Commending Absolution,Draft
Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 10:06 am
Please help me rewrite my proposal,it was cast out of the queue 2 times.
Proposal:
APPRECIATING the safe and fun learning environment that the region of Absolution provides
RECOGNIZING that the threats to said environment are dealt with swiftly and cleanly
ADMIRING Absolution's diligent governmental officials and recruiting team
*the system of government provided by Absolution provides a sense of usefulness to any nation, and it is that sense that fuels the region to increase in size and quality
*said system also provides an ample education of governmental jobs,thus going beyond the mono-regional issues that the World provides
ENJOYING the subtlety of said recruiting team
*recruitment messages never clog up Regional Civil Headquarters of other regions
ACCEPTING that Absolution is a valuable part of World
The World Assembly commends the region Absolution
Proposal:
APPRECIATING the safe and fun learning environment that the region of Absolution provides
RECOGNIZING that the threats to said environment are dealt with swiftly and cleanly
ADMIRING Absolution's diligent governmental officials and recruiting team
*the system of government provided by Absolution provides a sense of usefulness to any nation, and it is that sense that fuels the region to increase in size and quality
*said system also provides an ample education of governmental jobs,thus going beyond the mono-regional issues that the World provides
ENJOYING the subtlety of said recruiting team
*recruitment messages never clog up Regional Civil Headquarters of other regions
ACCEPTING that Absolution is a valuable part of World
The World Assembly commends the region Absolution