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[DRAFT] Commend Corsaria

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[DRAFT] Commend Corsaria

Postby Cerata » Fri Jun 11, 2021 10:30 am

RECOGNIZING Corsaria for having the healthiest citizens in the entire world, bar none, as well as having the healthiest citizens, the longest lifespan in the world, of over 110 years, and many other fields that it does not lead, but excels in, such as book publishing and high environmental standards.

UNDERSTANDING that it is no easy feat to achieve such a high standard, if not the highest, of health and living standards, anywhere, and to provide citizens with adequate resources to ensure longevity and superb health, and proper funding to medical research and development in that field. This standard takes a long time to achieve, involving years of development, and the nominee should be applauded for supporting this field for such a long time.

IMPRESSED BY the fact that the population of this nation is not only quite sizable and healthy, is also highly sociable and cheerful, and enjoys daily interactions among its citizens, being the 6th most cheerful in the world.

APPLAUDING the fact that it not only focuses on these fields, but also excels in other fields as well, such as having the 3rd lowest crime rates in the world, and the 9th larges book publishing industry, which supports their perch as the 5th most cultured nation in the world. This nation also views environmental protection as an important factor, having the 16th place in the best weather in the world, and the 119th best weather, as well as being 20th in tourism. While not superb, it is still quite significant enough in these fields to be applauded for their dedication to the environment and its citizenry.

HEREBY commends Corsaria.

I would appreciate any feedback on this.
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Postby SPLEENS » Fri Jun 11, 2021 10:32 am

not a commendable nominee

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri Jun 11, 2021 11:15 am

Not commendable and most of your draft is fluff.
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Postby Cerata » Fri Jun 11, 2021 11:18 am

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Not commendable and most of your draft is fluff.

Oh. Thanks though!
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri Jun 11, 2021 11:24 am

Cerata wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Not commendable and most of your draft is fluff.

Oh. Thanks though!

Stats based C&Cs are the hardest to write and the nominee has to be outstanding in a number of areas to even get a look in.

There’s just not enough here to warrant a Commendation.
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Postby Barlyy » Fri Jun 11, 2021 11:46 am

Like BBD said: mostly filler, and Corsaria isn't really commendable.
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Postby Cerata » Fri Jun 11, 2021 11:59 am

Barlyy wrote:Like BBD said: mostly filler, and Corsaria isn't really commendable.

Eep
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Postby Bormiar » Fri Jun 11, 2021 12:28 pm

Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Cerata wrote:Oh. Thanks though!

Stats based C&Cs are the hardest to write and the nominee has to be outstanding in a number of areas to even get a look in.

There’s just not enough here to warrant a Commendation.

Definitely not the hardest to write in my opinion, but also an uphill battle in terms of fighting for it.

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Postby Outer Sparta » Fri Jun 11, 2021 1:03 pm

Nah. Not really commendable to me.
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Postby Minskiev » Fri Jun 11, 2021 1:07 pm

Feels off. Probably because there's no "The World Assembly," or something. Also super fluffy. Seems like you just saw them and went "Hey, they're first in two stats. Time to get a badge!"
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