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[DRAFT] Condemn Lily

Postby The Hurricane » Mon Apr 18, 2022 6:37 pm

DEAR SECURITY COUNCIL,

THE REGION LILY HAS CAUSED TOO MUCH CHAOS AND SHOULD BE VIEWED AS A THREAT FOR ALL REGIONS THAT CAN BE EASLY RAIDED.

LILY SHOULD BE CONDEMED FOR THESE REASONS BELOW:

KNOWING THEY USE KEYBINDS/SCRIPTS TO HELP RAID.

NOTING THEY RAIDED TOO MUCH AND CAUSED CHAOS

REMEMBER WEEKS AGO THERE WAS AN ISSUE WITH SCRIPTS INCLUDING BREEZE+

KNOWING THEY USE BREEZE+ TO MAKE KEYBINDS TO RAID

SEEING THEY USED TO HAVE A NOW-DELETED DISPATCH TELLING HOW TO MAKE THIS ENTIRE SYSTEM WORK

HEREBY CONDEMS LILY.
Last edited by The Hurricane on Thu Apr 21, 2022 7:26 pm, edited 6 times in total.

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Postby Reventus Koth » Mon Apr 18, 2022 7:02 pm

You *are* aware this is highly illegal as-is, right? You might be able to pull off a condemnation of Lily with some elbow grease parsing through their achievements, but as is your arguments are just straight up not gonna fly under the rules.
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Postby The Hurricane » Mon Apr 18, 2022 7:07 pm

Reventus Koth wrote:You *are* aware this is highly illegal as-is, right? You might be able to pull off a condemnation of Lily with some elbow grease parsing through their achievements, but as is your arguments are just straight up not gonna fly under the rules.


Its my first time.

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Postby Thousand Branches » Mon Apr 18, 2022 7:28 pm

The Hurricane wrote:
Reventus Koth wrote:You *are* aware this is highly illegal as-is, right? You might be able to pull off a condemnation of Lily with some elbow grease parsing through their achievements, but as is your arguments are just straight up not gonna fly under the rules.


Its my first time.

Every mention of scripts, keybinds, and deletions are likely illegal. Please read the rules.
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Postby The Hurricane » Mon Apr 18, 2022 7:38 pm

Thousand Branches wrote:
The Hurricane wrote:
Its my first time.

Every mention of scripts, keybinds, and deletions are likely illegal. Please read the rules.

Ok, I will.

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Mon Apr 18, 2022 10:49 pm

The Hurricane wrote:
Reventus Koth wrote:You *are* aware this is highly illegal as-is, right? You might be able to pull off a condemnation of Lily with some elbow grease parsing through their achievements, but as is your arguments are just straight up not gonna fly under the rules.


Its my first time.

We can tell.

Also put a title to your OP that describes what the thread is about, e.g. “[Draft] Condemn Lily”.
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Postby State of Imperial Russia » Mon Apr 18, 2022 10:50 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
The Hurricane wrote:
Its my first time.

We can tell.

Also put a title to your OP that describes what the thread is about, e.g. “[Draft] Condemn Lily”.


I think "1" sums up the whole condemnation rather nicely.
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Postby The Hurricane » Tue Apr 19, 2022 1:55 pm

State of Imperial Russia wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:We can tell.

Also put a title to your OP that describes what the thread is about, e.g. “[Draft] Condemn Lily”.


I think "1" sums up the whole condemnation rather nicely.

ty, i put lots of effort into it

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Postby Goobergunchia » Tue Apr 19, 2022 2:02 pm

Title edited.
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Postby The Hurricane » Tue Apr 19, 2022 2:12 pm

Goobergunchia wrote:Title edited.


Well now i know i'm terrible at writing WA Proposals.

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Postby Honeydewistania » Tue Apr 19, 2022 10:48 pm

The Hurricane wrote:
Goobergunchia wrote:Title edited.


Well now i know i'm terrible at writing WA Proposals.

Hey now, don’t be like that. Is your proposal bad? Honestly, yes. But we all start from somewhere.

Your proposal is salvageable. You picked a target that could potentially be worthy of condemnation, in spite of the hundreds of noob proposals over the years. Lily’s use of tech is worth mentioning if paraphrased in a legal way. You need to back up your claims of ‘destruction and chaos’ with examples. I would suggest trawling through the thread for Lily in the Gameplay forum and looking for significant ‘records’ they have broken with their tag runs, or looking for info in the dispatches their members have released. Lily has also participated in some full scale occupations, the Horsemen/Crabs of the Apocalypse (mega nuke factions), killed The Embassy’s embassies and lagged the game, toppled Mikeswill’s delegate streak etc there’s a lot that you can include in your condemnation. I’d also recommend joining the Lily (join Lily) discord server and maybe chatting to people and getting the vibe (and also you can easily get some info from them).

If you put in the effort to do your research and write a competent proposal, you will find that maybe you’re not so terrible ;) good luck
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Postby Outer Sparta » Wed Apr 20, 2022 12:15 am

The Hurricane wrote:
Goobergunchia wrote:Title edited.


Well now i know i'm terrible at writing WA Proposals.

Then go ahead and read this nifty guide: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=8809

Based on your terrible draft, you haven't done so and seemingly haven't taken any feedback from others.
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Postby Marxiaville » Wed Apr 20, 2022 12:24 am

I would agree with the proposal, they seem to just raid indiscriminately, and it's annoying to see small regions used as advertising spaces, but yeah, it does need a rewrite

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Postby Nationalist Northumbria » Wed Apr 20, 2022 2:06 am

Change it to a Commendation and I'll support it.
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Postby The Hurricane » Thu Apr 21, 2022 6:51 pm

okok, I'll rewrite the entire thing. And join there discord. And get info.
Outer Sparta wrote:
The Hurricane wrote:
Well now i know i'm terrible at writing WA Proposals.

Then go ahead and read this nifty guide: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=8809

Based on your terrible draft, you haven't done so and seemingly haven't taken any feedback from others.

If I had not taken any feedback, why would this thread be up?

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Postby Free Algerstonia » Thu Apr 21, 2022 7:04 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
The Hurricane wrote:
Well now i know i'm terrible at writing WA Proposals.

Then go ahead and read this nifty guide: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=8809

Based on your terrible draft, you haven't done so and seemingly haven't taken any feedback from others.

Dude, the draft was only up for six hours when you posted this. Give it a rest.
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