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[DRAFT] Commend ANTIFA

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[DRAFT] Commend ANTIFA

Postby Test nation 1 Section A » Sat May 22, 2021 9:12 am

The Security Council,

Seeing as how ANTIFA has always been a opponent of fascism

Realizing ANTIFA’s hard work to stop fascism and bring an end to oppression

The Draft is not finished, and I am looking for some regions ANTIFA has liberated from Fascism and if this was already covered upon, that will make me happy.

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Postby Outer Sparta » Sat May 22, 2021 9:17 am

Not a commendable region. Also, not a well-written draft.
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Postby Andusre » Sat May 22, 2021 9:19 am

Test nation 1 Section A wrote:The Draft is not finished

The understatement of the century right here XD this is gonna need a substantial amount of additional content to stand a chance in the Security Council.

Also, at a first glance the tone of your writing feels too informal, and I'd recommend cleaning that up.

I'm on my phone with no access to my computer at the moment so unfortunately I can't be of any more help than this for now. I'll try to see if I have anything more or anything specific to suggest/add when I get access to my computer again later tonight.

Commending Antifa is a decent idea and I think it very well may be doable, but your arguments need to be better-worded, more specific, and especially more numerous.

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Postby Andusre » Sat May 22, 2021 9:22 am

Outer Sparta wrote:Not a commendable region. Also, not a well-written draft.

Agreed on the latter, but not on the former.

The Security Council commended Vippertooth for his impressive resume of anti-fascist military operations, why is Antifa any different?

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Postby Indiana Controlled Florida » Sat May 22, 2021 9:23 am

Outer Sparta wrote:Not a commendable region. Also, not a well-written draft.

This makes no sense. ANTIFA has been always working to end fascism and has liberated serval regions from the ideology.

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Postby Outer Sparta » Sat May 22, 2021 9:24 am

Andusre wrote:
Outer Sparta wrote:Not a commendable region. Also, not a well-written draft.

Agreed on the latter, but not on the former.

The Security Council commended Vippertooth for his impressive resume of anti-fascist military operations, why is Antifa any different?

If any draft were to commend a region that specializes in anti-fascist operations, then they have to do a very good job. So far, I don't see much from Antifa that makes them distinct unless the OP were to actually upgrade the draft or do any research.
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Outer Sparta wrote:Not a commendable region. Also, not a well-written draft.

This makes no sense. ANTIFA has been always working to end fascism and has liberated serval regions from the ideology.

Please do some more research and make your draft better to show why Antifa deserves a commend.
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Postby Indiana Controlled Florida » Sat May 22, 2021 9:26 am

Outer Sparta wrote:
Andusre wrote:Agreed on the latter, but not on the former.

The Security Council commended Vippertooth for his impressive resume of anti-fascist military operations, why is Antifa any different?

If any draft were to commend a region that specializes in anti-fascist operations, then they have to do a very good job. So far, I don't see much from Antifa that makes them distinct unless the OP were to actually upgrade the draft or do any research.
Indiana Controlled Florida wrote:This makes no sense. ANTIFA has been always working to end fascism and has liberated serval regions from the ideology.

Please do some more research and make your draft better to show why Antifa deserves a commend.

That is what I am going to do. That region deserves a commendation and I will do my very best to make sure it does get one.

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Postby Jedinsto » Sat May 22, 2021 10:11 am

I will be damned to see a region be commended for raiding. "But Jed, they only raid fash!" Welp, I don't really give a shit.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat May 22, 2021 10:11 am

Two lines do not a draft make. And you’ve also managed to make it illegal, brilliant.

You need to pull your finger out sunshine and do some research, because you are light years away from a draft that would even be half good.
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Postby Nova Vandalia » Sat May 22, 2021 6:29 pm

Test nation 1 Section A wrote:The Security Council,

Seeing as how ANTIFA has always been a opponent of fascism

Realizing ANTIFA’s hard work to stop fascism and bring an end to oppression

The Draft is not finished, and I am looking for some regions ANTIFA has liberated from Fascism and if this was already covered upon, that will make me happy.

I am a puppet to Indiana Controlled Florida. Wrong account.


I'm Anti-fascist as heck, and would leap at the chance to give props to any group who has resolutely fought the good fight, but this resolution doesn't convey that. It doesn't tell if they're commendable or not, even though I know they can be. It needs a lot of work and lot of research and you should probably speak to their folks directly, cause right now and I mean this with love and kindness it's not great. BBD's stance I find is always a good bellwether of where you stand in getting something passed.


But hey even though it needs work at least it's not hot garbage like this nugget:

Jedinsto wrote:I will be damned to see a region be commended for raiding. "But Jed, they only raid fash!" Welp, I don't really give a shit.


Glad to see you put IC villiany over of OOC ideologies that reps horrible shit. With a take like that I would recommend you apologize to your region for being it, and probably create a region to CTE in with that hot take. Like I'm am the King of stupid takes on IC stuff, but this is beyond that. I literally spent the last three days confusing people with a take pretty resoundly hated take, and this is just wow. Genuinely does your region you're a Vice Delegate of know this is how you're representing them?
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Postby Great Algerstonia » Sat May 22, 2021 6:51 pm

This draft consists of entirely OOC information, so opposed

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Postby Jedinsto » Sat May 22, 2021 7:56 pm

Glad to see you put IC villiany over of OOC ideologies that reps horrible shit. With a take like that I would recommend you apologize to your region for being it, and probably create a region to CTE in with that hot take. Like I'm am the King of stupid takes on IC stuff, but this is beyond that. I literally spent the last three days confusing people with a take pretty resoundly hated take, and this is just wow. Genuinely does your region you're a Vice Delegate of know this is how you're representing them?


I apologize if this is how it was interpreted. I have no hard feelings for raiders, and I hate fascists. All I'm saying is that they should not be commended for raiding. Nothing more, nothing less.
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Postby Honeydewistania » Sun May 23, 2021 12:04 am

Jedinsto wrote:I will be damned to see a region be commended for raiding. "But Jed, they only raid fash!" Welp, I don't really give a shit.

Guess you’ll be damned them, if you see the commendations of The MT Army and The Red Fleet...

Jedinsto wrote:
Glad to see you put IC villiany over of OOC ideologies that reps horrible shit. With a take like that I would recommend you apologize to your region for being it, and probably create a region to CTE in with that hot take. Like I'm am the King of stupid takes on IC stuff, but this is beyond that. I literally spent the last three days confusing people with a take pretty resoundly hated take, and this is just wow. Genuinely does your region you're a Vice Delegate of know this is how you're representing them?


I apologize if this is how it was interpreted. I have no hard feelings for raiders, and I hate fascists. All I'm saying is that they should not be commended for raiding. Nothing more, nothing less.


Does that mean you oppose anti-fascist raiding? If yes, why? Many defenders believe that such regions should be torched and actively participate in such operations.
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Postby Perikuresu » Sun May 23, 2021 12:18 am

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Postby Jedinsto » Sun May 23, 2021 4:38 am

Honeydewistania wrote:
Jedinsto wrote:I will be damned to see a region be commended for raiding. "But Jed, they only raid fash!" Welp, I don't really give a shit.

Guess you’ll be damned them, if you see the commendations of The MT Army and The Red Fleet...

Jedinsto wrote:
I apologize if this is how it was interpreted. I have no hard feelings for raiders, and I hate fascists. All I'm saying is that they should not be commended for raiding. Nothing more, nothing less.


Does that mean you oppose anti-fascist raiding? If yes, why? Many defenders believe that such regions should be torched and actively participate in such operations.

Lol maybe I will be damned. I kinda forgot why I worded my original post here so strongly. I apologize for that. The security council does things I don't like occasionally. but such is life. I know it's been done before but I still don't support it.

For the second thing, yes, I do (kind of) oppose anti-fascist raiding. I believe regions just should be left alone, regardless of their ideology. Nothing an NS military does on this site is going to completely kill fascism on the site, and there is absolutely no chance of it killing it in real life. I oppose anti-fascist raiding much less than I do any other raiding, but I still don't like it. And again, no hard feelings towards anybody who does it.

Edit: Also, that "leave 'em alone" idea in my eyes only lasts until they start bothering other regions. (and not by just existing)
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Postby Indiana Controlled Florida » Sun May 23, 2021 5:33 am

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Postby Team Lennox » Wed May 26, 2021 6:20 am

Test nation 1 Section A wrote:The Security Council,

Seeing as how ANTIFA has always been a opponent of fascism

Realizing ANTIFA’s hard work to stop fascism and bring an end to oppression

The Draft is not finished, and I am looking for some regions ANTIFA has liberated from Fascism and if this was already covered upon, that will make me happy.

I am a puppet to Indiana Controlled Florida. Wrong account.

Did you ask Antifa if they wanted a commendation. Several anti fascist regions have been commended for fighting hate and oppression. Anyways, Antifa is not really a region, it's more of an alliance with a group of regions.
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