by Nominicia » Fri May 27, 2022 9:42 pm
by Communist Beijing Must be China » Fri May 27, 2022 9:51 pm
Nominicia wrote:The Security Council Herby Condemns Oneid
1.Oneid does many horrible things in the history of Nation States.
Some things they do are make fake terrorist story’s and glorify them in the rmb. They are also ranked Number 1 as most fascist and have the fascist tag.
2.History. Oneid has existed for 2.years and 9 months. Over this time period they have gained more than 300 members.
3.lyes Oneid states in there factbook that they accept all embassies. Within there existence they have declined multiple and withdrew from other embassy’s.
b.1 if Oneid has a tag call founderless while this is false as the original founder ceased to exist they made a new nation who is currently the new founder.
by Nominicia » Fri May 27, 2022 9:52 pm
XKV-YU Foundation wrote:Good Idea, wrong way. The grammar is horrible.
by Nominicia » Fri May 27, 2022 9:53 pm
Communist Beijing Must be China wrote:Nominicia wrote:The Security Council Herby Condemns Oneid
1.Oneid does many horrible things in the history of Nation States.
Some things they do are make fake terrorist story’s and glorify them in the rmb. They are also ranked Number 1 as most fascist and have the fascist tag.
2.History. Oneid has existed for 2.years and 9 months. Over this time period they have gained more than 300 members.
3.lyes Oneid states in there factbook that they accept all embassies. Within there existence they have declined multiple and withdrew from other embassy’s.
b.1 if Oneid has a tag call founderless while this is false as the original founder ceased to exist they made a new nation who is currently the new founder.
The grammar is total dogwater and it is not written properly.
by Communist Beijing Must be China » Fri May 27, 2022 10:32 pm
Nominicia wrote:3.lyesOneid states intheretheir factbook that they accept all embassies.* Within there existence they have declined multiple and withdrew from otherembassy’sembassies.**
b.1 if Oneid has a tag call founderless while this is false as the original founder ceased to exist they made a new nation who is currently the new founder.***
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri May 27, 2022 10:51 pm
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Communist Beijing Must be China » Fri May 27, 2022 11:03 pm
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:No such thing as meta-gaming in the SC. Meta-gaming is purely a GA rule. I suggest you have a read of the SC rules as you are only partly right in your attempt at correcting this mess.
That said this is a particularly awful draft, barely comprehensible. And as far as the nominee is concerned one must ask the question, who?
by Saksoni » Fri May 27, 2022 11:21 pm
by Nominicia » Fri May 27, 2022 11:29 pm
Communist Beijing Must be China wrote:Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:No such thing as meta-gaming in the SC. Meta-gaming is purely a GA rule. I suggest you have a read of the SC rules as you are only partly right in your attempt at correcting this mess.
That said this is a particularly awful draft, barely comprehensible. And as far as the nominee is concerned one must ask the question, who?
I might have confused GA rules with SC rules, sorry. I have actually read the SC rules before.
by Outer Sparta » Fri May 27, 2022 11:58 pm
by Communist Beijing Must be China » Fri May 27, 2022 11:59 pm
Outer Sparta wrote:Terribly-written. Next time, get some help drafting instead of submitting something that's scribbled up in one minute and pass it off as good. Begging for help won't help you either as it'll put off people trying to give constructive feedback.
by Nominicia » Sat May 28, 2022 12:02 am
Outer Sparta wrote:Terribly-written. Next time, get some help drafting instead of submitting something that's scribbled up in one minute and pass it off as good. Begging for help won't help you either as it'll put off people trying to give constructive feedback.
by Nominicia » Sat May 28, 2022 12:04 am
Communist Beijing Must be China wrote:Nominicia wrote:
I have a specifically said I needed help with the grammar
I'm gonna say you submitted it too early.Outer Sparta wrote:Terribly-written. Next time, get some help drafting instead of submitting something that's scribbled up in one minute and pass it off as good. Begging for help won't help you either as it'll put off people trying to give constructive feedback.
I heavily agree on this.
by Communist Beijing Must be China » Sat May 28, 2022 12:05 am
by Outer Sparta » Sat May 28, 2022 12:10 am
Nominicia wrote:Outer Sparta wrote:Terribly-written. Next time, get some help drafting instead of submitting something that's scribbled up in one minute and pass it off as good. Begging for help won't help you either as it'll put off people trying to give constructive feedback.
I only submitted a few min ago. That’s the original version I got help and posted the better one when I submitted it. So yeah read the whole topic if that’s how you wanna go.
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat May 28, 2022 12:24 am
Nominicia wrote:Outer Sparta wrote:Terribly-written. Next time, get some help drafting instead of submitting something that's scribbled up in one minute and pass it off as good. Begging for help won't help you either as it'll put off people trying to give constructive feedback.
I only submitted a few min ago. That’s the original version I got help and posted the better one when I submitted it. So yeah read the whole topic if that’s how you wanna go.
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Communist Beijing Must be China » Sat May 28, 2022 12:35 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Nominicia wrote:
I only submitted a few min ago. That’s the original version I got help and posted the better one when I submitted it. So yeah read the whole topic if that’s how you wanna go.
Yeah, well your crappy submission will sink without a trace. It’s so badly written, zero research done and just lazy.
By the way Communist Beijing did you agree to being a co-author to this travesty? If not you have the right and the power to pull it.
by Anne of Cleves in TNP » Sat May 28, 2022 3:42 am
Nominicia wrote:The Security Council Herby Condemns Oneid
1.Oneid does many horrible things in the history of Nation States.
Some things they do are make fake terrorist story’s and glorify them in the rmb. They are also ranked Number 1 as most fascist and have the fascist tag.
2.History. Oneid has existed for 2.years and 9 months. Over this time period they have gained more than 300 members.
3.lyes Oneid states in there factbook that they accept all embassies. Within there existence they have declined multiple and withdrew from other embassy’s.
b.1 if Oneid has a tag call founderless while this is false as the original founder ceased to exist they made a new nation who is currently the new founder.
by Nominicia » Sat May 28, 2022 9:20 am
Communist Beijing Must be China wrote:Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Yeah, well your crappy submission will sink without a trace. It’s so badly written, zero research done and just lazy.
By the way Communist Beijing did you agree to being a co-author to this travesty? If not you have the right and the power to pull it.
No, he added me as a co-author because I helped him with the grammar mistakes.
Thanks for the rights, I am going to pull it now.
by PhilTech » Sat May 28, 2022 9:25 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat May 28, 2022 9:49 am
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Outer Sparta » Sat May 28, 2022 11:32 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat May 28, 2022 11:43 am
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
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