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Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:-Cao Cao-

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:i become checking of liu bei photo that is NOT liu bei huge insult

Application rejected for poor quality roleplaying and posting an app for a lord without OP permission. Do not resubmit.

That line alone is enough for me to disqualify you on extremely low quality roleplaying, and your past posts are just as bad. I don't mind if you question why I have a genderbent Liu Bei (you're far from the first to do so), but yelling at anyone, much less the OP, for a conscious choice after the OP outright stated that genderbending is a possibility will only make it much harder for you to join.

Deutschess Kaiserreich wrote:

Wolfenium wrote:WIP


Appearance (picture link is preferred): Waifu. :3

I keep getting suprised by you, internet.

:3

In this version is Zhang Jue a communist?

Britanania wrote:In this version is Zhang Jue a communist?

More like New Age Taoist Cult. He reminds me of the Taiping Rebellion's leader, Hong Xiuquan, to be honest, which is what I based this version of the Yellow Turbans on.

Cao Cao is the communist here. Don't ask me why. Ask Agritum. :v

Wolfenium wrote:

Britanania wrote:In this version is Zhang Jue a communist?

More like New Age Taoist Cult. He reminds me of the Taiping Rebellion's leader, Hong Xiuquan, to be honest, which is what I based this version of the Yellow Turbans on.

Cao Cao is the communist here. Don't ask me why. Ask Agritum.

That's a fair interpretation: I read the OP in fuller detail after I posted the question.

Cao Cao as a communist makes some sense, as Mao's propaganda machine tried to compare the Chairman to Cao Cao and his land reforms could be considered "socialist" and his trickster mentality would work well in guerilla warfare.

On that note, may I app as him? If not I think Dong Zhou would be an interesting choice as a Chiang kai-Shek or Yuan Shikai type.

Britanania wrote:

Wolfenium wrote:
More like New Age Taoist Cult. He reminds me of the Taiping Rebellion's leader, Hong Xiuquan, to be honest, which is what I based this version of the Yellow Turbans on.

Cao Cao is the communist here. Don't ask me why. Ask Agritum.

That's a fair interpretation: I read the OP in fuller detail after I posted the question.

Cao Cao as a communist makes some sense, as Mao's propaganda machine tried to compare the Chairman to Cao Cao and his land reforms could be considered "socialist" and his trickster mentality would work well in guerilla warfare.

On that note, may I app as him? If not I think Dong Zhou would be an interesting choice as a Chiang kai-Shek or Yuan Shikai type.

Of course, app away. :3

Wolfenium wrote:

Britanania wrote:That's a fair interpretation: I read the OP in fuller detail after I posted the question.

Cao Cao as a communist makes some sense, as Mao's propaganda machine tried to compare the Chairman to Cao Cao and his land reforms could be considered "socialist" and his trickster mentality would work well in guerilla warfare.

On that note, may I app as him? If not I think Dong Zhou would be an interesting choice as a Chiang kai-Shek or Yuan Shikai type.

Of course, app away. :3

Thanks, I think I'll go with the Big Dong actually, as he has more agency earlier on/

Britanania wrote:

Wolfenium wrote:
Of course, app away. :3

Thanks, I think I'll go with the Big Dong actually, as he has more agency earlier on/

Mhhh :}

Wolfenium wrote:

Britanania wrote:Thanks, I think I'll go with the Big Dong actually, as he has more agency earlier on/

Mhhh :}

Unless you prefer Cao Cao, of course. I think both are interesting.

Britanania wrote:

Wolfenium wrote:
Mhhh :}

Unless you prefer Cao Cao, of course. I think both are interesting.

It's fine. It's your choice after all. I did warn that Big Dong would be up against everyone else at some point. But hey, you have Lü Bu, and who wouldn't like to put the foot down on goody goodies? :}

Wolfenium wrote:

Britanania wrote:Unless you prefer Cao Cao, of course. I think both are interesting.

It's fine. It's your choice after all. I did warn that Big Dong would be up against everyone else at some point. But hey, you have Lü Bu, and who wouldn't like to put the foot down on goody goodies? :}

Just need to lay off Lu Bu's women xD

Character Information
Name : Cao Cao
Real Name: Mengde (Courtesy name)
Sex: M
Age: 29
Affiliation: Imperial Revival Party
Weapon(s): Dao sword and Mauser C96 sidearm.
Appearance

Physical Description
Height: 181 cm
Weight: 55 kg
Likes: Poetry, especially writing it in his spare time; calligraphy; playing pranks on his friends (and tricks on his enemies); spending time with his soldiers.
Dislikes: His enemies, in particular, those who harm his family; the instability that weakens China; self-righteousness
Personality: Cao Cao is a polarising man who looks very different depending on who talks about him. To his family, friends, and allies Cao Cao is a person who loves writing verses, with a charismatic smile and a penchant for pulling pranks on his friends. He is a loving father and a family man who gets along with the common soldier, and indeed his love for the poor and the downtrodden inspired the Imperial Revival Campaign. Yet to his enemies, Cao Cao is utterly ruthless with a terrible temper who would do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. When pushed, the strategic mastermind will use his resources and cunning to get the job done and if innocents die in the process, so be it.

History
Bios: Cao Cao was born in Bozhou in the Anhui Province (the historic Qiao). His father Cao Song was a minor official who was raised by his uncle Cao Teng, one of the Emperor's favourite eunuchs. Cao Cao grew up with other children of imperial officials, such as the Yuan brothers, and he established from an early age his craftiness and reputation as a trickster.

At 15, Cao Cao entered the Baoding Military Academy and excelled in his lessons and graduated near the top of his class at the age of 19. That same year, Cao Cao married his long-time girlfriend Bian, a poor girl from Shandong. The marriage was considered unusual, as not only was Bian poor but she worked a sex worker before she met Cao Cao, but perhaps more important as the son of a government official with a promising career ahead of him many thought Cao Cao was jeopardising his life by marrying a girl like Bian. The couple didn't care and married despite the protests.


The following year, the Emperor appointed Cao Cao as military Captain of the Northern District, which contained the Imperial Capital. Cao Cao showed his belief in absolute justice and his ruthlessness by punishing everyone, regardless of his rank. Ostensibly as a promotion, Cao Cao's enemies had him briefly appointed the governor of Qingfeng County only a year later before he returned to the capital as a military consultant.

Around this time, Cao Cao founded the Imperial Revival Party with like-minded young nobles who saw the corruption of the Han dynasty first hand. The Party became popular in the countryside, as Cao Cao promised significant land reforms and a stronger centralised government to defend China. Cao Cao and his allies butted heads with the powerful eunuchs at court and those committed to the direction the Han Dynasty was sliding, and so Cao Cao became increasingly bitter and warned that if actions were not taken, the people would take matters into their own hands.

Cao Cao's words proved prophetic when four years later the self-proclaimed messiah Zhang Jiao proclaimed the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom with his bands of rebel militia. The Emperor appointed named Cao Cao one of the generals to defeat the Yellow Turbans, as the rebels became known, and now the 29-year-old commander would face his first test...

Additional Information: N/A

OOC Information
RP Example:

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=447980
N.b: I play as Grand Admiral Thrawn in this RP, a character who is similar to Cao Cao as they are both strategic masterminds.

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=401734

Britanania wrote:WIP

Appearance

Is Koei DLC. :3

Wolfenium wrote:

Britanania wrote:WIP

Appearance

Is Koei DLC. :3

Yeah, I'm a fan xD

Britanania wrote:

Wolfenium wrote:
Is Koei DLC. :3

Yeah, I'm a fan xD

Same here. :3

EDIT: Anyway, if you need clearer pics:

Britanania wrote:Character Information
Name : Cao Cao
Real Name: Mengde (Courtesy name)
Sex: M
Age: 29
Affiliation: Imperial Revival Party
Weapon(s): Dao sword and Mauser C96 sidearm.
Appearance

Physical Description
Height: 181 cm
Weight: 55 kg
Likes: Poetry, especially writing it in his spare time; calligraphy; playing pranks on his friends (and tricks on his enemies); spending time with his soldiers.
Dislikes: His enemies, in particular, those who harm his family; the instability that weakens China; self-righteousness
Personality: Cao Cao is a polarising man who looks very different depending on who talks about him. To his family, friends, and allies Cao Cao is a person who loves writing verses, with a charismatic smile and a penchant for pulling pranks on his friends. He is a loving father and a family man who gets along with the common soldier, and indeed his love for the poor and the downtrodden inspired the Imperial Revival Campaign. Yet to his enemies, Cao Cao is utterly ruthless with a terrible temper who would do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. When pushed, the strategic mastermind will use his resources and cunning to get the job done and if innocents die in the process, so be it.

History
Bios: Cao Cao was born in Bozhou in the Anhui Province (the historic Qiao). His father Cao Song was a minor official who was raised by his uncle Cao Teng, one of the Emperor's favourite eunuchs. Cao Cao grew up with other children of imperial officials, such as the Yuan brothers, and he established from an early age his craftiness and reputation as a trickster.

At 15, Cao Cao entered the Baoding Military Academy and excelled in his lessons and graduated near the top of his class at the age of 19. That same year, Cao Cao married his long-time girlfriend Bian, a poor girl from Shandong. The marriage was considered unusual, as not only was Bian poor but she worked a sex worker before she met Cao Cao, but perhaps more important as the son of a government official with a promising career ahead of him many thought Cao Cao was jeopardising his life by marrying a girl like Bian. The couple didn't care and married despite the protests.

The following year, the Emperor appointed Cao Cao as military Captain of the Northern District, which contained the Imperial Capital. Cao Cao showed his belief in absolute justice and his ruthlessness by punishing everyone, regardless of his rank. Ostensibly as a promotion, Cao Cao's enemies had him briefly appointed the governor of Qingfeng County only a year later before he returned to the capital as a military consultant.

Around this time, Cao Cao founded the Imperial Revival Party with like-minded young nobles who saw the corruption of the Han dynasty first hand. The Party became popular in the countryside, as Cao Cao promised significant land reforms and a stronger centralised government to defend China. Cao Cao and his allies butted heads with the powerful eunuchs at court and those committed to the direction the Han Dynasty was sliding, and so Cao Cao became increasingly bitter and warned that if actions were not taken, the people would take matters into their own hands.

Cao Cao's words proved prophetic when four years later the self-proclaimed messiah Zhang Jiao proclaimed the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom with his bands of rebel militia. The Emperor appointed named Cao Cao one of the generals to defeat the Yellow Turbans, as the rebels became known, and now the 29-year-old commander would face his first test...

Additional Information: N/A

OOC Information
RP Example:

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=447980
N.b: I play as Grand Admiral Thrawn in this RP, a character who is similar to Cao Cao as they are both strategic masterminds.

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=401734

All done.

Wolfenium wrote:

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:-Cao Cao-

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:i become checking of liu bei photo that is NOT liu bei huge insult

Application rejected for poor quality roleplaying and posting an app for a lord without OP permission. Do not resubmit.

That line alone is enough for me to disqualify you on extremely low quality roleplaying, and your past posts are just as bad. I don't mind if you question why I have a genderbent Liu Bei (you're far from the first to do so), but yelling at anyone, much less the OP, for a conscious choice after the OP outright stated that genderbending is a possibility will only make it much harder for you to join.

my friend i study for TOEFL improvement for united state language and yell accidental never intentional but i question reasoning for " poor quality roleplaying"

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:

Wolfenium wrote:
Application rejected for poor quality roleplaying and posting an app for a lord without OP permission. Do not resubmit.

That line alone is enough for me to disqualify you on extremely low quality roleplaying, and your past posts are just as bad. I don't mind if you question why I have a genderbent Liu Bei (you're far from the first to do so), but yelling at anyone, much less the OP, for a conscious choice after the OP outright stated that genderbending is a possibility will only make it much harder for you to join.

my friend i study for TOEFL improvement for united state language and yell accidental never intentional but i question reasoning for " poor quality roleplaying"

It doesn't matter if you 'accidentally' yell at people. The problem is you yelled at all. It's just rude. As for the poor quality roleplaying, I'll bring up one of your posts to explain.

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:

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fuhrer of heaven yan xishan ii "cao cao von hillary" are transmit speech to great jinlandaryan mans

「childs of cao cao, yan xishan and yellow emperor. glory seizing has a realization of our race. bn mans kuominwave imperial pretentious of chinese race begins monkey like assault towards hainan mans. 」yan xishan ii "cao cao von hillary" roar in microphones voice exit speaker. jindaryan people began clap.

「i am proposal to jinlandaryan race to non-aggressive pact on yuyancia dog mans for shielding reich against kuominwave bn mans ape. 」yan xishan ii "cao cao von hillary" roar in microphones voice exit speaker. jindaryan people began clap.

jinlandaryan citizenship begins poweful roar of great echolocation throughout welthaupstadt jinland「BN BOMB! BN BOMB! BN BOMB!」

「proud citizenship knight of jinland and childs of cao cao! BN BOMB!」

powerful knight began goosestep march on cao square on hand james mason literature "siege". post-great flood neo-china stregth proof after inevitable bombardment towards bn man false chinese stupid name inferiority cannabal invader kuominwave. waffen farqinjager ss becomes mobilization deployment to Shijiazhuang region while jinlandaryan luftwaffe become deployment of su-35 fight and su-25 bomb very superior craft manufacture by jindaryan workers of intelligence. jinlandaryan trooper attempt communication with yuyancia cooperative strategic.

Your English is bad. There are no ifs or buts about it. Your spelling is bad, your grammar is bad, you don't even capitalize... And that's just your language issues. As for the roleplaying itself, you came up with such bizarre names as 'Cao Cao von Hillary'. There's probably more, but the fact that your English is bad made it almost impossible for me to point out any more issues with your text. If you're still studying at TOFEL as you said, then all the more you shouldn't be here. I'm going to have to ask you to leave.

Wolfenium wrote:

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:my friend i study for TOEFL improvement for united state language and yell accidental never intentional but i question reasoning for " poor quality roleplaying"

It doesn't matter if you 'accidentally' yell at people. The problem is you yelled at all. It's just rude. As for the poor quality roleplaying, I'll bring up one of your posts to explain.

Nazi Jinland Empire wrote:

(Image)

fuhrer of heaven yan xishan ii "cao cao von hillary" are transmit speech to great jinlandaryan mans

「childs of cao cao, yan xishan and yellow emperor. glory seizing has a realization of our race. bn mans kuominwave imperial pretentious of chinese race begins monkey like assault towards hainan mans. 」yan xishan ii "cao cao von hillary" roar in microphones voice exit speaker. jindaryan people began clap.

「i am proposal to jinlandaryan race to non-aggressive pact on yuyancia dog mans for shielding reich against kuominwave bn mans ape. 」yan xishan ii "cao cao von hillary" roar in microphones voice exit speaker. jindaryan people began clap.

jinlandaryan citizenship begins poweful roar of great echolocation throughout welthaupstadt jinland「BN BOMB! BN BOMB! BN BOMB!」

「proud citizenship knight of jinland and childs of cao cao! BN BOMB!」

powerful knight began goosestep march on cao square on hand james mason literature "siege". post-great flood neo-china stregth proof after inevitable bombardment towards bn man false chinese stupid name inferiority cannabal invader kuominwave. waffen farqinjager ss becomes mobilization deployment to Shijiazhuang region while jinlandaryan luftwaffe become deployment of su-35 fight and su-25 bomb very superior craft manufacture by jindaryan workers of intelligence. jinlandaryan trooper attempt communication with yuyancia cooperative strategic.

Your English is bad. There are no ifs or buts about it. Your spelling is bad, your grammar is bad, you don't even capitalize... And that's just your language issues. As for the roleplaying itself, you came up with such bizarre names as 'Cao Cao von Hillary'. There's probably more, but the fact that your English is bad made it almost impossible for me to point out any more issues with your text. If you're still studying at TOFEL as you said, then all the more you shouldn't be here. I'm going to have to ask you to leave.

my friend im not inform of united state greater standard. chinese mans educator become praise of my united state language ability after spending 18 hours languages textbook readership. i am begin migration outside this roleplay.

I tried to make a mix of Cao Cao's personality and history across the various media, and with the "modern" updates give the time period.

Britanania wrote:I tried to make a mix of Cao Cao's personality and history across the various media, and with the "modern" updates give the time period.

Britanania wrote:Character Information
Name : Cao Cao
Real Name: Mengde (Courtesy name)
Sex: M
Age: 29
Affiliation: Imperial Revival Party
Weapon(s): Dao sword and Mauser C96 sidearm.
Appearance

-snip-

And accepted. :3

Eternal Lotharia wrote:Tag reserve Liu Bei, Sun Quan(can chat with OP), Sima You, Sima Yan, Lu Xun, Jiang Wei, Yuan Shao, or Liao Hua in that order.

I already have Liu Bei, so you can't have that one. Sun Quan should be fine, though. :3

Wolf, stahp. You can't tell me playing someone in a faction is a death sentence and then not expect me to ask if I can play them to struggle against fate.

Lunas Legion wrote:Wolf, stahp. You can't tell me playing someone in a faction is a death sentence and then not expect me to ask if I can play them to struggle against fate.

Of course, you can play them. It's just that playing as Dong Zhuo and Lü Bu kind of hamstrings you since you have to play them as they are popularly remembered, that of a sadistic tyrant and a invincible, fight-happy warrior respectively. It applies to everyone, to be fair, but more so for this particular faction, since it'll be pretty OOC for them to make pragmatic choices where it matters most. :3

Wolfenium wrote:

Lunas Legion wrote:Wolf, stahp. You can't tell me playing someone in a faction is a death sentence and then not expect me to ask if I can play them to struggle against fate.

Of course, you can play them. It's just that playing as Dong Zhuo and Lü Bu kind of hamstrings you since you have to play them as they are popularly remembered, that of a sadistic tyrant and a invincible, fight-happy warrior respectively. It applies to everyone, to be fair, but more so for this particular faction, since it'll be pretty OOC for them to make pragmatic choices where it matters most. :3

Well duh. I like a challenge, so trying to keep those two on path to not dying while also having them be themselves will be... fun. Everyone hates one of them and the other suffers from a severe case of chronic backstabbing disorder and bloodlust.