[Withdrawn] Condemn Baggieland

[The Forest of Aeneas]

OOC: I do not hold any personal illwill towards Baggieland, who is indeed fine with this. The below draft is in the likely event of a resubmission; the draft as submitted is marked as 2d.

Condemn Baggieland

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: Baggieland | Proposed by: The Forest of Aeneas

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The World Assembly:

Introducing Baggieland as a nation ruled de jure by King Alswitch, who is mostly a benevolent and laid-back ruler but has delegated most of his authority to a much less benevolent despot, Queen Alma, who to this day rules over Baggieland with an iron fist and a pervasive cult of personality surrounding the royal couple;

Further exposing Baggieland as the home of some of the most secretive and malicious intelligence agencies, which have, perhaps due to the endless paranoia and brutality of Baggieland's leadership, been responsible for numerous covert mass infiltration missions of thousands of innocent nations, relying on the most cruel and barbarous means to achieve petty ends, and whose shocking actions have, until now, been ignored by this most excellent assembly;

Bemoaning Baggieland’s launch of Mission #820: These Heels Weren’t Made For Working, in which Baggielandian agents coerced employers into requiring female employees to wear high-heeled shoes specifically designed to cause arthritis, before posing as employees subject of such arthritis to encourage nations to prosecute employers victim of Baggielandian coercion in an attempt to crash world manufacturing sectors;

Observing Baggieland’s subsequent launch of Mission #831: Give Us A Break, Leader, where Baggielandian agents ran heavily biased polls to paint national leaders as the best of their nations and then used these polls to urge national leaders to deprive trillions of multiversal citizens of basic political rights;

Intensely sickened by the thousands of massacres of innocent soldiers following kangaroo trials for supposed ‘military desertion’ systematically carried out by Baggielandian agents posing as military generals, and shocked that these agents then used these massacres to manipulate national leaders to permit military generals to carry out such atrocities in the future, all part of an unforgivable attempt to boost authoritarianism and the arms trade across the multiverse named Mission #1431: Just Deserts for Desertion?;

Noticing Baggielandian agents’ brutal, systematic brainwashing of the gullible nieces of thousands of national leaders into harassing their Secretaries of State over excessive use of a certain punctuation mark and then encouraging national leaders to drop formality in public communication, a mission euphemised as Mission #1447: Yet Another Issue About Periods;

Greatly annoyed that Baggieland has extended its malice to destroying the environments of other nations, best shown through Mission #1473: Sandbagging, where Baggielandian agents mined foreign seabeds to a deliberately environmentally destructive extent to coerce governments into allowing Baggielandian agents to destroy deserts with their funding;

Denouncing how Baggielandian intelligence agents have gone as far as repeatedly helping intelligence agencies of countless other nations engage in their own mass infiltration missions, advising those intelligence agencies on manipulation of national leaders, impersonation, practicality, the structure and organisation of missions, and the reporting of mission success, inter alia;

Concerned by Baggieland’s attempts at sportswashing to cover up for its heinous acts while still being unable to actually act with goodwill;

1. Beating numerous innocent nations merely trying to get involved in international sports to revel in its 'victories' in numerous competitions, like coming runner-up in and later winning the Rugby Union World Cup, and winning one competition and coming runner-up in two competitions of the NationStates Tennis Tour (in which Baggielandian Tennis player Goran McEnroe unjustifiably sprayed wolf repellent at a five-year-old child).
   
2. Hosting international sporting events, like the Three Degrees Open tournament of the NationStates Tennis Tour, and the Aussie Rules World Cup (which Baggieland helped establish with Sylestone and hosted three times, and which remains the most popular and prominent international Aussie Rules tournament to this day), only to permit piracy that may or may not target foreign sports players by the submarine HMS Onslaught (which once plundered a ship from Electrum for Olympic medals), and force foreign sports players to eat lasagna using a spoon, branded as somehow 'not as uncouth as it sounds'.

Therefore, believing that Baggieland's wanton, abhorrent actions have caused mayhem beyond mortal control across this grand realm, and further seeking to rid Baggieland of the helpful and benevolent image it still tries to maintain to ensure that no member state attempts to emulate the dark legacy of this nation ever again;

Hereby condemns Baggieland.

[The Forest of Aeneas]

Draft 2

The World Assembly:

Introducing Baggieland as a nation ruled de jure by King Alswitch, who is mostly a benevolent and laid-back ruler but has delegated most of his authority to a much less benevolent despot, Queen Alma, who to this day rules over Baggieland with an iron fist and a pervasive cult of personality surrounding the royal couple;

Further exposing Baggieland as the home of some of the most secretive and malicious intelligence agencies, which have, perhaps due to the endless paranoia and brutality of Baggieland's leadership, been responsible for numerous covert mass infiltration missions of thousands of innocent nations, relying on the most cruel and barbarous means to achieve petty ends, and whose shocking actions have, until now, been ignored by this most excellent assembly;

Bemoaning Baggieland’s launching of Mission #820: These Heels Weren’t Made For Working, in which Baggielandian agents coerced employers into requiring female employees to wear high-heeled shoes specifically designed to cause arthritis, before posing as employees subject of such arthritis to encourage nations to prosecute employers victim of Baggielandian coercion in an attempt to crash world manufacturing sectors;

Observing Baggieland’s subsequent launching of Mission #831: Give Us A Break, Leader, where Baggielandian agents ran heavily biased polls to paint national leaders as the best of their nations and then used these polls to urge national leaders to deprive trillions of multiversal citizens of basic political rights;

Intensely sickened by the thousands of massacres of innocent soldiers following kangaroo trials for supposed ‘military desertion’ systematically carried out by Baggielandian agents posing as military generals, and shocked that these agents then used these massacres to manipulate national leaders to permit military generals to carry out such atrocities in the future, all part of an unforgivable attempt to boost authoritarianism and the arms trade across the multiverse named Mission #1431: Just Deserts for Desertion?;

Noticing Baggielandian agents’ brutal, systematic brainwashing of the gullible nieces of thousands of national leaders into harassing their Secretaries of State over excessive use of a certain punctuation mark and then encouraging national leaders to drop formality in public communication, a mission euphemised as Mission #1447: Yet Another Issue About Periods;

Greatly annoyed that Baggieland has extended its malice to destroying the environments of other nations, best shown through Mission #1473: Sandbagging, where Baggielandian agents mined foreign seabeds to a deliberately environmentally destructive extent to coerce governments into allowing Baggielandian agents to destroy deserts with their funding;

Denouncing how Baggielandian intelligence agents have gone as far as repeatedly helping intelligence agencies of countless other nations engage in their own mass infiltration missions, advising those intelligence agencies on manipulation of national leaders, impersonation, practicality, the structure and organisation of missions, and the reporting of mission success, inter alia;

Concerned by Baggieland’s attempts at sportswashing to cover up for its heinous acts while still being unable to actually act with goodwill;

1. Beating numerous innocent nations merely trying to get involved in international sports to revel in its 'victories' in numerous competitions, like coming runner-up in and later winning the Rugby Union World Cup, and winning one competition and coming runner-up in two competitions of the NationStates Tennis Tour (in which Baggielandian Tennis player Goran McEnroe unjustifiably sprayed wolf repellent at a five-year-old child).
   
2. Hosting international sporting events, like the Three Degrees Open tournament of the NationStates Tennis Tour, and the Aussie Rules World Cup (which Baggieland helped establish with Sylestone and hosted three times, and which remains the most prominent international Aussie Rules tournament to this day), only to permit piracy that may or may not target foreign sports players by the submarine HMS Onslaught (which once plundered a ship from Electrum for Olympic medals), and force foreign sports players to eat lasagna using a spoon, branded as somehow 'not as uncouth as it sounds'.

Therefore, believing that Baggieland's wanton, abhorrent actions have caused mayhem beyond mortal control across this grand realm, and further seeking to rid Baggieland of the helpful and benevolent image it still tries to maintain to ensure that no member state attempts to emulate the dark legacy of this nation ever again;

Hereby condemns Baggieland.

The World Assembly:

Introducing Baggieland as a nation ruled de jure by King Alswitch, a mostly benevolent and laid-back ruler, but who has delegated most of his authority to the much less benevolent despot Queen Alma, who to this day rules over Baggieland with an iron fist and a pervasive cult of personality surrounding the royal couple, and further exposing Baggieland as the home of some of the most secretive, malicious, and covert intelligence agencies, that have, perhaps due to the endless paranoia and brutality of Baggieland's leadership, been responsible for numerous mass infiltration missions of thousands of innocent nations relying on the most cruel and barbarous means to achieve petty ends and that have, until now, been ignored by this most excellent assembly;

Bemoaning Baggieland’s launching of Mission #820: These Heels Weren’t Made For Working, in which Baggielandian agents coerced employers into requiring female employees to wear high-heeled shoes specifically designed to cause arthritis, before posing as employees subject of such arthritis to encourage nations to prosecute employers victim of Baggielandian coercion in an attempt to ruin national economies;

Observing Baggieland’s subsequent launching of Mission #831: Give Us A Break, Leader, where Baggielandian agents ran heavily biased polls to paint national leaders as the best of their nations and then used these polls to urge national leaders to deprive trillions of multiversal citizens of basic political rights;

Intensely sickened by the thousands of massacres of innocent soldiers following kangaroo trials for supposed ‘military desertion’ systematically carried out by Baggielandian agents posing as military generals, and shocked that these agents then used these massacres to manipulate national leaders to permit military generals to carry out such atrocities in the future, all part of an unforgivable attempt to boost authoritarianism and the arms trade across the multiverse named Mission #1431: Just Deserts for Desertion?;

Noticing Baggielandian agents’ brutal, systematic brainwashing of the gullible nieces of thousands of national leaders into harassing their Secretaries of State over excessive use of a certain punctuation mark and then encouraging national leaders to drop formality in public communication, a mission euphemised as Mission #1447: Yet Another Issue About Periods;

Greatly annoyed that Baggieland has extended its malice to destroying the environments of other nations, best shown through Mission #1473: Sandbagging, where Baggielandian agents mined foreign seabeds to a deliberately environmentally destructive extent to coerce governments into allowing Baggielandian agents to destroy deserts with their funding;

Denouncing how Baggielandian intelligence agents have gone as far as repeatedly helping intelligence agencies of countless other nations engage in their own mass infiltration missions, advising those intelligence agencies on manipulation of national leaders, impersonation, practicality, the structure and organisation of missions, and the reporting of mission success, inter alia;

Concerned by Baggieland’s attempts at sportswashing to cover up for its heinous acts while still being unable to actually act with goodwill;

1. Beating numerous innocent nations merely trying to get involved in international sports to revel in its 'victories' in numerous competitions, like coming runner-up in and later winning the Rugby Union World Cup, and winning one competition and coming runner-up in two competitions of the NationStates Tennis Tour (in which Baggielandian Tennis player Goran McEnroe unjustifiably sprayed wolf repellent at a five-year-old child).
   
2. Hosting international sporting events, like the Three Degrees Open tournament of the NationStates Tennis Tour, and the Aussie Rules World Cup (which Baggieland helped establish with Sylestone and hosted three times, and which remains the most prominent international Aussie Rules tournament to this day), only to permit piracy that may or may not target foreign sports players by the submarine HMS Onslaught (which once plundered a ship from Electrum for Olympic medals), and force foreign sports players to eat lasagna using a spoon, branded as somehow 'not as uncouth as it sounds'.

Therefore, seeking to hold Baggieland publicly accountable for its shocking actions, and further seeking rid it of the helpful and benevolent image it still tries to maintain to ensure that no member state attempts to emulate the dark legacy of this nation ever again;

Hereby condemns Baggieland.

The World Assembly:

Introducing Baggieland as a nation ruled de jure by King Alswitch, a mostly benevolent and laid-back ruler, but who has delegated most of his authority to the much less benevolent despot Queen Alma, who to this day rules over Baggieland with an iron fist, and further exposing Baggieland as the home to some of the most secretive, malicious, and covert intelligence agencies, carrying out numerous mass infiltration missions of thousands of innocent nations that have, until now, been ignored by this most excellent assembly;

Bemoaning Baggieland’s launching of Mission #820: These Heels Weren’t Made For Working, in which Baggielandian agents coerced employers into requiring female employees to wear high-heeled shoes specifically designed to cause arthritis, before posing as employees subject of such arthritis to encourage nations to prosecute employers victim of Baggielandian coercion in an attempt to ruin national economies;

Observing Baggieland’s subsequent launching of Mission #831: Give Us A Break, Leader, where Baggielandian agents ran heavily biassed polls to paint national leaders as the best of their nations and then used these polls as a justification for threatening to forcefully ban public holidays in innocent democratic nations;

Intensely sickened by the thousands of massacres of innocent soldiers following kangaroo trials for supposed ‘military desertion’ systematically carried out by Baggielandian agents posing as military generals as part of Mission #1431: Just Deserts for Desertion?, and shocked that these agents then used these massacres to manipulate national leaders to permit military generals to carry out future similar atrocities in an attempt to boost authoritarianism and the arms trade across the multiverse;

Noticing Baggielandian agents’ brutal, systematic brainwashing of the gullible nieces of thousands of national leaders into harassing their Secretaries of State over excessive use of a certain punctuation mark and then encouraging national leaders to drop formality in public communication, a mission euphemised as Mission #1447: Yet Another Issue About Periods;

Greatly annoyed that Baggieland has extended its malice to destroying the environments of other nations, best shown through Mission #1473: Sandbagging, where Baggielandian agents mined foreign seabeds to a deliberately environmentally destructive extent to coerce governments into allowing Baggielandian agents to destroy deserts with their funding;

Denouncing how Baggielandian intelligence agents have gone as far as repeatedly helping intelligence agencies of countless other nations engage in their own mass infiltration missions, advising those intelligence agencies on what methods are the most effective in manipulating national leaders, effective impersonation, the reporting of the success of missions, and much more;

Concerned by Baggieland’s attempts at sportswashing to cover up for its heinous acts while still being unable to actually act with goodwill;

1. Beating numerous innocent nations merely trying to get involved in international sporting to revel in its 'victories' in numerous competitions, like coming runner-up in and later winning the Rugby Union World Cup, and winning one competition and coming runner-up in two competitions of the NationStates Tennis Tour (NSTT) (in which Baggielandian Tennis player Goran McEnroe unjustifiably sprayed wolf repellent at a five-year-old child).
   
2. Hosting international sporting events, like the Three Degrees Open tournament of the NSTT, and the Aussie Rules World Cup(which Baggieland helped establish with Sylestone and hosted three times, and which remains the most prominent international Aussie Rules Football tournament to this day), only to permit piracy that may or may not target foreign sports players by the submarine HMS Onslaught (which once plundered a ship from Electrum for Olympic medals), and force foreign sports players to eat lasagna using a spoon, branded as somehow 'not as uncouth as it sounds'.

Therefore, understanding that, while action by this Assembly may not cease Baggieland's heinous activities, it may rid Baggieland of the helpful and benevolent image it still tries to maintain, and ensure that no member state attempts to emulate the dark legacy of this nation ever again;

Hereby condemns Baggieland.

The World Assembly:

Introducing Baggieland as a nation ruled de jure by King Alswitch, a mostly benevolent and laid-back ruler but who has delegated most of his authority to the much less benevolent despot Queen Alma, who to this day rules over Baggieland with an iron fist, and further exposing Baggieland as a nation home to some of the most secretive, malicious, and covert intelligence agencies, carrying out numerous mass infiltration operations of thousands of innocent nations that have, until now, been ignored by this most excellent assembly;

Bemoaning Baggieland’s launching of Mission #820: These Heels Weren’t Made For Working, in which Baggielandian agents coerced employers into requiring female employees to wear high-heeled shoes specifically designed to cause arthritis, before posing as employees subject of such arthritis to encourage nations to prosecute employers victim of Baggielandian coercion in an attempt to ruin national economies;

Observing Baggieland’s subsequent launching of Mission #831: Give Us A Break, Leader, where Baggielandian agents ran heavily biassed polls to paint national leaders as the best of their nations and then used these polls as a justification for threatening to forcefully ban public holidays in innocent democratic nations;

Intensely sickened by the thousands of massacres of innocent soldiers following kangaroo trials for supposed ‘military desertion’ systematically carried out by Baggielandian agents posing as military generals, and shocked that these agents then used these massacres to manipulate national leaders to permit military generals to carry out such atrocities, which was only another operation for Baggieland to add to the resumes of its intelligence agents; Mission #1431: Just Deserts for Desertion;

Noticing Baggielandian agents’ brutal, systematic brainwashing of the gullible nieces of thousands of national leaders into harassing their Secretaries of State over excessive use of a certain punctuation mark and then encouraging national leaders to drop formality in public communication, an operation euphemised as Mission #1447: Yet Another Issue About Periods;

Greatly annoyed that Baggieland has extended its malice to destroying the environments of other nations, best shown through Mission #1473: Sandbagging, where Baggielandian agents mined foreign seabeds to a deliberately environmentally destructive extent to coerce governments into allowing Baggielandian agents to destroy deserts with their funding;

Denouncing how Baggielandian intelligence agents have gone as far as repeatedly helping intelligence agencies of countless other nations engage in their own mass infiltration operations, advising those intelligence agencies on what methods are the most effective in manipulating national leaders, effective impersonation, the reporting of the success of missions, and much more;

Concerned by Baggieland’s attempts at sportswashing to cover up for its heinous acts while still being unable to actually act with goodwill;

1. Beating numerous innocent nations merely trying to get involved in international sporting to revel in its 'victories' in numerous competitions, like coming runner-up in and later winning the Rugby Union World Cup, winning one competition and coming runner-up in two competitions of the NationStates Tennis Tour (NSTT) (in which Baggielandian Tennis player Goran McEnroe unjustifiably sprayed wolf-repellent at a five-year-old child), and coming runner-up in the Aussie Rules World Cup (ARWC) twice.
   
2. Hosting international sporting events, like the Three Degrees Open tournament of the NSTT, and the ARWC (which Baggieland helped establish with Sylestone and hosted three times), only to permit piracy that may or may not target foreign sports players by the submarine HMS Onslaught (which once plundered a ship from Electrum for Olympic medals), and force foreign sports players to eat lasagna using a spoon, branded as somehow 'not as uncouth as it sounds'.

Therefore, understanding that, while action by this Assembly may not cease Baggieland's heinous activities, it may rid Baggieland of the helpful and benevolent image it still tries to maintain, and ensure that no member state attempts to emulate the dark legacy of this nation ever again;

Hereby condemns Baggieland.

Draft 1

The World Assembly:

Bemoaning the long history of countless mass infiltration operations of thousands of innocent nations systematically carried out by the secretive intelligence agencies of Baggieland, and seeking to bring international attention to Baggieland's heinous history to set it as an example that no member state should follow;

Observing Baggieland’s launching of Mission #820: These Heels Weren’t Made For Working, in which Baggielandian agents coerced employers into requiring female employees to wear high-heeled shoes specifically designed to cause arthritis, before posing as employees subject of such arthritis to encourage nations to prosecute employers victim of Baggielandian coercion in an attempt to ruin national economies;

Informed of Baggieland’s subsequent launching of Mission #831: Give Us A Break, Leader, where Baggielandian agents ran heavily biassed polls to paint national leaders as the best of their nations and then used these polls to manipulate national leaders into either distributing propaganda promoting themselves or banning public holidays;

Nauseated by the thousands of massacres of innocent soldiers following kangaroo trials for supposed ‘military desertion’ systematically carried out by Baggielandian agents, and shocked that Baggieland’s agents then posed as military generals to use these massacres to encourage national leaders to permit military generals to carry out such atrocities, which was only another operation for Baggieland to add to the resumes of its intelligence agents; Mission #1431: Just Deserts for Desertion;

Greatly annoyed by Baggielandian agents’ impersonation of the nieces of national leaders in order to harass their Secretaries of State over excessive use of a certain punctuation mark and encourage national leaders to drop formality in public communication by governments, an operation known as Mission #1447: Yet Another Issue About Periods;

Disgusted that Baggieland has extended its malice to destroying the environments of other nations, best shown through Mission #1473: Sandbagging, where Baggielandian agents mined foreign seabeds to a deliberately environmentally destructive extent to coerce governments into allowing Baggielandian agents to destroy deserts with their funding;

Lamenting how Baggielandian intelligence agents have gone as far as repeatedly helping foreign intelligence agencies engage in their own mass infiltration operations, advising those intelligence agencies on what methods are the most effective in manipulating national leaders, how to effectively impersonate innocent individuals, the reporting of the success of missions, and much more;

Concerned by Baggieland’s attempts at sportswashing to cover up for its heinous acts while still being unable to actually act with goodwill;

1. Beating numerous innocent nations merely trying to get involved in international sporting to revel in its 'victories' in numerous competitions, like winning the 32nd Rugby Union World Cup (RUWC) and the Hamilton International competition of the Season 7 Tennis Tour (S7TT), and coming runner-up in the 30th RUWC, two Aussie Rules World Cups (ARWC), and two more S7TT competitions; and
   
2. Creating means of doing so by hosting international sporting events, like the Three Degrees tournament of S7TT, as well as the ARWC (which Baggieland helped establish with Sylestone and hosted three times), only to purposefully permit piracy by the rogue submarine HMS Onslaught that may or may not be targetted towards foreign sports players;

Therefore, understanding that, while action by this Assembly may not cease the heinous activities of Baggieland's intelligence agencies, it may rid Baggieland of the helpful and benevolent image it attempts to maintain, and ensure that no member state attempts to emulate the dark legacy of this nation ever again;

Hereby condemns Baggieland.

[Hulldom]

Couple things.

1. Why not use the word “sportwashing” in the clause about Baggieland’s sports RP?

2. I’m going to guess the “Lamenting” clause is a reference to other RP?

Edit: Which is to say, support in principle.

[Tinhampton]

Issues editors cannot be C&Ced for issues they authored while an editor

[The Forest of Aeneas]

Couple things.

1. Why not use the word “sportwashing” in the clause about Baggieland’s sports RP?

2. I’m going to guess the “Lamenting” clause is a reference to other RP?

Edit: Which is to say, support in principle.

1. I didn't use it because I didn't know that was a word

2. No, that's in reference to the nominee's feedback to issues authors in the GI forum.

Issues editors cannot be C&Ced for issues they authored while an editor

None of the issues mentioned were published while Baggieland was an editor.

[Fachumonn]

Couple things.

1. Why not use the word “sportwashing” in the clause about Baggieland’s sports RP?

2. I’m going to guess the “Lamenting” clause is a reference to other RP?

Edit: Which is to say, support in principle.

1. I didn't use it because I didn't know that was a word

2. No, that's in reference to the nominee's feedback to issues authors in the GI forum.

Issues editors cannot be C&Ced for issues they authored while an editor

None of the issues mentioned were published while Baggieland was an editor.

OOC:
-Make the lamenting clause more clear then (without smashing the 4th wall),
-Make sure ALL the issues you mention were while they weren't an editor.

-Support as written, nice job, but there definitely are improvements to be made.

[The Forest of Aeneas]

1. I didn't use it because I didn't know that was a word

2. No, that's in reference to the nominee's feedback to issues authors in the GI forum.


None of the issues mentioned were published while Baggieland was an editor.

OOC:
-Make the lamenting clause more clear then (without smashing the 4th wall),

Done.

-Make sure ALL the issues you mention were while they weren't an editor.

Already ensured

[Honeydewistania]

The sports thing reads really shoehorned into the proposal. While it adds some variety, maybe don’t just put a laundry list of accomplishments? Also, biassed -> biased. The acronym doesn’t make sense after the G in BOING. And surely you can come up with something more Creative than impersonating people all the time?

[Electrum]

You can definitely write more on HMS Onslaught, e.g. see here. And if you're going to write about HMS Onslaught then there has to be an equally prominent reference to King Alswitch.

Hamilton International competition of the Season 7 Tennis Tour (S7TT) >> Hamilton International singles competition of season 7 of the NationStates Tennis Tour (NSTT). S7TT is not an abbreviation that's used.

Three Degrees tournament of S7TT >> you can just simplify down to the NSTT, and it was the 'Three Degrees Open'

[Gnejs]

Any condemnation of Baggieland would be incomplete without mention of their awfully uncouth tradition of eating lasagna with a spoon instead of a knife and fork (like properly civilized nations do).

[Fachumonn]

Any condemnation of Baggieland would be incomplete without mention of their awfully uncouth tradition of eating lasagna with a spoon instead of a knife and fork (like properly civilized nations do).

Lol.

[Fachumonn]

In the Lamenting clause, I will point you towards the first sub/list clause in trotterdam's commendation.

[Tinhampton]

Issues editors cannot be C&Ced for issues they authored while an editor

None of the issues mentioned were published while Baggieland was an editor.

Sorry for the confusion. I can support this, at least in principle

[The Forest of Aeneas]

The sports thing reads really shoehorned into the proposal. While it adds some variety, maybe don’t just put a laundry list of accomplishments?

Is this better?

Also, biassed -> biased.

Wrong.

The acronym doesn’t make sense after the G in BOING.

There's no proper acronym meant there after 'BOING'

And surely you can come up with something more Creative than impersonating people all the time?

Done.

Any condemnation of Baggieland would be incomplete without mention of their awfully uncouth tradition of eating lasagna with a spoon instead of a knife and fork (like properly civilized nations do).

Done.

And if you're going to write about HMS Onslaught then there has to be an equally prominent reference to King Alswitch.

Hamilton International competition of the Season 7 Tennis Tour (S7TT) >> Hamilton International singles competition of season 7 of the NationStates Tennis Tour (NSTT). S7TT is not an abbreviation that's used.

Three Degrees tournament of S7TT >> you can just simplify down to the NSTT, and it was the 'Three Degrees Open'[/quote]
Done.

The rest will be addressed soon TM

[The Forest of Aeneas]

In the Lamenting clause, I will point you towards the first sub/list clause in trotterdam's commendation.

Is it clearer now?

[The Forest of Aeneas]

You can definitely write more on HMS Onslaught, e.g. see here

Done.

[Fachumonn]

In the Lamenting clause, I will point you towards the first sub/list clause in trotterdam's commendation.

Is it clearer now?

Yes, much better.

[Baggieland]

You can definitely write more on HMS Onslaught, e.g. see here. And if you're going to write about HMS Onslaught then there has to be an equally prominent reference to King Alswitch.

Didn't we make a Turnip reporter walk the plank and then assault a female Electrum Olympic official? Although HMS Onslaught is a puppet, all the crew are Baggielandian citizens, their presence is tolerated by King Alswitch and their piracy is celebrated by all Baggies.

Any condemnation of Baggieland would be incomplete without mention of their awfully uncouth tradition of eating lasagna with a spoon instead of a knife and fork (like properly civilized nations do).

Didn't our tennis player spray wolf-repellant into the face of a 5 year old boy?

[Gnejs]

Didn't our tennis player spray wolf-repellant into the face of a 5 year old boy?

They did. Poor Lars, he never even saw Goran McEnroe coming. Although, while this act was heinous, I still contend the lasagna part is worse.

[The Forest of Aeneas]

Ambassador Cecilia Maro. 'We have added a mention of the above wolf-repellent incident.'

OOC: I'll be honest, eating lasagna with a spoon doesn't really sound as uncouth as people are making it to be, but whatever xD

[The Forest of Aeneas]

OOC: Bump

[Fachumonn]

Am I correct in that this is planned to be submitted alongside you're current GA proposal? I would give it a bit more time if I were you. I don't know if everybody has gotten here yet.

[The Forest of Aeneas]

Am I correct in that this is planned to be submitted alongside you're current GA proposal? I would give it a bit more time if I were you. I don't know if everybody has gotten here yet.

OOC: Yes, this will be submitted in about 50 hours, unless major feedback appears. eventually.

[Hulldom]

You are rushing this to vote. I support it, but seven days is not nearly enough for a new author unless the target is at imminent risk of CTE.

[Baggieland]

unless the target is at imminent risk of CTE.

No chance of that!