Your thoughts on AN?

[Bursken]

Nice idea! I like vikings!

[Mets Hayk]

Well, Bursken, I'm going to be honest with you here; I'm honestly not the biggest fan of your style of writing. Your factbooks seem to have quantity, rather than quality, in mind. Most of them...don't exactly make sense. This is the pinnacle of procrastination. If you're not going to 'give more attention' to it, just delete it. It's been over a YEAR.

That civil war factbook isn't exactly anything special either.

Were I to give your advice; I'd tell you to (maybe) add images and expand upon your nation's lore as a whole.

[Hintuwan]

I'm not gonna lie, as someone who also belongs to an often-neglected Catholic country the thought of going full gangsta mode via powerwank larp has also crossed my mind sometimes. Good on you for actually acting upon it.

[Trivalve]

Pretty cool and chill person, I like their law and country ball and I enjoy reading their forum posts

[The Aquaria]

Hmm... I have never met him, or did I? I am pretty sure the world is way too different between both nations and therefore quite hard to rp together, except for the part Somurias exist.

[Hintuwan]

Few states strive to achieve utopia. Even lesser actually achieve it. From an IC point of view they are of course a very admirable country with generally approvable policies, probably one of the most humane countries currently active on F7. From an OOC point of view, I find it unlikely that such a perfect state of tranquility exists with very few flaws. Any dictatorship of the proletarian which exists in a capitalist world is bound to be susceptible to either capital formation and imperialist infiltration so leaders usually do make their state a dictatorship in order to protect the revolution from such threats. I would love to see you expound upon these threats further in your factbooks.

[Hintuwan]

/bump

[Meadowfields]

Few states strive to achieve utopia. Even lesser actually achieve it. From an IC point of view they are of course a very admirable country with generally approvable policies, probably one of the most humane countries currently active on F7. From an OOC point of view, I find it unlikely that such a perfect state of tranquility exists with very few flaws. Any dictatorship of the proletarian which exists in a capitalist world is bound to be susceptible to either capital formation and imperialist infiltration so leaders usually do make their state a dictatorship in order to protect the revolution from such threats. I would love to see you expound upon these threats further in your factbooks.

To start, I love your polandball, it's incredibly adorable lol. The waving flag effect also adds a bit of patriotism to the nation. Everything about your nation is perfect; your colorful and informative signature, your incredibly detailed overview factbook and additional lore threads, and your flag again. The only thing I could recommend is adding some extra factbooks because some people might not bother looking at lore threads. Anyways, having your overview factbook automatically on open is cool af, but just take this as an opinion. By the way, you could work a bit on your stats, they're probably not canon in your worldbuilding but it feels good to have a lot of shinies imo.

[Hintuwan]

/bump

[The Orwell Society]

They are very nice. I've seen them around a ton in F7, and every time they never cease to be nice.

[Hintuwan]

I enjoyed the book 1984 and even loosely based one of my puppets on East Asia's concept of the "obliteration of the self". Kudos to them for bringing Oceania to life.

[Elizbastan]

No. Just no.

[Hintuwan]

No. Just no.

Excuse me?

/still me

[Karazicu]

Nope, no information on them at all.

Hintuwan: Your factbooks are formatted extremely well and are rich with information, on par with PAS. The lore maintenance threads you made are great as well. Keep up the good work mate.

[Laka Strolistandiler]

I actually like the way they make their “fascist junta” somewhat justified and believable giving out some very good reasoning to it’s existence and why no one has attempted to revolt against it. Too bad people in the endings thread think that an authoritarian state being overthrown is an original one.

[Frisemark]

I always like countries that play into a non-"realistic"/wiki-esque aesthetic for their factbooks and nation. It identifies them as unique and high-effort, and Laka is no exception. It helps that the user is agreeable.

[Kinnarite]

A nice Scandinavian (although geographically, it may be somewhere closer to America) country with a pair of features, like noticable militarization.
What else can be said?

[Trivalve]

They have put a lot of effort into their first two factbooks which makes me excited to see what else they can make as their nation grows. Can't realy say anything else as they are quite new though based of their factbooks they could be an alt

[Hintuwan]

I find it really funny that they only have one monarchist in their legislature. I can't shake the thought of everyone very intensely debating the issues of the nation and then that one guy goes "Hey, you know guys, if we didn't have democracy we wouldn't have to deal with this shit".


Ninja'd

It is commendable that they regularly come up with news articles to inform everyone of the state of their nation.

[Valentine Z]

One of the best in terms of arts and factbooks and everything else that is to do with visuals. Detailed, harmonic color choices, and the Filipino songs that I actually do like listening to; I quite like the sounds from all around the world, so this helps.

[New Zoigai]

A nation with Long factbook names,very well formatted and highly detailed factbooks, and A blue person on their flag. Valentine Z is a very well constructed nation that clearly has been in the makes for an extended amount of time. There is soo much to think about when it comes to Valentine Z that It would require its own essay (Something I dont plan on doing right now).

But I really like the nation as a whole.

[Mets Hayk]

Well, what do we have here? Another low-effort PMT nation with barely any sort of unique features but this?:

However some sources say Zoigai was first founded in 2200 AD when African American settlers reached a new homeworld in order to escapse opression from other ethnic groups, they formed many different states and began fighting for natural recources.

I really don't like this nation, if you couldn't tell. Just about everything seems like you took shit from *insert random sci-fi source here* and ran away with it. Oh, and who could forget the thousand-year-old man, which is pretty much just generic genocidaire #1912? Were I you, I'd actually try to flesh out your nation. Make it stand out, at the very least.

[The-Rapture-Republic]

Well, what do we have here? Another low-effort PMT nation with barely any sort of unique features but this?:

However some sources say Zoigai was first founded in 2200 AD when African American settlers reached a new homeworld in order to escapse opression from other ethnic groups, they formed many different states and began fighting for natural recources.

I really don't like this nation, if you couldn't tell. Just about everything seems like you took shit from *insert random sci-fi source here* and ran away with it. Oh, and who could forget the thousand-year-old man, which is pretty much just generic genocidaire #1912? Were I you, I'd actually try to flesh out your nation. Make it stand out, at the very least.

I like this nation. It is just right with the moderation of a struggling but not totally grim story of a people, and those people being the Armenians. It makes me enjoy reading about them, and leaving hopeful and not depressed.

[New Zoigai]

Well, what do we have here? Another low-effort PMT nation with barely any sort of unique features but this?:

However some sources say Zoigai was first founded in 2200 AD when African American settlers reached a new homeworld in order to escapse opression from other ethnic groups, they formed many different states and began fighting for natural recources.

I really don't like this nation, if you couldn't tell. Just about everything seems like you took shit from *insert random sci-fi source here* and ran away with it. Oh, and who could forget the thousand-year-old man, which is pretty much just generic genocidaire #1912? Were I you, I'd actually try to flesh out your nation. Make it stand out, at the very least.

That isnt much coming from modern Day Armenia with its ancient flag.

/skip

[Great United States]

Well, what do we have here? Another low-effort PMT nation with barely any sort of unique features but this?:



I really don't like this nation, if you couldn't tell. Just about everything seems like you took shit from *insert random sci-fi source here* and ran away with it. Oh, and who could forget the thousand-year-old man, which is pretty much just generic genocidaire #1912? Were I you, I'd actually try to flesh out your nation. Make it stand out, at the very least.

I like this nation. It is just right with the moderation of a struggling but not totally grim story of a people, and those people being the Armenians. It makes me enjoy reading about them, and leaving hopeful and not depressed.

overall,i like this nation,its more than rapture city with more lore,it details on how a seemingly ''utopian'' society can fall apart,might as well put columbia into my nations canon