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Draft I for condemning Bakhchisarai

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Draft I for condemning Bakhchisarai

Postby Empire of Lettuce » Sat Feb 03, 2024 10:37 am

The Security Council,

A nation shall follow laws that we all have agreed upon the nation of Bakhchisarai has gone on to say this. All-russians National Soviet Republic is a fascist government but yet he is Aboslate Monachry with zero democratic elections. With the legality of slavery inside his nation. Whall no official declaration of war was ever submitted to the nation of All-russians National Soviet Republic. The nation Bakhchisarai has claimed to committed war crimes.

Bakhchisarai wrote:
And what? I don't care, I've done a lot of war crimes and ethics violations, and I've been convicted of it, but in the end, I killed them all with chemical weapons.
The threat of the Bakhchisarai government needs to be stopped as he has committed the following crimes. No official documents have been filed against the government of Bakhchisarai.
- Genocide
- Illegal Obduction
- Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war
- illegal obtaining of land
- No Declaration of war
- Slavery
- Labor Camps
- Ethnic Cleansing
Without an official declaration of war, he has committed Genocide, Illegal abduction, Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war, illegal obtaining of land, and Ethnic Cleansing. Whall in the meantime has forced people to become slaves and forced labor his nation has said this below.

Bakhchisarai wrote:
Although they cannot be called slaves, they are workers in labor camps.
Wish means that he can't call them slaves, but they serve the role of slaves. Which breaks so many laws and rules on this subject.

This nation has taken the land from All-russians National Soviet Republic. And is being aided by Colonla, Arctic Lands. These nations all have committed gross violations of humanitarian rights, Civil rights, and Rights of war.

Determined to stand against Bakhchisarai brazen crimes against sovereignty, liberty, and war.

Hereby condemns Bakhchisarai.
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Postby Turussniya » Sat Feb 03, 2024 10:39 am

Empire of Lettuce wrote:The Security Council,

A nation shall follow laws that we all have agreed upon the nation of Bakhchisarai has gone on to say this. All-russians National Soviet Republic is a fascist government but yet he is Aboslate Monachry with zero democratic elections. With the legality of slavery inside his nation. Whall no official declaration of war was ever submitted to the nation of All-russians National Soviet Republic. The nation Bakhchisarai has claimed to committed war crimes.

Bakhchisarai wrote:
And what? I don't care, I've done a lot of war crimes and ethics violations, and I've been convicted of it, but in the end, I killed them all with chemical weapons.
The threat of the Bakhchisarai government needs to be stopped as he has committed the following crimes. No official documents have been filed against the government of Bakhchisarai.
- Genocide
- Illegal Obduction
- Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war
- illegal obtaining of land
- No Declaration of war
- Slavery
- Labor Camps
- Ethnic Cleansing
Without an official declaration of war, he has committed Genocide, Illegal abduction, Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war, illegal obtaining of land, and Ethnic Cleansing. Whall in the meantime has forced people to become slaves and forced labor his nation has said this below.

Bakhchisarai wrote:
Although they cannot be called slaves, they are workers in labor camps.
Wish means that he can't call them slaves, but they serve the role of slaves. Which breaks so many laws and rules on this subject.

This nation has taken the land from All-russians National Soviet Republic. And is being aided by Colonla, Arctic Lands. These nations all have committed gross violations of humanitarian rights, Civil rights, and Rights of war.

Determined to stand against Bakhchisarai brazen crimes against sovereignty, liberty, and war.

Hereby condemns Bakhchisarai.

werent you in the war too?

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Feb 03, 2024 10:41 am

Very badly written and illegal.

Try reading the rules, try reading passed Condemnations to see the standard required, try using a dictionary/spellcheck.
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Postby Turussniya » Sat Feb 03, 2024 10:42 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Very badly written and illegal.

Try reading the rules, try reading passed Condemnations to see the standard required, try using a dictionary/spellcheck.

Intelligent jkjk a lot of ppl already noticed

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Draft II

Postby Empire of Lettuce » Sat Feb 03, 2024 10:56 am

The Security Council,

A nation shall follow laws that we all have agreed upon, the nation of Bakhchisarai has committed many war crimes against the nation of All-russians National Soviet Republic, and the reasons for attacking the nation was the "Facsit government". No proper documents have been submitted to the All-russians National Soviet Republic ARNS Government. With the nation claiming to have committed crimes against the All-russians National Soviet Republic,
Bakhchisarai wrote:
And what? I don't care, I've done a lot of war crimes and ethics violations, and I've been convicted of it, but in the end, I killed them all with chemical weapons.
The threat of the Bakhchisarai government needs to be stopped as the nation has committed the following crimes.
- Genocide
- Illegal Obduction
- Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war
- illegal obtaining of land
- No Declaration of war
- Slavery
- Labor Camps
- Ethnic Cleansing

Without an official declaration of war, he has committed Genocide, Illegal abduction, Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war, illegal obtaining of land, and Ethnic Cleansing. Whall in the meantime has forced people to become slaves and forced labor his nation has said this below.
Bakhchisarai wrote:
Although they cannot be called slaves, they are workers in labor camps.

Wish means that he can't call them slaves, but they serve the role of slaves. Which breaks General Assembly Resolution # 23 "Ban On Slavery And Trafficking". His nation has broken sections 1, 2, 3, and 8. Of General Assembly Resolution # 23 "Ban On Slavery And Trafficking"

This nation has taken the land from All-russians National Soviet Republic. And is being aided by Colonla, Arctic Lands. These nations all have committed gross violations of humanitarian rights, Civil rights, and Rights of war.

Determined to stand against Bakhchisarai brazen crimes against sovereignty, liberty, and war.

Hereby condemns Bakhchisarai.
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Postby Keltionialang » Sat Feb 03, 2024 10:59 am

Still badly written, strange pointless capitalization, and trails off to the ordosocialist folks in even just the first paragraph.
Likely illegal but I can't be half-assed to properly scan it.
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Postby Empire of Lettuce » Sat Feb 03, 2024 11:00 am

Fixed the spelling and working on the rules
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Draft III

Postby Empire of Lettuce » Sun Feb 04, 2024 10:42 am

The Security Council,

A nation shall follow laws that we all have agreed upon in peace, war, and humanitarian institutions. Whall the institutions are needed the nation of Bakhchisarai has committed many Violations against the All-Russians National Soviet Republic, and the reason for attacking was that the nation was a "Facsit government". No proper documents have been submitted to the All-Russians National Soviet Republic ARNS Government. With the nation claiming to have committed crimes against the All-russians National Soviet Republic,
Bakhchisarai wrote:
"And what? I don't care, I've done a lot of war crimes and ethics violations, and I've been convicted of it, but in the end, I killed them all with chemical weapons.
The threat of the Bakhchisarai government needs to be stopped as the nation has committed the following crimes."
- Genocide
- Illegal Obduction
- Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war
- illegal obtaining of land
- No Declaration of war
- Slavery
- Labor Camps
- Ethnic Cleansing

Without an official declaration of war, he has committed Genocide, Illegal abduction, Illegal obtaining of Prisoners of war, illegal obtaining of land, and Ethnic Cleansing. Whall in the meantime has forced people to become slaves and forced labor his nation has said this below.
Bakhchisarai wrote:
Although they cannot be called slaves, they are workers in labor camps.

But they serve the role of slaves. Which breaks General Assembly Resolution # 23 "Ban On Slavery And Trafficking". His nation has broken sections 1, 2, 3, and 8. Of General Assembly Resolution # 23 "Ban On Slavery And Trafficking" The government has also broken General Assembly Resolution # 18 "The Prisoners Of War Accord" Breaking MANDATE a, b, c, d, e. PROHIBITS C.

This nation has taken the land from the All-Russians National Soviet Republic. And is being aided by Colonla, Arctic Lands. These nations all have committed gross violations of humanitarian rights, Civil rights, and Rights of war.

We are determined to stand against Bakhchisarai's brazen crimes against sovereignty, liberty, and war.

Hereby condemns Bakhchisarai.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sun Feb 04, 2024 11:50 am

Still very badly written and still poorly formatted. If English is not your primary language work with someone whose mother tongue is English.

It’s still illegal by the way. Even if it was legal it would have zero chance of passing as there’s nothing really Condemnable in your text. You could find dozens of nations with the same types of achievements you mention.
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Postby Empire of Lettuce » Thu Feb 08, 2024 7:42 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Still very badly written and still poorly formatted. If English is not your primary language work with someone whose mother tongue is English.

It’s still illegal by the way. Even if it was legal it would have zero chance of passing as there’s nothing really Condemnable in your text. You could find dozens of nations with the same types of achievements you mention.

So Genocide and slavery are not really "Condemnable"?
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Postby Refuge Isle » Thu Feb 08, 2024 8:28 pm

Empire of Lettuce wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Still very badly written and still poorly formatted. If English is not your primary language work with someone whose mother tongue is English.

It’s still illegal by the way. Even if it was legal it would have zero chance of passing as there’s nothing really Condemnable in your text. You could find dozens of nations with the same types of achievements you mention.

So Genocide and slavery are not really "Condemnable"?

Oftentimes in the Security Council, condemnations are passed for players who have succeeded in playing the role of the villain well on NationStates over a long period of time. Perhaps for invading regions, or long and elaborate RP writing over the course of years, and so forth. While in the past you could get away with passing a resolution about earnest complaints, they're often treated like career capstone awards now.

Odd to say, but if the Security Council passed condemnations for every nation with the slavery policy and RMB posts that disparage civil rights, that's all it would be doing.

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri Feb 09, 2024 5:08 am

Empire of Lettuce wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Still very badly written and still poorly formatted. If English is not your primary language work with someone whose mother tongue is English.

It’s still illegal by the way. Even if it was legal it would have zero chance of passing as there’s nothing really Condemnable in your text. You could find dozens of nations with the same types of achievements you mention.

So Genocide and slavery are not really "Condemnable"?

No, not really given the context that hundreds of nations have committed these acts. Also your nominee has only been around for a couple of months. The nations that get Condemned are the ones who have successfully played the villain for a long time. Like me.
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Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.

RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.

Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..

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Postby Empire of Lettuce » Fri Feb 09, 2024 4:52 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Empire of Lettuce wrote:So Genocide and slavery are not really "Condemnable"?

No, not really given the context that hundreds of nations have committed these acts. Also your nominee has only been around for a couple of months. The nations that get Condemned are the ones who have successfully played the villain for a long time. Like me.

I see :ugeek:
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