Elfen High 2 (OOC, Closed)

[The Inritus Extraho]

there were too many characters and subplots to deal with.

Cut characters. The ones worth keeping would be Damien, Lewis, Laz, Jade, James, and Crowley as a mentor-figure.

The rest can have cameos, but that would be the main cast. Antagonists would be Azazel, Morgan Le Fey, and other henchmen. Uriel would remain the unseen baddie that everyone fears. The Fae might appear, if handled right.

But that's what I would do.

<3 nei thinks jade is main
this makes me smile

[The Nuclear Fist]

<3 nei thinks jade is main
this makes me smile

Nyarla doesn't get to be a main character?

This makes me sad.

[Ende]

there were too many characters and subplots to deal with.

Cut characters. The ones worth keeping would be Damien, Lewis, Laz, Jade, James, and Crowley as a mentor-figure.

Malal, Minh, and Nyarla are important. I kept them in.

[Nude East Ireland]

<3 nei thinks jade is main
this makes me smile

Nyarla doesn't get to be a main character?

This makes me sad.

Malal, Nyarla

She hasn't been around in a long time, I forgot about her. >.<

And, no offense (your writing for her subplot was absolutely terrific, I think), but she hasn't affected the overall EH plot that much. But her subplot could be for a separate novel within the EH universe, if an EH novel were to come about. It could deal with the Cthulhu mythos in the EH universe, which haven't been explored a whole lot. Thus, more Nyarla and Malal and their offspring. Also, the Hound was a badass.

Minh

The rest can have cameos

[Nationstatelandsville]

Cut characters. The ones worth keeping would be Damien, Lewis, Laz, Jade, James, and Crowley as a mentor-figure.

Malal, Minh, and Nyarla are important. I kept them in.

Minh is important, but Malal and Nylara, honestly, were only important to each other.

Once they come back, they might change.

[The Nuclear Fist]

I think I'll make the secondary character blind and weak, but with tremendously powerful psychic abilities and durability.

[Nationstatelandsville]

Actually, if I were to do it (and believe me, none of us ever should), I would keep Ivy in and maybe throw some others out, give their actions to her.

She's just a better character than most.

I think I'll make the secondary character blind and weak, but with tremendously powerful psychic abilities and durability.

I was going to do something like that with one of my characters.

Not saying who, but it should be obvious to any who pay attention.

Not that I'm saying you shouldn't.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Actually, if I were to do it (and believe me, none of us ever should), I would keep Ivy in and maybe throw some others out, give their actions to her.

She's just a better character than most.

I think I'll make the secondary character blind and weak, but with tremendously powerful psychic abilities and durability.

I was going to do something like that with one of my characters.

Not saying who, but it should be obvious to any who pay attention.

Not that I'm saying you shouldn't.

Uh, Rosalind?

No I frankly have no idea if it's not that.

[The Nuclear Fist]

And, no offense (your writing for her subplot was absolutely terrific, I think), but she hasn't affected the overall EH plot that much. But her subplot could be for a separate novel within the EH universe, if an EH novel were to come about. It could deal with the Cthulhu mythos in the EH universe, which haven't been explored a whole lot. Thus, more Nyarla and Malal and their offspring. Also, the Hound was a badass.

Good points, all of them. And thank you.

Although, I am not quite done with her yet. I didn't mean for her absence to take this long, if there is another arc I will put her in it as another subplot. However, I am in the midst of writing of what is going on with her in the Eldritch Pantheon that will, in all likeliness, require several posts to complete. It's very difficult writing. I would like to give a glimpse into the Eldritch mindset and give hints at her punishment.

[Nationstatelandsville]

And, no offense (your writing for her subplot was absolutely terrific, I think), but she hasn't affected the overall EH plot that much. But her subplot could be for a separate novel within the EH universe, if an EH novel were to come about. It could deal with the Cthulhu mythos in the EH universe, which haven't been explored a whole lot. Thus, more Nyarla and Malal and their offspring. Also, the Hound was a badass.

Good points, all of them. And thank you.

Although, I am not quite done with her yet. I didn't mean for her absence to take this long, if there is another arc I will put her in it as another subplot. However, I am in the midst of writing of what is going on with her in the Eldritch Pantheon that will, in all likeliness, require several posts to complete. It's very difficult writing. I would like to give a glimpse into the Eldritch mindset and give hints at her punishment.

I'll ask for AETEN - what of Malal?

[Constaniana]

I mean, Lewis, James, etc., have dealt with shit before.

But for people like Ivy and Ed/Will? Hell, even Ciel?

Actually, reading through Ed/Will's mental dialogue, it seems to have done a number on his mental sanity.

Yeah I'll eventually get around to explaining what exactly is going on with that guy, but it'll be after I bring in my new character. Speaking of which, I think I have her app done, let me go check...

[Nude East Ireland]

I was going to do something like that with one of my characters.

Not saying who, but it should be obvious to any who pay attention.

Not that I'm saying you shouldn't.

You're making Demonslayer blind? Gasp.

I would like to give a glimpse into the Eldritch mindset

Lovecraft is somewhere in the void of eternal damnation laughing.

But you can do it, me thinks.

[The Nuclear Fist]

I'll ask for AETEN - what of Malal?

Malal doesn't really factor into it, to be frank.

[The Nuclear Fist]

But you can do it, me thinks.

Thank you. I must confess, however, that it is difficult writing for them.

[Nationstatelandsville]

I'll ask for AETEN - what of Malal?

Malal doesn't really factor into it, to be frank.

You should probably spit him back into the school while we're at peace, then.

[Constaniana]

Character app

Name: Jenny Stelckhelm
Age: 23
Age(appears): 21
Race: Werewolf
Appearance:Human Wolf form
Powergrid:
INT 2
Str 6
SPD 6
DUR 5
FS 4
Magic Level
Level 6 Regeneration, which becomes slightly more potent whenever the moon is out.
Level 4 Wolf Howl, which is a powerful sonic attack with a widespread area of effect
Weaknesses: At night she gets more agitated, making her more likely to start arguing or punching someone in the face. Oddly enough for a Glaswegian, she also has a very low tolerance for alcohol, and can get tipsy even after only a few sips, making it a terrible idea to give her any booze whatsoever.
Personality: Jenny is a perfect example of a violent Glaswegian. She frequently gets into fights with people, often because she has absolutely no tact and is extremely blunt. She is also a tad xenophobic, although this is directed mainly towards the French and the Irish, who she instinctively dislikes. However, underneath the fiery exterior she has a gentle side, although her pride causes few people to ever see it. Jenny is quite musical, listening to bands such as Muse and Oasis, and plays guitar, piano and drums (No she can't play bagpipes. I decided to show some mercy to you lot). In addition, she is a great cook as well...if you enjoy Scottish food or fried anything. Otherwise, her cooking is flat-out rubbish, since in her own words "Bah! I don't need some daft wee Frog a teachin' me how tae cuik, my mum taught me how tae cuik like a proper Scotswoman when I was a wee lassie!"

History: Jenny has no memory of anything before she was 6 years old, before she randomly showed up on the streets of Glasgow one day. Without any memories of any friends or relatives she could possibly have, she struggled for survival, until one night after being chased from a somewhat comfortable cardboard box by a drunken Chinese immigrant she fell asleep on someone's doorstep.

She woke up in the morning with a stern older woman looking down at her, asking her what her name was, what she was doing and where her parents were, and why wasn't she in school. With tears in her eyes the frightened little girl confessed how she didn't have anywhere else to sleep, didn't have a name, and she didn't know who her parents were, and didn't even know what a school was. The old woman took pity on the strange girl, bringing her inside and feeding her breakfast. The woman introduced herself as Mrs. Stelckhelm, and after a few minutes of further conversation with the young girl Mrs. Stelckhelm decided to name her Jenny, which the orphan girl was perfectly fine with. Jenny quickly adapted to the routine of an ordinary girl, and her childhood and teenage years were surprisingly normal, despite her werewolf powers awakening one cold November night. This actually didn't worry the old Glaswegian widow at all, since the first time Jenny transformed and seemed unable to control herself Mrs Stelckhelm simply hit Jenny on the back of the head with a frying pan, scolding her for scratching up the carpet and frightening the cat before going back to bed. Jenny quickly got her powers under control, not to prevent herself going on a rampage but to avoid getting smacked in the head and scolded again by her adoptive mother. During this time in order to distract herself from getting too angry at people and transforming into her monstrous lycan form Jenny began learning musical instruments like the piano, guitar and drums. Once she finished school her mother insitsted that she go get a job, since she was "Gettin' too old tae be cleanin' up for yoo, you're a grown lassie now, get yuirself a flat 'o yer own!" Elfen HIgh seemed to be a good place for someone with supernatural talents like hers to get a job, so she applied for one, finding out she had been hired as the French teacher, despite not knowing a single word of French at all. Go figure.
RP Sample

[The Nuclear Fist]

Malal doesn't really factor into it, to be frank.

You should probably spit him back into the school while we're at peace, then.

I gave him full permission to do it himself, since I've been busy. Are you telling me he hasn't done so?

[Nationstatelandsville]

Elfen HIgh seemed to be a good place for someone with supernatural talents like hers to get a job, so she applied for one, finding out she had been hired as the French teacher, despite not knowing a single word of French at all. Go figure.

Lewis has a new friend.

You should probably spit him back into the school while we're at peace, then.

I gave him full permission to do it himself, since I've been busy. Are you telling me he hasn't done so?

That is exactly what I'm telling you, yes.

[The Nuclear Fist]

That is exactly what I'm telling you, yes.

I can't quite describe the reaction I'm having right now. It isn't pleasant.

[Nude East Ireland]

Race: Werewolf

Damien has a reason to temporarily quit drugs.

[Nationstatelandsville]

That is exactly what I'm telling you, yes.

I can't quite describe the reaction I'm having right now. It isn't pleasant.

I imagine it is a cross between disappointment, anger, and vegetable.

Race: Werewolf

Damien has a reason to temporarily quit drugs.

"Damien"? "Quit drugs"?

Are you on something?

[Nude East Ireland]

"Damien"? "Quit drugs"?

Are you on something?

Well, put them off until the 'beasts' are dead.

Vlad would like this.

[The Nuclear Fist]

Vlad would like this.

Why do people keep sending me that goddamned video?

[Nude East Ireland]

Vlad would like this.

Why do people keep sending me that goddamned video?

I didn't know.

I just found that yesterday and thought it was fucking hilarious.

[The Nuclear Fist]

It's fine, Jackie.

Also, I've begun to cook up a decent idea for the next Eldritch-related plot.