NATION

PASSWORD

[DRAFT] Repeal: "Condemn the Black Hawks"

A chamber dedicated to the dissemination of inter-regional peace and goodwill, via force if necessary.

Advertisement

Remove ads

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Sat Aug 28, 2021 8:49 am

Great Algerstonia wrote:Support, although there is a few flaws with the draft that ought to be fixed.

The other half of SC#52 briefly discusses how TBH raids, or more specifically, "has targeted and raided hundreds of regions and used regional bans to exert their control," which is uncondemnable as SC#52 doesn't define "targeted" and leaves it incredibly vague. Additionally, countless uncondemned regions have raided regions, some even more than what SC#52 mentions TBH doing as of its passing. Moreover, an overwhelming majority of regions have "used regional bans to exert their control," including every modern region except the Rejected Realms and perhaps a few rare cases. Furthermore, if we condemned organizations for raiding a hundred regions, using the logic of SC#52, regions that defend a hundred regions would be commendable, when that is not the case,

This bullet point reads far too long. Not really concise.

Sure it's long. Is that really a problem?
Exceedingly disappointed that the standards for a condemnable raiding organization were once so low and that this proposal passed while treating "cooling" as plural, restating the title in the resolution to fluff it, using "concerned" and "noting" three times each because synonyms escaped the author, and providing an argument against the proposal by mentioning how a vote for would get one's region attacked,

Can't say I really like this clause as this sets a precedent for repealing old resolutions due to poor writing compared to modern standards. I'd recommend removing this one.

...writing standards haven't, or at least shouldn't have, been raised over the past 10 years. "Modern standards" for writing are the same ones as 10 years ago. This isn't a valid counterpoint, imo. I think there should be a precedent for improving the quality of resolutions.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Zukchiva
Envoy
 
Posts: 253
Founded: Dec 06, 2017
Left-Leaning College State

Postby Zukchiva » Sat Aug 28, 2021 9:50 am

...writing standards haven't, or at least shouldn't have, been raised over the past 10 years. "Modern standards" for writing are the same ones as 10 years ago. This isn't a valid counterpoint, imo. I think there should be a precedent for improving the quality of resolutions.
As a note, things like position listing, fluff, ambiguity, and lack of elaboration are very much present in many 2011-2013 C/C resolutions (including #52), but anyone whose C/C draft has those aspects today typically sees their draft do really poorly at vote. Even more recent resolutions, like from 2017, are often not as detailed as modern 2020 or 2021 resolutions.

So in other words, the writing standards for SC Resolutions have already increased :p Whether they should have is up to personal opinion, but fact is they definitely have risen to expect more detail and elaboration than in the past.
Last edited by Zukchiva on Sat Aug 28, 2021 11:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
My name is Zukchiva Spartan Yura.
I'm a goose! Give me your bells!
"Are you ok zuk" - Halley
“Posts a wall of text, mentions he can elaborate more. Classic Zuk.”- Bach
“who the fuck is zukchiva lol”- Virgolia
“note to self: zuk is a traitor who must be silenced”- Atlae
“I vote that Zukchiva is kicked off the island”- Algerstonia
"everyone ban zuk"- AMOM
"i've come to the conclusion that zuk cannot pronounce words"- Euricanis
"no we blame zuk for everything now"- Catiania
"zuk is just an idiot" - Vor
"Zuk is absolutely a failure" - Vara
"Zuk's been made illegal? pog" - Boro

Proud member of The East Pacific, The Union of Democratic States, and Refugia!

User avatar
Morover
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1557
Founded: Oct 14, 2018
Ex-Nation

Postby Morover » Sat Aug 28, 2021 10:22 am

I don't agree with a lot of the author's points (I'll try and give some feedback later), but can we please stop the ridiculous badge-hunting accusations? It is an excuse to oppose anything you don't like while avoiding saying you don't like it and in lieu of actual criticism. Minsk is not badge hunting here, regardless of whether or not this is proposal can/should pass.
World Assembly Author
ns.morover@gmail.com

User avatar
Sedgistan
Site Director
 
Posts: 35473
Founded: Oct 20, 2006
Anarchy

Postby Sedgistan » Sat Aug 28, 2021 1:00 pm

Minskiev wrote:Hi. I'll need a legality check on the bullet point about Clause 2.

For the record, that would be:
Clause 2 mentions some weird and confusing language such as "surprisingly legal," "under-regulated," and "unsportsmanlike," seeming to refer to raiding as some exploit that's a part of a game,

...which would be a Rule 2a violation. You'll need to change this.

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Sat Aug 28, 2021 1:03 pm

Sedgistan wrote:
Minskiev wrote:Hi. I'll need a legality check on the bullet point about Clause 2.

For the record, that would be:
Clause 2 mentions some weird and confusing language such as "surprisingly legal," "under-regulated," and "unsportsmanlike," seeming to refer to raiding as some exploit that's a part of a game,

...which would be a Rule 2a violation. You'll need to change this.


Yeah, thought so. Heh.

Edit: is it still illegal? Changed "exploit in a game" to "exploit in the region system."
Last edited by Minskiev on Sat Aug 28, 2021 1:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Sun Aug 29, 2021 3:38 pm

Bump, I guess.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
WayNeacTia
Senator
 
Posts: 4330
Founded: Aug 01, 2014
Ex-Nation

Postby WayNeacTia » Mon Aug 30, 2021 12:54 am

I personally believe the Hawks have earned both of those condemnations. They were and still are the preeminent raiding force in the game. The fact they were able to do that, all while staying within the rules says much about them as an organization. On top of that, they are a great group of people, and having two of their members become moderators proves that point. They raid a region, throw a party and then leave. Plus without them, Tim would be bored. For that I will have to oppose this.
Sarcasm dispensed moderately.
RiderSyl wrote:You'd really think that defenders would communicate with each other about this. I know they're not a hivemind, but at least some level of PR skill would keep Quebecshire and Quebecshire from publically contradicting eac

wait

User avatar
Thousand Branches
Diplomat
 
Posts: 754
Founded: Jun 03, 2021
Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby Thousand Branches » Mon Aug 30, 2021 9:53 am

Is the plan for this to R&R or just a simple repeal? I’d be curious to see a more modern condemn for TBH :o
|| Aramantha Calendula ||
○•○ Writer, editor, and World Assembly fanatic ○•○
•○• Proud member of House Elegarth •○•
○•○ Telegram or message me on discord at QueenAramantha for writing or editing help ○•○
•○• Failed General Assembly Resolutions Archive || The Grand (Newspaper Archive) •○•
○•○ Have an awesome day you! ○•○

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Mon Aug 30, 2021 10:41 am

Thousand Branches wrote:Is the plan for this to R&R or just a simple repeal? I’d be curious to see a more modern condemn for TBH :o


I was considering a replace, actually. I think another condemn based on 2005-2015 2017-2021 TBH would be interesting.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Thousand Branches
Diplomat
 
Posts: 754
Founded: Jun 03, 2021
Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby Thousand Branches » Mon Aug 30, 2021 4:04 pm

Minskiev wrote:
Thousand Branches wrote:Is the plan for this to R&R or just a simple repeal? I’d be curious to see a more modern condemn for TBH :o


I was considering a replace, actually. I think another condemn based on 2005-2015 2017-2021 TBH would be interesting.

If it was well researched and well written I’d be very excited to see something like that. I definitely like the flavor of TBH’s two condemns, it’d be even cooler if they both felt legit. ^-^
|| Aramantha Calendula ||
○•○ Writer, editor, and World Assembly fanatic ○•○
•○• Proud member of House Elegarth •○•
○•○ Telegram or message me on discord at QueenAramantha for writing or editing help ○•○
•○• Failed General Assembly Resolutions Archive || The Grand (Newspaper Archive) •○•
○•○ Have an awesome day you! ○•○

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Tue Aug 31, 2021 1:16 pm

Thousand Branches wrote:
Minskiev wrote:
I was considering a replace, actually. I think another condemn based on 2005-2015 2017-2021 TBH would be interesting.

If it was well researched and well written I’d be very excited to see something like that. I definitely like the flavor of TBH’s two condemns, it’d be even cooler if they both felt legit. ^-^


Yeah, I'm just trying to get some data.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Thu Sep 02, 2021 6:14 pm

Will bump.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Quebecshire
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1914
Founded: Mar 17, 2017
Democratic Socialists

Postby Quebecshire » Thu Sep 02, 2021 7:32 pm

Kind of opposed, as if this is repealed, I don't care to see it replaced. I don't see the point in repealing it if we're going to replace it.
PATRIOT OF THE LEAGUE REDEEMER OF CONCORD
Defender Moralist | Consul of the LDF | Warden-Lieutenant Emeritus | Commended
Benevolent Thomas wrote:I founded a defender organization out of my dislike of invaders, what invading represents, and my desire to see them suffer.
Pergamon wrote:I must say, you are truly what they deserve.

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Thu Sep 02, 2021 7:48 pm

Quebecshire wrote:Kind of opposed, as if this is repealed, I don't care to see it replaced. I don't see the point in repealing it if we're going to replace it.


Really taking that switch to TGW to heart :lol:

I'm not sure if I'd be qualified to write a replacement. Although I will support (some) efforts to do so.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Quebecshire
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1914
Founded: Mar 17, 2017
Democratic Socialists

Postby Quebecshire » Thu Sep 02, 2021 7:52 pm

Minskiev wrote:
Quebecshire wrote:Kind of opposed, as if this is repealed, I don't care to see it replaced. I don't see the point in repealing it if we're going to replace it.


Really taking that switch to TGW to heart :lol:

I've been of the opinion that we shouldn't give badges to raiders (at the very least, raider organizations as prolific as TBH) since before I switched to TGW, which was, uh, like 5 or 6 hours ago?

Regardless, I'd rather not feed their nonsense by reinstating the second badge.
PATRIOT OF THE LEAGUE REDEEMER OF CONCORD
Defender Moralist | Consul of the LDF | Warden-Lieutenant Emeritus | Commended
Benevolent Thomas wrote:I founded a defender organization out of my dislike of invaders, what invading represents, and my desire to see them suffer.
Pergamon wrote:I must say, you are truly what they deserve.

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Thu Sep 02, 2021 7:57 pm

Quebecshire wrote:
Minskiev wrote:
Really taking that switch to TGW to heart :lol:

I've been of the opinion that we shouldn't give badges to raiders (at the very least, raider organizations as prolific as TBH) since before I switched to TGW, which was, uh, like 5 or 6 hours ago?

Regardless, I'd rather not feed their nonsense by reinstating the second badge.


Okay, but this is the repeal thread. Do you have any feedback on that?
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
The Python
Diplomat
 
Posts: 986
Founded: Jul 24, 2020
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby The Python » Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:01 pm

Quebecshire wrote:
Minskiev wrote:
Really taking that switch to TGW to heart :lol:

I've been of the opinion that we shouldn't give badges to raiders (at the very least, raider organizations as prolific as TBH) since before I switched to TGW, which was, uh, like 5 or 6 hours ago?

Wait, did you join TGW? :eyes:

Regardless, I strongly disagree with the "Raiders bad so we shouldn't condemn them" philosophy. If someone plays the bad side, they can have it; it's just silly to not recognise your enemies. That said, what I do oppose is commending raiders because it paints raiding as a positive contribution.
Last edited by The Python on Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:02 pm, edited 2 times in total.
See more information here.

User avatar
Flanderlion
Minister
 
Posts: 2226
Founded: Nov 25, 2013
Psychotic Dictatorship

Postby Flanderlion » Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:25 pm

Quebecshire wrote:Kind of opposed, as if this is repealed, I don't care to see it replaced. I don't see the point in repealing it if we're going to replace it.

Be for the repeal, and against a replace like me. Authors often intend to repeal and replace then discover the sentiment is purely for a repeal.
As always, I'm representing myself.
Information
Wishlist

User avatar
WayNeacTia
Senator
 
Posts: 4330
Founded: Aug 01, 2014
Ex-Nation

Postby WayNeacTia » Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:59 pm

Quebecshire wrote:
Minskiev wrote:
Really taking that switch to TGW to heart :lol:

I've been of the opinion that we shouldn't give badges to raiders (at the very least, raider organizations as prolific as TBH) since before I switched to TGW, which was, uh, like 5 or 6 hours ago?

Regardless, I'd rather not feed their nonsense by reinstating the second badge.

Wow….. I never thought I would hear a moralist defender announce themselves so loudly.
Sarcasm dispensed moderately.
RiderSyl wrote:You'd really think that defenders would communicate with each other about this. I know they're not a hivemind, but at least some level of PR skill would keep Quebecshire and Quebecshire from publically contradicting eac

wait

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Sun Sep 05, 2021 4:06 pm

Will be bumping. If you don't have anything to say about what can be improved with the proposal, say nothing! Because I don't really care otherwise.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Bhang Bhang Duc
Senator
 
Posts: 4721
Founded: Dec 17, 2003
Democratic Socialists

Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Mon Sep 06, 2021 1:08 am

Minskiev wrote:Will be bumping. If you don't have anything to say about what can be improved with the proposal, say nothing! Because I don't really care otherwise.

Not a particularly good attitude for an author.
Former Delegate of The West Pacific. Guardian (under many Delegates) of The West Pacific. TWP's Former Minister for World Assembly Affairs and former Security Council Advisor.

The West Pacific's Official Welshman, Astronomer and Old Fart
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.

RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.

Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..

User avatar
Great Algerstonia
Minister
 
Posts: 2617
Founded: Mar 21, 2019
Ex-Nation

Postby Great Algerstonia » Mon Sep 06, 2021 6:21 am

Minskiev wrote:
Thousand Branches wrote:Is the plan for this to R&R or just a simple repeal? I’d be curious to see a more modern condemn for TBH :o


I was considering a replace, actually. I think another condemn based on 2005-2015 2017-2021 TBH would be interesting.

This now makes me oppose this proposal.
Anti: Russia
Pro: Prussia
Resilient Acceleration wrote:After a period of letting this discussion run its course without my involvement due to sheer laziness and a new related NS project, I have returned with an answer and that answer is Israel.

User avatar
Minskiev
Minister
 
Posts: 2423
Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Left-wing Utopia

Postby Minskiev » Mon Sep 06, 2021 10:15 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Minskiev wrote:Will be bumping. If you don't have anything to say about what can be improved with the proposal, say nothing! Because I don't really care otherwise.

Not a particularly good attitude for an author.


Sure, but I'd like actual feedback.
Minskiev/Walrus. Former Delegate of the Rejected Realms, 3x Officer. 15x WA author. Join the RRA here.

User avatar
Team Lennox
Envoy
 
Posts: 268
Founded: Feb 24, 2020
Ex-Nation

Postby Team Lennox » Mon Sep 06, 2021 5:11 pm

Wayneactia wrote:Reads like a badge hunt to me.

No, this is a fight for justice in the NS universe!
HE/HIM. Use those pronouns! Do NOT assume my gender!


  • An American born citizen
  • A teenager doing teenage stuff (I guess)
  • A leftist (remind me to make a dispatch on my beliefs later)
  • A Christian with usually fundamentalists views (except for on the Patriarchist, (Bible wasn't a big thing on Gender equity) and LGBTQ+ rights, (Bible wasn't a big thing on that either) (Also the Mosaic law doesn't let us eat things like bacon and ham since in the Bible pigs are unclean animals. Like how am I to survive not eating bacon! >:( )





User avatar
Praeceps
Diplomat
 
Posts: 757
Founded: Feb 08, 2016
Ex-Nation

Postby Praeceps » Mon Sep 06, 2021 6:27 pm

While I would typically support a repeal of the target given how badly written it is, the author's attitude is rather offputting.
Apparently simultaneously a Ravenclaw puppet, a NPO plant, and a Warden spy. I had no idea I was that good. Depending on who you ask, my aliases include Krulltopia.

Former Minister of Foreign Affairs for The North Pacific, Former Guildmaster of The North Pacific Cards Guild

PreviousNext

Advertisement

Remove ads

Return to Security Council

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

Advertisement

Remove ads