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Postby Aussie Republic » Thu Jan 24, 2013 7:29 am

OOC: So basially, I start the story with a story line. You take off where I left from and write whatever you want, then the next person takes over etc.

Rules:
1. The main characters must be 100% human
2. You must use the same main character/s as the previous post, and/or his/her/their decendant
3. Keep it MT and realistic, unless enough generations pass . It can be abit unrealistic, but not too much. Mainly unrealistic incoperating real world popular religions, and other non-religious beliefs (such as ghosts)
4. You may skip A maximum of 3 weeks per post
5.Do not post twice in a row unless it has been atleast 12 hours since your previous post
6.If you desire to start a new generation, please keep track. We are upto the first


IC: On a stormy night, in the tiny villiage of Trepy, a widowed human mother is in the hospital is giving birth to her second child. The mother needed cesarean, and during the prosedure, the electricity died. The nurses rushed immedietly to try to turn it back on, in the meanwhile, the surgon, who could not leave the mother's stomach open when the anesthetic wore off, had to try to be extra careful and work in the dark. The baby was born, but the mother was accidently stabbed in the heart.

The baby was a boy. The baby had no living grandparents, both his parents were only children and the only one of his grandparents who wasn't only had one sibling, who was also dead. All of his great grand parents and their siblings were dead, his great grandparents' siblings had no living decendants. The only family member remaining was his 11 year old sister, Alisha.

The electricity came back on, and the nurse had to break the news to Alisha about her being an orphan. She named her new born brother John. They had to spend the night in the hospital as the orphanages were closed. The next day, they were sent to an orphanage.

6 years later:
The orphanage Alisha and John were kept at was required to keep the children until they were adopted, despite their age, even if they were well into their adulthood. However, Alisha and John were never adopted, and they were forced out due to the baby boom, but the orphanage told them they can travel to the capital city, Ilinia, and it would only cost them 25 carros (carros being their currency) Ilinia is only 2 hours away by train and they could get a job. However, Alisha didn't want to go to the big city. She remembered when she went there with her family on a holiday for her 11th birthday just 8 moths before the birth of her brother, she remembered the horrible rat-race, she remembered her and her parents starving because of the pick-pockets, but worse of all, she remembers seeing her father being mugged and murdered in broad day light right before her eyes.

Alisha really hated the big city and did not want to go there. Another reason why she didn't want to go to catch the train there was because 25 carro was way too much to pay for a railway ticket, as 25 carro was enough to buy 3 tanks of petrol, and she did not wannt to waste the orphange's money. But she had to as there were no jobs in Trepy so she had to decide between that or selling their inheritance for food and being homeless. The orphanage gave her 30 carros, 25 carros for the tickets, and 5 carros which was enough to buy both of them a decent meal. When they finally arrived in Ilinia, Alisha found a job advertisment "Waitress wanted, free housing, must speak English" Unfortunetly, neither of them knew English, so Alisha ran down to the corner store and bought an English book for 2.5 carros. She also bought a menstral pads for 0.5 carros. She wouldn't normally spend that much on them an individual one, but she needed one and was desperate. That only left them 3 carros spending money. She bought John a sandwhich for 1.5 carros, and she would have got one for herself, but John wanted a toy which cost one carro, and Alisha bought it for him. She need the rest of the cash to buy another menstral pad for the next day, so she had to starve. However, despite the fact he knew about mensration, she did not want to tell her brother, as she knew he would sacrifise his toy for her, but she did not want to disappoint him, so she lied to him and told him she was not really hungry and would use the other half carro to buy food later. They spent the night at the train station, but it started snowing, so they moved into the waiting room. Before John went to bed, he once again asked his sister why she didn't buy any food, she said she wasn't really hungry, but she was then, so she will buy something after he goes to sleep. This was the 4th meal she had missed and she hated being asked by her brother when she was going to buy food, as it reminded her how hungry she was. She wanted to go to bed soon after, but she stayed up spending most of the night crying. She could only cry after her brother went to sleep as she had to stay strong in front of him. Alisha finally fell asleep but was woken up by her alarm clock one hour later because she had to go to work. Alisha got to the resturant applied for the job. She then took her boss to another room and asked him if she could have some breakfast. She told him she would never usually ask, but she explained her story and she told him that she could not handle smelling the food in the resturant, so the boss, Jason, told John that everyone gets a free meal as a welcoming gift and gave Alisha and John something to eat.

After breakfast, Jason showed Alisha and John their new appartment and told Alisha she could get free rent if she is willing to work for a lower wage. Alisha agreed to this so Jason showed them around the double storey appartment. On the bottom floor was a small lounge room and on the top floor was a tiny kitchen and a small bathroom with a toilet, shower and sink. To Alisha's disappointment, there was no bathtub, so she had a quick shower and went to work.

Six days later, it was midnight, Alsiha and John were in their appartment. Alisha was watching the news and saw a story about a murder/robber about robber who robbed everybody and murdered anyone who refused to give away their possetions. He was in her street. She woke up John and dialled the police when she heard her neighbours screaming, but the police said they were way too busy and couldn't come for atleast another 3 hours as there were only 5 officers working as the rest were returning from a war they were fighting for an ally. After 2 hours, Alisha told John to wait downstairs as she went upstairs. She did not give John a reason. As she went upstairs, she ran to the bathroom so she could urinate as she was at this stage desperate to go and she couldn't hold it any more and she couldn't wet herself as she only had one set of cloaths which were already torn and she could not afford to wear her work uniform outside of work as she could not risk damaging it, she also knew that she urinated slowly, but did not believe anything would happen in such a short time, afte all, she didn't need to deficate and her bowels were completely empty, they were on the top floor and the thief was not in their appartment blcok. As she was about to relieve her bladder, she heard her brother, who still didn't know where she was, was screaming her name. The criminal had held a gun to John's head because, the criminal wanted to rob him and did not believe him when he stated that he had no possetions, despite the fact it was true, except for one gold neckless which their mother gave to Alisha before she died, so the thief held a gun against John's head and demanding he gives the thief his possetions, and he tried to explain that everything in the appartment belonged to Alisha's boss, but the thief did not care. As John was screaming louder and louder. Alisha was just abot to urinate, but realised that she couldn't, so just as she was about to start her urination, she had to pull up her underwear, pulled up her stockings pulled up her skirt, zipped it up, did up all 9 buttons, did up her belt and left the bathroom. She would have had the time to finish her urination had she not had issues with her skirt. She grabbed a frying pan and creeped down the stairs, but she could not be very mobile as her stomach was hurting due to her need to urinate, and the fact that her skirt and belt were tight was making the issue worse. She hit the robber in the head with the frying pan, and they knew they were temporarily safe, and she was about to run back to the bathroom, John said that he had to deficate. She knew John was not desperate and could wait for her to urinate, but still did not tell John anything and let him go first. Just as John had finished and Alisha was about to go in, the robber's assistant who was wearing a strong helmet which he stole after he heard the news of his friend's enounter with the frying pan. At this point she became even more affraid as she was very good looking and bueatiful, so she was affraid she would get rapped and she didn't want to loose her virginity, so she picked up the uncontious robbers gun and shot the assistant in the leg, and temporarily parralising him. She was then running to the bathroom to relieve her bladder, when the uncontious thief woke up and grabbed the frying pan. She tried to shoot him as well, but she was out of bullets. The fear made her even more desperate to urinate, but she still managed to hold it whilst she dialed the police. It was at this stage where she told her brother how desperate she was to go and loosened her belt because of it. She also told the robber in the hope that he would atleast let her go, he didn't as he didn't believe her. She tried the police again, and said although they promised to show up then, they couldn't as they were working on the previous case and couldn't leave, and would be atleast another half hour. The robber cut the line. Alisha and John were fearing for their lives...
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Thu Jan 24, 2013 5:22 pm

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Postby Altito Asmoro » Fri Jan 25, 2013 6:32 am

Edward Clarence is a college student at day, and a security guard at night. He is from Kalinia, a large trading city on the far east. His family funded his extensive education, particularly in Business in order to become the next leader of the family.

He is working as security guard in order to collect money for saving (in this case, carros). He had been trained to shoot properly during his childhood in Kalinia. He bought a pump shotgun for 100 carros and a body armor for 50 carros using his saving, 200 carros. His wage is 150 carros per month. His apartment rent is 75 carros.

Anyway, enough for the short opening story.

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Edward was prepared for his regular shift when he heard about the commotion outside. He thought it's just another normal arguments between couples or brother-sister when he heard the gunshot. He quickly picked up his pump shotgun and wore his body armor. He grabbed a flashlight too. He opened the door slowly, and turned on his flashlight.

It was rainy. Edward walked slowly, to looked for the room of the commotion. He turned off his flashlight, and he pulled his pump shotgun, ready for anything.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Fri Jan 25, 2013 2:40 pm

John and Alisha were living in the same building as Edward and had met about 3 days earlier. Alisha found it very strange that Edward would live in a small appartment, as he and his family were extremely rich, but then again, so was Alisha's family before her parents died. Edward rented every appartment (except for Alish's) in the appartment, because he wanted to reserve them to buy the entire building. Edward and Alisha became really close friends. Alisha's boss, Jason was thinking of selling his appartment and renting it. Alisha tried to convince Jason to sell the appartment to Edward as she would have liked Edward to be her landlord. Despite the fact that Edward was only 5 years older than Alisha, and no matter how well they got along, they had never thought of having a relationship. Alisha was too dedicated to looking after John to worry about men in her life, and Edward already had a girlfriend, Emily, who was a layer. Emily and Alisha became really close friens
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Anyway, John was about to be shot in the head, but Edward heard Alisha's scream. He could recogonise that scream and ran immediately to her appartment. Edward shot the theif in the leg then cakked the police, who said they would be another half hour. Edward locked up both thiefs until the police came and reassured them they were safe. Alisha then ran to the bathroom and saw the toilet was damaged in the robbery. Alisha asked Edward if she could use his bathroom, so Edward gave her the keys and told her to explain the situation to Emily, who was visiting. Emily got scared when Alisha unlocked the appartment, until Alisha told her the situation. Emily was relieved from the fear but told Alisha she had to wait as Emily was trying to unclog it. It took her half an hour, but Alisha still couldn't go as the police had arrived. The police wanted to speak to Alisha and after another half an hour of interviews, as they did not believe Alisha when she told them they were intruders, and they would have arrested her if Edward didn't show his security guard badge. Alisha finally went to the toilet.

The next morning, Alisha told Jason about the damaged toilet, sink and furniture, and Jason was upset, but blamed neither Alisha nor John were at fault. Jason was upset that he could not sell his appartment until the insurance replaced everything, but Edward was willing to pay full price for it either way. Alisha and John felt awkward using Edward's toilet and shower for a week, but they survived. Edward eventually gave Alisha the key and temporarilly let them move in until their appartment was fixed.

After a week, Alisha and John moved back in to their appartment. Alisha was very happy with the way things worked as Edward was her landlord and Jason paid the rent and let them live there for a lower wage. The day after they moved back into their appartment was a warm October day, and the snow finally stopped for the year. For the entire month before, it was alternating rain and snow as the temperatures were warming up, but the snow finally stopped for the year, the plants started growing, the trees were becoming green and the birds were chirping. Alisha was checking the mail and recieved a letter stating that the king had died and she was next in line for the throne. Alisha went to the city (the CBD) to confirm whether or not it was offical. The department of legal affairs told her it was legitimate and in 3 weeks, a limousine would come and pick up Alisha and John and Alisha would start her training to become queen. Alisha and John were really excited and told Edward the good news and promoised him a room in the palace since he saved their lives. She also promosed Jason a room as he gave her her job and if it wasn't for him, she would be homeless. Everyone was very excited and happy.

Their excitment died that night when two more thieves went back to Alisha and John's appartment. Alisha quickly figured out that these thieves were in the same gang as the previous thieves. Alisha asked them "why are you targetting us? We're poor, we don't have anything you want", the thieves replied "because you know too much", but Alisha and John knew nothing

One of the thieves was shooting John, but Alisha jumped in the way. Alisha took the bullet for her brother, and it landed in her stomach. Edward came when he heard the news, and the thieves fled and on of them dropped his gun. Edward called an ambulance and the police, but the ambulance didn't come in time and Alisha died. John didn't want to live life without his sister, and was about to suicide when he realised, she died so he could leave. He put down the gun. When the police came, they arrested John, as they heard about Alisha and thought he shot her so he could take the crown. When Edward's parents heard about the news, they stopped giving him money. Edward had to sell his appartment block to get food to survive, and he ended up homeless.

John was sent to custody, and it was the first Sunday in his life he had ever skipped church, even when he was sick, so they brought in a priest just for John. John explained his situation to the priest and the priest believed him.

3 days later, in court, John asked Emily to represent him. John was found guilty at court, as his DNA was on the gun, and the bullet in Alisha's stomach matched the gun. He was imprisoned and his inheritance was sold. Edward was also stripped as a security guard and given a criminal was as he apparently knew about the crime and lied about it to protect John as they found a document, written by Alisha, stating that Edward was entitled to a room of the palace and thought John promised him if he kept the crime a secret. In the prison, the security guard bruetly beat John as he refused to give away his toy car which his sister bought him the day at the train station when they arrived in the capital and she missed her fourth meal in a row for him, but no matter how much they beat him, he refused to give it away. He tried to explain his situation, but they just beat him more and said to him "It's not enough for you to have killed your sister, but now your pretending to actually care about her to protect a stupid toy? You are one of the worst people on the face of the planet!" Because of the beatings, John was covered in scars and wounds, but those were the least of his problems as the gang that was after him wanted to over-through the royal family and take over the nation, and John's cell mates were the first two thieves who attack him and his sister, and they remembered he and his sister were the reason they were in prison...
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Fri Jan 25, 2013 7:46 pm

Edward, now found himself homeless, walked to a house owned by his friend, Eddie Stegart, a local merchant and a local drug dealer. He asked for his help for revenge, to the police and to rescue John, as he is innocent. So, Eddie make a call to his brother, Jameson Stegart, who led the most notorious gang in Kalinia.

Eddie asked for help to Jameson, and Jameson agreed to supplied Edward with gun and supplies, in exchange for Edward's allegiance to the gang. Edward reluctantly accept it and Eddie gave him 2 pistols, a body armor, and 5 grenades. He let Edward stay for the night.

In the morning, Jameson arrived with 50 men. He and Edward now are on their first action, and that first action is to establish a strong drug supplies line to increase the income for the Stegart gang, and then they will control the capital city once they eliminate their competitors.

Then, the rescue mission can be initiate...
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Postby Aussie Republic » Fri Jan 25, 2013 8:53 pm

Edward went back to the prison to try to visit John for his 7th birthday, but unfortunately visitors were not allowed on that day since it was Saturday and visitors may only come on Friday. John was beaten half to death by this stage.

That night Alisha appeared to him in a dream telling him to give up the toy car she gave him and if he doesn't, she would be very angry.
John then said: "But you sacrifised food and skipped your 4th meal to get for it for me"
Alisha then said: "I make sacrifises to make your life easier, not harder. By keeping that car, I'm making your life harder, which is the opposite of my intention when I purchased it"
John: "Yea..but you didn't eat..."
Alisha:"Are you going to disobey me? I sacrifised my life for you and you don't even have the appretiation to obey me"
Alisha started to pretend to cry, so John promised to sacrifise his toy car. She also wished him a happy birthday and told him it's her fault that he, the king, was imprisoned in his own kingdom on his 7th birthday, and she promised she will find a way to get him out.

The next morning, the guard came around asked John to give away his toy car. John remembered Alisha's words, but still didn't want to be disloyal to her as he thought he was having a selfish dream, until one of his cell mate, Harry, told him it wasn't a dream, it was real, and that he saw her too and felt remorse for what he had done. The other cell mate, Bill, had already the day before from peanut allergies. From that time onward, Harry kept telling the guard that it was likely one of John's gang members might have killed Alisha, rather than John, but the guards kept repling "Even if we do release him and put him on the throne, I doubt he'll give you anything, after all, he and his murder victim were your only victims". John immedietly gave away his toy car

In the meanwhile, the Stegart gang had formed. Jameson spent 150 carros for their journey, 150 carros he was saving up to buy a small apartment, and he was only 50 carros away from his little home, as most small appartments cost approx. 200 carros. Jameson paid for the whole gang as no one else could afford the airfare and accomidation.

When arrived in Ilinia, they took the day off to rest then as it was Thursday. The next day they went to the prison, visited John, and started speaking to random inmates organising a prison riot. One of the people Jameson spoke to was Harry. Had Jameson known who it was, he would have never considered speaking to him. Harry then explained who he is, and to Jameson "I have been planning this escape for 2 weeks, I know all the in and outs and the ways around the guards. I have the whole plan deviced out and the only thing I needed was help from people on the outside. Now that I am remorsful to him, I'll ask the king if he gives me permition to escape. At this point, John appeared and Harry asked him permition to leave the gaol. <<BTW:Gaol is the Australian spelling of Jail>> John knowing he was truely remorseful wanted to forgive him and let him out of prison, but first wanted his sister's permition. He spent night after night praying to God to send Alisha to him and asking Alisha to appear, but she never came...
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:30 am

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Postby Altito Asmoro » Sat Jan 26, 2013 6:01 am

Edward is in the apartment again, alongside 4 of the Stegart Gang members. They all are there as the security officers whose task is to guard the apartment. Jameson had gave them a cheap computer system that had been connected to the newly-installed security cameras that had been placed inside the apartment. Edward and the 4 men had Pump Shotgun and Uzi as their weapons. They also had stockpiled ammunition and medicines in case something bad happen.

Jameson is at the prison, planning the large riot activity, while Eddie is on his way to Kalinia, to make a deal with local drug supplier to only supply drugs to Stegart Gang. The other competitors had been eliminated, as they just the small-time gang and large gang but unorganized, which all only existed in Kalinia, however. So the capital city's gangs haven't been eliminated yet.

In the meantime, 25 members of the gang breached into a local drug supplier's den in the far east of the city to take all of the drugs, and armed with assault rifles.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sat Jan 26, 2013 6:58 am

Unfortunately, the police walk into the drug den, and the gang members are still inside the drug den when the police come in

In the meanwhile, John gets another visit from his sister. He asks her if he should forgive Harry.
Alisha replied "You should make your own decisions, John. What kind of king can't make his own decisions?
John replied: "I am not king, you are queen"
Alisha replied "How do I rule a kingdom from beyond the grave?"
John replied "By telling me which laws and decisions I should make, Queen Alisha"
Alisha then replied: "First of all, do not call me Queen Alisha, 1. I am your sister, not a stranger. 2. I was never queen 3. You are king, you are equal to me, if not, above me as I never got to rule the country and people who are equal to or below you do not get a title infront of their name. Second of all, if I didn't want you to make your own decisions, I wouldn't have let you live with out me"
John "But I want respect and obey you"
Alisha "You can obey me by making your own decisions"
John "But if I am obeying you by not obeying you, I might disobey you by doing something you would not let me do"
Alisha "That's a contradiction"
Alisha then vanished. John thought about that really well, before forgiving Harry. When the visitors showed up, Harry started plotting the riot with the visitors and other inmates. They were ready to start the riot

In the meanwhile, the police were about to catch the 25 gang members and had them surronded. There was no hope for the gang members in the drug lab...
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:13 am

As such as Jameson would hate this, a member of his gang, drunken, drove a truck full of explosives which was supposed to be delivered to the gang members in order to blow up the den to left no evidences.

When the truck hit the den instead of stop, the explosives, were ignited because the truck crashed into the wall and blew up, destroying the den completely and killed most of the police and the gang members. 2 police and 2 gang members who managed to got out alive, exchanged fire and died.

Meanwhile, Emily Stewart, Edward's girlfriend, enlist the help of William Clarence, Edward's older brother and a police commissioner of Kalinia, to track the whereabouts of Edward.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sat Jan 26, 2013 2:46 pm

Emily's plan had back-fired, as William, having heard about Edward keeping the death of the queen a secret and refused to get involved. He was also disgusted that they were planning a prison riot and informed the guards

Jameson asked one of the guards for a ciggarett lighter as he was a vistor and was allowed to smoke in the prison. This was the first stage of the riot

In the meanwhile, Harry's former rebel gang a riot to over-throw the kingdom had also planned to start a prison riot to try to free Harry, as they thought he was still in their gang, and Bill, as they thought he was still alive and there were other rebels in that prison. This riot would go against Jameson's

Emily and John's priest, Joseph were trying to find a way of proving John innocent. Joseph knew how well they got along when he saw them at church. Unfortunately, John's suicide attempt and termination happened so fast, he didn't have a note...
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Sat Jan 26, 2013 6:10 pm

Edward is in the apartment, watching the activities of the gang members in their process to turn the newly-arrived drugs into a high-quality drugs.

Meanwhile, Emily desperately try to search for Edward's whereabouts, but to no avail. So she talked to Joseph again, and asked him to go to the prison and convince John to, at least, make him happier. Joseph agreed to do that.

At the same time, Robert Clarence, Edward and William's uncle and a high-ranked government official in Kalinia, send out his men to search for Edward in Ilinia and to bring him back to Kalinia.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:03 pm

William and Robert found Edward and locked him in up in their house in Kalinia as they did not trust him. Edward had given his family, who were up until then very respected, a bad name.

On the way to the prison, Joseph saw a woman who had tripped over a rock. Joseph got out of his car and helpped her up. He then asked her if she wanted a lift. She accepted the lift only because he knew by his cloathing that he was a priest and therefore trust-worthy.

Joseph asked the woman her name
"Amelia"
Joseph: "Where are you going?"
Amelia: "To the bank"
Joseph: "That's on my way"
Amelia "Oh really? Where are you going?"
John: "To the prison, to visit King John and cheer him up"
Amelia: "You mean the one that killed his sister for the throne, I heard about it on the news"
John: "I believe he was innocent. I spoke to him and was his priest. I saw how well they got along with eachother"
Amelia: "I knew they were innocent from the begging. I was their school teacher. I knew how good of a relationship they had. I know how to clear that Edward guy's name too. I can match the letter about the room in the palace with the handwriting on a test Alisha dead in 2005, dated by the government, before John was born"...
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:31 pm

Joseph agreed to help the teacher.

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Emily bought a Desert Eagle for her protection. That night, she went to Eddie and asked for his help in exchange for anything that he wants. Eddie agreed on one condition, that they must help Edward in exchange for a million for investment in foreign trading to increase the amount of money Stegart Gang has. Emily agreed for this partnership. Eddie alongside 7 men armed with assault rifles and rocket launchers head to Robert's house in Kalinia, where Edward is being held up.

Robert's house is lightly protected with 5 heavily-armed security guards and an advanced computer system as the security system.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:56 pm

Altito Asmoro wrote:Joseph shocked when he heard this. Alisha died on 2005? So, who cares for John? A ghost or a similar girl like Alisha?

OOC: No. Alisha died at the age of 17 when her brother was 6 years old. Her death was the reason why he was imprisoned and now her ghost occassionally visits him. I am Orthodox Christian IRL and believe the spirit stays on Earth for 40 days after death before going to Heaven and visits everyone, like EVERY other Orthodox. I don't believe they interact with the living but it's just a story. In 2005, Alisha was in school and did an exam in 20005

I don't have the time to type the IC now, I'll do it later, unless someone else gets in before me, in which case I'll change what I will type (it's also good because it means I'll have more players)
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:57 pm

Aussie Republic wrote:
Altito Asmoro wrote:Joseph shocked when he heard this. Alisha died on 2005? So, who cares for John? A ghost or a similar girl like Alisha?

OOC: No. Alisha died at the age of 17 when her brother was 6 years old. Her death was the reason why he was imprisoned and now her ghost occassionally visits him. I am Orthodox Christian IRL and believe the spirit stays on Earth for 40 days after death before going to Heaven and visits everyone, like EVERY other Orthodox. I don't believe they interact with the living but it's just a story. In 2005, Alisha was in school and did an exam in 20005

I don't have the time to type the IC now, I'll do it later, unless someone else gets in before me, in which case I'll change what I will type (it's also good because it means I'll have more players)


OOC: Oh yes. Sorry.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sat Jan 26, 2013 9:59 pm

Altito Asmoro wrote:
Aussie Republic wrote:
OOC: No. Alisha died at the age of 17 when her brother was 6 years old. Her death was the reason why he was imprisoned and now her ghost occassionally visits him. I am Orthodox Christian IRL and believe the spirit stays on Earth for 40 days after death before going to Heaven and visits everyone, like EVERY other Orthodox. I don't believe they interact with the living but it's just a story. In 2005, Alisha was in school and did an exam in 20005

I don't have the time to type the IC now, I'll do it later, unless someone else gets in before me, in which case I'll change what I will type (it's also good because it means I'll have more players)


OOC: Oh yes. Sorry.

OOC: It's okay and also, she might have been 18 at death. Either 17 or 18, I haven't figured out chronology
Also, haven't you been paying any attention to pricing? If someone has a small appartment worth 200 carro, imagine how much 1 million carro is...

IC: Emily gave Edward 1 million kilograms of gold, which Edward gave her as a present when he was rich. Robert did not know how his men could distract the tanks and sneak into the house
In the meanwhile, Amelia went to the bank and got her money out. She also asked her sister, Kathy, to send the test papers from Treky through the mail and told her she would re-emberse the 0.08 carro required to send them out, but Kathy wasn't getting paid till next week, so she didn't have the required money. In the bank, Jason overheard them talking about the case and said:
"I believe John is innocent, I remember the first day Alisha came to me and asked me for a job. She didn't spezk much English, but she was one of the only females who was tall enough to reach the top shelf, so I gave her the job. She told me that she was starving and spent her last money on food and a toy for her brother the night before. I felt sorry for her and gave her some free food, but despite the fact that she skipped 4 meals and it would have been her 5th if I didn't feed her, she said "give the first meal to my brother. If you do not, I will not eat it, so I gave both of them one. I noticed John came in every day with Alisha. Edward could look after him, and Alisha would've let him, but he loved his sister so much that he wanted to see her work just to find something to praise about her. Amelia doesn't have enough evidence to prove Edward innocent, and I did find this one documet to prove John's innocence, but I still don't have enough, but it will be very usful if it accumulates...
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Sun Jan 27, 2013 12:21 am

Edward now invest half of his newly-found wealthy to the supermarket chain in Ilinia owned by Emily's brother, Evan Stewart. It will increased the image of Stegart Gang slowly.

Now, with the money he has, he married Emily and settled in a mansion he bought. He now supervise a security division for Stegart Gang. Eddie is now the underboss, Edward is the consigliere, and Jameson is the boss. All have been planned for weeks, so the establishment of the security division and the marriage had been done with fast speed.

Jameson, posed as a military general, arranged for the weapons shipment to Ilinia to armed his gangs, while Eddie recruits some muscles in order to prepare for the prison riot from Severin, a large town where the worst criminals resides.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Sun Jan 27, 2013 4:20 am

Alisha appeared to John and said "I miss you, did you miss me?"
John:"Yes"
Alisha: "I'm proud your making your own decisio...
John: said before she could vanish"
Alisha: "I wish I coul..."
John: "Why can't you?"
Alisha: "I gotta go"
John: "Why?"
Alisha: "They need me" "Bye"
John: "Before you go, what's Heaven like?"
Alisha: "Bueatiful" "Bye!"
John: "Bye!"
John started crying as he saw his sister vanish.

Alisha appeared to Edward and Emily and told them to meet with Miss Quedira (Amelia), Mr. Tripolgate (Jason) and Fr. Joseph as they were having a meeting at the church directly after Sunday's litergy.
She gave the same message about the meeting to the Stegart Gang. The Stegart gang decided to base themselves in Ilinia as they were running out of money to travel back and forth, and running out of drugs to sell. In the meanwhile, the guards were preparing for the prison riot and called in the military as a precaution. The military were surronding the prison 24/7
In the meanwhile, the Stegart gang and the rebel gang got into a huge gang war...
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Postby Aussie Republic » Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:51 am

Bump
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Postby Aussie Republic » Mon Jan 28, 2013 5:10 pm

bump
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Postby Aussie Republic » Mon Jan 28, 2013 11:13 pm

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Postby Altito Asmoro » Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:29 am

The Stegart Gang won triumphantly, and absorbed many of the rebel gang's members. In turn, they also access the rebel gang's weapons, in which there are some stolen military vehicles and military weapons.

In the meantime, Edward and Emily arranged a meeting with the Priest, Amelia, and Jason, in order to analyze what is the best situation to save John from the prison.
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Postby Aussie Republic » Tue Jan 29, 2013 3:33 pm

Edward: Did anyone think of looking at her will?
Joseph: Her brother is in prison and all you care about is material goods? Anyway, she didn't have anything, only one old and torn set of cloaths she wore day in day out for the past 9 weeks
Edward: Still, let's see who gets the clothing
Joseph: Why do you even care? It's not even worth 1/100 of a carro
Edward: It's the royal will, there must be something usful
Joseph: I thought she filmed it before she was royal
Edward: She did, but there still might be something usful
Joseph: Like what?
Edward: I don't know, but it won't hurt to try
Edward installs the DVD
Alisha (in her will): "My darling brother, John, as you know, one day I will die. Hopefully it won't be until you are atleast old enough to take care of yourself. If not, I will asign Edward and, if they are still together, Emily, to be your guardians. I have proof of them being willing to which I shall add in later. All I want is the best for you and after I die, either you will be under the care of Edward who is richer than you, or you would have had made your own life by then. Either way, I want your life to be better than mine. Under all circumstances"
The DVD ends at this point
Amelia: Wait, play that last line again
Edward plays it:
"Under all circumstances"
Amelia: Edward, you're a genius. If we could have another court case and get the judge and the jury to inteprit under all circumstances as she drops all charges against him if he commits a crime against her


In the meanwhile, the Stegart gang and the prisoners had started the riot. The whole prison was virtually at war...
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