...where it had garnered praise for its admirable internal and external government policies, most notably:
I'm confused, what does this even refer to? Roleplay? Issue answering?
Having one of the most reliable historians in NationStates, best displayed through the incredibly well-detailed documentation of the Bobbian Civil War, which even earned the historians of Joe Bobs a prestigious regional award,
What's the Bobbian Civil War and why should an average reader care about it? Need more details and emphasis on its significance here.
Also get rid of the award mention. Keep the actions that won them the award, but don’t include the award itself.
Running an extremely reliable News Agency which has recorded much of the history of Joe Bobs, from the attempted invasion by the neighbouring Mweeha to a failed military coup d’etat attempt,
Again, why should an average reader care about it? Include more details and emphasis here.
Being incredibly utopian, notably through its universal healthcare, strong stance against capital punishment, support of the environment and extensive protections for animal rights,
I'm going to assume you're talking about the onsite nation stats and policies here due to how you've worded this, but this isn’t really commendable on its own. A lot of nations support these things. What makes this nation unique from the others?
Delighted by Joe Bobs'...
Weren’t you using -ing to begin clauses until now? Be consistent.
...this also earned Joe Bobs the Best Recruiter and Outstanding Citizen regional awards during its term,
Remove the award mention.
Applauding Joe Bobs' founding of the Anti-Racism Coalition in 2006, at the time one of the largest inter-regional coalitions that included over 500 individual members as well as many then-noteworthy regions such as The New Meritocracy and Belgium; the Anti-Racism Coalition then went on to aid in the fight against the reprehensible ideologies of Nazism and racism,
Could you include some operations this coalition undertook?
Acclaiming Joe Bobs’ further contributions to the GRA after the region was relaunched in 2014, helping get the region up and going after years of inactivity, most notably by serving as Foreign Affairs Minister, building embassies with many significant regions such as Capitalist Paradise, Spiritus, Texas and the Rejected Realms, and serving as Speaker and First Minister later in 2014, rebuilding much of the region's infrastructure like the Judiciary, World Assembly Delegate elections and Speaker succession; Joe Bobs also managed to restart the rotatorship,
I'm confused; why not include this in the list immediately before?
...holding an extremely successful term as Arch-Chancellor in 2014; during that term, among other things, Joe Bobs took action to encourage the FRA to further help in stabilising regions during the chaos following an invasion,
Applauding Joe Bobs for compiling the histories of various significant regions, notably though the authorship of the General History of the GRA, an in-depth documentation of the GRA's history, and the creation of a public library within the FRA of the histories of significant regions (such as Gay and United Kingdom) as Arch-Chancellor; this helped ensure the public accessibility of the history of significant regions for years to come, and
What even...?
Okay, ignoring that this lacks way too many details to be considered "an extremely successful" term, this whole thing reads like a wordvomit. I would recommend that you rewrite this entire clause to make it less wordvomit-y and more pleasing to read and include more details on JB's FRA Arch-Chancellorship. Particularly, just don’t use too many commas. It's really jarring to see those. Break those sentences and use full-stops if you have to.