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UIS Leviathan
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Father Knows Best State

Rate the AN’s Factbook II

Postby UIS Leviathan » Tue Sep 10, 2019 9:29 pm

I have no idea what happened to the last one, so unless I’m blind or it was a fever dream, let’s try this again.

The premise is fairly simple, you rate the AN’s chosen Factbook out of 10, then you choose a factbook of yours for the below nation to rate. Bonus if you give some criticism or say what you like about it. Don’t be an asshole, though and follow forum rules.

Let's start with this one

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Great Mojave
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Founded: Aug 02, 2017
Ex-Nation

Postby Great Mojave » Tue Sep 10, 2019 9:32 pm

7.8/10. Gives me the heeby jeebies. Damn it, Satan!


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https://www.nationstates.net/nation=gre ... id=1098211
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NEIN: Monarchy, Socialism, Mutualism, Communism, Syndicalism, Fascism, Wahabism, Islam (the idea, not its supporters.), Islamism, Theocracy, Authoritarianism, Corporatism
(Almost) not based on fallout! Also, we don't use NS stats.
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The Year is 2050. The cities are big, the streets are bathed in neon, the desert is hot, and the wave is synth.

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UIS Leviathan
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Founded: Nov 16, 2016
Father Knows Best State

Postby UIS Leviathan » Wed Sep 11, 2019 5:03 pm

/Bump?

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Synne Industries
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Posts: 133
Founded: May 07, 2019
Anarchy

Postby Synne Industries » Wed Sep 11, 2019 5:06 pm

Great Mojave wrote:7.8/10. Gives me the heeby jeebies. Damn it, Satan!


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https://www.nationstates.net/nation=gre ... id=1098211


8/10, easy on the eyes, easy on the mind.

It gets the point across while not being super text-wall-y. I also enjoy the inclusion of youth wings, especially the Pirate Lads.




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Yegla Islands
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Posts: 212
Founded: Oct 19, 2016
Scandinavian Liberal Paradise

Postby Yegla Islands » Thu Sep 12, 2019 6:55 am

Eh, 5/10, bumped up to a 7/10 when taking into account the limitations of creating a gallery page with bbcode. The lack of formatting still gets to me, but having attempted several times to make a good-looking gallery without downscaling the images by a considerable margin (which wouldn't really be feasible with these since they're quite detailed), I can safely say that doing so is highly problematic.




This one.
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Dictator-backed dedication to absolute civil freedoms, ultrabureaucratic pseudo-socialism and heavily-armed neutrality.
Fueled by PMT/FanT dieselpunk schizotech, eldritch red tape and snazzy neo-cold war aesthetics on a broken continent.


Our HistoryOur MilitaryOur GovernmentOur CitiesOur GeographyOur LeaderOur "Magic"Themes & TunesFor those wishing to invade

This nation uses NS stats. Sort of. In a general kind of way. Canon policies may be found here.

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Uinted Communist of Africa
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Founded: Sep 28, 2016
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Uinted Communist of Africa » Thu Sep 12, 2019 7:26 am

Nice I like the way it looks like government papers 8/10







I don't know how to convert this link into word so just copy and paste? :eyebrow:
P.s I made it 3 years ago...its gonna get an upgrade soon
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uin ... /id=712238
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[_★_] copy and paste. Join the revolution!!!! Stats are for the mentally advanced...change my mind.
( -_- ) My nation does support my political views...deal with it.

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Adad Civilization
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Founded: Jun 08, 2018
Libertarian Police State

Postby Adad Civilization » Thu Sep 12, 2019 7:34 am

4/10

Under 4th-grade grammar? Check
Realism completely thrown out for an ideological fantasy? Check
Little-To-No Formatting? Check
Massive walls of text with no breaks? Check
Spelling Mistakes galore? Check
Strawmen? Check
OP characters? Check
Unstoppable Armies? Check

Yep, it desperately needs an upgrade. Though I will admit, it isn't the worst factbook in the world and it is better than not having a factbook




https://www.nationstates.net/nation=adad_civilization/detail=factbook/id=1044583
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IC Year: 5278 BCE
Were NSstats even invented yet in 5000 BC? (Plus it made me a left-leaning college state because I allowed free press so... #### them)
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Free Arabian Nation
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Benevolent Dictatorship

Postby Free Arabian Nation » Thu Sep 12, 2019 4:58 pm

Erm, hate to bother you OP. But the original thread Still Exists and isn't locked yet

/skip
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UIS Leviathan
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Father Knows Best State

Postby UIS Leviathan » Thu Sep 12, 2019 5:57 pm

Free Arabian Nation wrote:Erm, hate to bother you OP. But the original thread Still Exists and isn't locked yet

/skip

Er, no, that’s a completely different thread bud. You choose the best/your favorite factbook in that one, this one you rate the chosen Factbook. The only real similarity is factbooks are involved.
Adad Civilization wrote:4/10

Under 4th-grade grammar? Check
Realism completely thrown out for an ideological fantasy? Check
Little-To-No Formatting? Check
Massive walls of text with no breaks? Check
Spelling Mistakes galore? Check
Strawmen? Check
OP characters? Check
Unstoppable Armies? Check

Yep, it desperately needs an upgrade. Though I will admit, it isn't the worst factbook in the world and it is better than not having a factbook




https://www.nationstates.net/nation=adad_civilization/detail=factbook/id=1044583

8/10

Short, sweet, and to the point, though ngl for some reason I feel it could use more visuals or something.

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uis ... id=1250576

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Free Arabian Nation
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Benevolent Dictatorship

Postby Free Arabian Nation » Thu Sep 12, 2019 6:03 pm

UIS Leviathan wrote:
Free Arabian Nation wrote:Erm, hate to bother you OP. But the original thread Still Exists and isn't locked yet

/skip

Er, no, that’s a completely different thread bud. You choose the best/your favorite factbook in that one, this one you rate the chosen Factbook. The only real similarity is factbooks are involved.

Shit, wrong link.

You're right though

/skip
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God Emperor Trump of Mankind
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Founded: Sep 12, 2019
Ex-Nation

Postby God Emperor Trump of Mankind » Thu Sep 12, 2019 7:46 pm

UIS Leviathan wrote:
Free Arabian Nation wrote:Erm, hate to bother you OP. But the original thread Still Exists and isn't locked yet

/skip

Er, no, that’s a completely different thread bud. You choose the best/your favorite factbook in that one, this one you rate the chosen Factbook. The only real similarity is factbooks are involved.
Adad Civilization wrote:4/10

Under 4th-grade grammar? Check
Realism completely thrown out for an ideological fantasy? Check
Little-To-No Formatting? Check
Massive walls of text with no breaks? Check
Spelling Mistakes galore? Check
Strawmen? Check
OP characters? Check
Unstoppable Armies? Check

Yep, it desperately needs an upgrade. Though I will admit, it isn't the worst factbook in the world and it is better than not having a factbook




https://www.nationstates.net/nation=adad_civilization/detail=factbook/id=1044583

8/10

Short, sweet, and to the point, though ngl for some reason I feel it could use more visuals or something.

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uis ... id=1250576


8/10, Not bad, mortal one.

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Free Arabian Nation
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Benevolent Dictatorship

Postby Free Arabian Nation » Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:47 am

AN has no factbook listed, so he is getting the biggest skip I can find...

/skip

UIS: You would think it was an edgepost, given how the first paragraph contains 'raised from hell' and all that crap, but instead I was given a relatively interesting factbook regarding who runs the fleet along with who feeds the fleet.

Overall, 7/10. Could use some formatting but it is overall good.




This one
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Neo-Unified Nations
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Posts: 27
Founded: Jun 16, 2019
Psychotic Dictatorship

Postby Neo-Unified Nations » Fri Sep 13, 2019 4:51 am

8/10 while short it's perfect in information detail.




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The Unitary World Order of the Neo-Unified Nations.
"Above all else, humanity."
A one world order locked in a war with the supernatural, it does everything to help fascism humanity.

Current Time Period:2020-2029.
I now have a Secretary-General, just as a note, she's on equal levels of authority with Nathan, but Nathan represents the Stratocratic part of the Neo-UN, which is the face of NUN mainly shown, and the most influential, alright?
La Santa Chanclasilla, by Federal Spanish States, backed by God, the Neo-UN, and The Osean-Belkan Alliance!

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Lyudstvo
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Founded: Aug 12, 2017
Ex-Nation

Postby Lyudstvo » Fri Sep 13, 2019 7:12 am

Including the WIP sections, I'd rate it a 6 or 7/10, but ignoring those parts, I'd rate it an 8/10

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Soudar
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Founded: Apr 13, 2018
New York Times Democracy

Postby Soudar » Fri Sep 13, 2019 7:17 am

6/10 it has the information but you can format it better

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=sou ... id=1191757

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Free Arabian Nation
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Benevolent Dictatorship

Postby Free Arabian Nation » Fri Sep 13, 2019 9:01 am

my dumb ass fucked up again

/skip pls
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Holdac
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Founded: Aug 16, 2019
Iron Fist Consumerists

Postby Holdac » Fri Sep 13, 2019 9:03 am

Soudar wrote:6/10 it has the information but you can format it better

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=sou ... id=1191757

7.5/10 nice to read
Usually IC on here.

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Balticonia
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Founded: Oct 11, 2018
Capitalist Paradise

Postby Balticonia » Fri Sep 13, 2019 9:06 am

Soudar wrote:6/10 it has the information but you can format it better

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=sou ... id=1191757

I like the detail in it! Very good! 8/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bal ... id=1245761
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Holdac
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Iron Fist Consumerists

Postby Holdac » Fri Sep 13, 2019 9:11 am

ninja'd
Usually IC on here.

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UIS Leviathan
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Founded: Nov 16, 2016
Father Knows Best State

Postby UIS Leviathan » Sat Sep 14, 2019 2:26 am

Holdac wrote:ninja'd

You didn’t put a factbook for them to rate, so they couldn’t do you. You have to give one of your factbooks to rate. It says that in the OP and it’s pretty obvious.
Balticonia wrote:
Soudar wrote:6/10 it has the information but you can format it better

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=sou ... id=1191757

I like the detail in it! Very good! 8/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bal ... id=1245761

The formatting is a bit too busy, there’s too many boxes in the beginning, and the whole thing is just way too long. I don’t feel like you could reasonably expect people to read through it all. 4/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uis ... id=1257405
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Lyudstvo
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Founded: Aug 12, 2017
Ex-Nation

Postby Lyudstvo » Sat Sep 14, 2019 6:31 am

UIS Leviathan wrote:
Holdac wrote:ninja'd

You didn’t put a factbook for them to rate, so they couldn’t do you. You have to give one of your factbooks to rate. It says that in the OP and it’s pretty obvious.
Balticonia wrote:I like the detail in it! Very good! 8/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bal ... id=1245761

The formatting is a bit too busy, there’s too many boxes in the beginning, and the whole thing is just way too long. I don’t feel like you could reasonably expect people to read through it all. 4/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=uis ... id=1257405

Interesting read, he's an interesting figure. I really liked the part describing his past adventures, but I'm kinda confused as to how he's died five times.
Overall, 8/10
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Yegla Islands
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Founded: Oct 19, 2016
Scandinavian Liberal Paradise

Postby Yegla Islands » Sat Sep 14, 2019 6:40 am

5.5/10. No formatting whatsoever, and the entire factbook's just a wall of text. That aside, the actual info is pretty comprehensive and well-written, if somewhat inconsistent in tone. The formatting's the main issue though - you should really give people something to look at, in terms of either images or some kind of fancier layout.




This one.
     

Dictator-backed dedication to absolute civil freedoms, ultrabureaucratic pseudo-socialism and heavily-armed neutrality.
Fueled by PMT/FanT dieselpunk schizotech, eldritch red tape and snazzy neo-cold war aesthetics on a broken continent.


Our HistoryOur MilitaryOur GovernmentOur CitiesOur GeographyOur LeaderOur "Magic"Themes & TunesFor those wishing to invade

This nation uses NS stats. Sort of. In a general kind of way. Canon policies may be found here.

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Free Arabian Nation
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Benevolent Dictatorship

Postby Free Arabian Nation » Sat Sep 14, 2019 6:38 pm

0/10, I can't get past the security without getting shot.

Jokes aside, it is extremely well formatted and honestly reminds me more of a website rather than a factbook. Other than that, the on-factbook information is kind of limited. 9/10




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UIS Leviathan
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Founded: Nov 16, 2016
Father Knows Best State

Postby UIS Leviathan » Mon Sep 16, 2019 3:44 pm

8/10, I enjoyed the bits of humor, it looked good, and was written quite well.

It’s nowhere near done but it’s the most recent thing

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Cybus1
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Father Knows Best State

Postby Cybus1 » Mon Sep 16, 2019 3:53 pm

8/10. Though incomplete, I like the formatting (I think the table of contents is in an odd location, but that's just me), and the information is good. Makes good use of images and graphics, and reads like a proper wiki article.

This one please
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