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[DRAFT] Commend Aynia Moreaux

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[DRAFT] Commend Aynia Moreaux

Postby Pland Adanna » Sat Jun 05, 2021 6:55 am

Hello everybody! This is my first WA proposal. It’s a commendation of Aynia Moreaux, a nation with significant contributions to many regions. Thank you so much to the wonderful Maowi who drafted this with me! Feedback would be very much appreciated, especially on lowering the character count, which is currently at 5151!

The Security Council,

Wishing to recognise Aynia Moreaux (henceforth referred to as Aynia) as a globally influential figure through their contributions to culture and community in all of their regions and beyond;

Asserting that Aynia's founding of the region Caer Sidi alongside Ghostfox is a shining example of the work this body must champion, as a result of their unwavering commitment to community and creative flair;

Believing that Aynia's constant presence in Caer Sidi leadership, as well as their optimism and forward drive, has meant that they not only created an exceptional sense of community within the region, but were also able to spread this goodwill and have a positive impact abroad, as manifested in:

  • their service as Summer Queen of Caer Sidi from the moment of its founding and guidance of the region through a leadership transition which saw them take on the reformed role of Seasonal Queen, all the while fostering the region's distinctive independent streak and the spirit of creativity on which it prides itself;
  • their artistry in realising a vision for Caer Sidi's government, culture, and geography in which the elemental magic of the region went hand in hand with an effective government structure;
  • their singular ability to bring communities together through events and festivals that stimulate an invaluable generosity of knowledge and expertise, establishing Caer Sidi as a cultural leader in NationStates through three iterations of UCR Con, Caerchella, and other events;
Applauding Aynia's legendary event-planning - the nation has helped host and/or organize a multitude of interregional events to promote goodwill across the world, a goal of the Security Council. These events include:

  • Three iterations of UCR Con, an annual interregional festival for smaller regions focused on creating new regional bonds, where, for each iteration, Aynia designed the original festival plans and goals, helped promote the festival to regions across the ideological spectrum, and created a variety of events to boost festival participation, such as panels and questions-and-answers sessions. Aynia's innovation promoted constructive interregional discussion, celebrated the rich variety of culture across the world, and facilitated the development of many close relations and unity between regions involved;
  • A fundraiser for charity around Christmas 2020, which was an international campaign to gather funds to donate to a charity that promotes equality for all LGBTQ+ people. The nominee prepared advertisements, hosted a mini-event to showcase the skills of Aynia’s national e-sports team so as to gather donations, and overall persuaded many nations to donate for the cause.
  • NSGE 2020, a worldwide festival to exhibit all the participating regions, where Aynia organized and moderated the event and recruited other nations to help out. The celebration allowed regions to learn from each other by sharing knowledge and experience, and provided a platform for nations to interact and form ties across regional borders;
Impressed at Aynia’s labor in Albion through their two terms as Knight Interior, in which capacity they were responsible for growing and enriching the region's population, where they presided over a period of record-breaking regional activity and engagement, in addition to their service as Mayor of Brightwall, where they continued to maintain and improve activity in the culture-focused city;

Amazed at Aynia’s immense contributions to Equinox, which include, but are not limited to, serving multiple terms as head of state, through the position of prime minister and chancellor, during which time they drove interest in the region’s history and helped draft a new constitution. Aynia also led the revival of the Mafia Guild, which held culture and history very dearly, and worked as a dedicated member of the festival planning committee, where they were crucial in bringing energy and imagination to the planning of several events, such as the Equinox Olympics;

Observing Aynia’s role in drafting the first constitutions of Hartfelden, playing a foundational part in the establishment of the new region, and the nominee’s undertakings as Hartfelden’s Minister of Culture, which included painstakingly mapping out the empire, an undertaking of great navigational use to the region’s populace;

Noting that Aynia served as Imperator of Edlhus, a role that includes both the positions of chief executive and Delegate to the World Assembly, meaning Aynia managed Edlhus’s military affairs, foreign affairs, internal affairs, and World Assembly affairs all at once, and that Aynia organized and helped set up Edlhus’s Department of Foreign Affairs as its first minister, allowing Edlhus to engage on the world stage and to interact and bond with other regions;

Believing that Aynia’s achievements and service to the community through many regions deserve international recognition;

Hereby Commends Aynia Moreaux.

Co-authored by Maowi.
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Postby Tinhampton » Sat Jun 05, 2021 7:39 am

Support in principle. I would however note that this is a draft to commend Aynia Moreaux, not Aynia (although both nations are controlled by the same person afaik) :P

Below is my attempt at snipping away at characters - this is something like 4,450 chars or so:
The Security Council,

Wishing to recognise Aynia Moreaux (henceforth Aynia) as a globally influential figure, especially through their commitment to culture, communities, and creative flair everywhere;

Asserting that Aynia's founding of Caer Sidi (CS) alongside Ghostfox is a shining example of the work this body must champion; Aynia's forward-looking, relentlessly optimistic yet constant presence in CS leadership has enabled them to not only establish an exceptional sense of community within CS, but also to spread this goodwill abroad, as manifested in:
  • their service as Summer Queen of CS from the moment of its founding, and their guidance of the region through a leadership transition which saw them take on the reformed role of Seasonal Queen, all the while fostering CS's unabashedly creative, independent streak;
  • their artistry in realising a vision for CS's government, culture, and geography in which the elemental magic of the region went hand in hand with an effective government structure;
  • their singular ability to bring communities together through events and festivals that stimulate an invaluable generosity of knowledge and expertise, establishing CS as a cultural leader in NationStates through three iterations of UCR Con, Caerchella, and other events;

Applauding Aynia's legendary work in hosting and organizing many interregional events which - in the spirit of the Security Council - have helped to promote goodwill across the world, such as:
  • Three iterations of UCR Con, an annual festival focused on creating new bonds between smaller regions; at each of these, Aynia set out the festival's plans and goals, promoted it to regions across the ideological spectrum, and created a variety of events (such as panels and Q&A sessions involving regional leaders) to boost festival participation. Aynia's innovation thus promoted constructive interregional discussion and celebrated the rich variety of culture across the world;
  • An international fundraiser for a charity seeking to promote equality for all members of the LGBTQ+ community around Christmas 2020, which Aynia helped to encourage donations for (such as by hosting a mini-event intended to showcase the skills of Aynia’s national e-sports team);
  • The NationStates Great Exhibition of 2020, which Aynia oversaw and helped to organize; the celebration allowed regions to share knowledge and experience with each other, and provided a platform for nations to interact and form ties across regional borders;
Impressed at Aynia’s labor in Albion through their two terms as Knight Interior, where they helped grow and enrich the region's population (presiding over a period of record-breaking regional activity and engagement in the process), in addition to their service as Mayor of Brightwall, where they continued to maintain and improve activity in the culture-focused city;

Amazed at Aynia’s immense contributions to Equinox, including their multiple terms of service as head of state (through the position of prime minister and chancellor), during which time they drove interest in the region’s history and helped draft a new constitution. Aynia also led the revival of the Mafia Guild, which held culture and history very dearly, and worked as a dedicated member of the festival planning committee, where they provided much-needed energy and imagination to the planning of such events as the Equinox Olympics;

Observing Aynia’s role in drafting the first, foundational constitutions of Hartfelden in addition to their undertakings as Hartfelden’s Minister of Culture, which included painstakingly mapping out the empire, an undertaking of great navigational use to the region’s populace;

Noting that Aynia served as Imperator of Edlhus, through which - as its chief executive and World Assembly Delegate - Aynia simultaneously managed Edlhus’s military, foreign, internal, and WA affairs; Aynia also helped to set up Edlhus’s Department of Foreign Affairs as its inaugural minister, allowing it to engage on the world stage and to interact with its allies,

Believing that Aynia’s achievements and service to the communities of many regions and the world at large deserve international recognition;

Hereby Commends Aynia Moreaux.

Co-authored by Maowi.

The draft you see in the spoiler above deliberately does not add or remove any significant details about Ayu to your draft. Why do you have almost one-and-a-half clauses about her work in organising events? What was she supposed to do as Mayor of Brightwall, and did she do it well? What were her contributions to the constitutions of Hartfelden and Equinox - and if they were minimal at best, why are they still referenced? Why is her work in Edlhus - a region dedicated to the gameplayer niche of NS families - Commendable, or is it Commendable because of who it caters to?
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Jun 05, 2021 9:16 am

The charity clause may be illegal as it seems to refer to something outside of NS. Other than that it seems a bit of a laundry list, lots of stuff done but not always an explanation of why it’s Commendable.

It’s a tidily written draft, but it doesn’t convince me that the nominee is Commendable. Now with some editing and more exposition you may be able to turn it around.
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Postby Minskiev » Sat Jun 05, 2021 9:27 am

To echo Tin and BBD's comments, change the title to reflect that you're commending the nation Aynia Moreaux, not the person Aynia.

Also make it less listy. This does not mean "Realizing Aynia served as this of this, which during their term as that they did this and this. They also did this, which likes this, and did this, where they did a lot as that, such as doing this;"

This means "Realizing Aynia served as this of this, playing a big role in building the region. They also did this, where they planned many cultural events in the region;"
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Postby LollerLand » Sat Jun 05, 2021 11:37 am

Although I am a biased entity, I have no qualms to say that a commendation proposal for Aynia will have my full support. If not for her and Caer Sidi, I would not have decided to stay in NS this time around and would have probably left the game for good. As for the quality of the draft, I would suggest you to listen to BBD's and Miniskiev's comments.
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Postby Minskiev » Sat Jun 05, 2021 3:18 pm

LollerLand wrote:Although I am a biased entity, I have no qualms to say that a commendation proposal for Aynia will have my full support. If not for her and Caer Sidi, I would not have decided to stay in NS this time around and would have probably left the game for good. As for the quality of the draft, I would suggest you to listen to BBD's and Miniskiev's comments.


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Postby Bormiar » Sat Jun 05, 2021 8:35 pm

Doesn't this seem a little early? The draft looks a little sparse to me and I probably won't be voting for, but I certainly would vote for when/if Caer Sidi matures to the point of Europeia or 10KI.

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Postby Zukchiva » Sun Jun 06, 2021 10:32 am

Much support for the nominee. Good luck with this.

I'll give some feedback on it later.
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Postby Pland Adanna » Sun Jun 06, 2021 7:57 pm

Hey! Just wanted to let everyone know that I've seen these and am working on it! :)

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Postby Refuge Isle » Sun Jun 06, 2021 8:09 pm

I disagree with Borm that a requiring CS to be as large as XKI or Euro is necessary. There's many ways to run a successful region and not all of them require becoming a massive powerhouse in numbers. The vibe I'm getting from the draft is that Aynia worked on a variety of regions and helped grow them to a moderate size, I think that's commendable in terms of adding to the health and diversity of NS in these culturally unique communities. No less valuable than region-building anywhere else, at any other scale of region.

It's been touched on vaguely already, but the current draft is over the limit by about at least 229 characters. Remember that the limit is 5000 pre-formatting, so even your BB code works against you, as do linebreaks. Toss your draft into something like notepad++ and then you won't be surprised in the last minute at submission.

Beyond that, I have some thoughts on the mechanical construction:

The title should indeed be changed unless you plan to target Aynia with this proposal. If you do intend to target that nation, you will need to update the opener of this document. Nation-targetting is relatively important. You use "Aynia" as an alias for Aynia Moreaux, but Aynia Moreaux was not in all of these regions and did not do all of these things. As applicable, puppet states of Aynia Moreaux did them, and those puppets should be identified to be factually accurate.


Asserting that Aynia's founding of the region Caer Sidi alongside Ghostfox is a shining example of the work this body must champion, as a result of their unwavering commitment to community and creative flair;

I understand that you wish to introduce the topic, but this is currently working as a stand alone clause. So in that, just founding a region is not commendable, the work that's done inside of it is. Your following line is, I believe, an adequate enough introduction to CS.


their service as Summer Queen of Caer Sidi from the moment of its founding and guidance of the region through a leadership transition which saw them take on the reformed role of Seasonal Queen, all the while fostering the region's distinctive independent streak and the spirit of creativity on which it prides itself;

I used to live in CS, so I know what this is referring to, but I don't think necessarily everyone else will. On paper, it's also unclear how this is a relevant argument for commendation.


their artistry in realising a vision for Caer Sidi's government, culture, and geography in which the elemental magic of the region went hand in hand with an effective government structure;

I've read this about twenty times and I'm not sure "in which the elemental magic of the region went hand in hand with" makes sense. It seems like "the elemental magic of the region" is implied to be a co-founder or something. I think what you're aiming to say is along the lines of "their artistry in realising a vision for Caer Sidi's government, culture, and geography, where elemental magic would go and in hand with an effective government structure;"

That level of ICness is something I think is great, but it may cost you a few votes with players.


their singular ability to bring communities together through events and festivals that stimulate an invaluable generosity of knowledge and expertise, establishing Caer Sidi as a cultural leader in NationStates through three iterations of UCR Con, Caerchella, and other events;

Conceptually, I think this line is fine, however since you go on to expand on this and talk about those events in depth later, you're really only repeating yourself here by directly referencing those events in this manner.

Were it me, I would wildly change the organisation structure of this draft to reference CS being a cultural leader here, with a description of UCR Con and Caerchella. In the next clause, I would describe the work for NSGE. No event-planning category.


A fundraiser for charity around Christmas 2020, which was an international campaign to gather funds to donate to a charity that promotes equality for all LGBTQ+ people. The nominee prepared advertisements, hosted a mini-event to showcase the skills of Aynia’s national e-sports team so as to gather donations, and overall persuaded many nations to donate for the cause.

It's already been pointed out that referencing an IRL fundraising event may be illegal, but from my personal perspective, if a charity event is being used as fuel for a commendation, it's wasn't really charity. I would drop this.


NSGE 2020, a worldwide festival to exhibit all the participating regions, where Aynia organized and moderated the event and recruited other nations to help out. The celebration allowed regions to learn from each other by sharing knowledge and experience, and provided a platform for nations to interact and form ties across regional borders;

"Recruited other nations to help out" reads strangely to me. Is there another way to word this? Maybe something like "recruited other nations to assist in its planning and execution."


Amazed at Aynia’s immense contributions to Equinox, which include, but are not limited to, serving multiple terms as head of state, through the position of prime minister and chancellor, during which time they drove interest in the region’s history and helped draft a new constitution. Aynia also led the revival of the Mafia Guild, which held culture and history very dearly, and worked as a dedicated member of the festival planning committee, where they were crucial in bringing energy and imagination to the planning of several events, such as the Equinox Olympics;

This is slightly word salad. You use "head of state", do you mean head of government? I'm not clear what's involved in driving interest in the region's history and why this responsibility is on prime minister and chancellor, or why that's commendable. I'm unfamiliar with Equinox, but those titles seem like they're responsible for more than just driving interest in the region's history.

What does it mean that the Mafia Guild "which held culture and history very dearly" and why should we care? Why was the revival of the Mafia Guild important, what does it do? Namedropping positions, orgs, and events by their name alone does not tell me what Aynia did in them, and therefore don't contribute to commendation arguments.


Observing Aynia’s role in drafting the first constitutions of Hartfelden, playing a foundational part in the establishment of the new region, and the nominee’s undertakings as Hartfelden’s Minister of Culture, which included painstakingly mapping out the empire, an undertaking of great navigational use to the region’s populace;

You may consider a different word than observing, which signals to me that the Security Council is ultimately ambivalent on the subject. I would work everything after "Minister of Culture" into a new sentence so it's less of a run-on.


Noting that Aynia served as Imperator of Edlhus, a role that includes both the positions of chief executive and Delegate to the World Assembly, meaning Aynia managed Edlhus’s military affairs, foreign affairs, internal affairs, and World Assembly affairs all at once, and that Aynia organized and helped set up Edlhus’s Department of Foreign Affairs as its first minister, allowing Edlhus to engage on the world stage and to interact and bond with other regions;

I don't think this is in a professional writing style. Rather than clarifying what the role of Imperator with "meaning Aynia managed", it should be explained the first time. But the thing is, I don't think this clause should exist at all. The writing of this section is trying to present the target as being capable to do a million things at once, but it refers to a region which has had between three and seven endorsements on the delegate for all of the year that it's existed, so the scale is misleading. I'm also not sure why doing all of the tasks in a region should be commendable, because it indicates that the region has no diversification of staff or is effectively autocratic. There's lots of those out there. I also just don't think you can use a less than one year old UCR as a commendation argument. We just don't know how that's going to turn out, so focus on regions where we know more of the story.

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Postby Bormiar » Sun Jun 06, 2021 8:23 pm

Refuge Isle wrote:I disagree with Borm that a requiring CS to be as large as XKI or Euro is necessary. There's many ways to run a successful region and not all of them require becoming a massive powerhouse in numbers.


I didn't say large. I said matured (not "mature" or simply old either!). Here are some other examples: Yggdrasil, Europe, IDU, Spiritus, LWU, The Internationale, The Communist Bloc, Forest, Renegade Islands Alliance, Taijitu, Equilism, Greater Dienstad, and Nasicournia. Moderately sized UCRs which last a few years are common in the grand scheme of things. As far as I know, Caer Sidi hasn't had the effect or the tenure to be venerated even after it's gone like the regions I just listed. I'm not saying that a UCRite has to found an Equilism to have been successful, just that this proposal is going to be far better if Caer Sidi becomes a particularly successful region like those other ones— similar to commending HEM in 2010 vs commending him today. Unless Aynia is retiring soon, I'm not voting for this (even then I'm hesitant).
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Postby LollerLand » Sun Jun 06, 2021 10:54 pm

Bormiar wrote:
Refuge Isle wrote:I disagree with Borm that a requiring CS to be as large as XKI or Euro is necessary. There's many ways to run a successful region and not all of them require becoming a massive powerhouse in numbers.


I didn't say large. I said matured (not "mature" or simply old either!). Here are some other examples: Yggdrasil, Europe, IDU, Spiritus, LWU, The Internationale, The Communist Bloc, Forest, Renegade Islands Alliance, Taijitu, Equilism, Greater Dienstad, and Nasicournia. Moderately sized UCRs which last a few years are common in the grand scheme of things. As far as I know, Caer Sidi hasn't had the effect or the tenure to be venerated even after it's gone like the regions I just listed. I'm not saying that a UCRite has to found an Equilism to have been successful, just that this proposal is going to be far better if Caer Sidi becomes a particularly successful region like those other ones— similar to commending HEM in 2010 vs commending him today. Unless Aynia is retiring soon, I'm not voting for this (even then I'm hesitant).

In the 4 years Caer Sidi has existed, it has build for itself one of the strongest embassy networks amongst UCRs, started and hosts UCR Con, which is pretty much the biggest UCR centric event that happens annually plus all the other scores of interregional events it runs every year, positioning itself as a cultural leader. It already has a self-sustaining community of sorts, something even more populous regions struggles to achieve. So yeah, Caer Sidi has become pretty mature and none of this would have been possible without the foundership of Aynia. And moreover, this commendation is not for CS but for Aynia. Founding CS and making it what it today is just one of the major contributions Aynia has given to NS.

I went through the draft and agree with most of Refuge's critiques.
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Postby Nova Vandalia » Mon Jun 07, 2021 4:52 am

Full Support from my end, once the suggested changes are made. Aynia has done a lot for various communities of NS between UCRCon, her work on charities (I'd love to see this snuck in in an IC way, but I'm awful at this kind of stuff). And yeah I have to say I don't think Maturity of a region or play necessarily dictates the depth and breadth of impact a person has had on the communities within NS. While existing for so long is impressive it's it's own right, it definitely should dictate by itself who we C&C. I think the work Aynia has done is noteworthy and important. CS as a region has diplomatic ties with a variety of regions of all sizes, shapes and types on the NSGP spectrum, and they have been absolutely imho essential to growing connections between regions big and small with their inter-regional events.

Looking forward to seeing this at vote!
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Postby Bormiar » Mon Jun 07, 2021 1:59 pm

LollerLand wrote:In the 4 years Caer Sidi has existed, it has build for itself one of the strongest embassy networks amongst UCRs, started and hosts UCR Con, which is pretty much the biggest UCR centric event that happens annually plus all the other scores of interregional events it runs every year, positioning itself as a cultural leader. It already has a self-sustaining community of sorts, something even more populous regions struggles to achieve. So yeah, Caer Sidi has become pretty mature and none of this would have been possible without the foundership of Aynia. And moreover, this commendation is not for CS but for Aynia. Founding CS and making it what it today is just one of the major contributions Aynia has given to NS.


Well of course you'd say that. You're the delegate.

Regardless, having thought about this more, I've had a sudden change in heart. Starting a successful region is a hell of a lot harder than a few successful GCR delegacies, and no one would think to take away the commendation of someone like McMasterdonia. Full Support.

However, that doesn't mean I don't have criticism.

The Security Council,

Wishing to recognise Aynia Moreaux (henceforth referred to as Aynia) as a globally influential figure through their contributions to culture and community in all of their regions and beyond;


recognize*

This is an ok introduction. "Globally influential figure" applies to all commendees and is therefore redundant/too broad. "Wishing to recognizing" is a bit wonky and also makes no sense for a preambulatory phrase, the SC doesn't endeavor to commend someone, they just commend them. They don't wish to recognize, they recognize. I would say something along the lines of:

Recognizing Aynia Moreaux (henceforth referred to as Aynia) as a brilliant cultural organizer and community builder in the successful regions they've founded and elsewhere
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Asserting that Aynia's founding of the region Caer Sidi alongside Ghostfox is a shining example of the work this body must champion, as a result of their unwavering commitment to community and creative flair;


This is very hyperbolic ("shining example... champion... unwavering commitment") while not saying much. Your key points are that they founded Caer Sidi and were beneficial to developing its community (which is still a little vague). Just say that.

Believing that Aynia's constant presence in Caer Sidi leadership, as well as their optimism and forward drive, has meant that they not only created an exceptional sense of community within the region, but were also able to spread this goodwill and have a positive impact abroad, as manifested in:

"Consistent" might be a better word than "constant". You also keep saying "community", but you don't want to repeat the same word so many times. How about "fellowship" or, in this case, "esprit de corps"? Also, "shown" is better than "manifested" in this case.

  • their service as Summer Queen of Caer Sidi from the moment of its founding and guidance of the region through a leadership transition which saw them take on the reformed role of Seasonal Queen, all the while fostering the region's distinctive independent streak and the spirit of creativity on which it prides itself;

I have no idea what any of this means. Summer Queen? Seasonal Queen? Independent streak?

You also are going to have to prove this whole creativity thing at some point, seeing as you keep bringing it up.

  • their artistry in realising a vision for Caer Sidi's government, culture, and geography in which the elemental magic of the region went hand in hand with an effective government structure;

  • I also have no idea what this means. "Elemental magic"?

  • their singular ability to bring communities together through events and festivals that stimulate an invaluable generosity of knowledge and expertise, establishing Caer Sidi as a cultural leader in NationStates through three iterations of UCR Con, Caerchella, and other events;

  • The ability can't possibly be "singular". I'm not sure what you mean by "stimulate an invaluable generosity of knowledge and expertise".

    Applauding Aynia's legendary event-planning - the nation has helped host and/or organize a multitude of interregional events to promote goodwill across the world, a goal of the Security Council. These events include:

    This is good.

    • Three iterations of UCR Con, an annual interregional festival for smaller regions focused on creating new regional bonds, where, for each iteration, Aynia designed the original festival plans and goals, helped promote the festival to regions across the ideological spectrum, and created a variety of events to boost festival participation, such as panels and questions-and-answers sessions. Aynia's innovation promoted constructive interregional discussion, celebrated the rich variety of culture across the world, and facilitated the development of many close relations and unity between regions involved;

    This is even better. With this clause, you've really started to give concrete examples. Everything above, not so much.

  • A fundraiser for charity around Christmas 2020, which was an international campaign to gather funds to donate to a charity that promotes equality for all LGBTQ+ people. The nominee prepared advertisements, hosted a mini-event to showcase the skills of Aynia’s national e-sports team so as to gather donations, and overall persuaded many nations to donate for the cause.

  • Be careful here, as with the NSGE one. Aynia helped organize them.

  • NSGE 2020, a worldwide festival to exhibit all the participating regions, where Aynia organized and moderated the event and recruited other nations to help out. The celebration allowed regions to learn from each other by sharing knowledge and experience, and provided a platform for nations to interact and form ties across regional borders;

  • See above. Aynia helped organize it.

    Everything below this seems very solid to me. It's very disappointing that your clauses on Caer Sidi are so weak in comparison to others.
    Last edited by Bormiar on Mon Jun 07, 2021 1:59 pm, edited 2 times in total.


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