Rate the AN's Chosen Factbook!

[Ringet Sol]

Really good!

The writing skills was exceptional and the factbook felt interesting to read through all the names of every ruler that came before.
I don't have anything to really say is a negative besides just adding basic information about each leader.
9.25/10

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=ringet_sol/detail=factbook

Please list any flaws you find in the following factbook, suggestions are also appreciated.

[ImSaLiA]

Despite being quite bland in appearance, the info is very niiiiceeee.
6/10 -1 point for style.
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=imsalia/detail=factbook/id=1989511
BN SEE ABOVE!

[Lothria]

Short and sweet. I do like how it looks - I've seen this kinda "hacker screen (I don't know what else to call it before) and I've never not liked it. It's always cool, in my humble opinion. Now, for the content. I have no idea what's going on or what a "shatter" is, but it seems interesting. I guess my only real complaint is that it could be longer, but it's interesting regardless. But I now feel like looking through your other factbooks for more information, and if you were going for mysteriousness you did a pretty good job. Again, I only wish it was longer.

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BN

[Lehpuhrta]

Harland looks eerily similar to the wizard, Mias, from one of my fave webcomics - he just needs the dark markings around his eyes. And speaking of things dark, I'm guessing that you designed this page with Dark Mode in mind? It definitely suits your grim medieval aesthetic. 'tis an extremely detailed biography, of the sort that you'd expect when looking up a genuine historic monarch, and reminds me that the leaders of Lehpuhrta and also my main nation really need looking at - some of my long-dead historic figures enjoy more detailed lives! The illustrations add a fine polish to an already excellent page and the bonus trivia points, particularly the duel anecdote, give an additional soupçon of realism - another 10/10

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https://www.nationstates.net/nation=leh ... id=1922213

[Kreigsreich of Iron]

6/10.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1980914

[Lehpuhrta]

It's unlikely that you read anything in only four minutes and merely assigned a random rating. Make some effort.

/stillme

[Lothria]

Harland looks eerily similar to the wizard, Mias, from one of my fave webcomics

It's actually fanart of Jon Snow (Game of Thrones), I assume the book version, but I'll have to check that comic out. And thanks for the kind words

/skipme
/stillLehpuhrta

[The Onigiri Enclave]

Harland looks eerily similar to the wizard, Mias, from one of my fave webcomics - he just needs the dark markings around his eyes. And speaking of things dark, I'm guessing that you designed this page with Dark Mode in mind? It definitely suits your grim medieval aesthetic. 'tis an extremely detailed biography, of the sort that you'd expect when looking up a genuine historic monarch, and reminds me that the leaders of Lehpuhrta and also my main nation really need looking at - some of my long-dead historic figures enjoy more detailed lives! The illustrations add a fine polish to an already excellent page and the bonus trivia points, particularly the duel anecdote, give an additional soupçon of realism - another 10/10

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https://www.nationstates.net/nation=leh ... id=1922213

I read through this and overall, I would say it's a solid 81 out of 112. A story involving time travel shenanigans, a space banana that zombifies people, alien chimps invading, the hero of your world actually being one of the alien chimps, and a sentient AI orchestrating matters on two worlds essentially is quite clever.

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Here are two of my factbooks. Pick the one you want to read and review below:

• Who Are the 13 Members of the Support Infantry Division (SID)? (WIP)
• Dr. Shrimp Puerto Rico, Surgeon Admiral - Executive Officer of the 27th - 30th Floors of Subarashī Koya

[Fragrancia]

8/10. I mean, this is pure chaos which I can't even comprehend half of it, but you managed to make something more cursed than my existence into delicate words, of which I have none.

Very powerful.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1918164

[A m e n r i a]

8/10. I mean, this is pure chaos which I can't even comprehend half of it, but you managed to make something more cursed than my existence into delicate words, of which I have none.

Very powerful.

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1918164

9/10. Despite having similarities with the most offensive flag in history, I can't deny your national flag's beauty from an artistic standpoint. The ones that don't have such similarities are just as beautiful. Good job.

Malvina again

Bruv, that is a factbook, just off-site. /Stillme until edited.

[Zalora-Bravo]

Not commenting on the AN because their link was to an external site, not a factbook. I find that sus.

Edit: I do not know how well moderated that site is. It could be crawling with viruses. Just because it has wiki in its name doesn't mean it's safe. Why can't you use NS factbooks like the rest of us?

To Fragrancia, 10/10! those flags are amazing and beautiful!

A Bravosi Abroad: His Majesty Steven He Part 1

[Lothria]

AN: First off, I really like Prof. Ogilvy and Angus - you gotta love a sci-fi author and his dog, after all, especially when one of them is an Asian man in a kilt. Furthermore, this is a very unique idea for a factbook - a traveller's account of a foreign land, rather than just an objective overview. Can't recall ever seeing something like it before, so kudos for coming up with a very interesting idea. An underwater railway is also a very cool idea, and even if SLUR is an unfortunate name, I'm happy that fact gets mentioned. Though the number of portraits of the king is concerning, I also like the idea of a carless city. The history is also very cool, and I sympathise deeply with getting... unsatisfactory images through AI. Though most of the images provided are very good, I know it can be quite finicky, after all. Overall, it's a very well-made factbook and easily deserves a 9/10

AAN: Some of this seems a little out of context. For example, I would have liked to know why she broke into her father's room. I also can't say I'm very clear on what the Lionheart is. I guess being a soul emulator is brings robots to life, but I would like to know a little more about how it works and who this dubious individual was. Also, as someone who goes through about nine vape pods a week, I can say it doesn't do much to help me forget my tragic past. I suppose that this is all within the framework of her being a video game character, which is unique, but personally I'm more drawn to a game's story than its gameplay. But that's just me. I can see why someone would like this, I personally would have liked more story, and a deeper explanation of the story beats that are there. 6.5/10

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BN

[High Earth]

Absolutely amazing! Although it is a little confusing on what AE means with the date. Other than that, it is a phenomenal story about the leader.it contains all the important information that one would realistically need on a nation’s leader. I like how the sections are split apart in a logical way. I will be honest, I sort of skimmed through the fact book, but I will probably be having an in depth read after. This writing is a work of art!

BN, idk how to link fact books, so plz check out Prime Executive’s Journal Entry

[Pathonia]

9/10

I like the content of the factbook, being deep enough to fulfill that mark of being a journal entry.
I'd like if it was formatted to have a font though. Or generally less clumped. Unsure how you'd achieve the latter though-
Says the one with a majority of their works being unformatted ;-;

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BN:

https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1939686

[Pnsku Sovregard]

10/10 Like most nations it is informative, it is also designed nicely, you had me thinking you're a professional. I love how you split into Sections; The only thing I dislike is the giant heading text.

My Alt History World Wars Factbook

[Arzastan]

10/10 Like most nations it is informative, it is also designed nicely, you had me thinking you're a professional. I love how you split into Sections; The only thing I dislike is the giant heading text.

My Alt History World Wars Factbook

4.5/10. The lore is great but it's just pure text, no images, no bolding, no Italic text, etc. it could be much better.
BN: rate this pls:
https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=2009819

[ImSaLiA]

8/10 +1 point for sh*ts and giggles.
I chuckled at this factbook tbh, I am NOT from any Arzastan provinces, i guess lmao

RATE THE BELOW!:
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=imsalia/detail=factbook/id=2012251

[High Earth]

9/10 That is an amazing poem. I have never personally been a person of poetry, but this one is amazing. It tells the story of humanity or something?

BN, plz rate Important Political Figures. I especially want to have an opinion on the last entry, as it is my most recent attempt at creating a rival of the leader.

[Pnsku Sovregard]

8/10 While it's good and all to the point Its like i'm reading personal files, the way you head name and Status sounds like their prisoners, but the actual info does not do that, so it is good.

For BN, our Alt History Cold War

[High Earth]

What does /reserved mean?
/stillme until i get an awnser

[Pnsku Sovregard]

What does /reserved mean?
/stillme until i get an awnser

/reserved means working on writing an answer
/stillme

[High Earth]

What does /reserved mean?
/stillme until i get an awnser

/reserved means working on writing an answer
/stillme

Oh, ok, sorry, /skipme

[Troc]

To AAAN: 6/10 too messy, but understand.

For BN: https://fast.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1939495 it's still unfinished.

[Israel and the Sinai]

7.72/10, interesting concept for a factbook.

BN: https://www.nationstates.net/nation=israel_and_the_sinai/detail=factbook/id=2009195

[ImSaLiA]

I'm gonna have to give it a 3/10, it's far too bland for my taste, and contains little information as well.


Another terminal entry:
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=imsalia/detail=factbook/id=2012293