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A chamber dedicated to the dissemination of inter-regional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary.
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Liberate A Mystical Council

Postby Hegvanigson » Fri Feb 11, 2022 2:25 pm

Hello And Welcome To NationStates.

The Mystical Council Was Invaded By The Brotherhood of Malice,The Black Hawks,And Lone Wolves United.
BELOW MY PROPOSAL:
The Security Council,

KNOWING The Existence Of The Mystical Council As A Region,

ACKNOWLEDGING That The Mystical Council Was Invaded By The Black Hawks,Lone Wolves United And The Brotherhood of Malice,

ASSERTING The Necessity To Liberate The Region From Invader Forces,And Recover Native Control,

KNOWING That The Invaders Have Sucessful Great Region Invasions,Like The Invasion Of A Liberal Haven,

The Security Council,Hereby Liberates The Mystical Council.
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Postby Apatosaurus » Fri Feb 11, 2022 2:29 pm

Hey there ^-^

Alistia (the native delegate of The Mystical Council) is already working on one.

That said, why is every word capitalised? You should also get rid of the redundant "The Security Council," in your final clause, and also please use spaces after commas.
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Postby Hegvanigson » Fri Feb 11, 2022 2:37 pm

Apatosaurus wrote:Hey there ^-^

Alistia (the native delegate of The Mystical Council) is already working on one.

That said, why is every word capitalised? You should also get rid of the redundant "The Security Council," in your final clause, and also please use spaces after commas.

but is a draft.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri Feb 11, 2022 2:54 pm

Oh, it’s you again.

Listen, you have no idea of how to write a Security Council proposal. Just give it up and stop wasting everyone’s time especially when there is an alternative that is so much better and written by a native of the region.
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Postby Paladin Republic » Fri Feb 11, 2022 3:10 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Oh, it’s you again.

Listen, you have no idea of how to write a Security Council proposal. Just give it up and stop wasting everyone’s time especially when there is an alternative that is so much better and written by a native of the region.


I agree with you.
I think the influential regions should withdraw their embassies.

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Postby Hegvanigson » Fri Feb 11, 2022 3:33 pm

Paladin Republic wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Oh, it’s you again.

Listen, you have no idea of how to write a Security Council proposal. Just give it up and stop wasting everyone’s time especially when there is an alternative that is so much better and written by a native of the region.


I agree with you.
I think the influential regions should withdraw their embassies.

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Postby Outer Sparta » Fri Feb 11, 2022 5:54 pm

There already is a far better proposal in the works. Yours is just crappy and riddled with errors and formatting issues.
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Postby Tinhampton » Fri Feb 11, 2022 5:56 pm

Hegvanigson's draft isn't "crappy;" it Just Looks Unusual.
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Postby Outer Sparta » Fri Feb 11, 2022 8:26 pm

Tinhampton wrote:Hegvanigson's draft isn't "crappy;" it Just Looks Unusual.

I See What You Did There.

Seems to me this draft is also motivated by the OP trying to take advantage of opportunism by seeing another draft on this topic and making their own despite said other draft being much better. Looks like a badge hunt, albeit not a good attempt at one.
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Postby Apatosaurus » Fri Feb 11, 2022 8:46 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
Tinhampton wrote:Hegvanigson's draft isn't "crappy;" it Just Looks Unusual.

I See What You Did There.

Did You Really?
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Postby Free Algerstonia » Fri Feb 11, 2022 9:09 pm

no no he's right. this draft is 100% better
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Postby Hegvanigson » Sat Feb 12, 2022 5:49 am

Free Algerstonia wrote:no no he's right. this draft is 100% better

And The "Liberate A Mystical Council" By The Native Delegate Of The Mystical Council Is Only A Draft.
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Postby Hegvanigson » Sat Feb 12, 2022 10:20 am

Frisbeeteria wrote:
Hegvanigson wrote:*snip*

Knock it off with the gigantic colored text. Standard text is what we use here.

Agreed,Leader
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sat Feb 12, 2022 10:29 am

And you submitted this terrible draft. Clear opportunism and badge hunt.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Feb 12, 2022 10:41 am

Outer Sparta wrote:And you submitted this terrible draft. Clear opportunism and badge hunt.

It’s what they do. On the bright side it will sink without trace, like their other feeble efforts.
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Postby Hegvanigson » Sat Feb 12, 2022 10:51 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:And you submitted this terrible draft. Clear opportunism and badge hunt.

It’s what they do. On the bright side it will sink without trace, like their other feeble efforts.

>:(
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sat Feb 12, 2022 11:04 am

Hegvanigson wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:It’s what they do. On the bright side it will sink without trace, like their other feeble efforts.

>:(

Maybe put in some effort in your drafts instead of just trying to submit something that's of low quality and pass it off a high quality.
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Postby Hegvanigson » Sat Feb 12, 2022 3:39 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
Hegvanigson wrote: >:(

Maybe put in some effort in your drafts instead of just trying to submit something that's of low quality and pass it off a high quality.

Again,My Phone Is A SHIT
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Postby Kingdom Of Englands » Sat Feb 12, 2022 3:44 pm

Hegvanigson wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:Maybe put in some effort in your drafts instead of just trying to submit something that's of low quality and pass it off a high quality.

Again,My Phone Is A SHIT

Can't be blaming your phone
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Postby Hegvanigson » Sat Feb 12, 2022 5:17 pm

Kingdom of Englands wrote:
Hegvanigson wrote:Again,My Phone Is A SHIT

Can't be blaming your phone

Eh.
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sat Feb 12, 2022 6:13 pm

Hegvanigson wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:Maybe put in some effort in your drafts instead of just trying to submit something that's of low quality and pass it off a high quality.

Again,My Phone Is A SHIT

Not a good excuse for your lack of proofreading and quality in your drafts.
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Postby Hegvanigson » Sat Feb 12, 2022 6:16 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:
Hegvanigson wrote:Again,My Phone Is A SHIT

Not a good excuse for your lack of proofreading and quality in your drafts.

EXACTLY
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Postby Reploid Productions » Sun Feb 13, 2022 2:30 pm

Hegvanigson wrote:EXACTLY

When my colleague told you this:
Frisbeeteria wrote:Knock it off with the gigantic colored text. Standard text is what we use here.

-it was not an opinion or a suggestion.

Hegvanigson, knock it off with the excessive color abuse and review the site rules, particularly the bit regarding Garish Posting. Continued excessive color abuse can result in official warnings.
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Postby Hegvanigson » Mon Feb 14, 2022 9:52 am

Reploid Productions wrote:
Hegvanigson wrote:EXACTLY

When my colleague told you this:
Frisbeeteria wrote:Knock it off with the gigantic colored text. Standard text is what we use here.

-it was not an opinion or a suggestion.

Hegvanigson, knock it off with the excessive color abuse and review the site rules, particularly the bit regarding Garish Posting. Continued excessive color abuse can result in official warnings.

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