This is rather unspecific in a number of places, I think it could be improved by providing more details on "spurred activity to levels it had not witnessed since 2014" and on training newcomers. It would benefit the resolution to potentially list some of those newcomers who have become prominent members of the EPSA.
Hm, I'll try to specify the activity clause and list some newcomers that I do have in mind.
It feels a bit strange to me that a single liberation is so prominent in this resolution. Also, in your last phrase, it's confusing to me to state that the liberation of SP was one of the largest liberation attempts but also a liberation. An attempt typically carries the connotation that it was unsuccessful which I get the impression from the rest of this section that it was successful.
It is a bit weird, I know. Especially given that it was unsuccessful. But in my opinion, it goes to show just what type of a nation Atlae is, so it ultimately is a good addition to the commend.
And oop, will do le fix and clarify that. Wasn't my intent!
There have been a number of regional cards organizations being created recently, I think that the formation of these is noteworthy, however, I do think it is rather unspecific in some places here specifically the mentoring and the influential role being played. I'm also quite skeptical that writing the Charter should be included here. It is heavily lifted from the Cards Guild's including one section mentioning of the Guild which was not changed to fit TEP's theme.
Ah, I'll clarify the mentor bit and the influential bit. And my bad on the Charter, will remove that.
Why should people care about TEP (I'm not actually asking, I think including a rationale for caring about TEP's internal affairs would improve this section)? Again, I think you can be quite more specific in a number of places to better demonstrate his commendability, specifically how many articles he has created, who or how many he has mentored, what he advised Libertanny on and what relations were improved, etc.
You're totally right- I'll add a rationale!
Hm, I'll see if I can specify stuff. Not sure if it's extantly nessecary to state so many statistics, but I can probably specify on some Editors he helped and what relations were improved, mainly. Shall see.
As you have room for more characters, providing context on who some of these players are would be helpful in demonstrating who he has impacted.
If I have enough characters after your other suggested edits, I can try specifying who these players are yeah.
Out of everything you have listed, this convinces me the most that Atlae is Commendable. I think this should be at the top.
Will be shot to the top!
I am going to break from the majority here; I'm not convinced yet that Atlae is commendable. I think it could be signficiantly improved to demonstrate how Atlae is commendable and as prompted on Discord, I have provided my thoughts below.
That being said, while this is all good stuff, I'm not sure if it really rises to the level of Commendation for me.
Overall, I am unfortunately not seeing a case for Commendation yet personally. While Atlae does have an impressive track record in a variety of areas, I'm not sure if it's distinguished enough yet.
It's my personal thinking that not every action in a commend has to be commendable itself, but they can help support the resolution and- with other deeds included, make a good argument for the commend. I also think Atlae's extensive track records in the East (as they would show within any region) indicate traits that make Atlae commend-worthy, which is why I included it. So the fact that it is good stuff is good enough for me.
(Although personally speaking, I do think the record overall is commendable.)
Ultimately, I respect your disagreement and I can see where you're coming from regarding your feelings of this resolution and its nominee. However, I'll still most likely submit this to vote eventually, as I personally do believe Atlae is commendable.
Also, will be moving this out of Last Call to properly include your feedback. Thank you for it! <3