Rate the AN's Chosen Factbook!

[Rhanukhan]

My immediate response upon opening the link was surprise and delight at the unique and colourful page design.

I see that our nations share the conceit that "Earth" exists only as part of a work of fiction (in my case, it's the setting of a famous series of novels by one Professor Jolyon R. R. Whatnot, serving purely as a means for me to reference the real world in-game any time the need arises ). Your presentation of the concept is great fun and goes into just enough detail to remain entertaining and informative without wearing out the joke. I like the addition of the public comments at the end of the article as well. The whole page is both creative and credible - there's really nothing to fault.

10/10 - can I order a copy of the book?

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https://www.nationstates.net/nation=rha ... k/id=11474

[A m e n r i a]

9/10. Easy to understand, with respectable original art. The Marvel reference got a giggle out of me, so did the Symyan. The original creatures seem interesting, and the ones that are supposed to be menacing are. I'd totally run the other way if I saw an Altered when I'm walking the streets at night. Why not 10? I've just seen better formatting, no offence.

Rate the one linked at the bottom right of my sig, please.

[Sheizou]

Wow, very cool and informative. It's own wiki page too. I like all the info and formatting, as well as the concepts and content. That being said there are still things I don't quite understand, but it could be that I am just dumb. Either way good job 9/10

Bn, srry no link, but my leader factbook plz!

[Trump Almighty]

The only thing more cursed than the drawing of AN’s leader is the fact that it looks as if he is forced to rule Sheizou against his own will. Also legit terrified of whatever shit the leader has seen before ruling as Smoke Envoy.

8.29/10

Link to my factbook: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=tru ... id=1813886

[Equai]

I know that one. I had to read it when doing the "opinion about an leader" game and again for the "best factbook of an"game as well and i still stick to what I said there: Formatting, writing, image.. its top, absolutely top. Its full of useful information about the leader. But seeing it again to see if something new was added I noticed the updated picture which looks awesome tho I will need a bit seeing them without the paper stuck to their forehead haha. Criticism that I said before stay the same - making the "-" ones next to table of content be the same as the background. I will give it 9/10 because of it somewhat incomplete stadium when it comes to images in the infobox.

This one BN, I known its incomplete but I would like some feedbacks about how its going

edit: ninjad'
do AN

[Frisemark]

Pretty good for a more expansive encyclopedic entry on your capital. Not too short, not too long, with good images to accompany it. One issue I'd raise is increasing the size of some of the later images in the factbook, they're a bit too small to be visually useful. 8/10.

EDIT: Just saw the ninja.

For Trump Almighty,

It's alright. A bit basic, but short and funny enough. I'd expand more on the meme-ier details of the territorial acquisitions personally. Shouldn't be too hard considering the subject matter. 5/10.

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Here's mine.

[Cappedore]

Ooh, awesome! Love the layout, and the seal designs are reall cool!!
7.5/10
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=cappedore/detail=factbook/id=main

[East Plate]

8/10 - I quite like it! I particularly enjoy the colours you are using with this factbook, and I also like that there are flowers everywhere. I think they look very nice, and even a bit cute. As for the concept of the factbook itself, I think it is a convenient factbook, which serves its purpose of organising the contents of your nation very well. I like that you tell us a bit about your nation, so we can get an idea of what to expect, and then offer us a link to expand our knowledge of that particular thing if we want to. It is a very well-done way to quickly get to know your nation and even a bit of your OOC self.

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BN: Please rate this factbook about Eastplatine entertainment. I know the factbook is a bit too long, so if you don't feel like reading it all (I don't judge you for not wanting to read it), feel free to choose the section that catches your attention the most and rate that alone.

[BlakeIsHere]

9.75, very interesting and well written. It's cool to see what "entertainment" is like in other countries. If it were shorter, I would've liked it more, but I don't care.

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For BN, rate this factbook about the historic political party called the Federalist Movement. It can be seen here: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bla ... id=1877833.

[Great Jenovah]

I am going to give it a 6/10. It's a start, but I wish I could see more content and some interesting formatting. It could be developed into something more and I am sure AN, with due time, will reach that point.

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As it's my only factbook, voila.

[Lackadaisia]

7/10

Always nice to see a well-made factbook that is relevant to the nation. Good colors, nice pictures, good formatting... I really don't have anything negative to say.

[Breizh-Veur]

Well, given your overview is your only factbook I guessed it was what you wanted rated.

It's a 10/10 for me, no cons. It's informative, pleasantly (in my eyes) formatted, and the text & images paints an excellent picture of what your nation is and how it looks like, a prime example of what an overview should be. And I love how you took your own photos for the most part. They're awesome. Is photography your hobby?

For BN, this is my latest: a page for one of the historical leaders of Brittany. I'd appreciate feedback if y'all have any to help improve things.

[Agausia]

The formatting looks really nice and clean. I like that we get to learn about Marcus Conan de Leon and their important role in your country. I particularly like how we get a view of their military life and political life. It reads like a professional article at the best, or a really well-done wiki page at its worse (and that isn't an insult).

Just created this formatting. The image is a link to a larger page.
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=aga ... id=1890644

[Frisemark]

7/10. It's decent, but it uses an odd color palette for an official website and feels more like a tech startup's online store than a government page. I'd recommend only using one instead of two colors and using sharper geometric edges rather than rounded ones, personally.

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https://www.nationstates.net/nation=fri ... id=1829878

[Ethensia]

Wow!
The background color is really cool and I like the coat of arms thingy image at the top of the page, as well as that town image you added. Very nice factbook with loads of information.
https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1891788
10/10 btw

[Shieldstan]

I didn't understand it so,I can't say anything about it

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1884516

[Stralfcyde]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1883531

The alphabet is quite weird but probably 4/10

[Shieldstan]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1883531

The alphabet is quite weird but probably 4/10

What?that wasn't the Factbook?

/skip me

[The Aquaria]

I didn't understand it so,I can't say anything about it

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1884516

Since AN didn't follow the rule, so

I believe this factbook is a quite informative one on explaining how stuffs in YN is measured. I would say a 8/10?

oops, forgot to post mein link.

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1890244

[Ethensia]

I didn't understand it so,I can't say anything about it

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1884516

Lol, understandable

/skip me

[Equai]

I didn't understand it so,I can't say anything about it

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1884516

Since AN didn't follow the rule, so

I believe this factbook is a quite informative one on explaining how stuffs in YN is measured. I would say a 8/10?

oops, forgot to post mein link.

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1890244

Before all i like the formatting, its pretty and clean, infobox gives all important details and usage of [tab] code is big plus. HOWEVER, the actual substance about he former president is lacking. Now I don't know if that factbook is fully completed or not and its completely understandable if you don't want to waste time crafting entire life of a former president. I know that I wouldn't. For what it is its solid 7/10. It would've been a lot higher if the factbook didn't felt empty.

BN: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=equai/detail=factbook/id=1886388

[Boneville]

It is very informative
https://nationstates.net/nation=bonevil ... ok/id=main

[Mittle Europa Reich]

5/10, short, that makes it contain few information, but the small information it has is interesting.
edit: BN: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1888268

[Boneville]

5/10, short, that makes it contain few information, but the small information it has is interesting.
edit: BN: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1888268

don't worry a more lengthy factbook is coming up

[Kractero]

5/10, short, that makes it contain few information, but the small information it has is interesting.
edit: BN: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1888268

To be honest, like a 3/10. The information doesn't read well. The map is decent but uses modern borders and subdivisions and the alternate history really doesn't make sense.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1318923