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[ABANDONED] Commend The Selkie

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Billyabna
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[ABANDONED] Commend The Selkie

Postby Billyabna » Thu Mar 14, 2024 8:28 am

The World Assembly,


Noting that The Selkie, as a nation founded in 2014, which quickly grew to be a major community voice,


One that not only has done many things to improve not only the quality of life of other nations but that of their own,


Understanding that The Selkie has done much more than could have been previously thought possible by many nations of the same starting point,


Who has hosted numerous events, including a Spring Festival in 2024, within the Free Lands, a safe place free of discrimination, one of hope and peace, and of calm and welcoming nature,


A place that has held on to their nation's territory, unlike other nations of that year who have vanished into the essence of time, and at the same time taken care of their nation, allowing it to flourish.


And being a trustable voice in the community, one of reason and safety, that does not lie and is not afraid to stand up for what they deem right,


And a guide for new Nations and experienced Nations alike.


A place that has a rich cultural heritage and deserves more recognition,


A place with a wonderful environment that has not been destroyed by a decade of activity on the face of this earth, unlike countless other nations,


Concluding that without the presence of such a rich and wonderful nation that has done so much to help the world, and possibly beyond the world, serving as an example for even aspiring nations that may not be formed yet, the entire World and Assembly would not be the same,


Hereby Commends The Selkie.
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Postby Picairn » Thu Mar 14, 2024 8:38 am

Too vague, you need to be more specific on Selkie's achievements than just "hosting numerous events", "a major community voice", and "done many things to improve the quality of life of other nations" (like what?)
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Mar 14, 2024 8:45 am

Your draft is full of filler or statements so vague they could apply to dozens of other nations. Not a Commendable nominee.
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Postby Billyabna » Thu Mar 14, 2024 9:18 am

100% fair, definitely will fix, It's just hard to not go out of character
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Mar 14, 2024 9:21 am

Billyabna wrote:100% fair, definitely will fix, It's just hard to not go out of character

Suggest you read Westinor’s excellent Guide to the SC (viewtopic.php?f=24&t=531501) for how to go about writing a good Commendation.

Also check out the SC Rules - your draft is legal, but I don’t know if that was beginner’s luck.
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Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.

RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.

Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..

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Postby Billyabna » Thu Mar 14, 2024 9:31 am

i did indeed read the SC rules, and I will certainly check out the commendation guide. Thanks! : )
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Postby Billyabna » Thu Mar 14, 2024 9:43 am

i officially very much want to delete this forum post, and I have no idea how.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Mar 14, 2024 10:15 am

Billyabna wrote:i officially very much want to delete this forum post, and I have no idea how.

You can’t. Just change the title from [DRAFT] to [ABANDONED].

Billyabna wrote:The World Assembly,


Noting that The Selkie, as a nation founded in 2014, which quickly grew to be a major community voice,


One that not only has done many things to improve not only the quality of life of other nations but that of their own,


Understanding that The Selkie has done much more than could have been previously thought possible by many nations of the same starting point,


Who has hosted numerous events, including a Spring Festival in 2024, within the Free Lands, a safe place free of discrimination, one of hope and peace, and of calm and welcoming nature,


A place that has held on to their nation's territory, unlike other nations of that year who have vanished into the essence of time, and at the same time taken care of their nation, allowing it to flourish.


And being a trustable voice in the community, one of reason and safety, that does not lie and is not afraid to stand up for what they deem right,


And a guide for new Nations and experienced Nations alike.


A place that has a rich cultural heritage and deserves more recognition,


A place with a wonderful environment that has not been destroyed by a decade of activity on the face of this earth, unlike countless other nations,


Concluding that without the presence of such a rich and wonderful nation that has done so much to help the world, and possibly beyond the world, serving as an example for even aspiring nations that may not be formed yet, the entire World and Assembly would not be the same,


Hereby Commends The Selkie.
Former Delegate of The West Pacific. Guardian (under many Delegates) of The West Pacific. TWP's Former Minister for World Assembly Affairs and former Security Council Advisor.

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Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.

RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.

Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..

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Postby Fachumonn » Thu Mar 14, 2024 1:16 pm

It's ok. This is expected for a first time author. I would suggest finding a good candidate, asking for their permission, doing research, and then posting on the forums.

Make sure to look at the useful guides at the top of the thread as well, especially the rules :)
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Postby The Ice States » Thu Mar 21, 2024 12:46 pm

I think there's an argument for commending The Selkie but this does need more elaboration, as said by Picairn and others.
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