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The Commendation of Peasley

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The Commendation of Peasley

Postby Finium » Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:31 pm

Commend Peasley
Description: Realizing that world peace is one of the most important values

RECOGNIZING that Peasley has opened the international district, an area dedicated to the unity of nations

OBSERVING That Peasley has advocated peaceful solutions to many situations

NOTING That peasley is not afraid to ask for help in troubling situations

EXPLAINING That these actions all point to a brighter future for the world as a whole

ASSERTING That these qualities are to be rewarded

FURTHER ASSERTING That the activities of Peasley in the international community should be encouraged

ACKNOWLEDGING The necessity to encourage future nations to continue in such admirable conduct by rewarding those who follow honorable guidelines with commendations

The World assembly security council hereby commends Peasley
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Postby Sedgistan » Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:53 pm

You need an operative clause:

Hereby Commends Peasley.

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Postby Demphor » Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:57 pm

Finium wrote:Commend Peasley
Description: Realizing that world peace is one of the most important values

RECOGNIZING that Peasley has opened the international district, an area dedicated to the unity of nations

OBSERVING That Peasley has advocated peaceful solutions to many situations

NOTING That peasley is not afraid to ask for help in troubling situations

EXPLAINING That these actions all point to a brighter future for the world as a whole

ASSERTING That these qualities are to be rewarded

FURTHER ASSERTING That the activities of Peasley in the international community should be encouraged

ACKNOWLEDGING The necessity to encourage future nations to continue in such admirable conduct by rewarding those who follow honorable guidelines with commendations


It is incorrect in many places

Correct Version:

Commend Peasley

Description: Realizing that world peace is one of the most important values.

RECOGNIZING that Peasley has opened the international district, an area dedicated to the unity of nations.

OBSERVING That Peasley has advocated peaceful solutions to many situations.

NOTING That Peasley is not afraid to ask for help in troubling situations.

EXPLAINING That these actions all point to a brighter future for the world as a whole.

ASSERTING That these qualities are to be rewarded.

FURTHER ASSERTING That the activities of Peasley in the international community should be encouraged.

ACKNOWLEDGING The necessity to encourage future nations to continue in such admirable conduct by rewarding those who follow honorable guidelines with commendation.

The World Assembly Security Council herby Commends Peasley
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Postby Finium » Thu Dec 16, 2010 6:15 pm

Thank you gentle men. I really only grasp the fundamentals of resolution writing

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Postby Bears Armed » Fri Dec 17, 2010 4:51 am

"Who?"
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Postby Aglrinia » Fri Dec 17, 2010 4:58 am

Bears Armed wrote:"Who?"


You took the word right out a my mouth.
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Postby Bears Armed » Fri Dec 17, 2010 5:04 am

Aglrinia wrote:
Bears Armed wrote:"Who?"


You took the word right out a my mouth.

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The Confrederated Clans (and other Confrederated Bodys) of the Free Bears of Bears Armed
(includes The Ursine NorthLands) Demonym = Bear[s]; adjective = ‘Urrsish’.
Population = just under 20 million. Economy = only Thriving. Average Life expectancy = c.60 years. If the nation is classified as 'Anarchy' there still is a [strictly limited] national government... and those aren't "biker gangs", they're traditional cross-Clan 'Warrior Societies', generally respected rather than feared.
Author of some GA Resolutions, via Bears Armed Mission; subject of an SC resolution.
Factbook. We have more than 70 MAPS. Visitors' Guide.
The IDU's WA Drafting Room is open to help you.
Author of issues #429, 712, 729, 934, 1120, 1152, 1474, 1521.

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Postby Frattastan » Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:14 am

Bears Armed wrote:"Who?"


http://www.nationstates.net/nation=peasley

I think he's active mainly in RPing.
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Postby Kryozerkia » Fri Dec 17, 2010 8:40 am

Bears Armed wrote:"Who?"

If one nation is saying that, then there are likely more who will. This is best answered by the author providing links that demonstrate who this nation is and what it has accomplished to merit a commendation.
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