Great Algerstonia wrote:Support, although there is a few flaws with the draft that ought to be fixed.The other half of SC#52 briefly discusses how TBH raids, or more specifically, "has targeted and raided hundreds of regions and used regional bans to exert their control," which is uncondemnable as SC#52 doesn't define "targeted" and leaves it incredibly vague. Additionally, countless uncondemned regions have raided regions, some even more than what SC#52 mentions TBH doing as of its passing. Moreover, an overwhelming majority of regions have "used regional bans to exert their control," including every modern region except the Rejected Realms and perhaps a few rare cases. Furthermore, if we condemned organizations for raiding a hundred regions, using the logic of SC#52, regions that defend a hundred regions would be commendable, when that is not the case,
This bullet point reads far too long. Not really concise.
Sure it's long. Is that really a problem?
Exceedingly disappointed that the standards for a condemnable raiding organization were once so low and that this proposal passed while treating "cooling" as plural, restating the title in the resolution to fluff it, using "concerned" and "noting" three times each because synonyms escaped the author, and providing an argument against the proposal by mentioning how a vote for would get one's region attacked,
Can't say I really like this clause as this sets a precedent for repealing old resolutions due to poor writing compared to modern standards. I'd recommend removing this one.
...writing standards haven't, or at least shouldn't have, been raised over the past 10 years. "Modern standards" for writing are the same ones as 10 years ago. This isn't a valid counterpoint, imo. I think there should be a precedent for improving the quality of resolutions.