Noahs Second Country wrote:I don't think waiting longer will do much.Thanks everyone! With that, I’m officially retired!
OOC: I did not see that, ignore what I said, then.
Moreover (haha), I think the proposal looks far too much like a laundry list, perhaps cut down on the lists and integrate them into paragraphs?
I don't think that a long paragraph is very easy to read - a list keeps things nice and organized.
Fair enough, that is a stylistic choice up to you. I still think you should follow with the punctuation suggestions as they are in accordance with agreed-upon English punctuation rules.