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Condemning J o J

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Palcania
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Condemning J o J

Postby Palcania » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:35 am

"Condemning J o J is a thing that is to be taken seriously, a thing to remember."

Many things have taken place since we last attempted to condemn J o J but we must recognise:

1. His constant raiding, or better yet, taking regions that CTE'd

2. Making a huge intertwining network of nations and even saying he has spies.

3. The takeover of Psomewhere, of which we should never forget.

This is just a basic, but we will make this more or so much more serious

Unless, of course this is enough.

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Palcania
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Postby Palcania » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:36 am

Lets see if this works!

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Palcania
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Postby Palcania » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:37 am

Is this good?

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Nicholas and Great Britain
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Postby Nicholas and Great Britain » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:37 am

This will be good once it has more in it.

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Drew Durrnil
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Postby Drew Durrnil » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:38 am

wtf
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Postby Palcania » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:38 am

Its a basic, I don't expect it to work actually.

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Outer Sparta
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Postby Outer Sparta » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:39 am

Not a particularly condemnable nominee. Also your draft is rife with proposal violations, but at least you drafted it before rashly submitting it from the get-go.
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Postby Penguinya » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:39 am

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Palcania
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Postby Palcania » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:41 am

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Its just a basic, not real!

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Postby Durm » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:42 am

Palcania wrote:Is this good?

No.

If you want to write a good WA proposal, ask for help from someone who has written one before.

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Postby Westinor » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:44 am

Right now, this does not look like a condemnation with enough substance or detail to qualify as 'good'. I don't expect the nominee to have substantial merit warranting a condemnation from what I can see here. I would suggest expanding on the supposedly "constant" raiding and "network" of spies. I suspect the second point to be mostly an RP-based thing, and the fact that I have no clue what the third region is might give you a hint of how strong that point is. Personally, I think you should drop this. It's unlikely to get anywhere, and I don't think that unless you bring forward substantial evidence not presented here for a condemnation that this will pass or gain very much support.
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Palcania
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Postby Palcania » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:44 am

ok.

*cries cutely in Palcanian*

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Bhang Bhang Duc
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu Apr 29, 2021 8:47 am

Rubbish attempt. Try reading the SC rules for a start. Once you’ve done that have a go at doing some research both on the nominee and the standards a Condemnation should meet.
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Postby Frisbeeteria » Thu Apr 29, 2021 5:53 pm

Palcania wrote:Lets see if this works!

A vastly illegal SC proposal followed by a bunch of spammy posts? I'd say it doesn't work. Thread locked.


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