The Commendation of Peasley

[Finium]

Commend Peasley
Description: Realizing that world peace is one of the most important values

RECOGNIZING that Peasley has opened the international district, an area dedicated to the unity of nations

OBSERVING That Peasley has advocated peaceful solutions to many situations

NOTING That peasley is not afraid to ask for help in troubling situations

EXPLAINING That these actions all point to a brighter future for the world as a whole

ASSERTING That these qualities are to be rewarded

FURTHER ASSERTING That the activities of Peasley in the international community should be encouraged

ACKNOWLEDGING The necessity to encourage future nations to continue in such admirable conduct by rewarding those who follow honorable guidelines with commendations

The World assembly security council hereby commends Peasley

[Sedgistan]

You need an operative clause:

Hereby Commends Peasley.

[Demphor]

Commend Peasley
Description: Realizing that world peace is one of the most important values

RECOGNIZING that Peasley has opened the international district, an area dedicated to the unity of nations

OBSERVING That Peasley has advocated peaceful solutions to many situations

NOTING That peasley is not afraid to ask for help in troubling situations

EXPLAINING That these actions all point to a brighter future for the world as a whole

ASSERTING That these qualities are to be rewarded

FURTHER ASSERTING That the activities of Peasley in the international community should be encouraged

ACKNOWLEDGING The necessity to encourage future nations to continue in such admirable conduct by rewarding those who follow honorable guidelines with commendations

It is incorrect in many places

Correct Version:

Commend Peasley

Description: Realizing that world peace is one of the most important values.

RECOGNIZING that Peasley has opened the international district, an area dedicated to the unity of nations.

OBSERVING That Peasley has advocated peaceful solutions to many situations.

NOTING That Peasley is not afraid to ask for help in troubling situations.

EXPLAINING That these actions all point to a brighter future for the world as a whole.

ASSERTING That these qualities are to be rewarded.

FURTHER ASSERTING That the activities of Peasley in the international community should be encouraged.

ACKNOWLEDGING The necessity to encourage future nations to continue in such admirable conduct by rewarding those who follow honorable guidelines with commendation.

The World Assembly Security Council herby Commends Peasley

[Finium]

Thank you gentle men. I really only grasp the fundamentals of resolution writing

[Bears Armed]

"Who?"

[Aglrinia]

"Who?"

You took the word right out a my mouth.

[Bears Armed]

"Who?"

You took the word right out a my mouth.

*(washes fingers)*

[Frattastan]

"Who?"

http://www.nationstates.net/nation=peasley

I think he's active mainly in RPing.

[Kryozerkia]

"Who?"

If one nation is saying that, then there are likely more who will. This is best answered by the author providing links that demonstrate who this nation is and what it has accomplished to merit a commendation.