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Frachen
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Postby Frachen » Sun Mar 24, 2019 3:25 pm

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SETH REYNOLDS


Name:Seth Reynolds
Nickname/Alias:Cross
Appearance:
Image[/img]

Gender:Male
Age:11
Build:4 foot 6 inches. He is 89.5 lb
Faction:Prodigy initiative
Power Classification: (Refer to the OP for details)

Description of Powers:Time freeze:He can stop time for any object within a 5 yard radius for 5 minuets. Anything frozen becomes black and white and the people and animals frozen can't tell if they were frozen.
Unlimited Knives:He can summon knives out of thin air
Shape shifting:He can change his body to imitate anyone else.

Weaknesses:He is weak to exposure to the sun for extended periods of time. He also cannot swim.

Equipment: His clothes are able to take the form of any outfit he wants, not check else

Alignment:chaotic evil
Nationality:American
Hometown:New York City
Sexuality:Straight

Personality:He is a cold, sadistic and ruthless killer who likes to torture his victims before killing them. He is also very loyal.
Motivation:His main motivation in life is to just kill people and enjoy himself.

Biography:He was born to a small family in New York who had been working for years to perfect an AI. He was about 3 when they finished. The machine turned against them however and taking control of their gaurds, had the family executed, Seth however, managed to escape death because he was under his Aunt's care at the time. He grew up to learn nothing but pain, and all the pain caused him to snap and unlock his powers.
One day he was eating lunch and one kid purposely tripped him. Seth got up admistd the laughter and summoned a knife. The laughter stopped immediately, but there was still one person laughing, Seth himself. Seth went on to call them weak, and not truly powerful. He killed them in front of the police who were called in after the staff couldn't do anything. The police out of fear pulled out their pistols, but it was too late, they were frozen in time, not that they knew it, one second the kid was there, the next he was gone.
Seth had run to hide, but he was found by the Prodigy Initiative who offered him a home in exchange for his services. He agreed and he has been helping them on various missions and such ever since. Occasionally he will make the news ands not her murder story. The use of his powers has turned his skin and hair white, and he no longer has any color to his eyes.

#HOTApp
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Postby Skaldia » Sun Mar 24, 2019 4:14 pm

Eamon's Opinion Survey


Opinion of Jack Dredd: "Dready dredd dredd dredd...", long belch," I bet he's all cuddly too."

Opinion of Brock James: "I feel like, if you name your kid 'Brock', you're setting him up for failure."

Opinion of Kodiak Marsden: "See above. But damn, those eyes make me wanna take a run at her sometime. Those rare times I actually see the bitch."

Opinion of Serge Easton-Roux: "Serge the Dirge. Shield-boy. Bit of a wildcard."

Opinion of Bellamy Lys: "She confuses my penis. Don't know whether to hide or drop trough."

Opinion of Lora/Gwen: "She's Canadian so that makes her automatically better than most of the others. Despite that, she's a bit schizo yeah?"

Opinion of Alasdair Francis Damon: "Emo flame boy"

Opinion of Sophia Rykova: "Bubble girl. I forget she's there sometimes. Should come with 'fragile' stamped on her forehead."

Opinion of Soli Vanhanen: "Sexy but magically obnoxious."

Opinion of Nev Hurn: "Who the fuck left the gates to the zoo open?"

Opinion of Sage Shields: "Digs shotguns but gawd'damn can she eat."

Opinion of Charlie Burkhall: "Who the fuck is this guy?"

Opinion of Jacob Philander: "Something out of the fucking 13th century, what the fuck."

Opinion of Elek Mohave: "If I ever need a pair of nail clippers, he's the guy."

Opinion of Zekulu Nazwari: "Zen something - forest for the trees or some such bullshit. I don't know."

Opinion of Andrew Marks: "Snake boy named Andrew. Well fuck me sideways."

Opinion of Eamon Donovan: "I'm the fucking best brah."

Opinion of Kallen Rossweiss: "Annoying and Swedish."
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Theyra
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Postby Theyra » Sun Mar 24, 2019 4:58 pm

Have Zekulu put in B team.

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Forest State
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Postby Forest State » Sun Mar 24, 2019 5:04 pm

Frachen wrote:snip

Should probably read the rules. Time controlling powers are banned in all forms.



Updated squads.

Purgatory (Squad A): Artemis (CO), Soli, Jack, Eamon

Purgatory (Squad B): Matt, Elek, Zekulu

Crackdown: DRMA Joint Forces Unit, Kodiak, Sage, Asia
don't tread on me

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Postby Frachen » Sun Mar 24, 2019 5:15 pm

Forest State wrote:
Frachen wrote:snip

Should probably read the rules. Time controlling powers are banned in all forms.



Updated squads.

Purgatory (Squad A): Artemis (CO), Soli, Jack, Eamon

Purgatory (Squad B): Matt, Elek, Zekulu

Crackdown: DRMA Joint Forces Unit, Kodiak, Sage, Asia

Oh, oops, didn't see that part.......
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SETH REYNOLDS


Name:Seth Reynolds
Nickname/Alias:Cross
Appearance:
(Image)[/img]

Gender:Male
Age:11
Build:4 foot 6 inches. He is 89.5 lb
Faction:Prodigy initiative
Power Classification: (Refer to the OP for details)

Description of Powers:Unlimited knives:He can summon knives out of thin air
Shape shifting:He can change his body to imitate anyone else.

Weaknesses:He is weak to exposure to the sun for extended periods of time. He also cannot swim.

Equipment: His clothes are able to take the form of any outfit he wants, not check else

Alignment:chaotic evil
Nationality:American
Hometown:New York City
Sexuality:Straight

Personality:He is a cold, sadistic and ruthless killer who likes to torture his victims before killing them. He is also very loyal.
Motivation:His main motivation in life is to just kill people and enjoy himself.

Biography:He was born to a small family in New York who had been working for years to perfect an AI. He was about 3 when they finished. The machine turned against them however and taking control of their gaurds, had the family executed, Seth however, managed to escape death because he was under his Aunt's care at the time. He grew up to learn nothing but pain, and all the pain caused him to snap and unlock his powers.
One day he was eating lunch and one kid purposely tripped him. Seth got up admistd the laughter and summoned a knife. The laughter stopped immediately, but there was still one person laughing, Seth himself. Seth went on to call them weak, and not truly powerful. He killed them in front of the police who were called in after the staff couldn't do anything. The police out of fear pulled out their pistols, but it was too late, he had already killed them.
Seth had run to hide, but he was found by the Prodigy Initiative who offered him a home in exchange for his services. He agreed and he has been helping them on various missions and such ever since. Occasionally he will make the news ands not her murder story. The use of his powers has turned his skin and hair white, and he no longer has any color to his eyes.

#HOTApp

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Postby Sraelyn » Sun Mar 24, 2019 6:19 pm

Add Giovanni to team B aswell.
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Postby Triassica » Sun Mar 24, 2019 6:37 pm

Sraelyn wrote:Add Giovanni to team B aswell.

Squads for what?
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Gudmund
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Postby Gudmund » Sun Mar 24, 2019 9:57 pm

New villain app for the Prodigy Initiative.
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ANTON BEHRINGER


Name: Anton Chebringer
Nickname/Alias: Förskärare (slicer/carver)
Appearance: Caucasian, brown short hair, brown eyes, (Costume)
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Build: 193cm, 77kg, well built
Faction: Prodigy Initiative
Power Classification: Genetic

Description of Powers:

Material Animation -
  • Objects such as stone, quarts, metal, wood, wax etc. can become animate by thought; granting minor buffs to the material and the ability of movement regardless of material composition;
  • Objects that are living, smaller than 5cm, larger than 550cm, or further than 50 metres away are unaffected;
  • Used materials retain attributes (hardness, weight, density), but can still perform most actions reflecting artist depiction/appearance of object (e.g. humanoid statue can do most tasks a human can);
  • Objects are held together by the ability, adding roughly 15% more durability, and 30% higher resistance to heat/cold (e.g. metals are harder, wax doesn't melt as easy).
  • Objects cannot do actions without necessary parts (i.e. speak, hear, see) and can only be controlled when in Anton's direct line of sight;
  • Objects further than 1km disconnect and cease movement.
Shared Senses -
  • Animate objects with appropriate parts (eyes, ears, body, nose etc.) can relay information back to Anton, with affectiveness matching appearance (i.e. animal statue with better senses reflect accordingly).
  • Shared senses allow Anton to control animate objects while out of his true body's sight, granting greater control almost to the point of becoming one with them;
  • Multiple objects with appropriate parts establishes a hivemind like system.
  • Objects further than 500 meters away disconnect.

Weaknesses:
  • Anton has no formal combat training, nor powers to enhance himself;
  • Anton's thoughts can affect the strength of his controlled objects, so he's often overconfident in battle;
  • Anton struggles to animate objects that haven't been given an appearance matching its real life counterpart (i.e. abstract art, simple rocks, cutlery, electronics);
  • Objects with too many moving parts are almost impossible to move (i.e. clockwork, robots, automatons);
  • Finding suitable objects to control isn't easy;
  • Anton cannot control more than 20 tonnes of mass;
  • Anton cannot control more than 20 objects simultaneously;
  • Animate objects of creatures can sometimes be hindered by material weight (e.g. sculptures of birds, giraffes, insects).
  • Usage of this ability over 24 hours may result in seizures, migraines, coughing up blood, fever, and fainting.

Equipment: His costume (mask, hood, eye contacts), dufflebag containing usual gear (phone, wallet, clothes, etc.), Colt 9mm pistol, machete, taser, sculptors tools & materials, a 29cm tall figurine girl.

Alignment: True Neutral
Nationality: Switzerland
Hometown: Grindelwald
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Personality: Anton is very apathetic and distrustful, often ignoring the troubles of people he doesn't know. He wishes to improve himself, acknowledging that certain people with matching ideals can help him do so. Anton thinks in the long run, respecting those potentially beneficial to his cause. Due to his ability he has a passion for art, spending most of his spare time sculpting, carving, or painting; keeping to himself and gradually bettering his skills. Though he may not say it outright, Anton appreciates being included and spoken to by those close to him. He takes great effort to return favours quickly, sticking around people who value his presence.

Motivation: To improve his powers and sculpting skill, preferably gather a large collection of powerful statues. Find a purpose and safety in society that understands him.

Biography: Anton was born in Germany, living there for four years before emigrating to Switzerland. His parents were both metahumans, constantly moving around to hide themselves and their activities. His mother could see through the eyes of creatures, and his father had powerful telepathy. Occasionally they prevented a crime or two every few months, gaining a mystical reputation in whatever town they lived in. Anton was vaguely aware that not everyone had powers, knowing that he should never use them in public; despite his parents rules, Anton frequently used his ability while playing with his friends. Needless to say, this information spread like wildfire, and within two weeks everybody in town knew. The DRMA had been searching for Anton's parents for years, discovering them through the gossip of their child and pinpointing their location. Nary a day later were they swiftly captured and detained under the suspicion of being illegal vigilantes, in the scuffle both parents were hospitalised for resisting and hiding Anton, suffering minor injuries.

Anton escaped out the back a sobbing mess, begging his neighbours and friend's families to help him, but they all turned him down and ignored him much to his dismay. Either too scared or worried of harbouring some wanted criminals. To him the DRMA were unsympathetic monsters, protecting the powerless outside from a threat that didn't exist, ignoring his parents great achievements and patting themselves on the back like self-righteous assholes, completely destroying the reputation of his family overnight. Anton knew exactly what to do, so he ran to the local mall, stealing a couple mannequins with his ability for protection. From there he paid a visit to his uncle, someone his parents told him to never meet, retelling everything that happened the moment he arrived. It turned out his uncle had connections with various criminal groups in Europe, glad to finally speak with him he happily provided shelter from the DRMA.

With his parents unjustly jailed, and the people of his town no longer an option to return to, Anton spent nine years bouncing around Europe committing crime. Essentially spitting on the DRMA every chance he could. He even went to the effort of designing his own supervillain costume, making a name for himself and spreading false rumours wherever he went. Priceless statues thought to be too heavy to steal were suddenly vanishing overnight, security footage revealing them literally walking out of the building. After a few years in solitude, Anton slowly sold off his stolen goods through the black market, too ashamed to rejoin his parents who had since been set free. It was then the Prodigy Initiative found him, quickly bringing him in.

#HOTApp

EDIT1: Changed ranges from 20km to 1km & 15km to 500 metres.
EDIT2: Minor changes to bio, plus added weakness.



July 15th 2024: HK417 Battle Rifle, 2 modified mannequins (180cm, 45kg, multidirectional limbs, concealed knives + C4 detonation).
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Leader: Albani Gudmund
Setting: FT (2060+), the ruling nation of a non-human, low population, galactic Empire spanning just beyond its solar system. Primarily using advanced, mass-produced droids to handle most menial tasks and to fill the ranks of its military alongside living soldiers.

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Postby Forest State » Sun Mar 24, 2019 10:34 pm

Gudmund wrote:snip

Main problem looks like the fact that the range is way too long.
don't tread on me

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Postby Lunas Legion » Sun Mar 24, 2019 11:46 pm

Throw Sophia into B since I already have Soli in A.
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Gudmund
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Postby Gudmund » Mon Mar 25, 2019 12:19 am

Put Jacob in B, I think that makes 5.
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Tier 8, Level 3, Type 7
An 8.625 civilization - according to this index
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Leader: Albani Gudmund
Setting: FT (2060+), the ruling nation of a non-human, low population, galactic Empire spanning just beyond its solar system. Primarily using advanced, mass-produced droids to handle most menial tasks and to fill the ranks of its military alongside living soldiers.

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Frachen
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Postby Frachen » Mon Mar 25, 2019 6:26 am

Here is the redone version
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SETH REYNOLDS


Name:Seth Reynolds
Nickname/Alias:Cross
Appearance:
Image[/img]

Gender:Male
Age:11
Build:4 foot 6 inches. He is 89.5 lb
Faction:Prodigy initiative
Power Classification: (Refer to the OP for details)

Description of Powers:
Unlimited Knives:He can summon knives out of thin air
Shape shifting:He can change his body to imitate anyone else.

Weaknesses:He is weak to exposure to the sun for extended periods of time. He also cannot swim.

Equipment: His clothes are able to take the form of any outfit he wants, not check else

Alignment:chaotic evil
Nationality:American
Hometown:New York City
Sexuality:Straight

Personality:He is a cold, sadistic and ruthless killer who likes to torture his victims before killing them. He is also very loyal.
Motivation:His main motivation in life is to just kill people and enjoy himself.

Biography:He was born to a small family in New York who had been working for years to perfect an AI. He was about 3 when they finished. The machine turned against them however and taking control of their gaurds, had the family executed, Seth however, managed to escape death because he was under his Aunt's care at the time. He grew up to learn nothing but pain, and all the pain caused him to snap and unlock his powers.
One day he was eating lunch and one kid purposely tripped him. Seth got up admistd the laughter and summoned a knife. The laughter stopped immediately, but there was still one person laughing, Seth himself. Seth went on to call them weak, and not truly powerful. He killed them in front of the police who were called in after the staff couldn't do anything. The police out of fear pulled out their pistols, but it was too late, they were frozen in time, not that they knew it, one second the kid was there, the next he was gone.
Seth had run to hide, but he was found by the Prodigy Initiative who offered him a home in exchange for his services. He agreed and he has been helping them on various missions and such ever since. Occasionally he will make the news ands not her murder story. The use of his powers has turned his skin and hair white, and he no longer has any color to his eyes.

#HOTApp
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Postby Imperial--japan » Mon Mar 25, 2019 10:08 am

Ignore this for now. Save Draft is being wonky and I'm just posting this here to edit later.

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KASLANA MAKINEN


Name: Kaslana Mäkinen
Nickname/Alias: Hive Queen
Appearance:
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Gender: Female
Age: 21
Build: 5'3, 109 lbs
Faction: Prodigy Initiative
Power Classification: Genetic/External

Description of Powers:
  • Pheromone Manipulation: Able to manipulate her Pheromones to incite various feelings in those around her. These vary from lust, rage, fear, and calm. Passively, she emits a Pheromone to incite obedience in humans she transforms into abominations.
  • Chem Expert: A natural and brilliant understanding in the nature of Chemicals and Mutagen, she often attempts to put together various serums for use on test subjects and enemies, with her preferred method of injection being her biomechanical tail.
  • Absorption: Able to devour enemies with her tail through an hour long process. The liquids prevalent inside the tail during this process paralyze the target, but keep them awake for the experience of being dissolved and eaten. The DNA of the eaten is retained by Kaslana for later mutagen use.
  • Mutagen Injection: Able to inject others with various mutagens and serums, she has three notable mutagens to start with.
    - Code Alpha: Able to be injected into normal humans in an attempt to activate their meta-gene, or metahumans for DNA restructure to be manipulated by Kaslana's pheromones. Will often result in a horrid transformation into an abomination of varying nature if human, loyal to Kaslana's commands.
    - Code Bravo: Injectable into metahumans, it will boost the potency of their powers for twenty minutes, often doubling existing effects and numbing any effects from pain.

Weaknesses:
  • Is it hot in here?: Pheromones released will affect Kaslana as well if released in greater amounts.
  • Dinner Time: Kaslana is unable to move for the entire hour duration of the Absorption process.
  • Begging for release: Kaslana must use her tail to inject someone or something at least once per day or she becomes 'pent up'. Her tail will then inject the closest target regardless of allegiance.

Equipment:
  • Biomechanical Tail: A tail infused into her, this key part of Kaslana's being is capable of great feats of strength, often batting aside cars and is capable of self regeneration. It is also extremely sensitive and is considered a critical weak point of Kaslana, as gripping it will leave her in orgasmic paralyzation.
  • Mechanical Exoskeleton: Specific Parts of Kaslana's torso is covered in an exoskeleton. This is mostly to avoid immediately fatal blows and add to durability.

Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Nationality: Finnish
Hometown: Ivalo
Sexuality: Omnisexual

Personality: Often considered arrogant due to her fathers lineage as a hero, she styles herself as a champion of metahumans and a revolutionary. She views metahumans as superior to humans and see's most humans as cattle, but often tries to earn consent for anything she's going to do to them. Albeit if they disagree that's their problem. She makes numerous attempts at styling herself in a regal manner, acting as a queen for those she has transformed.
Motivation: Desiring to create a new nation for Metahumans to live in and govern, Kaslana acts in the supposed interest of Metahumans everywhere. Though she can admittedly get carried away at times, she wants to make her parents proud, and doesn't believe their route of being Hero's will bring sufficient progress.

Biography: She wasn't originally supposed to be born in Northern Finland. After all, who actually WANTS to be born in Finland? Well Kaslana's parent's had a plan in mind, and it involved keeping their child safe from any form of danger that might come there way due to their profession as Hero's. Her mom was the heavy hitter in the relationship and her dad was the brains behind her gear. Together, they formed an impressive duo known as 'Doctor Mecha' and 'Velvet Thunder'. Kaslana however, was often home alone while her parents were away. Forced to make friends with the estate staff, she felt her maids were better maternal figures than her own mother, and although her mother and father loved her dearly, she has held resentment for their absence until she was a teenager.

While they were away, Kaslana garnered a slight reputation on a variety of internet forums. She often complained about her parents and the fact they were Hero's, and here she would encounter an online persona named 'VillainPosterXxX6969'. Though she thought little of the name at first, they would become a close compatriot as her own Tech Supplier like her father is to her Mother. Over time and through years of planning, they would eventually send her what she desired for a persona in the form of a mechanical tail and a moderately comprising outfit. If she achieved her parents wishes then surely they would come home. Better yet, if she was a Villain she would have a greater chance of seeing her parents during work as well.

Kaslana had been prepping to set off on her own as a Villain until she received an invitation to the prodigy initiative, and although her father was still working with Hero's in making gadgets and other tech, she would need to pass off her departure to her mother as an 'extended field trip' courtesy of a University.

#HOTApp
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Postby Forest State » Mon Mar 25, 2019 12:40 pm

Imperial--japan wrote:snip

Please no more meme characters :(
Gudmund wrote:snip

Accepted.



Updated squads. Squad B is full.

Purgatory (Squad A): Artemis (CO), Asia, Jack, Eamon

Purgatory (Squad B): Matt, Elek, Zekulu, Giovanni, Jacob.

Crackdown: DRMA Joint Forces Unit, Kodiak, Sage, Sophia
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Postby Frachen » Mon Mar 25, 2019 3:06 pm

Forest State wrote:
Imperial--japan wrote:snip

Please no more meme characters :(
Gudmund wrote:snip

Accepted.



Updated squads. Squad B is full.

Purgatory (Squad A): Artemis (CO), Soli, Jack, Eamon

Purgatory (Squad B): Matt, Elek, Zekulu, Giovanni, Jacob.

Crackdown: DRMA Joint Forces Unit, Kodiak, Sage, Asia

You missed my updated version
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SETH REYNOLDS


Name:Seth Reynolds
Nickname/Alias:Cross
Appearance:
Image[/img]

Gender:Male
Age:11
Build:4 foot 6 inches. He is 89.5 lb
Faction:Prodigy initiative
Power Classification:Genetic

Description of Powers:
Unlimited Knives:He can summon knives out of thin air at a rate of 1 per 30 seconds.
Shape shifting:He can change his body to imitate anyone else.

Weaknesses:He is weak to exposure to the sun for extended periods of time. He also cannot swim. He is also hapethaphobic and has a hard time working with others. He is a psychopath as well so not many trust him. His knives tire him out after he summons 20 and he cannot imitate anyone without first seeing them. He also cannot change his right eye to match the rest of his body.

Equipment: His clothes are able to take the form of any outfit he wants, not check else

Alignment:chaotic evil
Nationality:American
Hometown:New York City
Sexuality:Straight

Personality:He is a cold, sadistic and ruthless killer who likes to torture his victims before killing them.
Motivation:His main motivation in life is to just kill people and enjoy himself.

Biography:He was born to a small family in New York who had been working for years to perfect an AI. He was about 3 when they finished. The machine turned against them however and taking control of their gaurds, had the family executed, Seth however, managed to escape death because he was under his Aunt's care at the time. He grew up to learn nothing but pain, and all the pain caused him to snap and unlock his powers. His aunt blamed him for his parent's death and shipped him off to an orphanage. He didn't get along with anyone and had a hard time fitting in.
One day he was eating lunch and one kid purposely tripped him. Seth got up admistd the laughter and summoned a knife. The laughter stopped immediately, but there was still one person laughing, Seth himself. Seth went on to call them weak, and not truly powerful. He killed them in front of the police who were called in after the staff couldn't do anything. The police out of fear pulled out their pistols, but it was too late, they were frozen in time, not that they knew it, one second the kid was there, the next he was gone.
Seth had run to hide, but he was found by the Prodigy Initiative who offered him a home in exchange for his services. He agreed and he has been helping them on various missions and such ever since. Occasionally he will make the news ands not her murder story. The use of his powers has turned his skin and hair white, and he no longer has any color to his eyes, except his right eye, which is a blood red.

#HOTApp
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Postby Forest State » Mon Mar 25, 2019 4:01 pm

I haven't even read the bio yet and there's several problems.

What are the specifications of his power? As in, what are the limits and rules of it? How fast can he generate knives and does it tire him, for example, and how does the shapeshifting work? Can he imitate anyone? Does he have to know the person to imitate them? Is it a perfect copy or are there flaws? Why does he have a secondary ability much stronger than his primary ability?

Why does he have a weakness to sunlight? It's just a random weakness that doesn't tie into anything else.

His motivation is to kill people but why? And don't say that it's because he's a psychopath or a sociopath, that isn't a legitimate reason. Even if he was, there's a big jump between being one and dedicating your life to murdering people.

Why is he a cold killer whose only motivation is to kill people but also loyal at the same time? Who is he even loyal to, since he doesn't seem like the type to have friends?

I think it might be better to start a completely new app.
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Postby Frachen » Mon Mar 25, 2019 4:14 pm

Forest State wrote:I haven't even read the bio yet and there's several problems.

What are the specifications of his power? As in, what are the limits and rules of it? How fast can he generate knives and does it tire him, for example, and how does the shapeshifting work? Can he imitate anyone? Does he have to know the person to imitate them? Is it a perfect copy or are there flaws? Why does he have a secondary ability much stronger than his primary ability?

Why does he have a weakness to sunlight? It's just a random weakness that doesn't tie into anything else.

His motivation is to kill people but why? And don't say that it's because he's a psychopath or a sociopath, that isn't a legitimate reason. Even if he was, there's a big jump between being one and dedicating your life to murdering people.

Why is he a cold killer whose only motivation is to kill people but also loyal at the same time? Who is he even loyal to, since he doesn't seem like the type to have friends?

I think it might be better to start a completely new app.

K, well i like to have the more unusual characters, and that plays a major part in the confusion you have. I also have a hard time with backstorys especially so there is that too, yes he has to know the person to change shape, yes he is a psychopath, he mentally snapped. His flaw is that he can't hide his right eye, which is actually a blood red. He can't use any powers of people that he imitates, and the shape shifting is secondary cause I don't plan on using it often. Knife generation is 1 per every 30 seconds, it tires him out after the count of 20 knives. His range is about 1 yard distance for throwing them. Sunlight weakness is due to his very light skin, it was just a last moment add on. He is also hapethaphobic, I'll also do that, its the fear of being touched. He is loyal because....well I forgot to remove that so......yeah there is that. He also cannot imitate their voice without hearing it. So if you don't talk to him your fine. He can also mess up and associate the wrong voice with the wrong person and completely ruin the imitation. Slightly better? I will take your advice after this is judged. Sorry if I'm wasting your time.
And here it is with the updates you said you needed, I'm not hoping for much however so I'm working on a new character just in case you decide to scrap him for the last time.
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SETH REYNOLDS


Name:Seth Reynolds
Nickname/Alias:Cross
Appearance:
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Gender:Male
Age:11
Build:4 foot 6 inches. He is 89.5 lb
Faction:Prodigy initiative
Power Classification:Genetic

Description of Powers:
Unlimited Knives:He can summon knives out of thin air at a rate of 1 per 30 seconds.
Shape shifting:He can change his body to imitate anyone else.

Weaknesses:He is weak to exposure to the sun for extended periods of time. He also cannot swim. He is also hapethaphobic and has a hard time working with others. He is a psychopath as well so not many trust him. His knives tire him out after he summons 20 and he cannot imitate anyone without first seeing them. He also cannot change his right eye to match the rest of his body.

Equipment: His clothes are able to take the form of any outfit he wants, not check else

Alignment:chaotic evil
Nationality:American
Hometown:New York City
Sexuality:Straight

Personality:He is a cold, sadistic and ruthless killer who likes to torture his victims before killing them.
Motivation:His main motivation in life is to just kill people and enjoy himself.

Biography:He was born to a small family in New York who had been working for years to perfect an AI. He was about 3 when they finished. The machine turned against them however and taking control of their gaurds, had the family executed, Seth however, managed to escape death because he was under his Aunt's care at the time. He grew up to learn nothing but pain, and all the pain caused him to snap and unlock his powers. His aunt blamed him for his parent's death and shipped him off to an orphanage. He didn't get along with anyone and had a hard time fitting in.
One day he was eating lunch and one kid purposely tripped him. Seth got up admistd the laughter and summoned a knife. The laughter stopped immediately, but there was still one person laughing, Seth himself. Seth went on to call them weak, and not truly powerful. He killed them in front of the police who were called in after the staff couldn't do anything. The police out of fear pulled out their pistols, but it was too late, they were frozen in time, not that they knew it, one second the kid was there, the next he was gone.
Seth had run to hide, but he was found by the Prodigy Initiative who offered him a home in exchange for his services. He agreed and he has been helping them on various missions and such ever since. Occasionally he will make the news ands not her murder story. The use of his powers has turned his skin and hair white, and he no longer has any color to his eyes, except his right eye, which is a blood red.

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Postby Forest State » Mon Mar 25, 2019 4:46 pm

Don't get me wrong, I understand unusual characters.

And we have unusual characters. Characters that are non human, characters with complex and not typically seen powers, characters who were ex-child soldiers, insane characters, etc. But they have to make sense. Unusual for unusual's sake doesn't work.

The knife power is fine but I don't know about being able to impersonate anyone with few catches. I also fail to see how the red eye is a weakness.

And again, your character being a psychopath isn't an excuse for him to dedicate his life to killing people. That just doesn't make a lot of sense.

"Psychopathy is traditionally a personality disorder characterized by persistent antisocial behavior, impaired empathy and remorse, and bold, disinhibited, and egotistical traits." is the definition of psychopathy. It doesn't mean that the person just becomes a murderboo and forgets about everything else other than killing.
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Postby Frachen » Mon Mar 25, 2019 4:49 pm

Forest State wrote:Don't get me wrong, I understand unusual characters.

And we have unusual characters. Characters that are non human, characters with complex and not typically seen powers, characters who were ex-child soldiers, insane characters, etc. But they have to make sense. Unusual for unusual's sake doesn't work.

The knife power is fine but I don't know about being able to impersonate anyone with few catches. I also fail to see how the red eye is a weakness.

And again, your character being a psychopath isn't an excuse for him to dedicate his life to killing people. That just doesn't make a lot of sense.

"Psychopathy is traditionally a personality disorder characterized by persistent antisocial behavior, impaired empathy and remorse, and bold, disinhibited, and egotistical traits." is the definition of psychopathy. It doesn't mean that the person just becomes a murderboo and forgets about everything else other than killing.

So is that a scrap or no?
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Postby Forest State » Mon Mar 25, 2019 4:54 pm

Frachen wrote:
Forest State wrote:Don't get me wrong, I understand unusual characters.

And we have unusual characters. Characters that are non human, characters with complex and not typically seen powers, characters who were ex-child soldiers, insane characters, etc. But they have to make sense. Unusual for unusual's sake doesn't work.

The knife power is fine but I don't know about being able to impersonate anyone with few catches. I also fail to see how the red eye is a weakness.

And again, your character being a psychopath isn't an excuse for him to dedicate his life to killing people. That just doesn't make a lot of sense.

"Psychopathy is traditionally a personality disorder characterized by persistent antisocial behavior, impaired empathy and remorse, and bold, disinhibited, and egotistical traits." is the definition of psychopathy. It doesn't mean that the person just becomes a murderboo and forgets about everything else other than killing.

So is that a scrap or no?

It might as well be, since imo you would have to change everything about the app to get it accepted.
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Postby The Cross and Davids Star » Mon Mar 25, 2019 5:06 pm

Put Nev up for Team A

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Mission map for Purgatory. Letters are landing zones, squares are hordes.

Imperial--japan wrote:snip

Accepted.
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Postby Forest State » Wed Mar 27, 2019 8:08 am

OPFOR faction for Crackdown following the change, listed here for documentation purposes.

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THE DRAGOONS


Name: The Dragoons
Approximate Member Count: 4
Areas of Operation: Europe

Goals: To take matters into their own hands when things slip through the cracks and are missed by the Guardians organization.

Members:
Biography: The Dragoons, as they are known, were founded in 2022 by a group of college students based out of southern England to deal with problems not handled by the Guardians. The group would find early success and become something of an internet sensation because of the online nature of their team, which publicized its activities on the internet and developed its own website which would gain a large following despite the obvious danger of publishing illegal activities. The team was able to survive and do well taking action against organized criminals and low to mid tier villains, but drew the attention of the DRMA for being a very public vigilante group in a region where vigilantes are considered the same as criminals. Additionally, the group has caused damages in the past to the wrong person at times, thanks to their vigilante nature. To put down their rising status and popularity and bring an end to the group, the DRMA began Operation Sleeping Dragoon in 2023 to bring about the downfall of the group, moving to carry it out covertly in 2024 with support from the Guardians.

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GREGSON LESTRADE


Name:Gregson Lestrade (Not known to the public however)
Nickname/Alias: The Hunter
Appearance:
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Gender:Male
Age:22
Build:Built rather muscular, he is an imposing 6 foot 6 and weighs about 243 pounds
Faction:None
Power Classification:Gentic

Description of Powers:Flame manipulation

Weaknesses:Water

Equipment:Stealth mode:Has an invisibility mode that can last for 5 min
Shock absorption:His suit can also lower any damage he would take from electricity, instead converting it into a more useful form, this has a downfall however, as it also causes electricits to strike him more often
Knives of the cursed:Knives (in picture) that when impaled in someone, weakens their power by 30% for 5 minuets.
Swords of darkness:Two Swords that can connect by the hilts, not much else to them.
Alignment: true neutral
Nationality:British
Hometown:London, England
Sexuality:Straight

Personality:He is a generally calm and collected person
Motivation:To eliminate all those with power (explained in Bio)

Biography:Gregson Lestradewas born to a small family in London and was very successful in athletics from a young age. He was one of his school's top football (soccer) players and had quite a few friends. One day as he was walking home he noticed his house was on fire, running home he saw two men leave the building laughing. He ran at them, but they bathed him in flames. Unknowingly, he used his powers to prevent the fire from reaching get him, which shocked his foes. His foes left however and he never saw them again.
Upon entering his house, he saw his parents burnt alive. He fell to his knees and promised to avenge them, vowing to destroy everyone who had powers in order to bring peace to the world. He eventually found out that he had powers of his own and vowed to never use them unless it was an absolute necessity. Now, keeping to his promise, he hunts down all those with powers, using the alias Hunter to mask his true identity.

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Postby Lunas Legion » Wed Mar 27, 2019 11:13 am

Yeah, uh... While independent characters are not banned, the thread won't morph or shift to specifically accommodate them and enable them to be active. I'd highly recommend reconsidering his nature as an independent, although with that motive no one would be willing to recruit him.
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