Charisma: 4.
Honor: 2.
Dread: 6.
Bio(optional):
Bodyguard type:cavalry
Weapon(s): flintlock pistols and sabers
Number in unit:25 men on horseback
Speed:8.
Attack: 9
Ranged attack:7
Defense: 7
Range: 8
Morale: 8
Special ability: Execution. He can execute someone of a fleeing unit to make them fight again.

Issues I see:

Your population is supposed to be a number. Figure 1 for every 100,000 in that city. My biggest city is about a 4.

Capitalize States. C'mon.

Still don't have cotton as a resource.

I assume Dragon flintlock is Dragoon Flintlock.

What is a Peloton? Did you mean platoon?

Overall, I just think it needs polishing, seems like you didn't check it for spelling or against other apps.

Also, stats are TOO DAMN HIGH.

[Zutendaal]

No, Dragon flintlock Dragoon was a evolution from that name later on.
Okay, I meant platoon, in duch peloton exists too, thought it was a transparent word
changed the stats, now they are a little lower then some accepted apps

[Arcerion]

No, Dragon flintlock Dragoon was a evolution from that name later on.
Okay, I meant platoon, in duch peloton exists too, thought it was a transparent word
changed the stats, now they are a little lower then some accepted apps

I have been appeased. Hope you get approved!

[Zutendaal]

Am I approved?